Writing humorous passages in essays

1. How to write a paragraph using vivid, humorous and interesting language

The language is vivid and the text is colorful. Students may have encountered such embarrassing things: thinking that they have solved the problem It should be a good article if it is written clearly and concretely, but the teacher will comment in the comments: "If the language can be written more vividly, it will be more interesting to read."

How can I do this? How about making plain language more vivid and vivid? Let's first enjoy this clip: the "mouth" of the vacuum cleaner extends in all directions, "traveling around" in the southeast, northwest and northwest. If there is half a piece of paper here, "annihilate" it; if there is a leaf there, "eat" it. I hummed a rock song and did a "Waltz Spin" again.

The song ended and the bedroom became spotless. I stood upright, gestured "OK" to myself in the mirror, expanded the "cleaning base" of the vacuum cleaner, and started the "second battle"... It was too late to say, but soon, I came to "Sand Dune Falling Goose" "" gesture, catching the vase, but a "plateau" bulged on the head... This text is selected from the exercise "Spending Sunday Chically", which writes "I" cleaning and tidying up the room alone at home.

This is a trivial and tiring thing, but in the young author's writing, it is so lighthearted and humorous. The main reason is the use of metaphors. You see, the job of a vacuum cleaner is "touring around", removing debris is called "eliminating" and "eating", turning around is called "waltzing", and changing a house is called "expanding the base", which is the "second "Battle", the posture of catching the vase is "Goose Falling on the Sand Dunes", and the injury and swelling on the head becomes "Plateau".

These metaphors are so vivid and witty. "I" are really unrestrained, and "I" are really humorous, right? Look again, a classmate wrote that his classmate was fat like this, "'Egg Pancake' was surprisingly fat. When he was sitting at the same table with me, he weighed as much as a young African elephant, and his collar was always on his chin. The following flickers in and out. "The "egg pancake" in the article is the nickname of a classmate, and of course it has its origin. After reading this sentence, does the image of a fat man stand up and come to life? The reason is because of the use of metaphors and exaggeration.

From here, if you are smart, you should have discovered the secret to achieving vivid language. Using metaphors, personification, exaggeration and other rhetorical techniques can make the language humorous and vivid. , which makes people laugh after reading it. In addition, how to show your literary talent? When writing an article, you should try your best to use all your skills and dig out the "memory" information stored in your brain as much as possible. For example, you can appropriately use commonly used words in life according to the needs of expression. Idioms (including idioms, proverbs, idioms, mottos, etc.).

For example, a classmate wrote "The Talkative Woman in Our Class", let's randomly select a fragment from it and look at it together: Once, the teacher was criticizing a classmate, and the "talkative woman" happened to hear it. So, he immediately added insult to injury and told the teacher a lot of things about that classmate. He simply quoted scriptures, talked at length, and talked so much that the teacher's head almost exploded and his eyes became blurry. Alas, he finally finished speaking. At this moment, he didn't feel dry at all. Instead, he was smiling and energetic! A classmate here said: "Hey, you can go and write a book!" "No matter where you are, no prizes, no prizes!" He said in an official tone.

The classmate was so angry that he was speechless and could only "blow his beard and stare." It’s interesting to read this passage! In addition to the humor, the main reason is that there are many good words used in this short paragraph. If you delete these good words and read it again, the taste will be completely different.

Another example is the passage in "Mom, Don't Touch My Diary" where the author and her mother are having a tough time: Mom was very angry and asked me for the diary, but I didn't give it to her. She grabbed it hard and her arms couldn't twist her thighs. , I had to raise the white flag. But I am not willing to accept it! If this doesn't work, I have no choice but to use this "flying mouth".

I said to my mother seriously: "The teacher said that parents cannot peek into their children's diaries!" Without even thinking about it, my mother opened her mouth and said, "The teacher has never said that. It's true." When a scholar meets a soldier - I can't explain why." I was about to get angry. But when I saw my mother like that, I was afraid of adding fuel to the fire and making my diary "to pieces."

