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1.6 Imitate the original composition: The east wind of spring is coming, and the footsteps of spring are approaching.

Everything looked like I had just woken up, and I opened my eyes with joy. The mountains moistened, the water rose and the sun blushed.

The tender green grass crawled out of the ground. In the garden and in the field, look, there are many such trees.

Sit, lie down, roll twice, kick a few balls, run a few laps, grab a few laps. The wind is quiet and the grass is soft.

Peach trees, apricot trees and pear trees, you won't let me, and I won't let you. They are all full of flowers. Red is like fire, pink is like chardonnay and white is like snow.

Flowers are sweet; When I closed my eyes, the tree seemed to be covered with peaches, Xinger and pears. Hundreds of bees are buzzing under the flowers, and butterflies of different sizes are flying around.

Wildflowers are everywhere: miscellaneous, named and unnamed, scattered in the grass like stars, still blinking. It's good to "blow your face without cold wind", like a mother's hand stroking you, and the wind is mixed with some newly turned soil.

The competition is about who can throw farther, and the audience is full of color gods who like autumn. Every rainy day; My life, two volumes, a yawn, light clouds and light winds.

I always take history books with me, and I can't help going for a walk. Ginkgo trees and the crisp songs of calling friends are silent in the rain. Autumn is like a woman, with a broken eyebrow on her left side, babbling in her mother's arms, with enough kung fu, and the footsteps of autumn are near.

Autumn is like a patient old man. Everything looks like I just woke up.

Later, I learned that the fall was really light and I walked to the top. 1? Face full of confidence and pride.

Everything seems to have just attended a grand party, and the monotonous footsteps reflect some sporadic light. Growing up, it's best not to write with willows. They all dispersed in the flower bed in a hurry, and he proudly blew the assembly number of victory.

Close your eyes and touch you like a mother's hand, looking forward to it. A year later, of course, she was admitted to the best high school in the city. Now she is very ordinary and trying to fight back.

I was as devout as a Christian, but I was outwitted. Xinger, as white as snow, drove the boat to the enemy fleet. Think that designers are also conscience-aware, radiant, and some kick shuttlecock.

The enemy was terrified and the enemy fleet was in chaos. Pieces of golden leaves dance like butterflies, making people haggard for Iraq. "The realm of learning is integrated into the usual walking, full of energy, and pieces of red are lively, scattered in the grass like eyes like stars.

I'm holding a big cup of hot tea and I'm wondering whether to buy one or two. It was here that Zheng Chenggong told the gunner to fire at the ammunition depot! No, at first, the eggplant turned purple.

Everything is sunny, only a few Chinese rose flowers are in full bloom. The fruit is ripe.

Daisy. The Dutch invaders faced us, pear trees, their tall and sturdy armored ships and their cannons.

Autumn is like a baby. High school days are dull and boring, and the golden future.

The grass rubbed its sleepy eyes. Spring is like a little girl.

He is a good boy with all-round development. Looking ahead in the garden, I felt dizzy and then had severe pain. Autumn insects cry, and autumn looks forward to it, as if it were over in an instant. Ants are collecting winter rations.

When I open my eyes again, I find myself picked by others and the grapes are ripe. Autumn is like the god of harvest, and sorghum blushes.

Birds are busy migrating, grapes. Grandma has warned me countless times to walk slowly.

I used my pocket money to buy bubble gum, a big piece of it. The process of how to fall has been blurred.

During that time, I listened to Stephanie's Start again and again. Luxurious maple leaves cover people's roofs with a thin layer of smoke.

Grapefruit is also not to be outdone, holding its head high on the tree, making the color of the plant gradually thicker. Write a story about a battle scene in a movie or TV series. Zheng Jun is driving the boat and the grass is green. Maple leaves turn red: they are mixed.

In junior high school, in other places. Finally, it's good, green, and the tree seems to be covered with peaches. He straddled the war horse, and the enemy ship was blown into many pieces, apples, and at the same time, he did not forget to leave some birds' nests on the branches, like the yellow moon. Look at that.

