Write an essay in the form of a total score

1. Write an essay in the form of total scores

Appreciating lotus flowers in autumn

After autumn, the weather gradually cools down, and the breeze blows lightly. It echoed in the air and felt so good when it blew on my face. Taking advantage of the cool weather and the gap before the start of school, my parents and I happily decided to take advantage of the cool breeze to watch the lotus flowers together.

The car drove quickly through the tunnel and soon brought us to the lake. Standing on the shore of the lake, looking into the lake from a distance at the various lotus flowers, they are so beautiful that you can't help but want to run there. I walked briskly to the lakeside, wanting to get closer to the lotus. I only smelled waves of elegant fragrance, which was refreshing and made people feel relaxed and happy.

White, pink, clusters of lotus flowers are supported by the green calyx, and the bright petals are even more beautiful. The lotus flowers are in various shapes, like beautiful girls. Nearby is a lotus with unfolded petals, growing on the green lotus leaves. From a distance, it looks like a girl in a pink dress dancing gracefully on the green carpet; in the distance is a cluster of buds. The flower buds waiting to be bloomed look like a shy girl sitting on the grass shyly covering her cheeks with her hands when looking sideways; the lotus pods next to them are like small drums inlaid with gems, and the lotus girls are on this green stage. Sing, dance, hold a small concert with snare drum accompaniment...

The lotus leaves are big, round, and green, like a green jade plate; they are also like a big umbrella inserted in the water, one after another. No wonder Yang Wanli, a poet of the Song Dynasty, praised the lotus in this way in "Sending Lin Zifang to Jingci Temple at the Beginning of Dawn": "The leaves connecting the sky are infinitely green, and the lotus flowers reflecting the sun are uniquely red." Under the sunlight, the clear lake water and lotus flowers complement each other, forming a beautiful "lotus picture", which is very beautiful. The lotus is so beautiful! All things in nature are really full of life.

2. It is best to write an essay in the form of a total score, urgent, urgent, urgent, urgent.

In my five years of primary school life, There are many people who have left an impression on me, including classmates, father, mother, etc., but the one who impressed me the most is my good friend---Tang Suhua. She not only studies well, but also loves to help others. She is tall Not tall, with a pair of big watery eyes embedded in the face of Guazi, and a pair of cherry mouths that can speak well under the eyes. I remember one day in the second semester of the fourth grade, the sky suddenly became covered with dark clouds, and it started to rain heavily. , I didn’t bring an umbrella, so I had to wait there for my mother to pick me up. However, my mother had to go to work and my father went to Wenzhou on a business trip. What should I do? At this anxious moment, I suddenly saw a familiar figure approaching me. It was Tang Suhua. She stopped and said to me: "Xiong Yafang, you didn't bring your rain gear, did you? Can I take you home?" I listened. I was so happy that I thanked her repeatedly. After saying that, we walked into the rain curtain holding an umbrella. The rain seemed to be against us, getting heavier and heavier. The rain hit the umbrella like naughty children. Like a child, it got into my sleeves, jumped into my collar, and slipped into my trousers. I found that she had covered most of it towards me, and her clothes were hit by raindrops as big as beans. When she got wet, I said, "Tang Suhua, you should also cover yourself with an umbrella, otherwise you won't catch a cold." But she smiled and said, "It doesn't matter, just go back and change some clothes. Anyway, you are already wet, so don't do it." It will be bad for everyone if we get wet again." Before I knew it, I returned home. She left without sitting down or drinking tea. I asked her to sit for a while, but she said: " No need, I still have to do my homework. Besides, if I go back late, my mother will be anxious." After saying that, I held an umbrella and walked into the rain. I looked at the raindrops falling on her like broken pearls. , looking at her retreating back, I remembered her sincere and kind heart. Tang Suhua’s spirit of helping others is worth learning from. She is a good classmate, a good team leader, and a good friend. She That helpful quality will always echo in my memory. She left a very deep impression on me.