Contrary to the original meaning of the author: "My mother wanted to see my diary and grabbed it. I couldn't move her, so I had to say that the teacher said that parents should not peek into their children's diaries, but my mother didn't pay attention at all." "Compared with this, it is obvious that the writing here is much more concrete and vivid, including the quotations of idioms such as "the arm cannot twist the thigh", "a scholar meets a soldier - it is unclear", the exaggeration of "flying mouth", and the metaphor of "shattering to pieces" , in this case, can the charm of language not attract people? Of course, writing a good article is also inseparable from living attentively. Pay attention to some hot topics in life, such as the accumulation of advertising words, lyrics, etc., and quote or borrow them when appropriate, and the interest of the article will emerge.

For example, when frying poached eggs, we are used to writing down the entire process. Compare the following text. What is the difference between the same thing? "'Ping Ping Pong Pong' 'Ping Ping Pong Pong' 'Ding Ding Dong Dong'... What is this sound? This is my unique march 'Hurrying March' by Li Yidan. Well, after looking for pots and spoons, it's time to cook. Now.

Mom and Dad want to eat poached eggs. I still boil a bag of milk. In order to save time, I’ll make the poached eggs first!

'The assistant dad immediately brought the things over' Bang! 'I touched the two lightly and they broke - that's weird. I touched the eggs lightly and they broke.

I was very angry and used all my strength, "Bang!" Poor little egg was broken by my hand before I touched it. "Little egg, you died early!" Go to heaven! 'As soon as I finished singing "Little Balls" in the second part of "Little Baicai", two new little balls were delivered.

After a while..." This passage. It is excerpted from "Kitchen March". Look, the use of onomatopoeias such as "bang", "ping ping pong" and "ding ding dong dong" makes the kitchen lively and cheerful because of this? "Little Dandan, how sad! Die early and go to heaven!" Isn't this adapted from the song "Little Baicai"? We often listen to the "March of the Volunteers", but the "Hurrying March" is fresh and mysterious, right? Read it. 2. Beautiful paragraphs in high school entrance examination essays

High School Entrance Examination Essays - Excellent paragraphs at the beginning: The blue planet is constantly rotating, the magnificent sea is filled with white waves; the trickling river flows through the fields, Villages and towns.

These are all manifestations of vitality. The wind chime of youth opens my heart, the colorful flute of youth blows my dreams, and the notes of youth drive me toward hope.

Youth, this beautiful season, is the time when we sow hope, cherish it, grasp it, and let it shine with dazzling brilliance in our hands (excerpted from "Grasp Youth" by students from Hebei Province) It is said that life A boat cannot exist without ideal sails. It is said that the ideal of life is to live an ideal life.

The happiest time in an ideal life is the flowering season of dreams. (Excerpted from "Bringing Dreams to the Flower Season" by Jingzhou City Candidates) Love is a ray of sunshine in winter, which dispels the biting frost; love is a sweet rain after a long drought, which nourishes the cracked heart; love is in the ocean. The beacon points out the hope of new life.

(Excerpted from "Bringing Love to Others" by Jingzhou City Examiner) I don’t know if I have ever passed you by. You are as gentle as a thin cloud on the horizon. Even if you can meet me but cannot ask for it, you will be taken away. The attention of my soul... (Excerpted from "I pay attention to every little thing in life" by a candidate from Guangdong Province) In life, everyone will encounter unsatisfactory things, such as suffering setbacks, being misunderstood, being criticized, etc. At the time, it felt like it was undoubtedly an insurmountable obstacle.

But looking back suddenly in the future, it was just a wave in the long river of life, a ray of fragrance in the colorful years. (Excerpted from "Xinxianglvlv" by Chongqing candidates) Life needs applause.

Many people often lament: Educated youth are hard to find. What is a bosom friend? Isn’t a bosom friend the sound of applause in life? (Excerpted from "Life Needs Applause" by Anhui Provincial Candidates) Just like wind to sails, like temperature to seeds, like sunshine and rain to the growth of all things, praise is an indispensable spiritual nourishment in our growth process.

(Excerpted from "Desire for Praise" by an examinee in Anhui Province) There is a flower that will never wither in the world, and that is a smile. It is open regardless of the four seasons, regardless of north or south, as long as there are crowds of people.

