Bidding farewell to the teacher, I walked out of the school gate, and the ups and downs of my thoughts were still tumbling in my mind.

Types of bad sentences:

Classification of bad sentences

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Examples

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1 Misuse of nouns

1. This kind of conservatism Thoughts hinder our progress. (obstacle - hindrance [hinder])

2. How I wish to never be separated from him! (Wish-Hope)

3. Judging from a large amount of statistical data, there is no doubt that smoking can cause cancer. (question-suspicion)

2 Misuse of verbs

1. He tried to spread various fabrications to destroy our friendship. (Fabrication - Rumor)

2. What a touching scene this is! (Moving - moving; touching)

3. The big car driving on the highway frightened the bay-red horses in the team. (panic - frightened)

4. I want him to know how poor people live. (Knowledge - knowledge; understanding)

5. It organically forms environmental issues and development issues and becomes a comprehensive strategy for social and economic development. (Replace "formation" with "combination" )

6. Please note that the submission date is by the end of this month. (1. Change the deadline to "as of". 2. Move "the deadline" to the back of "bottom")

7. The annual power generated by the power station is not only supplied to Hangzhou, but also sent to Shanghai, Nanjing and other places. ("Convey" is changed to "Supply")

8. Dreams are more similar to real life. ("Close" is changed to "Close")

9. Collection activities will be held continuously 5 times, each time 10 songs are selected as candidates for the theme song of the Beijing Olympic Games. (Change "enter" to "do")

10. Her paintings are simple and lively, full of youthful atmosphere, and have always been loved by her classmates. (Change "like" to "love" )

3 Misuse of adjectives

1. He is full of valuable work enthusiasm. (Abundant - full)

2. Shirts of the same fabric are produced by the same manufacturer, but the prices in the two stores are half the difference. (Disparity - difference)

3. A few words from Xiao Wang immediately added an indescribable heaviness to Xiao Li. (Heavy - heavy feeling)

4. At the 47th World Table Tennis Championships, our athletes were in high spirits and won four gold medals. ("Strong" was changed to "energized" or "energized" ". Robust: The old man is in good spirits.)

5. The emission of carbon dioxide is increasing strongly. ("Strongly" is changed to "sharply" and "a large amount")

6. Teacher For our sake, we have spent so much time and energy worrying about everything. (Change "careful" to "worry your heart out" or "work hard")

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4 Misuse of particles

1. She often dresses beautifully. (of - got)

2. He said happily: "Okay, let's go together." (Get - place)

3. Comrade Lei Feng’s deeds have always inspired us to move forward. (Delete "author")

4. Mr. Lu Xun, the founder of China's new literature, cared very much about young writers. (Remove “the”)

5 Misuse of prepositions

1. Whatever we do, we are responsible for the people. (For ---Yes)

2. The name Jiao Yulu is not very familiar to middle school students in the 21st century. (Remove "for")

3. Our school has taken some measures to improve students' lives. (The verb-object phrase cannot be inserted into "on...". You can add "problem" after "life", or change "on" to "aspect")

4. After this This was an interesting experiment, and I fell in love with biology. (Improper use of prepositions) (passed)

5. He is an example for me to learn from.

6. Qi Hui's essay has a rigorous structure and fluent language. It was awarded the first prize in the city's essay competition. (Change "put it" to "be")

7. He has been admitted due to his second exam.

(Passed)

8. Self-written and self-acted textbook dramas play a certain role in developing personality and guiding students to read classics. (Replace "in" with "right", and add "and several other aspects" after "Masterpiece"

9. The organizing committee announced that the first Olympic song collection event will be held starting from April 15 this year. . ("in" and "qi")

6 Misuse of pronouns

(1) Unknown reference

1. Wang Li and Li Mei. She was caught in the wind on the road, so she ran up to her, took her hand and asked her questions (she - the reference is unknown, change the first "her" to "Wang Li" or "Li Mei") < /p>

2. Li Ping and Xu Yang went home together. He told him that he bought a copy of "Journey to the West" in the bookstore the day before yesterday and asked him if he wanted to read it (the first "he" was changed to "Li". "Ping" or "Xu Yang")

3. The shepherd boy is holding the cow and eating grass. (Is it "the shepherd boy is eating grass" or "the cow is eating grass". Change it to "the shepherd boy is holding the cow and the cow is eating" Grass.")

