2009 Quanzhou senior high school entrance examination Chinese full mark composition

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2009 Quanzhou senior high school entrance examination composition analysis senior high school entrance examination data 2009-12-152113:17 Read 62 comments 0 font size: large, medium and small.

Materials:

An astronomer used to go out to observe the stars every night. One day, he came to the suburbs to concentrate on observing the sky and accidentally fell into a well. He shouted. When people nearby heard the cry, they came to understand the situation and said to him, "Hey, friend, you are observing things in the sky with your heart, but you are not looking at things on the ground." According to the above materials, or describe similar situations in life, or express feelings after reading, or start writing with reasonable imagination. The title is self-made, with more than 600 words.

Analysis: first of all, we must understand the materials. Material is an Aesop fable. The moral of this fable is: "This story says that people must do the most common things on earth before they can talk about the profound things in the sky." (sic. In fact, at present, the villagers only see the value of overlooking the earth, but he doesn't see the value of looking up at the sky. Of course, he looks down on the value of the earth and opposes looking up at the value of the universe.

Secondly, understand the requirements: there are three "or" in the composition, and you can choose one of them to write. If all three aspects are written and the content is superficial, it is definitely a taboo.

The first "or": "Describe a similar situation in life" This can be written as a narrative. By describing one thing or several things, it is pointed out that "many failures are due to the lack of down-to-earth work" and "things often have two sides, so it is difficult to be satisfactory" and so on.

The second "or": this can be written as an argumentative paper. The central argument is that "you must do the most common things on earth before you can talk about the profound things on earth." Or something else, just put facts and reasons to demonstrate.

The third "or": expand, mainly around the theme, try to describe the details, reasonably imagine, and closely follow the meaning of the topic. ? 09 Quanzhou senior high school entrance examination composition scoring standard

Attached:

Astronomers' "Slip"

Choosing a sacred job is choosing to bear loneliness, incomprehension and ridicule! -inscription

Night, heavy night. There is no wind tonight, and the air is filled with lifeless breath. He really can't close his eyes. The astronomical phenomena these days are so strange! He didn't understand why the position of Wolf Star deviated that day. He really didn't understand and wanted to find out, but he couldn't help pretending to be asleep. His wife and children are a little tired of his "doing nothing" performance. In the afternoon, they clamored to break his guide. He wants to tell the children the importance of his research. However, they don't understand this. Not many people in the village admit that the stars in the sky will be related to their lives. In their eyes, one.

During the autumn harvest, farmers are busy farming. Only he, with his compass, wind vane and paper telescope, quietly disappeared into people's field of vision, observing and recording day after day. He is used to this kind of day, and he believes that his work will bring benefits to everyone; Although his research has not yet achieved results, this habit of watching the sky at night has dissolved into his blood and become a habit of him!

Night, heavy night. The whole village fell asleep, even the dog next door fell asleep. He got up quietly, put on his coat gently and looked at his wife quietly. He's out.

There is no wind tonight, and it is rare to be so dull. Why Sirius star's position deviates, why Scorpio is dim these days, Pluto, ah. ...

Just as he was absorbed in the movement of Pluto, he suddenly felt that he had been pulled down by a force. He seemed to be dragged into a black hole, yes, it was a black hole. He believes that there are countless black holes in the sky, and he is not sliding into anywhere in the sky at the moment. It suddenly occurred to him that the place where he stood used to be a dry well!

This dry well is too high for him to climb out. He wants to sit in the well and continue to look at the sky, but all he can see is the palm-sized sky. He had to call for help, he had no other way!

The yellow dog next door barked, footsteps sounded and everyone in the village came! "Ha ha ha ha, you, my friend, you observe things in the sky with your heart, but you can't see things on the ground." "Your wheat seedlings are deserted, why do you still do these stupid things ..." "Quiet in the well, you can continue to engage in your lovely career!"

Those comments echoed in his ears countless times. I don't know if he usually pays too much attention to the sky, or if the echo in the well is very strong at this time, which sounds particularly clear in the silent night sky. Then, there was a dead silence. It seems that they have gone back to the village to get rescue equipment.

In the well, the quiet night is heavy. He remembered the tragic earthquake after the chaos on the eve of N years ago. ...

Attachment: S years later, his prediction about drought prevented the villagers from endless disasters. On his tombstone, there is also a title about his identity: "astronomer"

Examples of details: strength of small sections.

More than 30 years ago, Wang Yongqing, the richest man in Taiwan Province, was a poor man. He came to Chiayi from the countryside with all his possessions-200 yuan money, and opened a small rice shop in the most remote corner of the rice market. Due to funds and store location, business was once depressed.

At that time, the rice on the market in Taiwan Province Province was very rough, and there was a lot of sand in it. Because the business in the store was deserted, Wang Yongqing opened the rice bag with his family and selected the sand and stones in the rice. Customers who went to the store to buy rice found that Wang Yongqing was so considerate to customers and naturally became a frequent visitor to the rice shop.

A detail of choosing sand and stones has erected an invisible brand in customers' minds, which has enabled Wang Yongqing to have the first batch of stable customers.

At that time, all rice shops did not have home delivery business. When Wang Yongqing meets elderly and frail customers, he will take the initiative to help them send rice home. Every time a meal is delivered to the door, Wang Yongqing will ask the customers how many people are there, adults and children, and how much they usually eat. He also carefully recorded these situations in a small book. After calculating that the customer may not have rice, he delivered the rice to the door in time. In this way, the situation was completely opened, and more and more customers demanded home delivery. Therefore, Wang Yongqing is well-known, and earned the first pot of gold in his life by carefully managing the rice shop.

If you don't choose the details of sand and stone, if you don't ask for more details, maybe Wang Yongqing is just an unknown rice vendor. It is precisely because Wang Yongqing has this heart and is willing to think of others in complicated details that he has a chance to succeed in the future and achieve greater success.

Details always seem trivial. But many times, these trivial details actually determine the success or failure of life! (—— Excerpted from the May 2007 issue of Wisdom)

Read the passage, express the bone and spirit through discussion. Firstly, the article describes Wang Yongqing's life experience, focusing on the description of "details": choosing sand and stones, delivering goods to your door, asking one more question, which seems ordinary, but actually magical. Standing out from the predicament of 200 yuan's family and becoming the richest man in Taiwan Province Province, which is famous in business circles, proves the "power of details". Although the discussion at the end of the article only accounts for a small part of the full text, it is to the point and makes the finishing point.