The first paragraph of Jinan’s winter imitation

For a person who is used to living in Lingqiu, he has already seen through the ever-changing changes in winter. Like me, if there is no wind in winter, I think it is strange. In the winter of Lingqiu, the wind is very loud.

Like me, if it does not snow in winter, I think it is a miracle. In the winter of Lingqiu, The snow was falling violently. But without the violent snowstorms, the winter in Lingqiu wouldn't be so unique! Extended information

Use comparison or analogy to introduce other things.

This point is used to great effect in the first paragraph. When writing about Jinan, I also wrote about the strong winds in Peking in winter, the lack of sunlight in London in winter, and the poisonous sunlight in tropical places in winter. These things are placed in the In this paragraph, *** together constitute the good effect of this paragraph.

Not only that, comparison or analogy means thinking. When describing a scene, use other scenes to compare or analogize it, which will give your composition a more mature feel. When writing about a road in Dujiangyan, you feel that it is very similar to a road in Hangzhou, so you compare the two roads. Writing, this is obviously better than just writing about the road in Dujiangyan, and there is a vague shadow of the love of thinking in middle school composition.