Full score composition for senior high school entrance examination: 5 compositions on different topics (including topic+analysis)

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In the dark, you will thank the person who carried the lamp for you. On the road of life, there are also "lantern bearers" to help you clear the fog and find the direction of life. ...

Please write a composition on the topic of "Thanks to the person who carried the lamp for me".

Requirements: recall one thing, show a person and penetrate your feelings for this person; No less than 600 words.

model essay

Thanks to the person who carried the lamp for me.

Fourteen years ago, in the spring when everything was revived. With a clear cry, I came to this strange world. I was confused and ignorant at that time. It was you who held the lamp for me all the way without regrets, which made me see the direction of life clearly.

When I was a child, it was appropriate to describe me as a naughty wild monkey. I am alive and kicking, afraid that the world will not be chaotic. It is my "specialty" to uncover tiles in the house and play pranks. You brought me into the library. Quiet atmosphere, clean environment, colorful books ... everything here fascinates me. In the afternoon sunshine, there is always your figure by my side, reading quietly with me. Wandering in the sea of books, I gradually became quiet and clever. Thank you for holding the lamp for me, which made me discover the pleasure of reading.

When I was a child, I knew nothing about life and always enjoyed it. You taught me how to manage my life, how to cook and how to keep my home clean. Thank you for holding the lamp for me and helping me clear the fog of dependence.

When you grow up, problems come one after another. The pressure of study, the misunderstanding of friends, the setbacks I encountered … I became sentimental and fragile. You are willing to listen to me patiently and help me untie my heart. That thought-provoking sentence made me suddenly enlightened. Thank you for holding the lamp for me and helping me dispel the smoke of trouble.

Time flies, and now I have grown from an ignorant child to a knowledgeable middle school student, but time has left a trace in the corner of your eye mercilessly. When I was growing up, I didn't know that if you didn't carry the lamp for me, I would go astray. You guided me on the right path.

analyse

Test analysis: The topic of the composition is "Thank you for holding the lamp for me". In the long journey of life, there are joy and anger, sadness and joy. When we are lonely and helpless, there is always a person holding a lamp to illuminate the confused road ahead for us. Accompany us to success. The man with the lantern is the character we want to write. The key word "thank you" is the theme of writing. The "lamp" in The Lamp Holder is not a lamp in reality, but a metaphor. "Road" is not the road in reality, but the road in life. You can thank someone in reality. You can thank someone in history. The composition dares to tell the truth and express the true feelings, which shows the things around us to some extent. The lantern bearer wrote "thanks", wrote his own true feelings and personal experiences, and showed various real life scenes at the same time.

The finishing touch: the intention of proposition composition.

1. Grasp the key words and find the correct method to solve the problem. The key word of the topic is the "eyes" of the composition topic, which can often show the central idea of the article and reveal the meaning of the topic. Button "eye", that is, grasp the writing focus of the composition.

2. The method of mining topic suggestion. Words generally have original meaning, extended meaning and figurative meaning, while the meaning of the topic of propositional composition is generally multifaceted, profound and implicit, so sometimes our understanding of the topic can not only stay on the surface, but also deeply understand the rich connotation of the topic and dig its deep hidden information.

3. Fill in the title method and add morpheme method. Some propositional compositions, such as words or phrases, can be examined by adding morphemes to form contexts.

4. Make the problem real and turn it into a small method. Some composition questions are difficult to master because of abstract concepts. For this kind of topic, we can turn the big into the small and turn the virtual into the real.

The second article

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Topic: Walking on this road

Requirements:

(1) Write an article of about 600 words.

(2) Do not disclose personal information.

(3) Don't copy.

model essay

Walk on this road

Walking on the road, the candle has a heart and tears, which makes the road sparkling; Walking on the road, the willows have a heart, bow their heads and meditate, so that the troubled earth can wake up with life; Walking on the road, flowers have a heart, and the fragrance floats in Wan Li, so that the fragrance on the road will float forever.

