Look at pictures and write essays (including pictures)

1. Primary school students read pictures and write with pictures

Talk to primary school students about looking at pictures and writing

Jinhua Central School Xin Guangcun

The primary school students entered In the second grade, composition classes were increased accordingly. Some children are just learning to write essays and want to write a long and excellent essay right away. When they see their senior brothers and sisters taking composition classes, they can organize their own materials and write an essay based on the essay topics given by the teacher. The composition feels very envious. These ideas are all about writing a good composition. However, the proposition composition of senior students starts with the preliminary training of lower grades such as looking at pictures and talking, composing words and writing, connecting sentences into paragraphs, and writing observation diaries. Only by laying a solid foundation for writing in the lower grades can we gradually improve our writing skills. Now, I will sort out the problems that students often encounter when teaching picture-based composition, and share my own opinions for children’s reference when looking at pictures and writing.

Composition based on pictures is generally divided into three steps: looking, speaking, and writing. To look is to carefully observe the picture and understand the content shown on the picture; to tell is to tell the story on the picture through one's own imagination, conception and based on the content provided by the picture; to write is to look at the picture and compose, and use words to tell the story Express it and write it into an article.

1. Take a good look at the pictures.

In composition based on looking at pictures, because "essay" is written on the basis of "looking", looking at pictures is the foundation. How to read a good picture? Look at it in an organized and orderly manner. You should also grasp the details of the key parts of the picture and look at them carefully. When we first started looking at pictures and composing, because we couldn't grasp the key points and couldn't observe the details, it was very laborious to write, and we couldn't finish writing more than a few sentences. Therefore, when we observe a picture, we should not only see the general meaning of the picture, but also carefully observe the details in the picture that are more subtle and difficult to detect at the moment. Only when we look at the pictures carefully and deeply can we understand the meaning of the pictures well and have something to say.

2. Make reasonable associations and imaginations.

When talking about this problem, there is such a riddle: "Looking from a distance, there is color, but up close, the water is silent. The flowers are still there when spring is gone, and the birds are not surprised when people come." This riddle is about a painting. Landscape drawings. There are mountains, water, flowers, birds, and various colors in the picture, but there is no sound and it is still. Looking at pictures and writing requires us to change the picture on the picture from "still" to "moving", from "silent" to "sound", from "flat" to "three-dimensional", that is to say, we must rely on the information provided by the picture. The image should be re-created in relation to the reality of one's own life. The characters in the picture should be brought to life and the ins and outs of things should be explained clearly. "With sound", turning "flat" into "three-dimensional", and making characters and things come alive, we should use the content provided on the picture to associate the things in the picture with the more familiar things in our own lives, and combine them with our own actual life thoughts. , develop associations, and cleverly create metaphors to connect the situations before and after things with the situations on the picture.

Third, the article should be written vividly, concretely, vividly, and completely.

After looking at the picture and imagining it reasonably, we can proceed to the step of "writing". Before writing, we might as well do an exercise of talking through the picture, or telling a story by looking at the picture. As soon as you tell the story on the picture, look at where it is incomplete, not specific, not vivid, or not connected, and then go back and check where it is not detailed enough or thought out perfectly, and make supplements to improve the story you are telling. When you feel satisfied, write it down in words. The picture composition formed in this way is often more complete and vivid. When writing, you can pay attention to the following issues: 1. Explore the psychological activities of the characters through their expressions. . The characters and events written in this way are often more specific. 2. The content of the picture is the central meaning of the composition. We must also analyze the main storyline. The ins and outs, clarify its causes and consequences, and move forward and backward with the picture as the center. 3. The article written must meet the preliminary requirements of composition, such as the article must have a center, the language must be smooth, the hierarchy must be clear, and the text and punctuation must be correct.

Of course, to write a good picture composition, you need to think more, see more, and practice more, and cultivate your ability to observe things. As long as we are good at using our brains, learn more good picture composition examples and use them. Through hard practice, you will definitely be able to do well in reading pictures and writing essays.