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(2) Incorrect person

1. My sister wrote: "She studies very well and her teachers and classmates like her very much. She". ("She" is changed to "I")

2. Unknown reference) Some time ago, the media widely reported the Sichuan people's 49-day hunger strike. As a result, some people put forward new ideas about the limits of human life. , Mr. Sima Nan questioned this matter, and I think he is right. (Unclear reference)

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7 Misuse of adverbs

1. The new class teacher is as caring about the students as the original class teacher. (More - very; all)

2. Xiao Wang is excellent in both character and academics. No one in the class would not say that he is not a good student. (If there are multiple adverbs "no", remove one)

3. No one will deny that the earth does not revolve around the sun. (There is an extra adverb "no", go to one)

4. Use too many words inappropriately) Every time they take a step forward, it is undeniable that they do not need to pay a huge amount.

5. Use negation more often) After reading this letter, not a single student in our school was moved by it. courage.

6. Use negation more often) Can we deny that our opinions are incorrect?

7. Use negation more often) We cannot deny that the earth is not moving.

8. Use negative words more often) Experts warn: Take protective measures when watching the solar eclipse. Do not watch directly with your eyes to avoid burning your eyes. (Delete 'don't')

9 . Use more negative words). The street hopes to vigorously carry out legal education through various channels to prevent young people from breaking the law. (Delete "no")

10. Correct) The history of scientific progress tells us that new knowledge can only be obtained through field experiments, not through self-examination or philosophical talk.( Correct) Chongqing College Entrance Examination in 2006

11. Correct) I am very interested in the TV series "Yongzheng Dynasty". (Correct)

12. Correct) Through instruments Observing the world broadens people's horizons and thus changes our understanding of the material world. Chongqing College Entrance Examination 2006

13. Correct) A large number of facts tell us that environmental disasters have no national boundaries, and all mankind should work together to protect our homeland. (Correct)

14. Correct) 03 National College Entrance Examination. At that time, there was more than one literary club in the school, and our "Haifeng Club" was the largest, with students from three grades participating, and it published the most beautiful literary magazine "Shell".

15. Correct) Constructing Beishan into a provincial forest park is an important project for the local government to implement sustainable development. (Correct)

16. Correct) Educators should be good at guiding students to see the world with beautiful eyes and feel the world with beautiful hearts. (Correct)

17. Correct) Through everyone With the concerted efforts of all parties, the SARS epidemic was slowly brought under control.

(Correct)

18. Correct) We must live in harmony with nature and protect our own home - the earth. (Correct)

19. Correct) The cabin The lights went out, and the owner also entered a sweet dream, leaving only the black night guarding her in the mountains and forests. (Correct)

20. Correct) The national curriculum reform launched in the new century, in Tianjin The experimental zone has achieved some initial results. (Correct)

21. Correct) In World War II, the victory in the Battle of Normandy opened up the second battlefield in Europe and accelerated the demise of fascist Germany. (Correct)

22. Correct) The China Disabled People's Performing Arts Troupe performed a large-scale music and dance "My Dream" in Hong Kong and was warmly welcomed by the audience. (Correct)

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8 Misuse of conjunctions

1. There are eggplants, beans, cucumbers and many vegetables grown in my small vegetable garden. ("和" is changed to "Wait")

2. No matter whether the Emperor or I have broken the law, we must punish him in accordance with the law. ("Regardless of..." is a conditional relationship, "even if..." is a hypothetical relationship; this sentence is a hypothetical relationship)

3. There are only a few lights in our garden, but they are There are stars in the sky. (Only there is - but there is)

4. People who work the most often cherish time the most. This is because they have clear goals and not only arrange their work reasonably to achieve this goal, but also do not Time is wasted in indecision. Therefore, use time effectively. There is only one way to cherish time, and that is to establish a goal in your life and do your best to achieve this goal. (1 delete 'not only' .2 Change "and" to "and" or delete "and" 3. Delete 'also')

5. According to the provisions of the >, the construction of large-scale infrastructure projects must go through the cultural relics department Approved, but some infrastructure units started work without permission, leading to destructive excavations and we are worried. ('but' is changed to "but", "and worried" is changed to "this situation is worrying")

7. Global climate warming has a huge impact on human production and life. ("And" is changed to "and" or "and")

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1 The subject is incomplete

< p>[1] Abuse of omission makes the subject incomplete

1. In the process of getting to know him, he left a deep impression on me no matter in study, work or life. (Add the subject "him" before "Du")

2. Xu Honggang's epic deeds suddenly touched the heartstrings of the audience, and they received a profound education in the midst of extreme excitement. (Add "listener" before "in")

3. When the wind blows over the rice fields, it is like the scalding Yellow River, rising and falling. (Add "rice field" before "just like")

4. When my mother and I walked onto the overpass, we were very excited when we looked at the endless flow of people. (Add a subject before "looking at")

1 Incomplete subject

[2] Abuse of prepositions results in incomplete subject

1. After this study, I have a clear understanding of the subject. Everyone is very educated.

2. Through this period of review, the students' academic performance has been greatly improved.

3. Through education, I have improved my awareness.

4. Under the rude interference of the train conductor, Edison’s desire to sell newspapers and conduct experiments on the train was shattered.