The steps in the middle building are most suitable for endorsement. They are covered on the grass, and a large area is yes. Friends are discussing the plan to go south. They are tender and tender, and the footsteps of autumn are near, walking with a smile. But the first step of remembering makes me very painful. The light shines on the glass inlaid on the steps, but my heart likes the steps more and more. Look at that.

On the steps, there is also a girl who leads the exercise, all of whom are rushing with flowers. At night, it is woven into a dense diagonal, and butterflies of different sizes fly around, killing people.

Imitation writing can be considered from the following points: they are all brewing in the slightly humid air, happily harvesting the fruits of sweat, walking down the steps with a diploma, relaxed and comfortable, and the Dutch invaders drove away. The grass slipped out of the field, and Xiao Ao in the yard said that this kind of bubble gum is a new banana flavor, which can blow the boss, where birds can be heard quietly, and the fruit farmers in the field are busier. When a pair of eyes are full of joy, they can't help touching their broken eyebrows, which are as red as agate.

It's really much easier to walk down the steps from the classroom. Six is too many. I was five years old that year and had a bumper harvest. They first surrounded the ships of the Dutch invaders, and their hearts widened. The lights are on and people are lying in bed. Grass has not completely disappeared from the earth.

A fair-skinned girl with a good figure will be there on time every day. What are the tall trees? Say peptone. I thought I would be afraid of the steps and kick some balls, children and old people from now on.

Autumn is like the god of joy. Cities and villages.

Looking up, I won't regret widening my belt gradually, and there will be no more lively people flying south with flocks of geese on the ground. at present

Hundreds of bees are buzzing under the flowers, leisurely and carefree, leading people to a golden tomorrow. It is new from head to toe. There is a smell of new digging in the wind, and it's cold and it's all out. With the autumn wind, they are extremely holy. When they took this step, the soldiers braved the enemy's intensive artillery fire. Rain is the most common. They are very neat.

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2. Composition imitation, originality+imitation, the more the better, nostalgia of about 500~600 words.

The Mid-Autumn Festival is coming again, and our family is preparing to welcome our uncle from Beijing. As soon as he got home, he said, "Ah! I can't believe that Gao Chun is moving towards a well-off society. The roads extend in all directions, and there are flowers on both sides of the road. Every family has built a small building and lived a rich and happy life. " "Yes! Our crabs in Gaochun Gucheng Lake are famous all over the country, because they are delicious and worth remembering. The 8 th Crab Festival will be held soon! " Dad grinned and said proudly.

At noon, the table was full of tempting delicacies, and my mouth was watering. As soon as the meal started, I wolfed it down. At this time, my uncle smiled and said, "Alas! If only our parents had green vegetables when they were young, but now children are very picky and only eat these big fish and meat. " I feel ashamed to hear that.

After dinner, I will forget my uncle's words. I am chatting leisurely with my classmates on the Internet. Dad said to his uncle with emotion, "When we were young, we always liked to get together and took kicking shuttlecock and swimming as our greatest pleasure." Many toys are made of local materials. For example, water guns, paper planes, rolling iron rings | ... and then digging cicadas, fishing, skipping rope and so on. It has become a commonplace. In recent years, the reform and opening up have improved people's lives in an all-round way. Children really have everything and want to play. Today's children have the latest exotic toys, especially remote-controlled trains, cars and planes. , very realistic, endless functions. This is really amazing! "

The next day, I volunteered to be my uncle's little "tour guide" and showed him the beautiful scenery of my hometown. Ecological tour of Yinghu Taoyuan, Lin Yin Mountain Villa to Youzi Mountain, gaochun old street and Yaochi Mountain Villa ... The lakeside square built by Gucheng Lake has a beautiful environment, birds and flowers, fountains flying and the lake is crystal clear, which makes people linger. Every time I go to a scenic spot, my uncle will ask and watch it with great interest. Along the way, I saw the buildings getting higher and higher, the roads getting wider and wider, and the people's living standards really improved.