Walking on the road of life, Hua Yiwei selflessly saves other people's lives again and again; Walking on the road of honesty is Xie's promise to the old man and his comfort; Walking on the road of science is Qian Xuesen's unremitting exploration and challenge to science; Walking on the road of love is Luo Yingzhen's miraculous call to her lover.

Walking on the road of revolution, Lu Xun used a pen as a dagger and stabbed the enemy's heart. At the same time, his spirit inspired the patriotic enthusiasm of countless young people. Walking on the road, you need to have the spirit of fortitude, wisdom and fearlessness like Lu Xun.

Haizi once said, "When you come to this world, you must look at the sun." Walking on the road of music, it is Beethoven's Symphony of Destiny that makes us feel the warmth and affection of the sunshine in the world, let the sunshine shine into the gap of life, and let the glory of life write an extraordinary movement.

Walking on the road, we realized the magnificence of pupa breaking cocoon into butterfly; Walking on the road, we feel the joy of seeds breaking through the ground; Walking on the road, we feel the fish's yearning for the outside world; Walking on the road, we looked up at the sky, and we saw the heroic eagle hitting the sky directly. Walking on the road, we should be a caring person, pass on our happiness to more people, and make this long and short journey more human and beautiful. The lofty spirit, like the fragrance of a magnificent rose, floats in Wan Li and benefits everyone.

Walking on the road broadens our horizons. Walking on the road, we have enriched our experience. Walking on the road, our thoughts deepened. Walking on the road, we are much more mature.

Walking on the road, there must be Li Bai's sentence, "Since God has given talents, let them find jobs!" , spin a thousand silver, all come back! " ; Walking on the road, we should have such a belief: "One day, I will ride the wind and waves, sail straight up and cross the deep sea"; Walking on the road, we must have the domineering spirit of "counting romantic figures and looking at the present"; Walking on the road, we should have the courage of "no one has died in life since ancient times, caring for the heart and illuminating the history".

Walking on the road, you should have an open mind like the sea; Walking on the road, you should have the care of the gurgling stream; Walking on the road, you should have the same enthusiasm as fire; Walking on the road is full of scenery, human feelings, spiritual food and motivation. Walking on the road, we are happy, comfortable and at ease. This road is beautiful. It is a unique road, and people have walked many times and witnessed the beauty of the world.

analyse

This proposition composition. "Road" can be the original road, the road to ideal and life, and the process relative to the result ... "This" and "that" mean a process of comparison and choice. The emphasis is on "going", emphasizing that the process is more important than the result, participation, practice, pursuit and unremitting struggle. On the road of life, there are successes, failures, experiences, lessons, joys and sorrows. Some things we encounter or experience are fleeting, such as passing clouds; Some of them are indelible and unforgettable. How much happiness our success has given us; What does our failure give us? Reflect on how to take your own "road"; Not only write the surface of "on this road", but also make a deep excavation from how to "walk" and "on this road" and why to "walk" and "on this road".

An appropriate word to get to the point.

This is a proposition composition exam.

Pay attention to the following three points when writing:

(1) Carefully review the questions and clarify the meaning of the questions. This is the most critical step in writing a good composition.

(2) Clear the center and choose the appropriate materials. After understanding the requirements of the topic, we should carefully recall the materials related to this topic, what are the most familiar and innovative things, and determine the center to select and sort out the materials.

(3) It is best to use concrete examples to make the article vivid and concrete, and remember not to make empty comments around this keyword, which will give people an empty feeling. Appropriate insertion of characters' appearance, language and psychological description, and integration of certain rhetoric, make the language of the article more vivid and the characters more full.

The third article

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Read the following materials and write as required.