2. How to write a picture composition

To write a picture composition, you should pay attention to the following points. 1. Understand the meaning of the picture. Including time, place, characters, events, environment, etc., these decisions 2. Plot layout. Pictures are the same for everyone, so the design of the plot is particularly important. In a picture composition, you should not only write what you see on the picture. , you should also write some of your own imagination, including the psychological activities of the characters in the picture, the background of the story, etc. Clever plot design can often add color to the article. 3. Word count control. Picture-based compositions often do not agree with too many words. , basically about 500-600 words. As long as the article is vivid and the events are specific enough to express the content of the picture, it is considered a success. 4. Master the topic. This is the last point. Generally speaking, a picture composition It will not deviate from the center. However, maybe the center you see is not the center that the picture actually expresses, so you still need to figure it out. 3. Picture composition for the first volume of sixth grade (must have pictures)

A group of naive little ducks waddled on the streets of Vancouver under the leadership of their mother ducks. Some raised their heads and looked at the endless sky and screamed "quack, quack", as if they were singing a happy song; some were running happily, making "pat, pat" sounds, as if they were dancing. A cheerful tap dance; some were preening their feathers, saying: "Look, how beautiful I am!" Like an actor about to perform on stage. The mother duck looked back from time to time and looked at her children with pride, one, two, three...counting how many there were, and whether any of them were left behind.

Just as the mother duck turned around again to count her children who were crossing the road carelessly, she discovered that there were two missing. It turned out that two little ducks had slipped and fell into the sewer beside the road. . Maomao, the baby duck, shouted out loud: "Mom, please save us." *** turned pale with fright and screamed: "It's dirty, smelly and choking here, we can't stand it anymore." Mother Duck was so anxious. Like ants on a hot pot - spinning around.

At this critical moment, Mother Duck was calm and calm, and suddenly thought of the uncle patrolman who sacrificed himself to save others and always helped when in trouble. It quickly rushed to the patrol guard's post, rushed into the post and screamed "Quack...quack..." and asked the patrolman for help. The patrolmen rushed the mother duck outside the guard box, but the mother duck was anxious. She flapped her plump wings and made a pleading sound to the patrolmen. The patrol policemen widened their eyes and seemed to understand what Mother Duck was going to say. They knew that Mother Duck was in an emergency and needed help, so they followed Mother Duck to the "accident place".

The two baby ducks that fell into the sewer were struggling. *** and Maomao sank to the bottom and surfaced, spitting bubbles. It was obvious that they were exhausted. . The other baby ducks formed a circle and were constantly encouraging and comforting them: "Don't worry, mom will definitely find a way." "Mom, go to the patrolman for help. He will come to rescue you soon. You must persist." Stay."

The patrols arrived at the scene of the accident in time and saw many people gathered around the sewer. They were trying various methods to save the little duck regardless of whether it was dirty or smelly. At this time, a fisherman happened to be walking by the roadside carrying a fish basket. A patrolman looked at the fish basket and had an idea and stopped the fisherman. He borrowed the fish basket, found a rope, tied it to the fish basket, and slowly lowered it into the sewer. The mother duck seemed to understand something and shouted to the baby ducks: "Swim into the fish basket quickly, quickly, quickly." So the two baby ducks swam in one after another, and the patrolmen gently lifted the fish basket, and the two ducks The baby duck sat obediently in the basket and was rescued. A patrolman brought a basin of clear warm water, carefully put the baby ducks into the water one by one, and gently washed away the stains on their bodies. After taking a bath in the basin, the two baby ducks joined their brothers. Mother Duck kissed the patrolmen's trouser legs one by one and nodded gratefully to the patrolmen.

The ducks happily went on the road again, and the patrolman watched them go far and wide. 4. Writing characteristics of picture-based writing (content, format, etc.)

Picture-based composition is to first observe the picture carefully, and then write a composition based on the content or meaning of the picture. The meaning of picture-based composition for students I have been familiar with reading and speaking by looking at pictures since I was a child. Writing with pictures is an extension of this form, that is, writing a composition according to the given picture connotation and proposition requirements. Pictures can be single or multiple, and are generally concise and lively. Comics. Some have titles, and some require self-made titles; some have one composition for one title, and some have two compositions for one title; the genres include narratives, expository essays, argumentative essays, and practical essays, and the form is relatively flexible. Compositions based on pictures are also included. A kind of composition based on materials, except that the materials given are not words, but pictures. To complete this type of composition, you must first understand the pictures and understand the requirements of the topic. You must analyze the main body of the picture and what the background is; Is it one thing or two or more things, and what is the relationship between them? Are there any seemingly trivial details that are relevant to the theme? What is the surface meaning of the picture? Is there anything deeper that needs to be explored and the finishing touch? In short, you must analyze and understand the pictures from multiple aspects and try your best to find out the meaning of the question. This is the key to success. The specific writing rules must be closely linked to the pictures. Otherwise, the more you talk, the further you will stray from the topic.

