Please correct this Korean composition, thank you very much! ! !

In fact, it is a string of hot pot in Japan, which is not accurate to use here. In that case, you will be impressed when you give this composition to the teacher. Hot weather and beautiful women. Now that we mention this, why not combine the two and say something interesting? It seems that it is a waste of paper to mention it without saying anything. Hehe, personal opinion. "There are many literal meanings. Literally, Koreans may interpret it as "production" and "mountain province", so it is suggested that the written explanation be written as "? "It is a literal translation of English, representing a western restaurant. As a living Korean, I have seen several great gods sweating and eating hot pot with you in a western restaurant. /and can be collectively referred to as (tourist destination) or (tourist destination).

Grade: primary school

Grammar: elementary

Comprehensive evaluation: among the four grades of ABCD, it belongs to C+

This article should be in the form of honorific, and it is more appropriate to resubmit it to the counterpart after revising the grammar.