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Let literary talent become the highlight of the article.

So what is "literary talent"? Some people think that literary talent refers to beautiful writing and gorgeous writing, which is of course a kind of literary talent. If you grasp it well, it can also make people fascinated. But in more cases, literary talent refers to a kind of charm, a kind of luster, a kind of connotative style, taking natural expression as the first priority and returning to the truth.

When it comes to writing in the examination room, we must have a very clear composition requirement in mind: "literary talent" refers to a higher language level on the basis of "language fluency": vivid words, flexible sentences, clever use of rhetoric or meaningful words are all manifestations of literary talent. Therefore, literary articles generally achieve the following points:

1. Be good at quoting famous sentences, proverbs, etc. Put the finishing touch on your language with smart colors.

2. The sentences are concise, skillful, natural and fluent, and humorous.

3. With the help of natural scenery to express ideas, or metaphors, or associations, or personification, be good at this and that, and compare people with things.

4. Sentence patterns are varied, or dual, or parallel, or repetition, or rhetoric.

5. The levels are clear and the meaning of paragraphs is progressive.

6. The conception is artistic, the expression is hidden but not exposed, giving people room for aftertaste.

From another perspective, "literary talent" is to encourage language innovation. So, how to cultivate language innovation ability? Let's discuss this problem from different aspects through some concrete examples.

1. Enrich language vocabulary with vivid beauty

Compare the following two sentences to see which one is well written and which one is good.

(1) Spring breeze is blowing, and new leaves are growing on the willows. The geese also flew back from the north. But I don't know when I can hear from you.

(2) Wait for the spring breeze to dye the willow tips into striking vitality. Waiting for the geese to write the surprise of coming home from the sky. But when can I wait for your letter and read your folded thoughts?

Obviously, in the sentence (1), the author uses a general narrative sentence to express a feeling of missing, which is not very touching; In paragraph (2), the words "dye" and "provoke" which appeal to both refined and popular tastes make the sentence full of charm, while the collocation of "dye" with "vigor", "fullness", "surprise" and "folding" modifies "thought" and creates a brand-new artistic conception, which is fresh, bright and vivid, especially

In the afterglow of the sunset, the grass is cool and breezy, and the janitor's white rabbit lies in the grass and looks at the sky. (Shaanxi examinee "Embrace Now")

This sentence lacks a sense of image. How can I change it to make it lively and full of pictures?

In the afterglow of the sunset, the lush grass swayed with the breeze, and the round white rabbit, the doorman, lay in the grass cleverly and stared at the magnificent sky like an oil painting. (Shaanxi examinee "Embrace Now")

It can be seen that to make the language lively, we must make good use of verbs, adjectives and modifiers to describe it in detail. We have learned in textbooks that the "diving" and "drilling" of "grass diving out" write about the squeezing force of spring grass breaking through the ground; Another example is the word "Lie" in the sentence "There are some villages lying on the hillside and a little light snow lying on the roof of a small village", which vividly describes the village and snow, making the sentence full of new ideas and adding endless charm to the language.

Compare the following two sentences:

The sound of the piano attracted many passers-by to stop and listen.

The beautiful violin concerto "butterfly lovers" floated out of the window of the small building, through the drizzle and scattered on the path in the forest. Many pedestrians can't help but slow down and listen attentively.

Although both of the two sentences express the artistic effect of violin performance, the first sentence is just a general statement, which does not write the content and melody beauty of violin performance, nor does it write the intoxicated state of the audience, and does not reflect the artistic effect of violin performance, which is dull and lacks the artistic beauty it deserves.

Another example is:

After the busy work, the girl began to miss home.

After busy work, girls like to climb to the top floor alone, facing home, reading the strict array and sunset. (Yan Wenjing, "Looking for You")

Although both sentences express "the girl is homesick", the former sentence is only a general explanation, and "homesickness" is abstract and vague. The last one is the image of a girl "climbing to the top floor alone and reading the strict array and sunset in the direction of home", which is full of loneliness and desolation and gives a particularly deep impression.

In the usual composition, students are used to talking in general terms, and it is inevitable that there will be similar language interests.

To make the article vivid, we must first learn to choose and temper verbs. For example, in Fan Jinzhong's play, the verb "The butcher holds the silver tightly in his hand and takes back his fist ... The butcher quickly takes back his fist and puts it on his waist ..." vividly writes the greed and hypocrisy of the butcher Hu.

If we always feel that there is no suitable place, everything around us will become masters. We should wait on them before and after, we should cater to them from top to bottom, and we should compliment them from the inside out. ("location")

The author uses four words to indicate the direction and four words to indicate the attitude, such as "before and after running", "left and right", "jumping up and down", "serving food", "catering", "flattering" and "flattering", which makes the language patchy, avoids repetition and gives people a sense of beauty.

