One of my favorite places is "an autumn night in the mountains"

1, understand the poet Wang Wei, read and recite ancient poems accurately and fluently, understand the general idea, and appreciate the feelings expressed by the poet.

2. Through the appreciation of poetry, feel the poet's sentiment and pursuit in poetry and painting.

3. Through the explanation and practice of a place that reminds me, we know that writing a memorable place can be presented from three angles: writing people, writing things and writing things, and at the same time, through the narrative of short stories and the description of dynamic and static, the place will be displayed in front of us in a three-dimensional way.

Master an important rhetorical device, that is, metaphor, dynamic and static combination and writing.

Through the study of ancient poems, let students know that writing a memorable place can start from the perspective of people, things and things.

Teaching methods and discussion methods

Teacher: Before class, the teacher described a place to the students. It rained all day, but it rained well. Besides, the clothes around the playground are not wet. It is such a sunny place that lasts less than three days, which makes me remember deeply, so it has become the most unforgettable place in the teacher's heart. So is there such an impressive place in the minds of students?

Student: Yes (please say a few)

Teacher: Yes, each of us has something that impresses us the most, and our great poet Wang Wei is no exception.

Health: Wow, the tone is amazing.

Teacher: Next, let's walk into the world of a great poet and feel what moved him.

Teacher: Play PPT. Let the students read aloud and say the key words. Then guess which ancient poem it is. (Mountain, rain, evening, autumn)

Health: An Autumn Night in the Mountain

Teachers and students read an autumn night in the mountains and an autumn night in the mountains.

Tang Dynasty: Wang Wei

The empty mountains are bathed in a new rain, and feel the early autumn at night.

The bright moon shed clear light from the cracks and cleared the fountain on the rocks.

The bamboo forest is sonorous, the washerwoman returns, and the lotus leaves are swaying to get on the canoe.

Spring spring might as well give it a rest, and the autumn sun can stay on the hills for a long time.

Teacher: The students all say the author's name.

Student: Wang Wei

Teacher: Let me introduce Wang Wei, a poet in the Tang Dynasty. His name is Mosha and his name is Mosalai. He is called "Wang Youcheng" in the world. He was a believer in his early years, but he was completely Zen in his later years because of social attacks. He was nicknamed "Shi Fo".

Wang Wei is well versed in Buddhism. Buddhism has a Vimalakīrti classic, which was told by Vimalakīrti to his disciples. Wang Wei admired it, so he called himself Wei, with the word "Momo". Wang Wei's poems, paintings and calligraphy are very famous, very versatile and proficient in music. Wang Wei, a Zen master, studied Taoism and was proficient in poetry, books, painting and music. Together with Meng Haoran, they are called "Wang Meng". Su Shi commented: "Poetry is full of paintings; Look at the picture, there are poems in the picture. "

His representative works include Holidays in the Mountain Remembering My Brother in Shandong, Oil Painting, Chai Lu and Embarrassment.

Supplement:

From a distance, the mountains are high and the clouds are light, and the colors are bright. When you look closer, you can only hear the sound of water, but there is no sound.

Spring has passed, but there are still many flowers and flowers. People go nearby, but the birds are still not disturbed.

Chai Lu

Tang Dynasty: Wang Wei

No one can be seen in the silent valley, only the voice is heard.

The shadow of the sunset shone into the depths of the forest, and the scenery on the moss was pleasant.

Go to the frontier to carry out tasks

Tang Dynasty: Wang Wei

Riding a bike to visit the border and passing through Juyan County.

Pengpeng also floated out of Korea, and the geese heading north also flew into the sky.

The vast desert is lonely, and the Yellow River sets the yen.

When I arrived at the small pass, I met a spy waiting for the knight and told me that Dou Hu was in Yan.

Please recite the ancient poems you have learned.

1 question, supplementary teacher: The students recite really well. Do the students know that our country is called Shi Fo except Wang Wei? Do other poets have similar titles?

Health: Li Bai, poet.

Poet du fu

Poet Liu Yuxi

Poet Bai Juyi

Poet Wang Bo.

C is the correct answer to question 3, because this poem describes both the scene after rain and autumn.

The word "have" in question 5 should mean anything you want.

Seven questions

Autumn Night in the Mountain is the work of the Tang Dynasty poet Wang Wei. This poem depicts the charming scenery of the mountain village and the simple fashion of the villagers in the evening after the rain in the autumn of Chu Dynasty, and shows the poet's satisfaction with his seclusion and natural beauty, so as to express his personal beauty and social beauty. The whole poem perfectly combines the cool autumn after the rain in an empty mountain, the light of the bright moon among pine trees, the sound of clear spring on the stone, the laughter of happy women returning to the bamboo forest and the dynamic harmony of fishing boats crossing the lotus, giving people a rich and fresh feeling. It is not only like a fresh and beautiful landscape painting, but also like a quiet and beautiful lyric music, which embodies the creative characteristics of painting in Wang Wei's poems.

It does not express the poet's loneliness without company.

Teacher: Play PPT and ask the students what is memorable.

Health: Discuss for three minutes and answer. Maybe it's lucky money for the New Year, maybe it's a cake made by my grandmother, or maybe it's when my father flies a kite with me.

Teacher: continue to let students write three-line poems after PPT.

Flowers commemorate the warm spring.

The stars remember the starry sky at night

Eagle commemorates the blue sky

Teacher: Our great poet Wang Wei went to a place and was deeply attracted by the local scenery, so he left a poem that never died. So do you want to write a place that attracts you and share it with other students? Of course, we are writing modern literature, not ancient poetry. Ask the students to discuss and answer a place that reminds you? )

Student: Please answer the questions (food street, beautiful scenery, unforgettable stories, dogs at home, etc. )

Teacher: I wonder if the students have noticed that there are some places where the teacher wrote on the blackboard. The students said there were no names on the blackboard.

Student: Yes.

Teacher: What did the students observe?

Health: We write about people, things, beautiful scenery, delicious food and so on.

Teacher: Yes, this classmate answered really well! Write a memorable place? Including the story between people in that place, between people and scenery, between people and everything around them.

Teacher: Then how do we conceive our article?

Student: The total score is average.

Teacher: This student's answer is really good. In primary school, we wrote articles in the form of total scores. In the first paragraph, we always write a place with a memorable title. Write nostalgic content in the middle. The ending deepens the theme again.

Teacher: The specific writing requirements of blackboard writing.

1: A memorable place, indicating that this place is beautiful in your mind;

2. The reason for remembering may be the beautiful scenery there; Maybe it's a story between you and people there: maybe it's the food there.

3. Try to show your feelings as a souvenir in the process of writing.

In order to make the article more beautiful, pay attention to the use of accumulated good words and sentences.

5. Pay attention to the development of specific scenes when writing scenes, and don't write all the scenes like bookkeeping.

6. Use the head-to-tail echo method.

1: Recite the ancient poem "Autumn Night in the Mountain";

2. Accumulate and recite another ancient poem by Wang Wei;

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