The nobler the soul, the more beautiful the flower of smile will be. (Excerpted from "Bringing Smiles to Life" by a candidate in Jingzhou City) End of article Life is a burning flame, and it will also emit light in the ashes, because life is in your hands, you just need to grasp it.

(Excerpted from "Life is in Your Hands" by Hebei Province candidates) What is youth? Youth is hope. What does youth need? Youth needs to be grasped well.

Youth without regrets, perfect answer, grasp it. When the spring breeze blows, looking back on the past, I have carefully grasped and done everything I should do. At least "this" is also an explanation of our lives.

Hold youth in your hands, keep hope in your heart, pursue, struggle, and create the glory of youth with hopes and dreams. (Excerpted from "Grasping Youth" by Hebei students) In the flower season, I hope that I can always remember the wise words of the sage: The ship in life cannot be without ideal sails.

The ideal in life is for the ideal life. (Excerpted from "Bringing Dreams to the Flower Season" by Jingzhou City Candidates) Let us take action and bring love to those children who are out of school, to those lonely elderly people... to everyone around us.

When you dedicate your love to others, you also gain great happiness. We must believe that as long as everyone gives a piece of love, the world will become a beautiful world.

(Excerpted from "Bringing Love to Others" by Jingzhou Candidates) There is no need to be pretentious about paying attention. Paying attention will only be unintentional. That seriousness and persistence are like butterflies flying into the sky, taking away my attention unintentionally. I also bring the news of life and love to every little thing in my life! (Excerpted from "I Pay Attention to Every Little Bit in Life" by a candidate in Guangdong Province) Every time I think of this incident, I feel sad. However, this grievance did not sublimate into hatred, but created my strong character. I also understand the teacher's mood. If it hadn't been for that time, would I have experienced the feeling of grievance? Ha ha! The years have no trace, only the fragrance.

(Excerpted from "Xinxianglvlv" by Chongqing candidates) The applause in life can never stop? It always inspires people to pursue the nobility and perfection of the soul. Applause is more important than love and money. Let the applause ring, life needs applause.

Dear teacher, I am so eager to get your praise, even if it is just one or two simple words! (Excerpted from Anhui Provincial Candidate's "Desire for Praise") Bring smiles to life and embellish life with smiles. There is no need to search hard for happiness and beg for the mercy of time, but walk through the four seasons with a smile, and then store them into the wine of happiness to enjoy a lifetime.

(Excerpted from "Bringing Smiles to Life" by candidates in Jingzhou City) 2. Highly summarized, rich in connotation, meaningful and thought-provoking sentences. Savoring the past, there are bitterness and sweetness, the waves and the fragrance are like the never-extinguished sacred fire, igniting my lamp of hope, so I can see the road clearly again and move forward.

(Excerpted from "A Wisp of Fragrance" by Chongqing Candidates) Ordinary life also has dance, and ordinary people's trivial matters also have songs. Success is the enterprising melody plucked by the heartstrings. Success is the ripples caused by the little progress put into the calm lake of emotion.

Savor your success, even if it is a very small one, it doesn’t matter if no one applauds you? Excerpted from "Applause for Myself" by candidates in Anhui Province) Praise is to use your own soul fire to ignite the fire of others' souls, to use your own heart to discover the hearts of others, and to be silently moisturized by the gentle spring breeze. (Excerpted from Anhui Provincial Candidate's "Desire for Praise") Winter does not have the prosperity of spring, the publicity of summer, and the richness of autumn, but what is unique to her is her holy, perseverance, and selfless qualities.

(Excerpted from Zibo City Candidate's "Winter's Personality") Yes, love blows away the darkness in life and spreads the brilliant sunshine. If happiness is fire, love is burning, happiness is water, and love is flowing.

Love and happiness go hand in hand! (Excerpted from "Bringing Love to Others" by a candidate in Jingzhou City) Innovation is saying goodbye to the past, innovation is grasping the present, and innovation is welcoming the future. (Excerpted from "Cool" by candidates in Chongqing) Well, there are a lot of worries.

