How to write Li Qingzhao's slow voice?

This talented poetess in China's history wrote Slow Voice in her later years, which is an expression of her loneliness, sadness and sadness. Reading it carefully is not only sympathy for her tragic fate, but also regret that this talented poetess will fall in such an environment.

Only 97 words are used in the whole word, which organically combines the cold and warm climate in late autumn with my lonely and desolate mood, reaching a situation where I want to worry but I can't hope. The word 14 was used at the beginning, which was rendered like the opening gong of a performance. The author uses the combination of dynamic and static, the combination of mind, environment and meaning to render. Seeking is touching, and writing people's actions is also meaningful, deliberately seeking; Cold and cheerless is static and a state, and writing a cold and cheerless environment is a perception of a state; Sorrow is a great pain to write about the heart and inner world. It should be a changeable season in late autumn, with uneven heat and cold, and the body is also the most difficult to adapt and recuperate. This sentence is more about expressing feelings through the environment and recalling one's turbulent life, from the nomads from invading, taking refuge in the south, her husband being an official, being a scholar, and a happy family collecting stones, to the poor life of being separated and lonely. This situation is related to "it's cold at first sight". As we can imagine, the weather in late autumn is still warm on the first night, but the west wind sweeps away the leaves the next morning, and it feels very cold. In such an environment, it is absolutely impossible for a poor man who lacks clothes and food to keep warm by three glasses of light wine. How did he resist the cold west wind brought by last night? This paves the way for the touching scene of "searching, lonely and sad". Seeing the geese flying in the sky seems to be old acquaintances, which reminds her of her hometown, her relatives and her husband, which makes her sad. Here is a simple sentence to describe how miserable the author was in his later years and how miserable his mood was. In particular, the phrase "Yan Guo Ye" is not only tangible, but also vocal, rendering an atmosphere of attachment, sadness, heartbreak and bitterness, which makes people feel sad, sad and heartbroken!

Then, the second half of the word is from scene to emotion, and the scene blends. Falling flowers are a metaphor for people's haggard, old and withered. Who else will come to enjoy the picking? Sitting by the window, looking at the fallen flowers on the ground, recalling sadness and old life, how can you be lonely until dark? There is also a buttonwood tree beaten by autumn rain. How can this situation be summed up in a sad sentence? This passage is about scenery, sound, emotion, yellow flowers, phoenix trees, drizzle and other scenery, in order to achieve the artistic conception of touching the scene and thinking of people. Bit by bit is to write sounds with overlapping words, and to set off feelings with sounds, which is full of frustration and sadness. The three question mark sentences, although asking about flowers, asking about the night and asking about sorrow, are actually writing their own feelings. Now they are old and haggard, just like fallen flowers. Who will sympathize with pity? The aging of life is like from day to dusk. Who wants to stay in this dark night? Describe the author's attachment, sadness and sadness to the fullest. The last question is sadness, and this time the first one is generalization, that is, how to summarize and solve all the above situations in one word?

The whole word is concise, freely retractable, natural and unique, and the scene blends. It can be said that it is inexhaustible, and I want to talk about it. The author describes the scenery in a narrative way. The scenery is full of sadness, and the emotion is sadness. However, the author has never told a story, but tried his best to set off the rendering and promote it layer by layer, creating a layered and miserable atmosphere and leaving more room for thinking. The Slow Voice was produced under the social background of the Jin Dynasty's invasion, land loss, people's displacement and political corruption, and combined with the author's tragic life experience in this era, it has certain practical social significance. At the same time, it also created the style of pronoun, which can be called the swan song of the ages!