How to send an obituary in a circle of friends when my father-in-law died of illness?

The obituary of my father-in-law died of illness is as follows.

1, the old man died at the age of XX at noon on XX (the next day). The children and grandchildren of the unfilial son knocked for help. They were heartbroken. They looked at them with their own eyes, and they stopped in the hall to mourn deeply! Cheng Ci is scheduled to hold a memorial meeting at XX: XX on the morning of XX, and X will distribute funeral forms at x: x, which will help Mulberry enjoy peace.

2. strict father died in xxX Hospital on XX, XX, at the age of XX. The memorial service will be held at the Wugong Funeral Home on the morning of XX, 2000 10. After the meeting, we will thank the leaders, relatives and friends at Yangling Shennong Resort. The burial ceremony is scheduled to be held in Fuping, Shaanxi Province on XX, XX of the lunar calendar. Unfilial descendants, XX, XX, XX.