But I always believe that no matter how cloudy the weather is, it will become sunny. (Excerpted from "Growing Pains" by a candidate in Linyi City) So I packed up my old luggage, pushed away the dust from my body, replaced the illusions of the past with dignity, and used the determination of the past to leave a deep imprint under my feet.

Move forward, toward the front, welcome the glory of life without regrets, and create the fiery redness of life. (Excerpted from the Henan Provincial Examination. 3. The author's language in the text "White Goose" is particularly humorous. Which sentences did you find useful?

In this text, the author describes the actions of a white goose. What he did showed the goose's admiral style.

The text is written from the perspective of the white gander's walking posture and its daily activities, which highlights the "slow and leisurely" characteristics. : Not only does he weigh every step he takes, but even when he encounters a dog, he does not move to run; the activity of writing about geese highlights the characteristics of "carefree and free": not only is he loud - his wings are strong, his voice is loud, Moreover, he competes with others on the water surface and openly swallows the bait, which is really random and without any scruples.

Personification and exaggerated writing, and witty and humorous language are the characteristics of this article. The main purpose of "The White Goose" is to make students realize that different people write the same type of things and their languages ??have their own characteristics through comparative reading of the same title with "White Goose"; the second is to cultivate students' reading ability and make comparisons with the articles. There are some similarities and differences between the two writers' descriptions of the white goose.

(1) In terms of writing structure, the characteristics of the goose are introduced first, and then the clues of "White Goose" are clearer. It leads the whole text with a transitional paragraph, and then describes the proud characteristics of the goose in terms of its cry, gait and eating appearance; "The White Gander" uses the "Admiral" to highlight the goose's style, and then describes the interesting stories of the white gander walking "slowly and unhurriedly" and fighting for shallow water

(2) In terms of description methods, both texts pay great attention to the use of anthropomorphic techniques. The author does not just treat geese as animals, but gives them more human emotions, making the image of geese more approachable. It is so vivid and vivid that it makes people feel very friendly when reading it.

(3) They are all good at using irony to express their love for geese. Although the author of "White Goose" keeps saying that he is "full of airs." "It's "Master Goose", but his words reveal an unconcealable intimacy. "The White Gander" writes: "How many times has it swallowed the bait in my can directly into its belly, and sometimes dragged it into its belly? Walk the fishing line with the bait hanging on it.

It never does this kind of thing secretly, but always calmly and unhurriedly, because it considers itself the master of the river. "The author's helplessness also reveals his full love for geese.

In addition, the author's language is humorous, and there are many similarities in the wording. There are two main differences.

(1) Different language styles. Due to different nationalities and different nationalities, the two writers' languages ??also have their own distinctive characteristics.

For example, the former calls the goose "Master Goose". The latter said that the goose "deserves to be honored with the title of admiral", which gives people a different sense of image. (2) The narrative tone is different.

Although both authors like geese very much. From the narration, we can feel a different tone. Feng Zikai is more kind-hearted and teasing, such as "our Mr. Goose" and "the dogs in the neighborhood know the temper of our Mr. Goose"; Ye Nuo. Sov is more appreciative, and his tone is relaxed and teasing.

This is reflected in many places in the text, such as, "If military ranks could be awarded to birds, this white male would." The goose deserves to be awarded the title of admiral. ""It never does this kind of thing secretly, but always calmly and unhurriedly..." 4. Urgently looking for beautiful passages in junior high school compositions, each paragraph is about 50 words, at least 18 good ones will get +50 points

1. Balzac once said, "Unfortunateness is the advancement of genius." Stairs, baptismal water for believers, bottomless abyss for the weak”.

After the wind and rain, you will see the sky and water with flying gulls and fish swimming in front of you; when you walk out of the thorns, you will see the broad road covered with flowers; when you climb to the top of the mountain, you will see the green mountains at your feet. In this world, if one star falls, it cannot dim the starry sky; if one flower withers, it cannot make the entire spring barren.

