What is the form of the poem of Huangsha Road in Xijiang Moonlight?

The moon on the horizon rose to the top of the tree, scaring away the magpies perched on the branches.

Shangcheng: In the fragrance of rice flowers, it is said that the harvest year is good. Listen to the frogs.

Seven or eight stars are in the horizon, and two or three points of rain are in front of the mountain.

Xiatan: In the old days, at the edge of the forest in Maodian community, the road turned to Xitou, and I suddenly saw it.

This word uses the epigraph of Xijiangyue, which requires:

(1) The upper part and the lower part are four sentences respectively, and 1 and 2 sentences are all six characters, and they require antithesis. The third sentence is seven words, and the fourth sentence is six words.

(2) The last word of the second, third and fourth sentences must rhyme. (The text in Slide 2 is "Cicada, Year, Film; Change the color in front and look at it from the side. )

Third, appreciate this poem.

1. The poet painted a moonlit picture of a mountain village in the south of the Yangtze River in midsummer, which was poetic, beautiful and moving, and the atmosphere was quiet and pleasant. Full of local flavor. Let's read this poem together.

The students read the whole poem aloud.

This poem was written by the poet when he retired and lived in seclusion. Xin Qiji's ci has the characteristics of tragic, passionate, heroic and unrestrained style. But his works can also present beautiful and moving scenery, revealing a lively and natural mood. This song "Xijiang Moon" is a beautiful word, just like a summer serenade, which gives people romantic enjoyment. Then let's analyze this word carefully.

"Don't be surprised by the bright moon, the breeze sings at midnight." (Slide 5: Moonlight map of the mountain village, with branches, birds and cicadas. Text: ditto)

Q: What kind of picture do these two poems depict?

Analysis: write the magpie first. When the bright moon comes out, the magpies on the branches fly when they see the light. Every time I write about cicadas, cicadas sing in the middle of the night, which shows that it is hot and it has buried rain for the next movie. Originally walking in the dark, the bright moon came out, and it was bright at the moment. The weather was sultry and there was a breeze. How happy it is at this moment! Surprise magpie, compared with the poet's calmness and cicada singing, makes people feel that the countryside is getting more and more quiet.

"There is a bumper harvest in the fragrance of rice and flowers, listening to frogs." (Slide 6 Picture: The rice flowers are in full bloom and golden beside the pond. There are lotus leaves and frogs in the pond. The text is the same as above)

Q: What kind of picture do these two poems depict?

Analysis: The smell of rice flowers is fragrant, refreshing, frogs are buzzing, noisy and quiet, and the local flavor is stronger. The poet is sincerely happy for the farmer. In Daoxiangli, it was not others, but frogs. The frog's cry seems to be "bumper year, bumper year". The poet himself was intoxicated with the joy of harvest, and felt that the frog seemed to be singing for the harvest year.

Question: What kind of writing is this? (After clicking on Slide 6, the text appears: "Side Foil")

Analysis: This is a method of side contrast. Frogs who don't know human feelings but know the seasons give people feelings and say that they are also singing for the harvest. Frogs are like this, people are more happy! Through personification and contrast, the author expresses the lively atmosphere and joy of rural people.

"There are seven or eight stars in the sky, and there are two or three points of rain in front of the mountain" (Slide 7: There is rain in the mountain, there are several stars in the sky, and a man is walking on the road)

Q: What kind of picture do these two poems depict?

Analysis: If uptown is a sunny summer night, it focuses on things; "Xiatan" is about the rain on a summer night, focusing on people's thoughts and feelings. These two sentences describe the weather when a rainstorm is about to pour down. Dark clouds almost covered the sky, only seven or eight stars were exposed in a corner, and the number was clear. Poets write stars instead of dark clouds, but only use stars to hint at dark clouds, which not only increases the aesthetic feeling of the picture, but also does not destroy the scenery. "It rained at two or three o'clock", and the raindrops were very heavy, not tight and scattered, which made the prelude of the shower vivid.

Question: What are the characteristics of the organization of this picture? (Slide 8: Show the following composition in cartoon form)

Analysis: The composition of this painting is quite distinctive. In the previous sentence, the stars scattered outside the cloud form a surface, which shows that the light has how bright; In the last sentence, raindrops form lines, making people seem to hear the sound of raindrops falling to the ground. Before and after the two sentences, from the sky to the front of the mountain, constitute a wonderful three-dimensional picture. This is a sentence, like a painting, with images and charm, and deep poetry permeates between the lines.

"In the past, the Maodian community was near the forest, and the road turned to the stream." (Slide 9 Picture: At the end of the stream, see Maodian again when the peak turns around. The text is the same as above)

Q: What kind of picture do these two poems depict?

Analysis: The poet jumps over the pen here, and then raises the pen, which makes the literary situation ups and downs and shakes his feelings. The word "suddenly enlightened" reveals that "there is no doubt that there is another village without a road."

4. What is the greatest artistic feature of this word?

Analysis: The greatest artistic feature of this word is that it enters the poem with "number", which constitutes a beautiful artistic conception. In the last movie, the number "half" is used to mean midnight. Use the word "one" to describe frogs everywhere. The next film "Seven or eight stars are out of the sky, two or three o'clock before the rainy mountain" is about a summer night's rain, which is really vivid. There are seven or eight stars in the sky, and there are gaps in the dark clouds; It rained two or three points in front of the mountain, and the heavy rain is still falling. (The numbers mentioned above on slide 2 change color) These numbers are skillfully used. There are many stars, so there can be no rain. If you can't see the stars, it may rain heavily. Only a few stars are scattered, and the light rain is scattered, which constitutes a quiet realm to set off the harvest scene and people's joy. It can be seen that numbers can not only input words, but also have a great relationship with the realm of words. This word has also left us a good inspiration in this respect.

Fourthly, analyze the emotions contained in the discourse.

This easy-to-understand little word, without allusions or arguments, is sketched, fresh and lively, swaying and colorful, depicting a leisurely and quiet picture of a rural summer night. Why do poets describe rural life so desirable?

Analysis: Because Xin Qiji fought against the quiet and peaceful countryside with dirty and chaotic officialdom, he was persecuted in the officialdom, but he was able to get temporary comfort and seek spiritual sustenance in the countryside (slide 2 added: the leisurely and quiet pastoral life in the word is Xin Qiji's spiritual sustenance for a quiet and peaceful life). As his friend Lu You said, "Farmhouses are no more evil than cities." It is under this complex emotion that Xin Qiji wrote such vivid local words as "Walking on the Yellow Sand Road on the Moon in Xijiang River". Only by connecting with the author's life experience and ideological ambition can we appreciate the beauty of these words more deeply.