Another example is:

They have no grandiloquence, no grandiloquence, but calmly sew emotions thicker than blood into their son's winter cotton-padded jacket and daughter's summer skirt. When a child walks on Wan Li Road, his mother is worried that if you are a kite far away from his mother, the blue sky behind you is full of her exhortations. (background)

Among them, "sewing" and "writing" are refreshing and intriguing.

Writing landscape articles should be good at drawing.

The so-called "vivid" is to describe the sound of nature, the shape and color of objects in detail, so that people have an immersive feeling. Plum rain pool described this in Zhu Ziqing's "Green": "The waterfall rushed down from above, as if it had been torn into several strands; It is no longer a neat and smooth cloth. There are many edges and corners on the rock; When the waterfall flows, it makes a sharp crash and splashes like flying flowers and broken jade. The splashing water is crystal clear and full of awns; Looking from a distance, like a small white plum, the sound of rain comes and goes. " . Wrote all kinds of plum rain pools. A foreign writer once gave an example. He said, "a small silver ring fell to the ground." This sentence is not good enough. It should be written as "a small silver ring rolled down from the table and jumped to the ground". In this way, it will be colorful.

Using association and imagination can broaden our thinking and increase our literary talent. Association and imagination are the most basic abilities in writing, and students must attach great importance to them in their usual training. For example:

Be filial to your parents. Maybe a mansion, maybe a brick. Maybe it's a swan on the other side of the ocean, maybe it's a message close at hand. Maybe it's a pure black doctor's hat, maybe it's a red five in the exercise book. Maybe a table of delicious food, maybe a pair of clean old shoes. Maybe tens of thousands of dollars, maybe a coin with body temperature. (Filial piety is priceless)

This passage uses association, through parallelism and positive and negative contrast, to tell readers to do their filial piety, no matter what they do, it is equivalent in the scale of "filial piety"

On a snowy night, how many lighted candles are listening to the words floating in the sky; How many poets are rising with the flame of inspiration, surging with artistic passion and singing the magnificence of "blowing open the petals of ten thousand pear trees"; How many surging piano sounds depict the arrival of spring with notes, and how can skilled fingers pop up the wonderful rhyme of falling snow? How many wonderful winter jasmine vines will be stretched out in the dream, and every bud is brewing the experience of spring; How many people who love snow should imagine the scene of falling snow, and the joy is like rain, and the wet heart grows new green leaves; How many lovers fly with every snowflake and blessings for love and life? ("falling snow")

The author of this passage used imagination to write the agility and beauty of the snowy night. Without imagination, no matter sketching or sketching, there would be no such beautiful snowy night in front of readers.

In the face of flawed things, we should learn to tolerate, not blame. If you appreciate the beautiful snow scene in Saibei, you must endure its unbearable cold; If you taste the unique charm of Jiangnan water town, you must tolerate its wet and rainy weather; In order to feel the touching full moon, we must tolerate the waning moon and dark clouds; In order to appreciate the beauty of epiphyllum, you must endure waiting and time. ("not seeking perfection")

This passage was also written by Lenovo: in order to discuss that we should learn to be tolerant, not perfect, not perfect, the author's association range is very wide, from Saibei to Jiangnan, from heaven to underground.

2. Let language rhetoric skillfully create fresh and elegant beauty.

Rhetoric is the flower of language art, and proper use of rhetoric can make the language image of the article vivid, powerful, harmonious and literary. For example, a candidate wrote at the beginning of the article "I said" reducing the burden ":"Books are piled up; The schoolbag is getting heavier every day; Glasses, the circle is thick. " "Very heavy, very heavy, very heavy. "The composition used parallelism and repetition from the beginning, which took the lead and captured the teacher's heart at once. This kind of prologue is very meaningful and interesting to read. A senior high school entrance examination composition can skillfully use rhetorical devices such as parallelism, repetition, metaphor and personification. Composition can be "colorful and colorful".

Clever use of parallelism

Parallelism is to arrange a group of sentences or words with the same or similar structure, related meaning and consistent tone into a string, so as to enhance the language situation, express feelings and give people a well-organized beauty. For example:

(1) "Filial piety" is a fleeting attachment, a happiness that can't be copied, a past that is a step-by-step difference and a chain at the crossroads of life. Once it's disconnected, it can't be connected again. (Filial piety is priceless)

(2) Thought is a new realm of life. An impetuous life can't hold vast thoughts, a shallow life can't hold extensive thoughts, a vulgar life doesn't understand lofty thoughts, and a small life looks up to great thoughts. Thought is formed after extensive reading, discard its dross and take its essence; It comes from summing up experience after going through hardships and creating a new road. Thought is the signpost of wisdom.