You should try your best to get through every hurdle in life. No matter what difficulties you encounter, never give up. "Facing Suffering" ● 2. Stand on the coast of history and trace the historical ditches: Dr. Chu meditated by the river bank and never regretted his death; Emperor Wu of Wei raised his whip and pointed eastward, full of ambition; Tao Yuanming leisurely roamed the Nanshan Mountains, drinking wine and picking chrysanthemums... They Choosing eternity, even if you are flattered, falsely accused, and scorned, you will not let it spread. This is a persistent choice; even if your body is wrapped in horse leather and your soul is lost in the smoke, it is just a heroic choice; even if you are in poverty and cannot have enough to eat all day long, you are still willing to enjoy yourself and bow down. Plowing long acres is an elegant choice.

In a choice, the emperor will achieve his unparalleled great achievements, and the migration of wise men will achieve his eternal legacy. ● 3. Only by setting off can you reach your ideals and destinations, only by hard work can you achieve brilliant success, and only by sowing can you reap rewards.

Only by pursuing can you taste upright people. ● 4. Although you are still just a young seedling.

However, as long as you persevere, you will eventually become a towering tree; although you are just a trickle now, as long as you persevere, you will eventually embrace the sea; although you are just an eagle now, as long as you have a heart Gaoyuan, after falling a few times, will eventually occupy the blue sky. ● 5. Bing Xin said: "Love is on the left, sympathy is on the right, walk on both sides of life, sow seeds at any time, bloom at any time, make this long path filled with fragrant flowers, so that passers-by who pass through the branches and leaves, step on the thorns , I don’t feel pain, there are tears to shed, but it’s not sadness.”

● 6. Pessimistic people are defeated by themselves first, and then defeated by life; optimistic people defeat themselves first, and then they are defeated. Conquer life. A pessimistic person has suffered limited pain and a limited future; an optimistic person has suffered immeasurable hardships and has an unlimited future.

In the eyes of pessimists, things that were originally possible can become impossible; in the eyes of optimistic people, things that were originally impossible can also become possible. Pessimism can only produce mediocrity, while optimism can create excellence.

It is not difficult for us to find a spirit of optimism from extraordinary people; from mediocre people, we can easily find a shadow of gloom. ● 7. Perseverance yesterday is called a foothold, persistence today is called progress, and persistence tomorrow is called success.

● 8. If you only see the dark spots of the sun, your life will lack warmth; if you only see the shadow of the moon, it will be difficult to find light in your life; if you always If you discover the shortcomings of your friends, you will have difficulty finding a close friend in your life journey; similarly, if you always hope that you are perfect, assuming that your wish can really come true, then your biggest shortcoming is that you have no shortcomings. ● 9. The Himalayas soar into the sky, but there are climbers’ flags on them; the Sahara Desert is endless, but there are the footprints of trekkers in it; the Alps stand on thousands of cliffs, but there are explorers among them; the Brahmaputra River is rushing and mighty, but among them There are stories of brave men.

● 10. The passing days are like pieces of withered leaves and petals. What gradually fades away is the innocence and romance of youth. I don’t remember how much rain was falling on my chest and the wind was ringing in my ears. I just know that the vicissitudes of life have already penetrated my heart and climbed onto my face.

When a person walks with pursuit, ups and downs are companions, and hardships are also companions. ● 11. The moon waxes and wanes, people have joys and sorrows, life changes, and the year has four seasons. If you survive the long night, you can see the dawn, if you endure the pain, you can have happiness, and endure the cold winter. You don't have to hibernate, and when all the winter plum blossoms have fallen, you can look forward to the new year.

● 12. Without the depth of the blue sky, you can have the elegance of white clouds; without the magnificence of the sea, you can have the elegance of a stream; without the fragrance of the wilderness, you can have the greenness of the grass. There is no bystander seat in life. We can always find our own position, our own light source, and our own voice.

● 13. Maybe it is the misfortune of fate that is destined to crush your colorful dreams; maybe it is the ruthlessness of heaven and earth that will eventually throw away your hard work day by day, maybe it is the many difficulties Understandable but real obstacles and setbacks have already turned the vigorous struggle and indomitable attack into bursts of sadness and loneliness, so please reflect on ourselves in the misery! ● 14. "People only admire the flower of success for its current beauty; but the original buds were soaked in the tears of struggle and sprinkled with the blood of sacrifice." (Bing Xinyu) Each of us longs for success. Then we should use our regretless efforts to water the newly sprouted seeds when we are just starting out.

