How to analyze sick sentences?

1 Incomplete subject [1] Abuse of ellipsis makes the subject incomplete 1. During my acquaintance with him, I was deeply impressed in my study, work and life. (add the subject "he" before "du") 2. Xu Honggang's epic deeds suddenly struck a chord with the audience and he was deeply educated in extreme excitement. (add "audience" in front) 3. When the wind sweeps across the rice fields, it is like the Yellow River with boiling waves, fluctuating. When my mother and I walked onto the overpass and watched the endless stream of people, we were all very excited. (Add a subject before "Kan") 1 Incomplete subject [2] Abuse of prepositions leads to incomplete subject 1. After this study, it is a great education for everyone. 2. Through this period of review, students' academic performance has been greatly improved. Through education, I have improved my understanding. Under the rude interference of the conductor, Edison's desire to do experiments while selling newspapers on the train was dashed. With everyone's efforts, we have finished the production of the class website. 6. Nanjing passed the strict national examination and was named as "China Excellent Tourist City". In the process of building the Three Gorges Dam, no matter what difficulties the workers encounter, they can go forward bravely. (The first question is unclear) 8. In the process of reading literary classics, I understand a lot of truth about being a man and realize the true meaning of life. At six o'clock in the morning. 1 1. Through our efforts, we finally completed the learning task of junior high school. By planting trees, alert people can know the past and see the future, and finally become the conscious action of the whole people. 1 incomplete subject [3] secretly changed the subject, resulting in the lack of 1. The enemy on the left just wants to take the table. (The subject of Scream is "Li Jianwu") 2. Since then, Wang Xiaohu was injured and disabled, but he was still forced to do heavy work. (Add "someone" before "still forced") 3. After all the other passengers got off, I saw Li Ming finally get off with an old man, with a suitcase in his hand. (Add "old man" before "hand") 2 Incomplete predicate 1. In further deepening the reform, all units should establish and improve the necessary rules and regulations. (1 Delete "Work"; Add "do a good job" before "construction") 2. On the way to the artillery position, Zhu Kezhong, a cook of the battery company, suddenly came up to him dressed as a pig picker. (Add "find" or "see" after "suddenly") 3. We should advocate and carry forward the spirit of hard struggle and step-by-step learning methods. (add "master" before "step by step") 4. Cunning people despise learning, ignorant people envy learning, and smart people are good at learning. (lack of predicate, explore) 5. The Government of China has always been committed to maintaining world peace and stability and resolving international disputes through political means. (Add "advocate" before "adopt") 6. A glorious history worth remembering by a nation. (Add "have" after "should") 3. Incomplete object 1 broadband network can not only browse information, send and receive emails, but also provide intelligent and personalized online video-on-demand and distance education. (lack of objects, plus services) 2. The instructor is full of joy. There are many opportunities for myopia, so we should develop eye hygiene at ordinary times. (Habit) The county government seriously dealt with the unauthorized price increase of cement plants. (Event or problem) 5 Recently, the relevant departments issued an urgent notice to prohibit all hunting, selling and purchasing wild animals such as civets. (Delete "everything" and add "action" at last) 6 It is understood that a corrosion-resistant, wear-resistant and antibacterial agent has been introduced in Guangxi market at present, which has kept the solid wood floor in a "healthy" state. At the opening ceremony, we responded positively to president's message of rejuvenating the country through science and technology. In the face of national interests, should we abandon Confucius and Mencius' "golden mean" and learn from the Korean spirit, and hold high "deal with a man as he deals with you"? This is a deeper inhibition in the brain. (Add "reason") 10 We should cultivate students with rich knowledge and noble quality. Thank you for letting me know how poor we are. (Add "you" after "thank you") 4 Incomplete attributive adverbial 1. If you want to get excellent grades, you must work hard. (Add "hard work" before "labor") 2. They concentrated their students on the farm and practiced the same food, living and working. (Add "and farm workers" before "implement") Three matches do not match 1. Grandpa's habit of watching football seems to have improved. The past haunts me again. (Emergence) 2. Angels in white fought in the front line of fighting against SARS, and their touching deeds and spirit of sacrifice spread in the hearts of the broad masses of the people. (word of mouth) 3. I took my mother's smiling face and words into the camera and made an album. 