These two paragraphs use parallelism rhetoric, and paragraph (1) explains what "filial piety" is from different angles, telling readers to be filial to your parents as soon as possible, because "filial piety" is irreversible. (2) The use of parallelism in paragraphs makes the whole paragraph catchy and philosophical.

Clever use of metaphor

Metaphor uses concrete, simple and familiar things or theories as metaphors to explain or describe abstract, abstruse and unfamiliar things or theories. Metaphor can make the language vivid, and proper metaphor will make your language brilliant. For example:

My life is a boat, my mother is the sky, my father is the sea, my teacher is the sail, and my friend is the harbor. So I am infinitely moved and infinitely happy. Years are like songs, and the sound is lingering; Good friends are like poems, and every sentence is melodious. Mother is a cup of Longjing when you are tired. When you are weak, just a few mouthfuls can refresh you; Mother is a troubled pianist. When you are lazy and depressed, the elegant melody floats and your eyes turn green immediately; Mother is a quilt on winter nights. When you are shivering, caring and warmth make you sleep peacefully. Mother is a breeze in frustration. When you are flustered, I will wipe away your anxious sweat and tidy up your messy thoughts. When lonely, mother is a flower. When you are lonely and depressed, it is refreshing to have a look and smell. Mother is a star in the dark. When you can't tell the direction, a soft light guides you to take firm steps ... (Mother)

Another example is a sentence written in "Chinese":

Language is like a breeze, which washes my heart and makes my sky spring all the year round; Chinese, like a sun, shines on my heart and makes my world bright forever; Chinese, like drizzle, moistens my heart and keeps my life going. China people, walking past me, are on cloud nine. ...

This passage is a metaphor of "light wind, hot sun and drizzle", which shows the spirit of "dedication" of language "at your fingertips" and has a tangible image; The use of parallelism makes the article full of poetry and painting, with a flowing style.

Metaphor can make plain vivid, abstruse simple, abstract concrete and lengthy concise. No wonder the famous writer Qin Mu said, "A wonderful metaphor is like a magic wand in a fairy tale. Wherever you meet, there will be magical changes. " In composition, making good use of metaphors can make your composition vivid and full of brilliance. Look at the following two highlights:

Mother's love, like a ray of sunshine in winter, shines warmly on my whole body; Dad's love is as deep as a tree in the mountain, so that I can never beat the wind and rain; My love is not earth-shattering, but just like a breeze blowing around them. (Shandong Zibo Volume "In and out, true love is infinite")

History is not only a bookshelf of narratives, but also because there are thoughts and souls. Those books stand up as the backbone of the Chinese nation. (Henan Volume "Reading History and Expressing Feelings")

Clever use of personification

The anthropomorphic sentence has a leap of thought, which can not only enhance the gorgeous color of the language and clearly express the author's emotions, but also stimulate the reader's imagination, make a clear and profound impression on the things described and feel the author's strong emotions.

Please look at the following highlights:

The deep sky endured the temporary ravages of lightning storms, and only in this way can the sun shine brightly; The vast sea is boundless only when the stormy waves are raging for a while; The vast forest temporarily endured the law of the jungle and was lush. (Shandong Jining Volume "Tolerance is Sunshine")

The sun put away the shyness of winter and shed warm sunshine without stint. "I want to come out, I want to come out!" The beans shouted happily. (Sichuan Luzhou Volume "Feeling Green")

In the wilderness, the Woods are busy with illustrations, wild flowers are scrambling to embroider colorful pictures, and spring grass is spreading and getting farther and farther. No one can stop her from walking, and the birds use voice-over in the air to explain to the rushing clouds. (Prose of Spring Grass)

Spring must be like this. From Qingshan, a handful of snow can't hold on. With a snort, a cold face turned into a painted face. A song will be sung from the clouds to the foothills, from the foothills to the low and barren villages, to the hedges, to the yellow webbed duck, to the soft and soluble spring mud, as soft as the spring mud of a quilt that has just been turned over. (nostalgia in spring)

In the last two paragraphs, the author uses anthropomorphic techniques to write the arrival of spring vividly. In the author's pen, spring can laugh, sing and walk, showing a picture of vibrant spring in front of readers.