My uncle is going back to Beijing. When he left, he took his grandmother's hand and said, "I believe my hometown will become richer and richer." Next time I come back, everyone will live a happier and more comfortable life, and Gaochun's tomorrow will be better! "

Listening to my uncle's words, I am full of longing for the future of my hometown. ...

3. The composition about scenery in the second volume of the fourth grade is about 600 words, so we must imitate the spring scenery of Huangshan Mountain in Guilin. "Spring returns to the white gray orchid outside the mountain, and spring begins in April in the mountain."

The average temperature of Huangshan in April 10℃ is 5.6℃ higher than that in March. At this time, the foothills are full of fragrant grass, wild flowers and peach blossoms, but the hillside is short of grass, azaleas and peach blossoms.

After a week's delay, the Taolin, ten miles away from Taofeng, has just bloomed and is pink. At that time, as the poet Wang Yin recited when he visited this peak in spring: "The river wind blows the head clothes, just as the peach blossoms are blooming, 100,000 trees are blooming, and the peak looks rosy."

It is beautiful spring that helps people have fun. At that time, at the top of Huangshan Mountain, the climate was still cold, spring came late, grass sprouted and flowers contained buds.

But the smell of spring has come to tourists. The spring scenery of Huangshan Mountain is famous for its charm and moving.

The whole body is green; Flowers in full bloom, delicate and charming; Birds are singing together, which is pleasant to hear. In spring, on both sides of the road leading to Huangshan, there are golden rape blossoms in the fields and a little azaleas on the mountains, which makes tourists intoxicated with this natural beauty before they arrive at Huangshan.

Spring is one of the best seasons to visit Huangshan Mountain. In the summer and midsummer of Huangshan Mountain, there are even more invisible waterfalls and countless flowing springs. Especially after the rainstorm, Huangshan became a world of water, and water wrote an exciting movement for Huangshan.

Although the sea of clouds in summer is not as calm and vigorous as that in autumn and winter, it is also unique and beautiful. In the movement of clouds, sometimes you can see a colorful rainbow, such as a seven-color bridge, standing between two peaks.

Sunset is not inferior to sunrise, and the flaming sunset gives Huangshan Mountain a splendid twilight in summer, which is fascinating. Huangshan Mountain in summer is a thick green painting, a cup of cool and sweet juice and a melodious music.

Bao Shen, a native of Shexian County at the end of the Yuan Dynasty and the beginning of the Qing Dynasty, once wrote the poem "Summer in Xiangfu Temple": "There are dense old trees and moss, and Cangshan is deep all the way. The promenade in June doesn't know the heat, and the flying spring rings all day. "

There are all kinds of scenic spots in the autumn of Huangshan Mountain. Autumn is crisp, white clouds are bright, red maple is like fire, grass is deep and fruit is yellow.

Ling Tong, a native of Ming Dynasty, was once the censor and governor of Henan Province. He wrote a poem about travel: "Autumn is more difficult to write, and white clouds reflect Feng Dan." Xu Xiake, a great traveler in the Ming Dynasty, also praised autumn scenery in Huangshan Mountain: "Maple trees alternate with each other, with colorful colors and colorful hydrangeas."

Autumn in Huangshan Mountain is also full of vitality because of the bright colors of forests, birds and flowers. It turned out to be "going to Qiu Lai in spring".

Guo Xu, a great scholar in the Ming Dynasty (a native of Shexian county, which now has the remains of Guo Xushi Square), studied at Xiangfu Temple in Huangshan when he was young. He wrote the poem "Autumn Tour to Huangshan Mountain": "In the autumn wind, you can relax and think about life. Lotus bends when it meets water, and moss grows on the wall and waist.

Wine and yellow flowers are near, but the sky is far away. If the floating mound is waiting, raise your hand and be willing to move. "

In this poem, Huangshan Mountain in autumn is written about flowers in full bloom and peaks in the water, which is comparable to spring, and the common feelings of sadness for autumn are also written in it. The winter rime in Huangshan Mountain is more beautiful, strange and unique than anywhere else.

It deserves to be the best scenery in the world. If you travel in the mountains in winter, maybe one morning, you will suddenly find that the scenery outside the window has changed beyond recognition and become a silver world.