4. Say goodbye to the teacher and walk out of school, and the ups and downs of thoughts are still rolling in my mind. From the day he went to school, China people took a keen interest in him. 6. She has been admitted to the second exam. (Delete "de") 7. How many all-around battles have you fought around? ("Almighty" becomes "fierce"; 8. The night wind blows, and the dense branches and bright moonlight sway, making a rustling sound. The elegant residence of Mr. Liang Shiqiu is an important cultural landscape in Pei Bei. ("Important" is changed to "Protection". 2 Verbs and objects are not properly collocated 1. We should always ensure the safety of ourselves and the people around us. (change "guarantee" to "protection" and delete "work"). The fundamental purpose of developing productive forces in socialist countries is to improve people's living standards. ("improve" and "level") 3. The completion of the new Paifang overpass will greatly alleviate the traffic jam problem during the rush hour. ("mitigation" is inconsistent with the problem. Change it to "solve") 4. The injection of new funds has completely changed this seriously loss-making enterprise. (changed to "happened") 5. As soon as I entered the venue, I saw many colorful flags and a happy song. (guest moves improperly) 6. The third year of college entrance examination. In view of the rising international crude oil prices, the United States, India and other countries have established or increased their oil reserves, and China must also establish a national strategic oil reserve system as soon as possible. (Improper "establishment" and "oil reserve". ) 7. Smart people are good at cultivating, adjusting and melting their emotions, so that their emotions are subjected to a colorful virtuous circle. (change "received" to "generated") 8. I let my guard down. (Relax) [A quick whistle broke the silence of the night-it should be "dead of night"] 9. Because the appropriate temperature is helpful to the chemical reaction speed, the construction period is chosen in May and June when the temperature is high. ("help" and "speed" are improper. ) 10. This small building has left an indelible memory in everyone's heart. (Memory changed to "impression") 1 1. Some people, facing the beautiful scenery of nature, only hear sounds and colors. (add "what you see" before "color") 12. We must expand and accelerate the development of education in our country. (add "scale and" before "development") 13. We should safeguard the interests of the collective and do nothing that is not conducive to unity and the collective. (Delete "things", change "and" to "or" and change "behavior" to "things") 14. The People's Liberation Army has repeatedly rescued and provided disaster relief to protect people's lives and property. (Delete "security guard") After reading the "judgment", people will ask this question, who caused these criminals? ("Make these people commit crimes" is changed to "Make these people commit crimes") Three matches are inappropriate, and three matches are inappropriate (definite+head word). 1. In order to give full play to all his talents, he decided to return to China to participate in the research of China's space development. ("Our school" changed to "campus") 3. The new headmaster, Chen, left a beautiful and deep impression on us. Guo Moruo's Goddess is the product of the May 4th Movement, and its outstanding historical significance lies in its outstanding expression of the May 4th spirit. (change "outstanding" to "great" or "remarkable") 5. The solid basic knowledge laid by middle school has created conditions for his further self-study. (delete "knowledge", "laid" can only modify "foundation") We should save unnecessary expenses and waste as much as possible. ("unnecessary" cannot modify "waste") Mismatch 1 in 4 tables. Young people, in the face of the old, the weak and the sick, just lift a finger. (add "give them their seats" before "however") 2. People are deeply infected by the clear thinking and optimism of the old people. (Delete "clear thinking") 3. I am very angry. (whatever) 4. After class, he went to the hillside alone and read English new words with great enthusiasm. People watch and listen to the veterans' speeches with cordial eyes. ("Look kindly" matches "stare" but not "listen") Three matches are not appropriate, and five supplements are not appropriate. Sorry, we have taken too little care of you this time. ("considerate" changed to "considerate") 2. Xiao Li's acting skills are very high and her feelings are full. (change "full" to "abundant") 6 The guest and host are not properly matched 1. Kunming is a beautiful season with beautiful spring. 