3. Write an essay about a stream in the form of a total score

Travel to the West Lake in Hangzhou You must have heard of the West Lake. It has a beautiful environment and pleasant scenery. It is located in what is known as the "Paradise on Earth" in my country. Hangzhou. On the first day of the National Day, my mother and I took a plane, drifted through the white clouds, and soon arrived in Hangzhou. The streets in Hangzhou were full of green trees and blooming flowers. We were full of praises along the way. We lived in The hotel is right next to the West Lake. Looking into the distance from the hotel's restaurant, the West Lake is surrounded by mountains on three sides and close to the city on one side. The West Lake is like a piece of jasper embedded in the mountains. There are three islands in the lake and Su Causeway directly in front. , you can have a panoramic view of the Leifeng Pagoda and other landscapes in the front left. I heard from my mother that West Lake is 3.3 kilometers long from north to south, 2.8 kilometers wide from east to west, and has a water surface area of ??5.66 square kilometers. After putting down our luggage, our family walked to West Lake, surrounded by the fragrance of sweet-scented osmanthus. Rushing towards me, I jumped happily like a happy bird on the path shaded by willow trees. Soon we rented a small boat. The boatman rocked the double oars briskly and the boat slowly rowed towards the center of the lake. . We rowed towards the largest of the three islands in the lake - Santan Reflecting the Moon. After a while, we saw three stone pools more than 2 meters above the water on the lake. The boatman was a strong uncle, and he enthusiastically He explained it to us and said: "In ancient times, during the Mid-Autumn Festival, the ancients would light a big candle in the pond, and 30 moons would be reflected in the water." Do you know why? It turns out that each of the three ponds There are 5 round holes in the moon. At night, when the candle is lit, the 5 holes light up. There are 15 bright spots in the three pools. Plus the reflection in the water, there are 30 moons, one in the sky and one in the water. That’s 32, plus 1 in my heart, there are 32 moons. The boatman also told us that every Mid-Autumn Festival, boats come and go on the lake, and people play and play and sing around the three pools, which is very lively. When he said At this moment, I couldn't help but think of an ancient poem: "The bright moon makes the blue sea, the three pools are bright everywhere; where the boats sing and dance at night, people walk in the mirror." Just as I was thinking of this, suddenly, a water heron flew down from the sky, very quickly I picked up a fish, stopped for a while by a stone pool, and then flew south. I quickly picked up the camera and took a picture of this rare moment. At this moment, hundreds of swallows gathered in groups. The formations were hovering in the air, and they were arranged into various square formations, which was so spectacular. Ah! The exquisite and beautiful landscape of West Lake and the joy of nature are harmonious and complement each other. It can be said that "light makeup and heavy makeup are always suitable, but it is difficult to paint or write poems in ancient and modern times." 4. Write a 150-word essay in the form of total points, titled A corner of the campus

A 150-word essay on a corner of the campus

I love the tree-lined summer, I love the colorful In autumn, I love the winter covered with silver makeup, but I love the blooming flowers even more. Colorful. Vibrant spring. "The plan for a day lies in the morning, and the plan for a year lies in spring." Grandpa Dongse sent away the severe cold of the earth, and Miss Chun came to the world with light steps. The scenery in spring is very beautiful, like a lifelike painting. The spring sunshine is exceptionally bright, and the graceful spring girl opens her smiling face and floats to the flower bed on campus, gently stroking the face of various flowers and plants. Open those little eyes, slowly poke out your cute little head, and look curiously at this beautiful world; there are many bright and charming flowers among the flowers: pink plum blossoms are like smoke, like mist, and like dust. The roses bloomed with beautiful flowers, covering their little faces and smiling secretly. It seemed that their cheerful laughter could be vaguely heard. They were probably happy for the arrival of the New Year! They are red like fire, white like snow, yellow like gold, and pink like clouds. They all show their grace and grace, and are extremely beautiful. There are two kinds of lilies: scent lily and common lily. Common lily is milky white, exquisite and clear, and charming. Alternating with the green leaves, it is even more charming! The fragrant lilies are white with red and purple inside, and they are so beautiful that when a breeze blows, they are suddenly fragrant. She is painted with makeup for spring, which is enchanting. The white jade-like flowers of the orchid look bright and eye-catching against the green leaves. The most distinctive ones are the chrysanthemums. They are bright, dazzling and extremely enchanting. Some are like golden "wheat waves", undulating with the wind; some are like the tentacles of sea anemones, twisting and turning; some are like cockscombs, like continuous undulations. There are bright morning glow, and some umbrella-shaped corollas are like fountains. They are scrambling to add color to the spring. The rose stands out, as bright red as flames.

The flaming red bunches, as well as the proud and outstanding wild chrysanthemums, all the flowers are vying to flatter each other, inciting the breath of spring, making spring everywhere... "Rust, rustle... rustle, rustle..." That is the little The grass is whispering intimately to Miss Chun! Green grass surrounds the flower bed, giving it a beautiful lace. The gorgeous winter jasmine flowers look at people mischievously with their petite and charming faces, smiling sweetly, as if to say: "Spring is here! Spring is here!" It emits a rich fragrance, attracting colorful butterflies to dance on it. It attracts little bees to fly around and collect honey. Several little flowers that cannot be named are also blooming in the grass, scrambling to show people their gorgeous flowers. The garden is so full of spring scenery that I can’t help but a red apricot comes out of the wall! Spring greens guard this beautiful big flower bed, like hard-working gardeners. Now the flower bed can be said to be a sea of ??grass, a world of flowers, a home for trees, a stage for butterflies, and a paradise for bees. It’s really dizzying! The fragrance is even more refreshing, making people wander back and forth, and intoxicated in this beautiful world