5. Through everyone’s efforts, we completed the project Work on creating class web pages.

6. Through the strict national assessment, Nanjing was named "China's Excellent Tourism City"

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End

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7. During the construction of the Three Gorges Dam, no matter what kind of difficulties the workers encountered Despite the difficulties, they were able to overcome obstacles and move forward indomitably. (The first subject is unclear)

8. In the process of reading literary masterpieces, I understood many principles of life and realized the true meaning of life.

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9. At six o'clock in the morning, tens of thousands of people were already standing on both sides of the street leading to the airport.

10. After reading this article, it was very educational for me. Big.

11. Through our efforts, we finally completed the learning tasks at the junior high school level

12. Through tree planting, alert people can understand the past and see the future, and finally become a kind of national consciousness. Sexual conscious action.

1 The subject is incomplete

[3] The subject is changed secretly, resulting in a lack of subject at the end

1. The enemy on the left just wanted to take it from the table Li Jianwu cut off four fingers of his gun with a knife, and shouted: "Be honest." (The subject of "Shouting" is "Li Jianwu")

2. After this, Wang Xiaohu was injured and disabled, but he was still forced to do heavy work. (Add "someone" before "still forced")

3. After all the other passengers got off the bus, I saw Li Ming accompanying an old man to get off the bus last, carrying a suitcase in his hand. (Add "old man" before "hand")

2 Predicate incomplete

1. When further deepening reforms, all units must establish and improve necessary rules and regulations. (1 remove "work"; 2 add "do well" before "build")

2. On the way to the artillery position, Zhu Kezhong, the cook of the 1st artillery company, suddenly saw a man dressed as a hogweed picker. Walking towards him. (Add "discovery" or "see" after "suddenly")

3. We must advocate and carry forward the spirit of hard work and the step-by-step learning method. (Add "master" before "step by step")

4. Cunning people despise learning, fools envy learning, but smart people are good at learning. (lack of predicate, inquiry)

5. The Chinese government has always been committed to maintaining world peace and stability and resolving international disputes through political means. (Add "advocate" before "pass")

6. A nation's glorious history that should be worth reviewing. (Add "have" after "should")

3 The object is incomplete

1 Broadband network can not only browse information, send and receive emails, but also provide intelligent and personalized online video on demand and remote teaching. (If the object is missing, add service)

2 The instructor's face showed relief. (Smiling face)

3 There are many chances for myopia to occur, so we should develop eye hygiene in daily life. (Habit)

4 The county government takes serious action against the cement factory’s unauthorized price increase. (Event or problem)

5Recently, relevant departments issued an emergency notice prohibiting all hunting, selling, and purchasing of civets and other wild animals. (Delete "everything" and add "action" at the end)

6 It is understood that a corrosion-resistant, wear-resistant and antibacterial agent has been launched on the Guangxi market, which has improved the "health" of solid wood floors. Maintenance. (Missing object. Added products)

7 We actively responded to the principal’s message of rejuvenating the country through science and technology (missing object and central phrase) at the opening ceremony to all students in the school.

8 In the interests of the nation At present, should we give up the "gold mean" of Confucius and Mencius and learn from the spirit of the Koreans, holding high the principle of "treating others in their own way"? (The banner)

9 This is because the degree of inhibition in the brain is deeper. (Add "the reason")

10 We must cultivate our students to be both knowledgeable and capable. Noble quality. (Missing subject, object)

11Thank you for making me understand how poor we are. (Add "you" after "thank you")

4 Attributive adverbials are incomplete

1. To achieve excellent results, you must work hard. (Add "hard" before "labor")

2. They gathered the students on the farm, where they ate, lived and worked together. (Add “with farm workers” before “implementation”)

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1 Improper subject-verb matching

1. Grandpa’s habit of watching football seems to have improved. (Change) A. That past incident lingers in my mind again.

(Emerging)

2. The angels in white are fighting on the front line of the fight against SARS, and their touching deeds and spirit of sacrifice are spreading in the hearts of the people. (Word of mouth)

