Model essay on high school students' short stories

Thinking: The complete story is clearly written, which shows that death is not a kind of disappearance, but another kind of rebirth. Use psychological description, inverse proportion and other writing skills to make the article more readable.

She opened her eyes and looked at the white room in front of her. The air still smelled of disinfectant, and she remembered what had happened to her. The sharp pain after abdominal surgery drove away her last sleepiness.

She cocked her head and looked at the baby sleeping beside her, which was the result of the doctor's efforts with her for four hours. The little guy slept soundly and had no idea that he had come to a new world. Her tears fell on the pillow towel and passed out.

She didn't want this child, and once had the idea of abortion when she first found out she was pregnant, because she didn't have a husband. Yes, pregnancy before marriage is unforgivable in that remote and isolated traditional mountain village. Her father tried to kick her out of the house, and she knelt down crying and begged her parents to forgive her. Although she was not praised in the end, her father never paid attention to her after that. She once told her mother about the abortion, but her mother hit her and said she was unfilial, so the matter was put on hold.

Four months later, her belly was exposed, and people in the village talked about it, saying that Li Laotou's unscrupulous daughter got pregnant before marriage, which ruined the reputation of the Li family and wasted Li Laotou's honest and frank life, but gave birth to such a daughter. Although her mother advised her not to entertain foolish ideas, gossip always drifted into her ears like a wall, biting her heart a little, and the physiological reaction of pregnancy made her wish she were dead. Finally, one day, while her parents were on a business trip, she took out the pesticides hidden in the cupboard and wrote a suicide note on the table. She really can't stand it.

At this time, she seemed to feel something different. She looked down at her bulging abdomen, which used to be a sign of her shame. She put her hand on her abdomen and thought, does the little guy inside know that I am going to die?

Then, she clearly felt the vibration of her abdomen, which spread to her palm and then plunged into her heart. She looked at it in disbelief, stroking it as if it could penetrate her body, and saw the child inside, curled up and clenched her fist, as if to catch herself, and the little guy moved again. She looked up and tearfully tore the suicide note to pieces. She has just come into contact with a brand new life, and she wants to keep it. She quietly put the pesticide back in its place and never mentioned that she didn't want children again.

Now, the person she wants to protect is in front of her eyes, sleeping peacefully and comfortably. She reached out to tuck him in, and then reached out to him. The hand in the baby suddenly reached out and grabbed her index finger, as soft as a feather, and she felt the throb again.

She held the child's hand and felt the softness and fragility of the new life. This throb touched the softest part of her heart and then melted. She wants to watch him grow up, protect him, and watch him go his own way behind him. He may be the happiness of the rest of her life. He is a new life and her rebirth.

At this time, the mother pushed the door into the ward, looked at the mother and son on the bed and smiled. She went over and put down the thermos bucket in her hand and sat on the bed and said to her, "It's good to have a baby. Don't be angry with dad." He is worried about you, but he just can't save face. Now he is still wandering in front of the hospital, but he won't come in. In the future, our family will live very well and everything will be fine. "

She began to cry, turned to touch the sleeping baby, and then smiled again. Yes, he is a new student and her rebirth.