Writing an essay using the method of comparison

1. Looking for an essay written using contrast techniques

Tall palm trees There are several palm trees planted on our campus.

From a distance, it looks like a big open umbrella. Standing at its feet and looking up, it goes straight up, as high as four or five stories.

Its trunk is thick, straight and slender. The thickness of the trunk varies from top to bottom, with the middle part of the trunk being the thickest.

The upper and lower parts are thinner than the middle one. The most beautiful ones are the leaves of the palm trees. The leaves stretch outward like a peacock spreading its tail.

The leaves are very large, and there are separate small leaves in the middle, like the "Thousand-Armed Avalokitesvara" with its arms spread out, which is really interesting. Palm trees are full of life all year round.

No matter it is spring, summer, autumn or winter, it is so green and tall, like soldiers guarding our campus and accompanying us to learn and grow. In summer, the scorching sun shines like a fireball, scorching the earth. With the protection of palm trees, we won’t feel so hot when we play games and have physical education classes under the trees.

Sometimes children drag palm leaves and ride on them, really like the magicians in cartoons, which is very fun. When it rains, the leaves of the palm trees become greener after being washed by the rain, adding a bit of greenery to the campus and making our campus more beautiful.

When the autumn wind blows, the leaves of the palm trees sway, like a little green-haired girl dancing happily. It also made a sound of "rustling, rustling...", as if a little singer was singing.

It’s really full of singing and dancing! Palm trees, you not only add a lot of beauty to the campus, but also bring laughter to the students. I like you - tall palm tree.

In the politics class, the teacher suddenly asked me, "What is your ideal?" I was at a loss and didn't know how to answer this question. I once had my own ideals, which started when I was young.

When I was a child, I didn’t understand anything. My mother asked me: "What is your ideal?" I opened my eyes and asked curiously: "What is an ideal?" My mother told me: "The ideal is what you want to do when you grow up.

For example Be an engineer who can draw design drawings, be a worker who can produce parts, be a salesman who sells things..." I thought for a while and said, "I want to be a teacher, because teachers can't take care of their own students. "My mother was shocked by my answer. She told me: "Being a teacher is very hard."

I said: "As long as I can be a teacher, being a teacher is the hardest, and I'm not afraid of it! "Time flies so fast. In a blink of an eye, I have grown up by two years. I went to school, but my grandma suffered from cerebral hemorrhage. From then on, my dream became to be a doctor.

When I was in third grade, the teacher asked us to write down our ideals. I picked up my pen and wrote down my new ideal: to become a glorious people's teacher in the future. I often dream of becoming a doctor and relieving the pain of patients.

My father told me: "Being a doctor is not easy. You need to know a lot of knowledge to do it..." But I stubbornly shouted: I want to be a doctor, I must be a doctor! "In the blink of an eye, I grew taller and became more sensible.

When I entered middle school, I don’t know how many times the teacher talked about ideals and asked us to correctly understand ideals, dreams, and fantasies. I don’t know why. At that time, I understood a passage from Grandma Bing Xin: "People often admire the flower of success for its current beauty, but at the beginning, its buds were soaked in the tears of struggle and sprinkled with the blood of sacrifice? "Yes, the ideal is beautiful, but to realize it, you need to work hard from now on.

In order to realize his ideal, Zhang Guanghou studied hard with both hands and with the spirit of "the stupid bird flies first" I studied mathematics with twice the time and twice the energy, and finally became a famous young mathematician.

I don’t know when I started to correct what my mother told me. What’s wrong with “What Is the Ideal?”

I began to understand the significance of ideals and no longer regarded them as child's play.

The famous Russian writer Tolstoy said: "Ideals are guiding lights. Without ideals, there is no firm direction; without direction, there is no life."

I understand. Li: What a driving role ideals play in one’s life. I began to think and seriously consider my ideals.

I think: If I grow up and want to become a calligrapher and painter, then from now on I will insist on practicing painting and calligraphy every day. In the future, I will be able to paint the beautiful motherland. Then write a beautiful couplet; if I grow up to become an engineer, then from now on, I will concentrate on learning knowledge and apply it to my work in the future; if I grow up to become an engineer Doctor, then, from now on, I will know how to care for others and love others, so that I can take on the bounden duty of a doctor and save lives and heal the wounded in the future; if I grow up... Well, I feel: I should choose what I can The ideals realized will benefit the society, the motherland, and the people in the future, and from now on, we will strive for the ideals. Yes, when I grow up, I should consider my ideals from a new perspective.

