What are the sentences describing how the author treats his father in Back, and what thoughts and feelings are reflected?

The typical characteristics of prose writing are grasping the "Hui" proposition of characters, organizing materials and expressing the deep affection between father and son.

There are four times in the article Hui, each time the situation is different, and the thoughts and feelings come down in one continuous line.

The first is the beginning, which is deaf, and there is a strong emotional atmosphere between the lines.

The second time was at the farewell scene of the station, and the author of the father's "retreat" put forward a specific description, which is the focus of writing. Father's fat body, wearing a black vest and a dark blue cloth gown, staggered up the railway to buy oranges for his son. In this shot, the father loves his son, expresses his deep affection and makes his son cry.

The third time is when the father and son say goodbye. Watching my son's "back" disappear in the crowd made people cry when they left.

At the end of the fourth article, from the mouth of the father's son who read the letter, tears appeared on his father's "back" again, which could not echo his yearning and the beginning of the article.

In this job, the sincere feelings between father and son are incisive, but the general description from works to portraits is different, focusing on expression, pronunciation and facial description, but in the concrete and meticulous performance of pen and ink, a characteristic word "back" is grasped. author

Why to deal with it is closely related to the family and emotions of the same author.

Because his father's old scene "Desolation" was full of worries, he came down for half a year.

My father is gloomy in the family. My grandmother passed away. Being a job seeker is still more troublesome. It's no trouble to send my son to Beijing, but it's also difficult to buy oranges for his son. I have repeatedly warned him to take good care of them in all aspects.

The father is in a bad mood and the son is in a bad mental state.

Therefore, grasping the father's "back" to describe and express his thoughts and feelings in a specific environment naturally puts forward a strong artistic effect.

It is precisely because the works are written about a special family, feelings, lines of fatherly love, and the subtle sadness between filial piety and Xiang Lian that they are even more sincere and touching.

1。 Nationalization:

The language of Back is easy to understand, faithful, elegant and of good quality. This highly nationalized language, the expression of the national spirit of "Hui", the perfect article structure and "retreat" are like harmony and unity. Is there a "background" with bright and elegant language, simple and true quality and different styles?

2。 Concise:

The whole article is clean and tidy, and there are no superfluous words. Even the words "he" and "a" can only be used. Except for some classic words from China, there are no colorful words and uncommon words. The writing is simple and natural, with a strong flavor of life, which is very concise and exquisite.

3。 Simple:

"Hui" series paintings tell the truth without any modification or rendering.

Her Son is about how to take care of his father and how to be grateful to his missing father, but the article is useless to prepare abstract words such as "care", "care" and "gratitude", and there is no rhetoric. The big park is the most subtle expression.

The sentences in the text are carefully and elegantly worded, and they will not be willing.

If the period is closed: "My dad said that he was too busy to cooperate with me, so he wouldn't give it to me. Find a hotel waiter to get acquainted with me. He repeatedly asked the waiter and was very cautious. " Here, "hand in hand" seems to pass if "say", but it is more limited. "Hand in hand" is not hair, and then finally hair. In fact, I can't say that my father is a good demonstration of contradictions. The word "familiar" shows that it is reliable for his father to entrust this waiter; "ask ask", ask the waiter as much as possible, and explain patiently and repeatedly to avoid what the waiter missed; "Be very careful" means to postpone the details of the requested content and pay attention to the nuances mentioned. These clauses emphasize that his father is extremely particular and carefully considers and arranges for his son in the car. Although the wording is very common, it is a good opportunity to make the father's son's heart jump from the paper.

4。 touch control

Simple language can convey infinite affection. Another feature is the language of the article. The full-text article is really mediocre, but there is a deep homesickness between the lines, which is very touching. The writing is very ordinary, nothing special. Readers' experience of living here is easy to associate, which makes them find that the most precious world is generally bland, but good feelings can cultivate people's temperament and promote people's understanding of their parents' love.

5。 White inclusion:

The reasons for the classic characters: the classic writers have a deep foundation, so China's classic characters are often sandwiched in the literary genre, which is one thing; On the other hand, it may be that the author of the article used classic expressions of thoughts and feelings at that time.

For example, don't say "unemployed" or "out of work".

It seems awkward to say "leisure" because "leisure" doesn't like the harshness of "unemployment". Finally, his father's letters are all classic, quoting the original words, but they see the truth, and because they are full of complex emotional expressions of the family and father's predicament and desolate mood, they use many China classical words, twice as many as petty-bourgeois intellectuals, with special language color.

In words, the main characteristics of "Hui" are briefly described. The author wrote it on his father's back, describing the scene of buying oranges and crossing the railway, and the complete line drawing tactics.

The so-called line drawing, as far as I know, is not a metaphor to describe, and there are no simple characters, which truthfully record the scene at that time and give readers a close witness. In other words, line drawing is a narrative method to describe and reproduce real artistic effects.

In the author's sketching skills, "Hui" is very high. Please read the following words carefully:

I saw him wearing a black cap, a black vest and a dark blue cloth, stumbling towards the railway and slowly bending down to avoid disaster. But it is not easy for him to climb across the railway to one side of the platform. He climbed to the top and shrank back with his hands and feet; His fat body leans to the left, showing the appearance of a hard disk. Then, I saw his back, and my tears soon flowed down. I quickly wiped it off for fear that he would see it and others would see it. I looked at him. He held the scarlet orange and looked away. When crossing the railway track, he scattered oranges on the ground for the first time, climbed down slowly by himself, and then picked up oranges to elaborate here. I hurried to help him.

The father is back, and the son is too familiar. But this time, it is not common to come back, but in some cases, he is very moved and will never forget to come back! I don't paint, I don't emphasize color and thick ink, but I draw lines.

Counting the author's writing that the body was dressed by his father's behavior, with special emphasis on depicting the railway scene. how

Passing by, leaning down, how to climb the platform, climb down, move your feet and write truthfully, we have a feeling of reading, as if we were there, and we also saw the thoughtful plan of a kind father and son.

The author didn't describe what kind of ink was used to make it extremely simple, but she vividly sketched the image of his father.

The scene of father's farewell took place eight years ago. Words with lines vividly reproduce the moving scene at that time, and we can't help but admire Zhu Ziqing's description skills. This pen and ink, at first glance, seems to be "not in line with my father, I have been more than two years, I will never forget, he is back." The pen-like feeling is dull, but in fact it reveals the meaning of the novel.