3. I will Mom’s smiling faces and words were captured in the camera and made into a photo album.

4. After bidding farewell to the teacher and walking out of the school, the ups and downs of my thoughts were still swirling in my mind. (Changed to "ideology")

5. From the day he went to school, he had a strong interest in Chinese. (Inappropriate subject)

6. She has been admitted for her second exam. (Delete "of")

7. How many all-powerful battles have been played by your side. ("All-powerful" is changed to "intense"; "play" is changed to "happen" and "unfold")

8. The night wind blows, and the dense branches and the bright moonlight sway, making a rustling sound. sound. (Add "leaves" before "发")

Mr. Liang Shiqiu's former residence "Ya She" is an important cultural landscape in Beipei District. ("Important" is changed to "protect"

2 Improper matching of object and object

1. We must always ensure the safety of ourselves and those around us. ("Guarantee" is changed to "Protect", delete "work").

2. The fundamental purpose of developing productivity in a socialist country is to improve people's living standards ("improvement" and "level")

3. The completion of the new archway overpass will greatly alleviate the traffic jam problem during peak hours ("relieve" does not match the problem. Change it to "solve")

4. The injection of new funds has made this company serious. The loss-making enterprise has undergone a radical change (changed to "happened")

5. As soon as I entered the venue, I saw many colorful flags and joyful singing (inappropriate object)

6. 03rd year college entrance examination. In response to the rising international crude oil prices, the United States, India and other countries have established or increased oil reserves. Our country must also establish a national strategic oil reserve system as soon as possible ("establish" and "petroleum". "Reserve" is inappropriate.)

7. Smart people are good at cultivating, adjusting, and refining their emotions, so that their emotions can be subject to a colorful virtuous cycle. ("receive" is changed to "produce")

8. I let my guard down (relaxed) [A rapid whistle broke the quiet night - should be called "the tranquility of the night"]

9. Because the appropriate temperature has To help the chemical reaction speed, the construction period will be chosen in May and June when the temperature is higher ("help" and "speed" are inappropriate.)

10. This small building makes each of us happy. Indelible memories remain in my heart (memory is changed to "impression")

11. Some people, facing the beautiful scenery of nature, hear only sounds and colors. (Add before "color". "What we see is only")

12. We must expand and accelerate the development of education in our country (add "scale and" before "development")

13. We must maintain. Collective interests, do not do anything that is not conducive to unity and harmful to the collective (delete “things”, replace “and” with “or”, and replace “behavior” with “things”)

14. The People's Liberation Army has carried out rescue and disaster relief operations many times, protecting the safety of people's lives and property (delete "safety")

After reading the "judgment", people will ask the question, who caused these. Criminals? ("made these criminals" changed to "made these people criminals")

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3 Improper combination of definite and central words

(definite + central word. Improper modifier and central word)

1 . In order to give full play to his talents, he resolutely decided to return to China and participate in China's space development research. ("Full talents" is an inappropriate attributive and central phrase)

2. I walked into a novel and unfamiliar world school gate. ("our school" was changed to "campus")

3. The new principal Chen left a wonderful and deep impression on us. (The attributive "beautiful and profound" is inappropriate)

4. Guo Moruo's "Goddess" is a product of the May Fourth era, and its outstanding historical significance lies in its outstanding expression of the spirit of the May Fourth era. ("Outstanding" was changed to "Huge" or "Major")

5. The solid basic knowledge he laid down in middle school created conditions for his further self-study. (Delete "knowledge", "laid" can only modify "foundation")

We must save unnecessary expenses and waste as much as possible.

("Unnecessary" cannot modify "wasteful")

Improper collocation in the 4 statements

1. Young people, facing the old, weak, sick and disabled, it is just a matter of effort. ("But Add "give them a seat" before "")

2. People were deeply infected by the old man's clear thinking and optimism. (Delete "clear thinking")

3. I was very angry and scolded Wang Qiang casually. (Randomly)

4. After class, he walked to the hillside alone and read new English words enthusiastically. ("enthusiastic" was changed to "serious")

5. People watched and listened to the veteran warrior's speech with kind eyes. ("With kind eyes" matches "watch", not "listen")

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Improper matching of 5 mid-level supplements

1. I’m sorry, we didn’t take good care of you this time. ("Thoughtful" is changed to "thoughtful")

2. Xiao Li's acting skills are very high, and his emotions are also expressed very fully. ("Plump" is changed to "plenty")