There is a kind of fish that has always wanted to know things on land, but it can't be realized because it can only live in water. He made friends with tadpoles. When the tadpole grew into a frog, he jumped onto the land. A few weeks later, the frog returned to the pond and told the fish what he had seen and heard. Frogs describe all kinds of things on land, and fish imagine according to the description of frogs, but everything imaginable has the shape of a fish: people are imagined as fish walking with their tails, birds are fish with wings, and cows are fish with horns on their heads. ...

Actually, people are not like this. Our understanding of new things is inseparable from the existing experience, and is often subject to the existing experience. Therefore, in order to truly understand new things, we must constantly broaden our horizons and enrich our experience.

Please write an article according to your understanding and thinking about the above words.

Requirements: according to the overall meaning of the material, self-made topics, not less than 600 words. If the real name or school name appears in the text, please replace it with an alias.

model essay

Importance of practice

Fish living in water always think of things on land as "fish", that is, they lack the ability to see this link with their own eyes and the consequences caused by imagination. This also tells us how important it is to practice!

The mistakes made by animals should arouse people's vigilance Because of this, we humans have created countless glories.

Life is a long road, and we need to keep learning and strive to live a wonderful life. In learning, we need to put into action, use our brains and gain true knowledge. You can't just talk without practice.

Time is the only criterion for testing problems. In learning, while listening to the teacher's lecture, you should also think and take notes. Not only that, we also need to verify what we have learned and explore the right and wrong of the problem through our own way of thinking and problem solving. "Speaking orally is better than writing." That's what I said.

In recent years, China has been developing Chang 'e-1, Chang 'e-2, Shenzhou-7 and other space weapons, which can show the increasing economic strength and scientific and technological level of China.

The launch of artificial earth satellite is the success of continuous efforts, practice and research and development by scientists in various fields and departments! Practice again and again tells us its importance: practice is a necessary condition for success and an objective condition for changing the status quo.

"Good memory is not as good as bad writing." So, in our daily life and study, why not take some actions for our dreams, be a diligent person and make our dreams come true!

An eagle will never learn to fly without flapping its wings; Li Shizhen could not have written Compendium of Materia Medica without traveling around the world and tasting herbs. And we, if we don't study hard, watch more and practice more, we will never succeed. "Hearing is false, seeing is believing." Enough to illustrate this truth.

Numerous facts have proved that only by putting it into practice can we gain true knowledge. In life, you can't just talk without practice. You can't succeed just by listening, watching and thinking. If you want to succeed, you have to be a diligent person, keep working hard, keep learning, keep practicing and fight for your dreams.

analyse

Intention: The action of the fish in the material is incorrect, from which it can be analyzed that the behavior and understanding of the fish are the result of rigid subjective assumption. Combined with the second paragraph of the material, we can extract the theme of this material: don't make subjective judgments, rely on experience (that is, practice); Practice is greater than fantasy; The importance of practice and so on.

Conception and selection of materials: We tell what we did wrong because of subjective assumptions, or what we did right because of experience. You can also write an argumentative essay on "the harm of subjective assumptions" and "the importance of experience".

Writing skills: writing narrative, paying attention to narrative order such as detail description and flashback; In terms of expression, narrative is the main way, and expressions such as lyric and discussion are used to highlight the theme. When writing an argumentative essay, we should conceive the whole article according to the structure (total score) of the argumentative essay, and at the same time use examples, reasonable argumentation methods and comparative argumentation to make our argument more convincing.

The fourth article

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Write as required

We always envy others, but often turn a blind eye to what we have. Warm sunshine in winter, blooming flowers, greetings from relatives and friends, touching articles, even a little kindness, a warm look ... as long as you feel it with your heart, you will suddenly find that I have so many!

Please write an article with the title "I have so much" of not less than 600 words.

Requirements:

(1) Style selection (except poetry);

(2) The name of the person and the real name of the school cannot appear in the text;

(3) You can't use the reading materials in the text as the writing content.

model essay

So I have so many.

I thought my life was like a cup of boiled water, plain and faint. I took a sip and found that it was mixed with honey. -inscription

Unconsciously, it's snowing season again. Recall the unforgettable silence that winter.

