Poems expressing hometown feelings with autumn wind

The rustling leaves send the cold sound, and the autumn wind moves the guests on the river.

The annual autumn wind blows to Luoyang city, and my wandering son doesn't know how his relatives in his hometown are; Writing a letter to peace has too much to say and I don't know where to start.

Hometown is also negative for Huang Hua, but it feels like autumn wind.

The autumn wind is bleak, the weather is cool, and the vegetation is shaken and exposed to frost.

"The autumn wind is bleak and the weather is cool, and the vegetation is shaking with frost" is a poem by Cao Pi, which comes out on its own. There are many works handed down by Cao Pi, involving poems, papers, Han Fu and so on. Xing is one of them. As we all know, almost all the poems in Wei and Jin Dynasties are five-character poems, and seven-character poems can be said to be rare. This poem "Ge Yanxing" is a seven-character poem, and it is the earliest complete seven-character poem in existence. In the Tang Dynasty, Ge Yanxing was praised as an ancient poem, and Gao Shi and others once wrote Ge Yanxing.

The autumn wind is bleak and the weather is cold.

The vegetation was shaken and exposed to frost.

The geese resigned and returned to the south of the country.

It hurts to think of the monarch.

I miss my hometown,

Why did you send it after staying for a long time?

A concubine was guarding her room alone,

I dare not forget when I am worried about you.

I don't think my clothes are crying.

Help the piano to sing strings and send them to Qing merchants.

Short songs cannot be long.

The moon shines on my bed,

The stars are cold and flowing west, and the night is still young.

Penny and Weaver shook their heels and watched.

Why restrict the river beam?

Qiu Si Zhangji

The annual autumn wind blows to Luoyang city, and my wandering son doesn't know how his relatives in his hometown are; Writing a letter to peace has too much to say and I don't know where to start.

When the letter is written, I am worried that I have not finished what I want to say; When the messenger started, he opened the envelope and gave it to him.

Go to the pavilion after illness.

He Zhu

The cicada is proud after the rain, and the dust is broken.

When you are sick, you will never get tired of drinking. I feel infinite when I dream.

Crows take the sunset to the ancient temple, and the grass will enter the wild city.

Hometown is also negative for Huang Hua, but it feels like autumn wind.

To annotate ...

Kuaizai Pavilion: Located in the southeast corner of Xuzhou (now Jiangsu), it was originally the former site of Tang Xueneng Yangchun Pavilion and rebuilt by Song Libang. Su Shi knows Xuzhou, and it is called Kuaizai.

Tired: full, satisfied.

Dust: this refers to the dust raised by cars and horses passing by on the road.

Leaning against the building: leaning against the railing when climbing the building, here refers to climbing the building and overlooking. Love: This refers to the feeling of missing my hometown. Han Yuefu's Elegy: "Far away, you can be a Chinese angelica."

Crows in the sunset: the sight of crows flying at dusk. Tang Wang Changling's Poem of Long Faith in Autumn: "Although jade is not as beautiful as western Western jackdaw, it still bears the shadow of Zhaoyang." Wen Tingyun's Journey in Spring: "There are many sunsets on the crow's back." Voting: Stay. Chà: Ancient temple.

Will: Yes, yes. Bai Juyi's Farewell to Ancient Grass: "They set foot on the old road sweetly and reached the crumbling gate."

Hometown: Hometown. Negative: disappointment, violation, and miss. Yellow flower: that is, yellow flower, refers to chrysanthemum.

Autumn wind sends hair: it implies that hair is dying or white hair is beginning to grow. Li He's Journey to the South Mountain Field: "Autumn is bright, autumn is white." Autumn can refer to white here.

Make an appreciative comment

In the eighth year of Yuanfeng (1085), Zhu He was appointed as the money supervisor of Xuzhou Baofeng. He fell ill in June and July and recovered in August. He wrote this poem.

Comment on this poem in the second volume of the Essence of Song Poetry: "What you say in front of your eyes is what you think."

Necklace couplets are about the scenery of high city in autumn watching the night, and the desolate color is touching.

What you read in the night book

Ye Shaoweng

The rustling leaves send the cold sound, and the autumn wind moves the guests on the river.

I know that children choose to promote weaving, and a lamp fell on the fence at night.