The vast mountain peaks are icebergs, and the trees are like clusters of corals, which is amazing. Is it "like a strong wind in spring, which blows at night and blows open the petals of ten thousand pear trees?" No, this is a rare rime! With crutches, I went out to climb the mountain. Looking around, I saw the mountains crisscross, the pine forests are densely covered, and the school is wrapped in silver. Huangshan has changed its lush appearance, white everywhere, and the world is the same.

From top to bottom, every grass, every tree, every branch and every leaf is condensed with flawless white crystals, such as wearing silver, hanging Buddha beads, swaying mountain wind, crystal clear, like entering the world of colored glass, like entering the fairy-tale Qiongge, which makes you dizzying and like entering a fairy-tale dream.

4. What does parody imitate? I think parody can imitate three aspects: 1 is the form, including the structure of the article, the rhetorical devices used, such as metaphor, personification, beautiful sentence characteristics and so on.

Imitating composition can start with imitating the form of the original text. The second is the writing method, that is, the writing techniques used in the whole article, such as expressing one's will by holding things, expressing one's will by death, expressing one's feelings by scenery, etc. The third is the content, which can be the theme of writing, the intention of writing and so on. , such as imitating the central idea of objects, scenery and articles.

Another version is Baidu's.

A little wordy, you can also refer to: how to imitate writing is to write a composition like an example. Generally speaking, a composition can never be written. From poor to good, it has to go through the process from imitation to creation.

Students all know that extensive reading can accumulate a lot of writing materials, and writing will be handy. On the other hand, if the basic reading skills are not solid, it is impossible to write high-quality and high-level compositions.

Therefore, students should attach great importance to reading analysis in Chinese class, so as to master certain writing methods and skills and imitate compositions in a targeted manner. Learning example: When learning each text, we should not only understand what is written in the text and express the author's thoughts and feelings, but more importantly, we should know which words and phrases the author used, in what order and in what way. Specifically, when reading and analyzing the text, students can start from the following seven aspects: 1) understanding the theme; 2) Understand profound words; 3) Correctly divide paragraph levels and summarize the meaning of paragraphs or levels; 4) Distinguish the primary and secondary contents of the article and the details; 5) Find and understand the central sentence and summarize the central idea; 6) Pay attention to the connection and transition between paragraphs; 7) Find out the order in which the author observes and narrates things.

Inference: After understanding the above problems, students can also combine the guidance tips of this unit, choose appropriate topics, and practice composition fragments by using the writing methods learned in textbooks, so as to understand, apply and consolidate the selected materials and learning writing methods. In other words, when writing a composition, students can contact this unit or some texts they have learned before and learn from the expression; You can also read the materials related to the theme of this composition, enrich the writing materials, improve your cognitive ability, and lay the foundation for completing the composition independently.

For example, we will learn the writing method of this article and write a composition about this writer after learning "Young Runtu". In order to write this composition well, please first recall how the author describes the characteristics of juvenile leap soil. By reading the original text, students can easily see that the author not only grasped the boy's appearance (purple round face, small felt hat and bright silver collar around his neck). )

, behavior, language and other external characteristics, but also selected typical events (catching birds, watching melons and thorns, picking shells, watching jumping fish) to reveal the internal characteristics of young leap soil: rich knowledge, smart and capable, lively and lovely. Then let the students think about how to write about the people they want to write about. According to the writing of the lesson "Young Runner", the students clearly stated: 1) Describe the mother's external characteristics, but don't grab her eyebrows and beard, pay attention to the key points, and must serve to highlight the central idea; 2) Reveal the mother's inner characteristics with typical examples: a, the little things in life-meanness; B, educating people and helping others-generous ... In addition, students can also collect a series of materials according to their own life experience, but they should choose the materials that can highlight the characteristics of the characters according to their own needs.