Near the end of the semester, the study of all subjects has entered the most tense and crazy state, and the daily homework is slowly unfolding like a picture scroll, which is slow but unshakable on me. I have a habit when studying, that is, I must do it in a quiet environment. Obviously, there is no such ideal place at home. The splash of oil and the ringing of mobile phones will disturb my thoughts.

As the days passed, homework and noise filled all my after-school life. Plain and helpless. Finally, one day, I couldn't bear it, threw down my pen and shouted out my irritability: can you stop arguing!

When I got home the next day, I began to do my homework as usual. However, there is something unusual today, and I can't hear any noise. Suddenly remembered yesterday's angry words. Well, I finally have a quiet environment.

I can't help thanking my mother from the bottom of my heart for keeping her promise. I continued to struggle silently with numbers and letters. But dinner turned into simple millet porridge, which I didn't notice.

The calendar turns from page to page, and the weather is getting colder every day. At my request, dinner is no longer porridge, only the slightest sound can be heard, and the mobile phone is silent.

One day at dinner, my mother told me: I always cough when I have a cold, and this time I actually put it off. My mother's laughter aroused my guilt. She coughs badly, especially when she catches a cold in winter. In order to create a good learning atmosphere for me, this time ...

Back in my room, I couldn't calm down for a long time. In order to study, I changed my mother's normal life, but she has no regrets.

It suddenly occurred to me that the seemingly empty door was full of my mother's silent care and love.

At the end of the year, every family is buying new year's goods. I put down my pen and opened the door, so the sound of oil boiling in the pot reached my ears. Very strange, very noisy; Yet familiar and warm. My life is no longer boring and difficult. I have the best love as if I had the whole world.

analyse

This is a propositional composition entitled "I have so much". From the perspective of examination, pay attention to four key words:

(1) "Original" means the real situation found;

② "Ye" can be understood as "Tong". The implied meaning of these two adverbs is: I have never found what I had in the past, so I envy others; I have experienced specific things and suddenly found myself having the same thing.

(3) "I" is a personal restriction, and the first person must be used; At the same time, it is limited that the described events belong to individual behavior, which is not equal to the group "we".

4 "so much" can not only express the degree, but also emphasize the feeling after discovering what you originally had; You can also limit the number. The main examples should not be too single, and rich materials should be used to highlight the meaning. Judging from the concept of material selection, such topics are prone to material selection problems: family, friendship, teacher-student relationship, and lack of originality in materials. You can choose materials from the perspective of personal growth, which is easy to reflect the real style of writing and easy to write profoundly in conception. From the perspective of genre selection, this article is suitable for writing narrative or narrative-oriented articles. Choose materials that meet the meaning of the question, express your life experiences or feelings, and express positive and healthy ideological components.

An appropriate word to get to the point.

In the writing of proposition composition, the first thing to do is to examine the questions accurately. We should grasp the key words in the topic to determine the writing scope and content of the article, and we should not misunderstand the meaning of the topic. Secondly, we should have profound thoughts. It is to determine a clear, concentrated and profound theme for the article and express positive thoughts. Third, the selection of materials should be accurate. We should choose materials around the center and use those familiar materials to write a composition, so as to write a true feeling or make a thorough and powerful exposition. When writing, we should highlight the key words in the topic according to the characteristics and requirements of the topic.

The fifth article

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Read the following materials and write as required.

Life is like climbing a mountain, perhaps because we care too much about climbing to the top, so we often leave in a hurry without carefully choosing the path. As a result, some people set foot on the avenue, some people walked into the path, some people ran to the shortcut, and some people broke into the dangerous road. Some roads, flat and smooth, bring you stability or mediocrity; Some roads, rugged and steep, bring you either wonderful or harmful. If you choose the right road, you can climb to the top of the mountain smoothly; The road chosen is not suitable, even if you climb to the top of the mountain, you will be black and blue. It is not the top of the mountain that determines the state of life, but the road you choose to reach it.