Clever use of repetition

When it comes to repetition, we often think it is tedious and wordy, but if it is used properly, it will often get unexpected results. For example:

Fate is irregular, just like the wind and rain in nature. An illness shattered her college dream. She went to an ordinary school, studied an ordinary major, entered an ordinary small factory, became an ordinary worker, and did ordinary things. ("normal")

If you choose high mountains, you choose rugged; If you choose peace, you choose loneliness; If you choose an opportunity, you choose a risk; If you choose to seek, you choose to suffer; ..... There is a shadow behind almost every choice. ("Select")

Among them, "ordinary" and "choice" have been used many times. From the perspective of uneven wording, they obviously do not meet the requirements, but they just play an important and prominent role here.

Application comparison

For example:

How can I thank you? When I came to you, I wanted to harvest a spring breeze, but you gave me the whole spring. I wanted to hold a spray, but you gave me the whole ocean; I wanted to pick a red leaf, but you gave me the whole maple forest; I wanted to kiss a snowflake, but you gave me the whole silver world.

3. Make the language humorous and create a unique beauty of personality.

Please enjoy the following two paragraphs and see which one is better?

There are 54 students in our class, including 37 boys and 7 girls/kloc-0. There is always a distance between boys and girls. If a boy dares to say a few words to a girl, he will be teased by other boys and even make up a story for you about how complicated your relationship with a girl is.

There are 37 modest gentlemen in our class, and there are 17 ladies in Jiao Jiao. There is an invisible "38th parallel" between "37" and "17". Any boy who breaks into the "forbidden zone" will be ogled by 36 of the 37 male compatriots, and even stir up an "explosive news" in the blink of an eye, telling you a more complicated relationship than a function.

The last paragraph is very rigid! Especially the first sentence, like a statistical table. A slight modification of the second sentence will make the original plain narrative more interesting, humorous and vivid.

Another example: the "new squad leader" still lived up to expectations and did not "touch the dark" for the teachers; The figure is also in line with the "national conditions of China"-it is still in the "primary stage of socialism", but it is a bit mature; Probably because the brain is too smart, the "sparse vegetation" above is more old-fashioned. Fortunately, the hairstyle of "Bantou" is a structure of "the countryside surrounds the city", which will not give people a bleak feeling on a sunny day.

Clever use of famous sayings and poems to add luster to literature

Famous aphorisms and poems have stood the test of time and space in past dynasties, and have a distinct expression effect. When we use it properly in writing, we can get twice the result with half the effort and make the finishing point.

For example, writing articles such as diligence can quote "diligence and idleness, success is destroyed by thinking" and "perseverance, a stone can be carved"; When talking about ideals, you can quote famous sentences such as "Worry about the world first, and enjoy the world later"; Celebrate the character's quality, can be described as "out of the mud but not stained, clear but not demon".

Proper quotation of famous sayings and aphorisms can enrich the language and enhance the expression effect of the article. The article can't be full of words, but if you can quote some wise and incisive epigrams with rich ideological connotation, it will often add a lot of color to the article.

For example:

I will choose to give up and find a more suitable goal. Since I can't find a "prosperous land of flowers and willows, a gentle and rich country", why not find a pure land where there is moonlight in the pine forest and crystal stone in the stream? Since we can't appreciate the beautiful scenery of "the bright moon is born in the tide", why not cook a pot of chrysanthemum wine and invite the sparse stars to drink together?

I like Li Qingzhao, who is graceful and full of heroic spirit. Although "people are thinner than yellow flowers", she also sang Xiang Yu who rejected Jiangdong. I am Shi, with extraordinary talent, but calm in the face of shock. Although he yearns for the great cause of "heroic spirit and heroic hair", he is permeated with the natural harmony of "light makeup and heavy makeup"; I like Lu Xun, who hates evil and is soft-hearted. Although it is "pointing fingers", there is also deep affection of "bowing your head and being a willing ox".

To choose fraternity is to choose to cherish feelings. All the way through life, I care about everything. Affection, friendship and love make life full of emotion and beauty. "The thread in the hands of a loving mother makes clothes for her wayward son" is the love of the family; "However, although China holds our friendship, heaven is still our neighbor" is the concern of friendship; "When * * * is cutting candles at the west window, but talking about the rain in the evening" is the yearning of love. Every life can't go out of the range of emotions. It is those emotions that make people live well, work hard and cherish every minute. Cherish emotions and make life more touching and unforgettable.

Facts have proved that only by attaching emotion to an article can it have affinity. Students should vividly present their feelings on paper, so that happiness and sadness, noise and silence together constitute the background color of the article. This is the language with vitality.

We advocate polishing the language, instead of simply playing with words, tricks and word games. We should bear in mind that "words take meaning first" and intend to resign first. It means flowing water at the source. If we simply temper language without thoughts and feelings as the basis, it is putting the cart before the horse.