2. Dunhuang Mogao Grottoes, which integrates murals, colored sculptures and architecture, is the largest existing grotto corridor and Buddhist art with the longest continuous construction time in the world. (add "palace" or "treasure house") 3. Yuelu Mountain in late autumn is a good time for people to appreciate the red leaves of Lushan Mountain and climb high and overlook. (Inappropriate guests and places) 4. Her rosy face is like a pear in full bloom. (Incorrect collocation before and after) 5. His hometown is Qinggang County, Heilongjiang Province. The population density in Beijing is the highest in China. (Inappropriate for host and guest) 7. Being a mother is a profession and a job. Being a mother is a profession and a job. ) Four times long 1 redundant subject; ② Predicate is redundant; ③ redundant objects; 4 attributes are redundant; ⑤ Adverbials are redundant; 6 complement is redundant; 7 Redundant related words (abuse of related words) 1. Will stabilize and improve the current real life. (remove "reality") 2. Those old people, because of their weak constitution, "can't compete" with young people, so they can only stand in the carriage and stagger with the bumps of the vehicles. (Delete "old") 3. In order to prevent the SARS epidemic from rebounding, the city leaders asked all units to go further. There are fruits everywhere. 6. He works very hard. I firmly believe that the future belongs to us. 8. The reporter witnessed the touching work scene of medical staff fighting SARS in Xiaotangshan Hospital. I witnessed it with my own eyes. Cicada singing is very light and relaxed in the dim morning light, far and near, far and near, as if there is nothing. ("very" and "very" repeat) the theme is redundant; ② Predicate is redundant; ③ redundant objects; 4 attributes are redundant; ⑤ Adverbials are redundant; 6 complement is redundant; 7 Redundant related words (abuse related words) 10, the third national college entrance examination. Before taking part in the expedition, he had written a will, and if anything happened during the expedition, all four children would get a fixed monthly living allowance from his huge inheritance. ("If" and "If" are repeated. ) 1 1. People often can't help laughing when reading Zhao Benshan's sketches. (Duplicate) 12. This afternoon, we listened to teacher Li Hua's special report and lecture on how to adapt to the development of the times and be a qualified middle school student. (number of repetitions) 13. In the past 200 years, about one third of the forests on the earth have been cut down and destroyed. (Repeat left and right) 14. You'd better write for our "Young Forest Literature Society" to welcome the upcoming school anniversary. (Repeat left and right) 15. Once a woman becomes a mother, she devotes herself wholeheartedly without exception. 16. During the summer vacation, everyone must pay attention to safety when going swimming to prevent accidents. (Repeat) 17, we middle school students, in class, generally speaking, we can all listen carefully. (delete one "we") 18. The deeds of many revolutionaries of the older generation are good examples for us to learn. Your deeds are superfluous 19. You sent the exercise and are printing it. 20. Before Tomb-Sweeping Day, all students of Hongwei Middle School presented flowers to the Martyrs Cemetery. The weather in early autumn is cool, and the sun is not as hot as in summer. After listening to my mother's words, I feel happy and satisfied. 23. Experience at all times and all over the world has proved that useful talents cannot be cultivated in greenhouses. ("ancient and modern" and "past dynasties" repeat) 23. What rich and silent subtext this sentence contains! (The subtext contains "silence") 24. The Anshi Rebellion led to the ruin of people's lives, and Du Fu's family was also displaced and drifted to the southwest. He and Xiao Wang discussed repeatedly how to prove this geometry problem. (The meaning of "repeated" is the same as "repeated") 26. I sincerely thank my math teacher. ("In My Heart" is redundant) 28. Li Ming is very careful in any work. ("very" and "very" repeat) 29. In order to simplify the number of words, we have to delete some slightly. ("Slightly Added" and "Some Repetition") 30. The heavy schoolwork of primary and middle school students is a persistent problem that puzzles our basic education. ("stubborn disease" and "disease" repeat)