● 15. Every drop of water reflects a colorful world, every pair of eyes is embedded in a colorful world, and every stream with a clear melody shines with the brilliance of beauty. Don't lament the helplessness of the world, look at the prosperity and colorfulness of the world with a beautiful mood, and savor the beauty that is everywhere! ● 16. Maybe you are just a young seedling, but as long as you persevere.

You will eventually become a towering tree; maybe you are just a trickling stream, but as long as you persevere, you will. You will eventually embrace the sea; maybe you are just a young eagle, but as long as your heart is high and you stumble a few times, you will eventually soar into the blue sky.

● 17. When the young eagle is still waiting to be fed in its nest, watching the blue sky and white clouds, it already has a dream, that is to flutter its wings to the sky, fight with the blue sky, and dance with the white clouds; When the horse is resting in the fence, raising its head and neighing, it also has a dream, that is, galloping across the wilderness and galloping around the world. ● 18. When it is covered with ice and snow, we need a fire to keep warm; when the night is dark and boundless, we need a little starlight to keep warm; when the future is unclear, we need a navigation light to keep warm... The four seasons reincarnate, which cannot be filtered from the heart. It is troubles and sorrows, and what is left underfoot is hardship and pain.

On a cold day, what can we use to warm ourselves standing in the wind? Keep some sincerity to keep yourself warm! ● 19. If the sea loses the rolling waves, it loses its majesty; if the desert loses the wild dance of flying sand, it loses its magnificence; if life loses its true course, it loses its meaning. ● 20. A secluded path, with twists and turns, will always arouse relaxation and joy. 5. How to make your composition language vivid and humorous

Usually, when we write compositions, we always feel dull and dry. The teacher's comments are always fresh, lively, vivid and touching. What's the secret? How to make your composition more vivid and attractive?

The idea is unique and the idea is novel. For example: The general content of the article "Ladder" is as follows: One day, a father and son were flying a kite and accidentally hung the kite on the wall. The father moved the ladder and asked his son to get it. When the son got the kite and was about to fly down, the father pulled away the ladder and told his son a story: "Father and son were flying a kite... When the son went to retrieve the kite that fell on the wall, the father pulled away the ladder. He He told his son that he would catch his son with both hands, but he deceived him and the son burst into tears. Later, the father told his son: 'Don't trust anyone, not even your father.'" After the father finished telling this story, He also said to his son: "Jump down, I will catch you in my arms." The son hesitated, and finally jumped down with tears in his eyes. Unexpectedly, what greeted his son was his father's warm chest. At this time, the father said to his son affectionately: "Not all people are untrustworthy!"

The author of this article uses a story-within-a-story approach. It also happens between father and son, but the setting is the same. It’s different, and the teaching is different. Although it is an old story with an old theme, the ingenious conception and novel ideas make the article vivid and attractive.

Be expressive. The so-called image means that what is written looks like what it is, and after reading it, it is like seeing it with one's own eyes. For example, Zhu Ziqing wrote only one sentence: "Sit down and fill the circle of chairs", which is endlessly memorable.

The language is more interesting. For example, when writing about a person who is frowning all day long: "You have a gloomy face all day long, as if someone owes you two hundred yuan." "Since the uncle bought a tractor, he doesn't even look at his feet when walking." This sentence comes alive. The uncle looked proud and proud.

In short, as long as we are thoughtful people in life, conceive carefully, add vivid expressions, and interesting language, our compositions will be innovative and more vivid and touching.

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Agriculture - similar in spirit and shape, no two leaves are the same

Case: "My younger brother is very short"

2. The important method for learning composition is "Self-enlightenment"

Can be taught - rhetorical techniques, stylistic standards, etc.

Cannot be taught - literary thinking, talent, etc.

