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What should primary school students write in praise?

Choose one of the good deeds emerging in the school or class to write a letter of commendation and send it to the school radio station or the blackboard newspaper group in the class. The content should be true and specific, and it is necessary to write clearly who it is, what good things it has done and why it deserves praise. The recommendation belongs to the category of practical writing. It consists of five parts: title, praise object, praise content, signature and date. The title of the commendation manuscript is written in the middle of the first line of the manuscript paper; The object of praise and the content of praise can be divided into two sections or merged into one section; The date of signature is written in the lower right corner of the manuscript paper. The object of praise should generally write clearly the name and unit of the person being praised, or indicate his identity; For the content of praise, write clearly why you praised him (why), what you praised him (after) and what you learned from him (for the purpose of praise). A letter of commendation is a kind of practical writing used to praise the advanced deeds and exemplary behaviors of the collective or individual. Generally written to the unit where the praised object is located. Why learn to write recommendation letters? Learning to write letters of commendation is to publicize good deeds, inspire people to learn from advanced figures and promote the formation of new fashions. On the one hand, writers themselves can be educated; On the other hand, it can inspire and promote the progress of others. So what should we pay attention to when writing a letter of commendation? First of all, those who are praised should be advanced and have universal educational significance, but they should not be too demanding. Secondly, writing letters of commendation should have a clear purpose. Third, the letter of commendation is written to praise the advanced and establish a new moral trend. Therefore, what is praised must be true, and it must not be fabricated, nor can it exaggerate or narrow the facts. Otherwise, not only will you not get praise and study, but you will even have a bad influence in society. Fourth, the narrative should be concrete, clear and easy to understand, the language should be concise and to the point, the evaluation of good deeds should be appropriate, and attention should be paid to distinguishing it from writing narrative. Writing letters of commendation is a serious matter. In addition to the correct format and true content, special emphasis should be placed on timeliness. Only in this way can we give full play to the role of commendation. In order to help students better master the method of writing letters of commendation, here is a "jingle", so you might as well remember it and give it a try. If you want to write a good letter of commendation, time and place are indispensable. It is very important for relevant personnel to explain clearly and evaluate appropriately. Let's learn from the advanced figures, inspire the fighting spirit and call it up. In order to make the article more complete, don't forget the date of signature. Work Review Original: Class 4, Grade 5 serves the school, rain or shine, and establishes a meteorological team. Rain or shine, they write the weather on the blackboard at the school gate every day, which brings great convenience to the whole school. They were rated as excellent teams in Chongwen District. Bright primary school Brigade Comments: There are three main problems in this commendation: First, the format is not accurate enough. This commendation does not indicate the date of commendation. As we said, only timely recognition can give full play to its role. If there is no date, it is impossible to know whether it is timely. Second, it is impossible for people to clearly learn what the spirit of the meteorological team is without calling on all the students. It should be written at the end of the article: "Their spirit of obscurity and selfless dedication is worth learning from all students." 3. It is desirable that the language of commendation should be concise and clear, but we must pay attention to the clarity of "why praise" and "what praise", such as why the meteorological team should be established? Because the weather forecast can make the teachers and students of the whole school change their clothes in time according to the weather changes, and ensure the health of teachers and students. This point should be made clear. I hope that students will be careful not to make similar mistakes when writing letters of commendation. In the newly-built Building No.1, there is a young pioneer named Li Feifei who insists on voluntary cleaning all the year round. He is a classmate of Class Two, Grade Six in our school. There are 20 families in the building where Li Feifei lives. Because there are many young workers and busy work, they often have no time to do sanitation. The sanitary conditions of the building are poor, sometimes there are piles of garbage, and the peel garbage is all over the floor, which has a bad smell and seriously affects people's physical and mental health. Great changes have taken place in environmental sanitation since Li Feifei's family moved here. Li Feifei insists on cleaning in the morning and evening. At the same time, we often publicize the benefits of sanitation and supervise people to keep the sanitation inside and outside the building. Her actions touched some grandfathers, uncles and children, and let them join in her cleaning. This year, it was rated as an advanced sanitary building. Li Feifei's spirit of stressing hygiene, loving labor and insisting on doing good consciously is worth learning. On September 20th, Wang Xiaofang Zhou Chunyang commented that the commendation content was substantial and correct, which truly reflected Li Feifei's deeds of consciously insisting on cleaning up garbage and changing the environmental sanitation of residential buildings, and fully praised her quality of loving labor. On this basis, it is correct and influential to call on students to learn from her. This letter of commendation is correct in format and prominent in points, and clearly describes the main contents of the object of praise, the reasons for praise and what to learn from her. Accurate language and sincere feelings have enhanced the publicity effect of the commendation draft. Youth League Committee of Southwest Normal University: On August 18, on the train from Chengdu to Chongqing 108, a classmate of your college did a good thing without leaving his name, which was very touching. What happened was this: August 18, 108 train left Chengdu for Chongqing. When the train was about to leave the platform, the conductor helped an 80-year-old lady. The old lady is a lonely old man in Neijiang County. She went to Chengdu for treatment because of illness, but unfortunately her money and clothes were gone. With the consent of the conductor, she took a free ride back to Neijiang. After listening to the story of the old lady told by the conductor, a student wearing the school badge of Southwest Normal University who was sitting in the 12 carriage 12 stood up and offered his seat to the old lady. As soon as he heard that the old lady had not eaten all day, he immediately took out cookies for her to eat. The old lady had no teeth, so he squeezed the biscuits into powder for her to eat and made a cup of boiled water. He was worried that the old lady would not have enough to eat, so he contacted the dining car and cooked porridge for the old lady. When he knew that the old lady had more than 100 miles to get home after getting off the bus, he generously gave her a few dollars and a pack of biscuits. After the bus arrived at Neijiang Station, he helped the old lady off and handed it over to the staff on the railway before returning to the bus. From Chengdu to Neijiang, this classmate has been busy for the old lady for several hours. Not only the old lady, but also many passengers around her were moved. When people asked his name, he said, "Nothing. It's my pleasure to help others. I can do my best as long as I can. " In this classmate, we saw the new fashion of the new era and the spirit of Lei Feng. Such a young man deserves to be studied and praised. /A passenger on the train KLOC-0/08 1981August19 Comments This commendation praised a college student for serving an old lady who lost money and was ill on the train. The content is true and the plot is touching. The writing format of this commendation letter is correct and the key points are prominent, and the main contents such as the object of praise, the reasons for praise and what to learn from her are clearly stated. Accurate language and sincere feelings have enhanced the publicity effect of the commendation draft. References:

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