5. How to write a picture-based composition

Picture-based compositions include single pictures and multiple pictures, but looking is the prerequisite for writing. When looking at pictures, you should think about them in order, or from top to bottom, From bottom to top; or from far to near, from near to far; or from the middle to the surroundings; or from people to scenery, and from scenery to people. Think about it, what kind of thing is painted in the picture, and what effect does it have on the picture? First have a general understanding of the main content of the expression. Then look closely at the picture to understand the environment and location where the event occurred. From the scenery and the clothes of the characters, you can also analyze the time when the event occurred. Look carefully at the characters' clothing and body shape, and think about it. Think about the characters’ identities, ages and occupations; look carefully at the characters’ movements and think about what they are doing and how they are doing them; look closely at the characters’ expressions and think about their thoughts and feelings. Then think about what the whole picture illustrates. What is the problem, what is the author's purpose of drawing this picture? Finally, write an outline according to the picture. A single narrative picture only shows part of one thing. In addition to the methods mentioned above, we also You must learn to imagine what it was like before and what changes will happen in the future from the content of a picture. Pay attention to writing the beginning and end. If there are multiple pictures, pay attention to the connection between the pictures. Focus on observing the previous one. Things that do not appear in the picture, such as what new characters have appeared, what changes have occurred in the location, etc. Even if it is the same picture, pay special attention to the subtle changes in the picture, such as the movements and expressions of the characters, changes in the weather, etc., so as to understand The development and changes of things. After reading each picture one by one, read it again in a coherent manner so that the occurrence, development process and results of the things on the picture can leave a complete impression in your mind, and then follow the main meaning of each picture. Make an outline, highlight the key points, pay attention to details, and do not use equal effort on each picture. The narrative description of each picture should be coherent and connected with each other, and do not become an explanation of the picture. The picture when looking at the pictures and writing the words is static. , and relatively monotonous, we need to make the static pictures move and enrich the monotonous pictures through careful observation and reasonable imagination, such as making the characters speak, carrying out psychological activities, making the scenery colorful, etc. How to write words by looking at pictures , can be briefly summarized in twelve words: sequential observation, trying to express, and reasonable imagination. 6. Who can help me write a composition about looking at pictures~ There are pictures

One day, my mother took me to the amusement park to look at the "haha mirror".

I walked to the first mirror and saw a short man appearing in the mirror. I took a closer look, "Ah, it turns out to be me!" I shouted loudly. Why is this mirror so strange? I thought. With this question, I walked to the second mirror again, "Huh? What's going on?" I asked. It turned out that I appeared in the second mirror with a long neck and a tall body. Mom replied with a smile: "This is called a funny mirror, because it can take pictures of people in various ways." "Oh, I understand." I said with a smile. I walked to the third mirror and found that I had become longer and thinner. My mother took the opportunity to say: "It's all the result of you not eating well." "That's not the case!" I retorted. I walked to the fourth mirror, and in the mirror I became a veritable "big wine barrel." I do gymnastics and play games with him, so happy! When the time to leave came, I reluctantly left.

Mirrors are very common, but the magic mirror left a deep impression on me. 7. How to write a composition about looking at pictures

Composition about looking at pictures is also a kind of composition based on materials, but the materials given are not words, but pictures. To complete this type of composition, you must first understand the picture and understand the requirements of the question. It is necessary to analyze what is the subject of the picture and what is the background; is it one thing or two or more things, and what is the relationship between them? Are there any seemingly mundane details that are relevant to the title? What is the surface meaning of the picture? Is there anything deeper that needs to be explored and the finishing touch?

In short, the key to success is to analyze and understand the pictures from multiple aspects and try your best to find out the meaning of the question. The specific writing rule is to pay attention to the pictures, otherwise, the more you talk, the further you will stray from the topic. ?

Explanatory text in picture composition?

Mainly introduces the content of the screen. For example, the 1987 Hubei Province high school entrance examination essay question:?

Title: Observe the picture carefully, understand the meaning of the painting, and first write a text of about 100 words to introduce the picture (no title required). Then, write a short review based on the meaning of the painting, with a title of your own choosing, no less than 300 words. ?

When writing this type of composition, you should follow the general writing method of expository writing, highlight the main content of the picture, and proceed in a certain order.

Looking at the pictures and writing a short comment?