Review the new work: after selecting the materials, students should strike while the iron is hot and use the self-study class to complete the first draft. And submit the first draft to the teacher for review in time. The teacher classifies the students' exercises according to their contents and puts forward preliminary opinions: 1) Meet the requirements and describe the details; 2) It meets the requirements and the description is more specific; 3) basically meets the requirements, and the description is not specific; 4) Do not meet the requirements, and the description is not specific.

In this way, students can re-examine the composition requirements, make a positive or negative ruling, and make clear whether their articles should be revised or re-selected. In short, when reading and analyzing the text, students should not only master the main content of each article, but more importantly, while reading and analyzing the text content, they should also focus on learning the writing method of this article, and flexibly apply it to their own compositions, and learn and appreciate each text in the textbook as an "example exercise" to tap the uniqueness of the writing method. This long-term accumulation will surely lead to excellent exercises. It should be noted that: 1) writing mainly imitates the writing structure, order or method of writing examples, and it is absolutely impossible to copy the content or make a makeover. You should re-select the topic of the article yourself.

2) Before writing, carefully study the sample, understand the content, summarize the writing structure and method of the sample, and then consider your own material selection, typesetting and expression after imitation. 3) The theme of parody must be familiar to you, and you must not copy it mechanically.

In order to conform to the example in narrative order or expression, other aspects can be bold and innovative. Student Example 1 "Digging" Mom (150024) Class 2, Grade 6, Harbin No.3 Power Generation Co., Ltd., Heilongjiang Province: Ji Haidong, which mother doesn't love her children, but my mother "digs" like hell.

(Cut to the chase and highlight the uniqueness of the mother by contrast-"digging". ) I remember one weekend, my mother and I went shopping. The first time I saw the mutton skewers sold at the door of the store. Looking at the brown mutton kebabs, I almost drool.

So, I quietly begged my mother: "Mom, can you ..." Finally, I couldn't say it. The language features are in line with the children's age characteristics. )

"Can't what?" Mom said angrily. "Can you buy a kebab and try it?" I summon up courage to say.

"No, you can't get into the bad habit of eating snacks. Besides, eating that kind of thing will ruin your stomach! " Mom said firmly. My mother made an excuse not to buy me mutton kebabs, so that I could form a good habit. )

I knew it wouldn't work if I kept fighting, so I didn't say anything more. I kept saying in my heart, "Mom is so embarrassed!" (Take care of the beginning and highlight the mother's "excavation". )

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5. Choose a composition and imitate it at night. From the small window of the turret, the enemy stared at the dark big reed pond. The stars in the sky also seem to be immersed in water and are about to fall. Late at night, waterfowl fly and sing in the reed pond. During the day, they hide in their nests to avoid gunfire. The reed is still trying so hard to drill up, and the goal seems to be the sky.

On a clear and windy night, if people's eyes are sharper, they can see a boat coming out of the reed pond and heading southeast like reed leaves in the lake.

The curved and drooping moon floats in the watery sky.

The moon went down, and there was some rustling wind in the reed pond after midnight.

At noon the next day, the weather was very sultry. On the day of a red sun, a layer of smoke floated on the water.

There is no figure in the lake, only a group of white silky waterfowl, which also fly away from the devil to the north and fall under the big lotus leaf to enjoy the cool.

The level here is like a mirror, clear as the blue sky, and slender aquatic plants float gently under the water.

There, fresh reed flowers, a piece of unfolded purple velvet, floated in the wind. Imitation section: There are many mountains in my hometown. There are lush flowers and trees on the mountain. There are many stones in the mountains. If you accidentally step on a hard stone, you will feel very painful.

The pine trees are arranged one by one. In summer, there are many grasshoppers on the mountain. Red, yellow, purple and blue wildflowers are hidden in the thick grass.

When catching grasshoppers on the mountain, you can meet one or two rabbits, and there are jujube trees on the mountain. If you want to pick dates on the mountain, you must pay attention to whether there are snakes! We also have a small bridge there. This bridge is very wide. There are some chairs to the north of the bridge. I don't know what they are for. There used to be water under the bridge, but now there is no water. Now there is a lot of garbage in the river, which shows that people there don't care about the environment, so we should care about the environment!