Please write an article according to your understanding and thinking about the above words.

Requirements: according to the overall meaning of the material, self-made topics, not less than 600 words. If the real name or school name appears in the text, please replace it with an alias.

model essay

Difficult choice

Yesterday, Teacher Tong played a heartless little game with us. Although the game is small, it makes our class burst into tears. Let me tell you about it.

In the third class, Teacher Tong asked us to take out a piece of paper and write the names of our five favorite people on it. I did not hesitate to write them down correctly on paper: five people: father, mother, grandmother, teacher and friend. I didn't expect Mr. Tong to say, "There is a great disaster, and your ability is limited. You can only save four people. Which one would you cross out? " As soon as the voice fell, the students began to talk about it, and everyone was very entangled. These five people are our favorite people in this world, and no matter which one we abandon, we are extremely reluctant to part with them. After careful consideration, I crossed out my grandmother. At the moment, my heart is very bad. Although grandma lives in Beijing all the year round and seldom comes back to visit us, she is my relative after all and has given me warmth and care.

However, Mr. Tong added, "Another disaster is coming. You must cross out another person. " My eyes were moist, and my trembling hands picked up the pen, but I didn't start, because I realized that every time I lost someone I loved most, my life would lose a joy and warmth, and my heart ached. However, the disaster is ruthless and takes away my laughter again and again. In order to end the disaster early, I endured the pain and crossed out my friends.

I thought the disaster was completely over, but God arranged the disaster again, which means that I will lose another person I love most and face another pain in Where Are You Going? At this moment, my eyes were full of tears, and I became a broken bead. The pen in my hand turned into a sharp knife. If I'm not careful, another person will stay away from me. Time was pressing, so I stabbed the teacher with this sharp knife. Goodbye, teacher. Thank you for taking care of me for many years, giving me knowledge and raising me from a weak sapling to a towering tree. I will be grateful for a lifetime!

Disaster strikes again like a cannon bomb. I've been sobbing, as if I've fallen into a big black hole, and I can't climb out anymore. This time, the disaster turned into a stormy wave, which swept away my father, my backer and my courage ... Now, I am only left with endless fear that my last one will be taken away. What should I do?

My God, my mother, my only mother, was finally taken away by the disaster. Now, my world has completely lost its color. When my mother left, she also took my life and my smile. No, happiness and happiness are gone. Dad, mom, grandma, teachers and friends, you left me endless thoughts and sadness. I just want to go back and live with you!

I must cherish everything, cherish the time with the people I love most, and cherish every minute of happiness now! If I miss it, I really have nothing. ...

analyse

This is a material composition question. Grasp the key sentences when making an idea. Key sentences often imply the material center. Therefore, the key sentences in the material can be used as a breakthrough in choosing the angle of conception. After reading the materials carefully, it is not difficult to find the key sentence: "It is not the top of the mountain that determines the state of life, but the road you choose to lead to the top of the mountain". So we can extract the central meaning: the importance of choice, the role of choice in growth, and the significance of choice in life.

Life faces many choices, some of which are superficial and some are spiritual. If you want to have profound thoughts in this composition, you must write your own inner choices. "Choice" is a choice, but also means giving up another thing, which is the embodiment of values. If "choose honesty", it means giving up lies; "Choose to be strong" is to abandon cowardice. It can be conceived according to the following ideas: the first paragraph points out the feelings and gains gained from the previous choice, leads to the following memories of the past, and lays the emotional tone; In this paper, people can remember an event. They saw an old woman fall on the road, made the right choice between helping or not, and took the initiative to help her. At the end of the article, sublimate the topic of discussion or lyric, summarize the full text, and echo the title or the beginning of the article. The process of choice is the process of psychological change, so we should pay attention to the wonderful description of psychological activities.