It is to make comments based on the content of the picture. The writing method of this type of composition requires that the content of the picture be closely followed, the comments should be focused and profound, and general remarks should be avoided.

1. Title: Based on the picture below, write an argumentative text within 240 words. (Fuzhou)

2. Topic: Look at pictures and write a composition. What phenomenon do you think the picture reflects? Tell me what you think. No more than 200 words. (Guangdong)

Look at pictures and write stories

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It is to use your imagination to complete a complete story with words based on the content provided by the picture.

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1. Title: Carefully observe the following set of pictures, string them together into a story, draw up your own title, and write a narrative. (Kunming)

Requirements:

①No points will be awarded for poetry, expository essays or argumentative essays. ?

②Draft your own questions. ?

③Rich associations and novel ideas. ?

④ String the four paintings into a story and write a narrative of about 700 words, using a narrative and discussion method. It would be better if you can intersperse some lyricism.

⑤The strokes are clear, the fonts are standardized, the fonts are beautiful, and the rolls are neat. ?

2. Question: Look at these three families?

Based on the content of the following group of pictures, use your imagination and write a narrative essay with the title "Look at these three families". There must be appropriate discussion and the word count should be between 600-700. (Zhejiang)

3. Question: Read the following materials, and then write a narrative essay according to the requirements. (Jinzhou, Liaoning)?

①In the evening, after a violent cough stopped, Uncle Zhang finally decided to quit smoking. ?

②Remembering the jokes he had made several times because of smoking, he resolutely threw the pipe downstairs. ?

③ As soon as he made the move, he regretted it and flew downstairs quickly. ?

④ He thought to himself, how great it would be if he could catch the pipe before it fell to the ground! (Adapted from Mr. Hua Junwu’s comics)?

Requirements:

① Use materials (pictures and explanatory texts) and develop reasonable imagination based on your usual observations and accumulation, and add some detailed descriptions.

② No less than 600 words (no limit to more words), and the title should be drafted by yourself. ?

③Writing should be standardized (including punctuation), neat and tidy.

This is a title for a narrative essay about looking at pictures. To write this composition well, you should pay attention to the following points:?

① Make full use of the four pictures and brief text given, and study them carefully to correctly understand their connotations. ?

② It cannot be written as a commentary for four pictures. The whole picture must be integrated and coherent. ?

③ Focus closely on the text content of the given picture, and develop reasonable imagination on this basis. In particular, you should write more articles on the cause, process, and results of the event.

③ Especially the text "He regretted it" in the picture can be understood in different ways, but we must be careful not to create unnecessary details. ?

④ Because it is a narrative, the expression method should naturally be narrative, with appropriate discussion and emotion, but it must not overwhelm the guest.

Read the letters or other practical texts in the picture?

This type of question requires you to write a letter or report to relevant parties based on the content prompted on the screen.

For example, a city’s high school entrance examination question in 1987:?

Read the cartoon "The old emperor flew into the homes of ordinary people" and write a letter to "China Television News" to reflect your opinions and requirements.

To write this kind of composition, you need to understand the original picture, determine the problem to be reflected, and then complete it according to the general application style of writing. 8. Where to find pictures and examples for second graders to look at pictures and write words?

Primary school composition teaching has always been the focus and difficulty in primary school Chinese teaching, and it has also been the most troublesome thing for students for a long time. The cultivation of composition ability in lower grades of primary school should start with the training of looking at pictures and writing. Looking at pictures and writing is the most preliminary training in composition. It is a good way to cultivate the cognitive ability, image thinking ability, imagination ability and expression ability of children who have just entered elementary school. way.

Many children feel scared when they hear that they have to look at pictures and write words. They seem to have nothing to say or write. Take my children as an example. This is actually the same situation. Every time she was asked to write independently, she would always sit there for a long time, not knowing how to write. But if I talk to her while watching it, she can tell me many, many things. Why is it so easy for children to speak but so difficult to write? I personally think there are the following reasons: (1) Children have not yet mastered the method of looking at pictures and writing. (2) It requires a process to convert oral language into written language, and our children are still too young. They are all in the stage of exploration and discovery. Their ability to control language is very weak. Therefore, they need the support of teachers and parents. Tips and help.

Today, I will share with you some of the ways I teach my daughter to look at pictures and write words. I hope you will forgive me for my immaturity! I also hope that my speech can have the effect of inspiring others, and I look forward to sharing more practices and experiences in tutoring children's writing or other aspects at home.