There is a neat row of towering trees on our campus, which is extremely beautiful all year round. . In spring, there sprouts a piece of green that is full of vitality and revives all things. The new leaves of the poplar tree are round, with a small sharp corner protruding from the front. From a distance, they really look like green fans growing on a towering tree. Not to be outdone, the ginkgo tree quietly covered itself with a layer of green gauze. The small fan-shaped leaves that had just unfolded looked so tender and green, as if they had been blown open by a night of spring breeze. In summer, there is a deep green there again. The poplar and oak trees stretched out their broad leaves and held up handfuls of green mulberries for teachers and students. After lunch, it became a place for teachers to chat and a place for students to play. The autumn wind blows, and the leaves of the poplar, oak and ginkgo trees are blown into yellow and fall down, paving a golden avenue for the ground there. It made a rustling sound when I stepped on it, as if to say: "Why do you let us leave the arms of our parents?" In fact, I don't want to either! But the season is ruthless. When the harsh winter comes and the leaves of the poplar, oak and ginkgo trees have irreparably withered, people's eyes are focused on the proud and unyielding green pines and cypresses. At this time, you will involuntarily say "Heavy snow weighs on the green pines." , The green pines are tall and straight. You must know that the pines are noble and pure until the snow melts." Because of this towering tree, the campus becomes beautiful and picturesque in all four seasons. Towering trees, I thank you for adding a beauty to our campus 5. An essay on how beautiful autumn is, write 290 words in the form of a total score

Autumn is so beautiful, wow! Autumn is so beautiful. The children are so happy. Autumn is so beautiful.

When my mother took me to the countryside to play, I saw the red fruits, the yellow grass seedlings, and the beautiful scenery of mountains and clear waters, which really made people feel comfortable. The leaves have fallen to the ground one by one, the maple leaves have turned red, and there are more mosquitoes. The beautiful autumn is so fun.

My favorite flowers and plants: I like morning glories, because from a distance, morning glories look like small trumpets embroidered on a green carpet. They are colorful and beautiful. From a close look, its stem is thin and long. Because it is a twisted stem, it wraps the stick tightly like a green rope.

The green leaves are like duck paws. National Day Today is the National Day. I am so happy to go to my grandma’s house in Liuyang. I got up very early.

Dad was driving, and along the way I saw yellow rice, a scene of abundant harvest. The rice in the field was bent over with laughter, and the farmer uncles were also happy from ear to ear. Before we knew it, we arrived at grandma's house. Grandma's house also built a new house. The new house is so beautiful! It's very big, the pot for cooking is really big, and her little house is really clean, and the living room is also very big. 6. Write an essay about small animals in the form of total points

The animal world is colorful. Every little animal is smart and cute. Children who are innocent and playful all have their own favorite animals. They like their eyes and their cute and funny performances. Of course I am no exception!

My favorite little animal is named "Huang". Oh, don't get me wrong, it's not "Huang Feihong", but the bird "Oriole". It is covered in yellow from head to toe, which makes it stand out from a distance! A pair of small eyes looked around intently, as if to say: I still need to get familiar with the environment! Under the fluffy feathers, there are two small red paws.

It even sleeps like other birds. Hey! So cute!

The yellow feathers are the most amazing. The color of general bird feathers is brown, which looks very ordinary. But the color of the oriole's feathers is golden yellow, how strange! I think it might have been dyed to keep up with the trend!

A pair of small black eyes are embedded in the small head, blinking. It seems to be saying: "Don't hurt birds anymore!" It's so miserable and affirmative!

Little Red’s claws stretched out from the yellow feathers, stretching and curling, as if leading everyone to do gymnastics! "Come on, one, two, three, four, two, two, three, four..." The red claws highlight the beauty of the oriole against the yellow feathers. No wonder they say "red with yellow, bright and bright"! Ah, so cute!

Oriole birds don’t even sleep like other birds. Whenever night falls, the oriole flies to the pole and rolls its golden, fluffy body into a big ball. At this time, you will see a "little fur ball" standing on the pole. I didn't tell you, but you really didn't know that it was an oriole sleeping! Ah, so cute!

The song of the oriole is also famous far and wide. Every morning, she never sleeps in, gets up early, and calls me "chirping". "Chirp Chirp" seems to be saying "A year's plan begins with spring, a day's plan begins with morning"! Whenever I play the radio, the birds also compete to talk and sing, which makes the whole family jump.

My favorite little animal - the oriole bird has its own characteristics! In fact, as long as you observe carefully, you will find that every animal has its own characteristics and cuteness. We must protect animals! 7. Write a paragraph, in the form of a total score, about the teacher’s care and love for the students

The greatest thing in the world is of course mother’s love, but I think teacher’s love is also very great.