What cannot be taught is often important Knowledge

Case: ancient people reading

3. In the self-construction of writing knowledge, the structure and weight are more reasonable

- Useless knowledge is abandoned

- Useful knowledge is left behind

- Important knowledge is repeated

4. Composition guidance should focus on learning methods

Old textbooks ——Composition knowledge is prefaced, such as style and technique

New teaching materials-comprehensive learning, "package" (such as People's Education Press Edition)

Case: "Advertising and Chinese Language" < /p>

2. What learning methods should middle school students master

1. Read and write a lot to strengthen composition accumulation

Newspaper clipping composition: No writing or reading

——Language sense

——Thinking

Case: “reasonable and unexpected”... "Strange Things Are Not Weird" Ten items

2. Learn to write news and develop composition habits

Method: Learn to write news (one sentence - one paragraph - one large paragraph) - a hundred new words Matter training

Function: Strengthen the basic requirements of "truthfulness, novelty, simplicity and smoothness" in writing

"Although a sparrow is small, it has all five internal organs", strive for refinement in small style and put more energy into it In terms of writing well, such as small poems, couplets, etc.

Case: News reports on literary club activities

3. Learn 4X and master thinking methods

- Think , divergent thinking, three rules of association

——Selection, writing or not writing, writing first or writing later, writing in detail or abbreviation

——Writing, all in one go

——Cultivation, language sense method, calmness method

Practice first and then guide, so as not to limit your thinking

Case: "The experience of running"

4. Apply what you have learned and learn by applying it

Find every opportunity to practice and publish, and break the "motivation" barrier in composition

—— Letters and diaries

— —Event announcements, news reports, broadcast scripts

—Graduation messages, short messages 6. Paragraph describing the teacher in fifth grade (center word: humor) urgently needed

He teaches us in the summer I almost sweat profusely, which is better in winter. One time when he was giving us a math class, because many of our classmates who were not good at math couldn't understand, the teacher worked very hard to explain it to us. We watched the sweat flow down from his face, slowly at first, and then later Big beads of sweat fell down, and the podium was wet with the teacher's sweat. Since the sweat on my face flowed into my eyes, I couldn't continue speaking, so I casually grabbed some paper on the table and put it on my face. Wipe your face and then continue talking to us. On the T-shirt on his back, a small area was wet at first, then slowly spread like ripples, and finally two-thirds of the entire back was wet. But he always insisted on finishing the story for us. This happened more than once. When we looked at him with distressed eyes, he always said: "I am losing weight."

In the past few days of school, the person who left the deepest impression on me was Teacher Yao. ’s first composition class. When the crisp and sweet class music sounded, Teacher Yao walked into the classroom, and the class was still noisy. The teacher did not blame us, but just ordered two classmates who were whispering and asked them to stand in front of the podium and act as models. Then the teacher asked us to observe them, capture their appearance characteristics, and write self-portraits for them. After a while, the teacher asked me to read it first. I immediately became nervous and my heart was beating a little drum. "A pair..." After I finished speaking, I breathed a long sigh of relief. Teacher Yao greatly praised my homework and pointed out the wonderful words in my essay. I felt so happy after hearing this, it was sweeter than eating honey. The teacher asked several other students to read it. After reading it, the teacher also asked us to participate in the evaluation. We also experienced the addiction of a little teacher. Teacher Yao pointed out that one of the students' writing was unrealistic and relied on imagination. The teacher told a joke about the truth of the composition, which made everyone laugh from ear to ear. Finally, the teacher asked the two "models" to talk about their feelings. Their faces turned red, and they probably felt ashamed of their actions.

Teacher Yao allowed us to learn writing knowledge through laughter, and at the same time educated people.

Let us learn to be human and learn to be real people in laughter. This is really a humorous teacher. 7. My early life 2. The author's humorous language is full of wisdom and thought-provoking

4 .Paragraph 7 "But we made a treaty and he was not allowed to develop artillery. This is very important!" In one sentence, why did Churchill not allow his brother Jack to develop artillery? What does this show about Churchill?

Answer: If you let your brother develop artillery, you will be at a disadvantage in terms of military strength, which shows Churchill's military talent.

5. Paragraph 8 "For many years, I always thought that my father discovered that I had the qualities of a genius military strategist. However, I later learned that he just concluded that I did not have the intelligence to be a lawyer." What does this sentence mean?

Answer: When my father supported Churchill in choosing a military career, he had no choice but to do so. In this light-hearted ridicule, Churchill's humble spirit was demonstrated.