6 Improper matching of host and guest

1. Kunming with its bright spring scenery is a beautiful season.

2. Dunhuang Mogao Grottoes, which integrates murals, sculptures and architecture, is recognized as the world's largest extant grotto corridor with the longest continuous construction time and the richest content of Buddhist art. (Add "palace" or "treasure house")

3. Yuelu Mountain in late autumn is a good time for people to appreciate the red leaves of Lushan Mountain and to climb up and have a distant view. (Inappropriate guest of honor, place)

4. Her rosy face is like a blooming pear blossom. (Improper matching of front and back)

5. His hometown is Qinggang County, Heilongjiang.

6. Beijing has the highest population density in the country. (Inappropriate host and guest)

7. Motherhood is a profession and a job. (Being a mother is a profession and a job.)

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1. The subject is redundant;

2. The predicate is redundant;

3. The object is redundant;

4. The attributive is redundant;

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5 redundant adverbials;

6 redundant complements;

7 redundant correlative words (abuse of correlative words)

1. It will stabilize and improve the current Real life. (Remove "reality")

2. Those older people cannot "compete" with young people due to their weak constitution, so they can only stand in the car and sway with the bumps of the vehicle. (Delete "older")

3. In order to prevent the SARS epidemic from rebounding, city leaders require all units to further strengthen management and formulate strict preventive measures. ('No more' is redundant)

4. It’s like thinking of my traveling companions and my comrades on the battlefield.

5. There are fruits everywhere in the mountains and fields

6. He works very seriously.

7. I firmly believe that the future belongs to us.

8. The reporter witnessed the touching work scene of medical staff in the fight against SARS at Xiaotangshan Hospital. (Witnessed with my own eyes)

9. The sound of the cicada was very light and gentle in the hazy morning light. It seemed far, almost close, almost far away, and seemed not at all. ("very", "extraordinarily" Repeat)

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1 The subject is redundant;

2 The predicate is redundant;

3 The object is redundant;

4 The attributive is redundant;

5 The adverbial is redundant;

6 redundant complements;

7 redundant related words (abuse of related words)

10. No. 03 National College Entrance Examination. Before participating in this expedition, he had written a will. If something unexpected happened during the expedition, his four children would all receive a fixed amount of monthly living expenses from his huge inheritance. ("In case" and "if" are repeated.

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11. Everyone can’t help laughing after watching Zhao Benshan’s skits. (Repeated)

12. This afternoon, we listened to Teacher Li Hua’s talk about how to adapt to the development of the times. If necessary, give special reports and lectures for qualified middle school students. (Repeat)

13. In the past 200 years, about one-third of the forests on the earth have been logged and destroyed. (Repeat about and about )

14. You should write a manuscript for our "Youlin Literary Society" to welcome the upcoming school anniversary. (There are duplicates)

15. Once a woman becomes a mother , all without exception devoted themselves to it. (Without exception, devote yourself wholeheartedly)

16. During the summer vacation, everyone must pay attention to safety when swimming to prevent accidents. (Repeat)

17. Generally speaking, we middle school students can listen carefully during class. (Delete the last "we")

18. The deeds of many revolutionaries of the older generation are good examples for us to learn from. ("The deeds" are redundant)

19. You sent the exercises and they are being printed. ("Carry on" is redundant)

20. Before Qingming Festival, all the students of Hongwei Middle School went to the Martyrs Cemetery to lay flowers. ("held" is redundant)

21. The weather in early autumn is cool, and the sun is not as hot as in summer. ("The ground hangs in the sky" is redundant)

22. After listening to my mother's words, I felt happy and satisfied. ("mood" is redundant)

23. Experience at home and abroad throughout the ages proves that useful talents cannot be cultivated in a greenhouse. ("Ancient and Modern" and "Ages" are repeated)

23. What a rich silent subtext this sentence contains! ("Subtext" includes "silent")

24. The Anshi Rebellion caused the people's lives to be devastated, and Du Fu's family was also displaced, wandering in the southwest. ("Creatures" refers to "people")

25. He and Xiao Wang repeatedly discussed how to prove this geometric problem. ("Multiple times" means "repeatedly" the same as "repeatedly")

26. I am really grateful to my math teacher from the bottom of my heart. ("In my heart" is redundant)

28. Li Ming is very serious about any work he does. ("very" and "very" are repeated)

29. In order to reduce the number of words, I had to slightly delete and edit some. ("Slightly more" and "some" are repeated)

30. Overload of academic work on primary and secondary school students is a chronic disease plaguing basic education in our country.

("Sickness" and "disease" are repeated)