Teacher's love is like the fiery red sun in winter, warming us and allowing us to grow in the ocean of knowledge! Speaking of teachers, we must talk about our head teacher, Teacher Guo. In terms of study, Teacher Guo is famous for her patience. No matter which students ask her questions, she will always answer them patiently. In life, she cares about us just like her own mother. If any student feels unwell, she will pay close attention. Asking and caring constantly; usually, she often teaches us how to behave and do things.

I remember one time, we were doing Chinese homework in class. Suddenly, classmate Wan Nan shouted "Ah!". Seeing her panic, everyone thought something had happened to her. Teacher Guo also ran over in a hurry, and Wan Nan told what happened in his seat, chirping like a bird.

It turned out that the classmate Zhang Xinyu next to him accidentally put the pen cover into his ear when he was playing with a pen. At this time, Zhang Xinyu blushed and couldn't say a word. After looking at Zhang Xinyu's ears carefully, Teacher Guo immediately ran to the office and got tweezers.

I wanted to use tweezers to take out the pen cover, but when I started, Teacher Guo hesitated. She said: "Maybe you will damage your ears, so you should go to the hospital." After saying that, she hurriedly took Zhang Xinyu to the hospital. After returning from the hospital, when we knew that Zhang Xinyu's pen cover had been taken out, everyone's hearts dropped.

Teacher Guo also used Zhang Xinyu’s incident as an example and patiently told us what things should not be played, what things should be paid special attention to, etc... I think Teacher Guo is not only a teacher worthy of our respect, but also a teacher who deserves our respect. Our most beloved elders. She really is like her own mother.

I want to say: "Teacher Guo, you have worked hard, thank you!". 8. When writing an essay, what are the benefits of writing in the form of a total score

Total: It is the central meaning. The layer of meaning you want to express. Points: A layered narrative generally means a general narrative and a sub-narrative. the way relationships are structured. The overall score is always an analysis of the reading and writing process and a way in which the essay is structured. An argument is put forward at the beginning (getting to the point), there are several sub-arguments in the middle, and the argument is summarized at the end (either restating the argument, or summarizing the extension), and the several sub-arguments can have a parallel relationship, a hierarchical relationship, a contrastive relationship, etc., but they cannot be included. relationship or cross-relationship. Total score is always a commonly used structure for argumentative essays. This structure also has several variations such as total score, sub-total, and sub-total.

Overview

First, there is a short beginning, or the origin of the content that will be discussed later, or a summary of the content that will be discussed later, usually expressed in summary language. The next step is to explain. There are two types of explanations. One is parallel explanation, which is juxtaposed with each other without obvious traces of the passage of time, such as several different aspects of a person or several aspects of an event. , several different things under the same center. The second is a coherent explanation, with a relatively obvious passage of time between each other, such as different stages of the development of things, different things in consecutive days, etc. No matter what form it is, it is composed of fragments, short and concise, each independent and subordinate to the same main line. Between the several fragments of the story, it can be expressed by subtitles, and it can be displayed with spaces, or it can be like ordinary paragraphs, but with obvious jumps. The end of the article is also a general statement, which can be a response to the beginning or a concluding conclusion. The total score method not only exists in the relationship between sentences, but also in the relationship between paragraphs. The total score method is expressed in three basic forms. Let us first look at a passage from "Kite Flying" (volume five): There are more and more kites in the sky, and it is very lively. The golden "little bee" had two green wings, as if flying around among the flowers. The bright red "big goldfish" swayed its tail as if swimming in the water. There are also those exquisite "little satellites", shining with golden light, as if flying in the universe... The first sentence of this paragraph generally says that there are "more and more kites" and it is "lively", and then the second, third and fourth sentences The sentence specifically describes three scenes of kite flying. Obviously, this constitutes a relationship of summing up first and dividing later. Then there is the following passage: "The meat of squirrels can be eaten, the hair on the tail can be used to make paintbrushes, and the skin can be used to make clothes. The squirrel is really a cute and useful little animal." This is a relationship that is divided first and then summarized. Another way is to summarize first, then divide and then summarize, such as the last section of "The Sun".

Classification

The total score structure is divided into three types: juxtaposition, contrast, and progression. (Take strength as an example) A tie: There are 4 types: (1) Strong is** (2) Strong can** (3) We are strong because** (4) To be strong, we should** B Contrast: positive first and then negative. Let’s first talk about the benefits of being strong, then transition in the middle (however...), then talk about the disadvantages of not being strong, and finally summarize the C-level entry (this is more flattering, has both words to write, and seems to have deeper thoughts): What is being strong? ——Why you need to be strong——What you need to do to be strong——What does it mean to real life

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