Appreciate:

(1) The author expressed a feeling of homesickness for his hometown. One or two sentences in the poem say that the leaves of trees are flying, the cold sound is blowing, the autumn wind is rustling and the river boat is drifting, which effectively sets off the poet's sad mood of being in a foreign land and wandering around. Three or four sentences describing the life scenes of children playing tricks on crickets with burning lamps will naturally arouse the poet's association. He will remember that his childhood was so naive, romantic, happy and interesting; He will think of the warmth and beauty of his hometown; He will think of the voices and smiles of relatives and friends ... a feeling of being at home, like going back to childhood. 、

(2) Poetry expresses the author's lonely feeling of living in a foreign country. Write a sentence or two about the scenery, and use fallen leaves, autumn wind and cold to set off the desolation of wandering and loneliness. A river of autumn water, the sky is dark, and the ears are cold. The poet couldn't sleep all night. He must be depressed and his meaning is not smooth. Write three or four sentences about children catching crickets at night, which is very interesting, cleverly contrasts sadness and shows the loneliness and helplessness of living in a foreign country.

③ Poetry expresses the author's thoughts and feelings of missing childhood. Looking at the whole poem, generally speaking, three or four sentences are seen by the poet. Children catch crickets at night with great interest, forgetting the autumn wind and chill, regardless of the fall of trees and the cold in Qiu Jiang, catching crickets at midnight with relish. That kind of obsession, that kind of caution, that kind of ups and downs of sensitivity, are all shown in one gesture. This cheerful and interesting life scene naturally evokes the poet's pursuit and nostalgia for childhood. One or two sentences can also be understood in this way. The autumn scenery, accompanied by rustling sounds and swaying leaves, reveals a sense of wandering and inexplicable melancholy, and also reflects the poet's nostalgia and yearning for the carefree childhood living in a foreign country.

(2) Topic: ① Lyric by scenery, blending scenes. All four sentences in the poem are about scenery. Write one or two sentences about the natural environment and three or four sentences about life scenes. The fallen trees are rustling, the cold sounds are bursting, and the autumn wind is Qiu Jiang, conveying the feeling of drifting and desolation; Playing tricks on cricket makes the child happy, revealing the meaning of getting carried away and forgetting the fish. A sadness and a joy, set each other off and become interesting, all of which are integrated into the environmental description without trace.

(2) Dynamic and static combination, with dynamic lining static. Autumn leaves, autumn wind, autumn sounds, Qiu Jiang, autumn lights, Qiu Er, autumn boats and autumn meaning are all vividly written, with light and shadow; Dark as ink, deep and unpredictable, endless darkness, this is quiet writing, quiet and cold, full of melancholy. Whistling wind and naughty children, these dynamic scenes skillfully reflect the deep silence in late autumn, and even arouse people's appreciation of the poet's sad and sleepless heart in the cold and silent night.

(3) Contrast sadness with joy, so that joy sets off sadness. One or two sentences describe the scenery, the autumn wind sweeps away the leaves, and it is freezing in the cold, which is a sad scene and conveys sadness; Writing three or four sentences about people, encouraging weaving in the middle of the night, and bright lights shining on the fence are a happy scene, spreading joy. Sadness and joy are mixed, and joy sets off sadness, which shows the loneliness, helplessness and sleeplessness of wandering wanderers.

(4) Express one's feelings and express one's feelings, and use allusions in secret. The autumn wind moving on the river secretly uses the allusions of Hans Zhang. According to legend, Hans Zhang, an official living in Luoyang, missed his hometown when he saw the autumn wind, so he resigned and returned to his hometown, but he got his wish. Knowing this, it is naturally easy to understand. The poem conveys the poet's thoughts and feelings of being far away from home for a long time, unable to return home and missing his family.

(5) personification, synaesthesia and gracefulness. "The rustling leaves send cold sounds, and the autumn wind on the river moves guests' feelings", and "sending" and "moving" reflect feelings in things, giving the leaves and autumn wind a human modality. It seems that these poems of material state and emotion bring readers into an artistic conception of sending cold air and moving Qiu Jiang, which is fascinating and full of melancholy. The rustling leaves send cold sounds skillfully uses synaesthesia, urges the feeling of cold autumn with rustling sounds, and conveys tactile feelings with auditory images, which is meaningful.

⑥ Choose words carefully, and "cold" and "pick" are vivid. On both sides of the word "cold", there is a chilly and threatening feeling of autumn wind, which means the end of the world is stranded. The word "pick" in the details is very interesting. The child's concentration, sensitivity and delicacy, and the child's breathless observation, surprise and excitement are all in one "pick". "Pick out" personality and "pick out" charm!

⑦ Combining the virtual with the real, reflecting the real with the virtual. The four sentences in the whole poem describe the scenery and characters, and everything you see and hear, whether bright or dark, is realistic. Full of autumn sounds, full of autumn nights, a autumn river and a group of children, just like a photo of the scene, give people the feeling that they have heard their voices, seen their people and been in the environment. This vivid scene skillfully conveys the poet's sad and lonely feelings full of sadness and sleepless nights. Free time in reality (guest feelings), contained in reality, reflected in reality, has endless meanings!