Next to my hometown in the countryside. There is a very large open space that is rented to others for planting mahogany saplings.

Mahogany is a special kind of tree with a beautiful shape, tall and straight. Many of them were planted in the forest farm of my hometown in the past, and they have grown into a forest several feet high. So when I saw mahogany saplings that were only knee-high, it was a little hard to believe my eyes.

The person who planted the mahogany seedlings was a very tall man. When he bent down to plant the trees, it felt like planting rice seedlings. After the saplings were planted, he often came to water the saplings. The strange thing was that he came here irregularly. Sometimes he came every three days, sometimes every five days, and sometimes every ten days. The amount of watering was also inconsistent. More, sometimes less.

When I lived in the countryside, I would walk on the path next to the mahogany saplings every day. The people who planted the saplings would occasionally come to my house for tea. Sometimes he comes in the morning, sometimes in the afternoon, and the time is not certain.

I am getting weirder and weirder. Even stranger, mahogany seedlings sometimes wilt inexplicably.

Therefore, when he comes, he always brings a few saplings to replant. At first I thought he was too lazy for taking so long to water the tree.

But how do lazy people know how many trees will wither? Later, I thought that he was too busy and did nothing according to the rules. But how can a busy person do things so calmly and calmly? I couldn't help but ask him, when should he come? How often should I water it? Why do mahogany trees wilt for no apparent reason? If you water it every day, will the mahogany seedling wither? Planting trees. 2. Write a sentence as a comparison method

The influence of one sentence in composition There is always a sentence in the depth of my memory that I remember. It has always inspired me and allowed me to escape from the shadow of failure. Come out and keep me moving forward.

I still remember that exam. I answered the questions with full confidence, but my hard work resulted in a disastrous result. Yes, I failed again, and it was the worst ever. I no longer believe that "no pain, no gain!" I am sad, I am sad.

When nothing could change me, I stayed alone in my own world, unwilling to communicate with others and afraid to face reality. Just when the optimistic little girl with the corners of her mouth raised was about to disappear. time. A shooting star passes by, illuminating the heart.

There was a long sentence on that miserable scroll: "One failure is nothing. As long as you strengthen your faith and never give up, there will always be a day when the clouds clear. I believe you can do it! I also Believe I read it right!" Yes, this sentence is the teacher's encouragement to me. This is the rainbow she drew for me. It is she who gives me the strength. Because of her and these words, I will abandon my sadness and sadness to create the day that should belong to me.

3. A 600-word essay using contrasting techniques is required

Examination

"Brush, brush, brush", as if fighting on the battlefield, the students carefully lowered their heads and Answer sheet. In the examination room, two students with sharp contrasts sat:

One was Lan Lan. Her dark face was covered with a thin layer of sweat, and the hand holding the pen was slightly wet. trembling. She bit her lip tightly as if she wanted to bite out an answer with the smallest score, but... The other student was Yang Junjun, the top student in the class. At this moment, she had already answered all the questions on the test paper. . This test paper seemed a little too easy for her. She glanced at her watch and knew that there were still twenty minutes before the winding time. So, she looked at this classmate and that classmate boredly. Suddenly, Yang Junjun's triumphant eyes fell on Lan Lan. She looked at Lan Lan with admiration. She always felt that Lan Lan was an underachiever in the class and was not very smart. This feeling reminds Junjun...

A few days ago, in order to make the students more confident about getting an ideal score, the math teacher copied many difficult questions on the blackboard. When the teacher tiredly stretched out his hands covered with chalk dust and sweat to wash, he found that there was no water in the wash basin, and the towel was left alone and cold. The teacher couldn't help asking: "Who is on duty today? Why don't you fetch water?" On duty? Fetch water? oh! For this review, exam, review again, exam, the students can no longer spare time, and they are not willing to deal with these "noisy things". But Yang Junjun knew it very well. Today was her own duty. She looked at the densely packed exercises on the blackboard, and then glanced at the wash basin. She hesitated for a while: copy the exercises, or waste time fetching water?

Just when Yang Junjun couldn't make up his mind, Lan Lan had already put down his pen and walked over silently, holding the wash basin in both hands, and walked towards the door... Yang Junjun came back to his senses and looked silently again. This poor student, Lan Lanshi, felt a sudden movement in her heart and quickly tore off a page of white paper. She quickly and carefully copied down a few questions with the highest scores. Then, when the invigilator turned around, she crumpled the white paper into a ball. Accurately throwing it at Lan Lan, who was lowering her head and thinking hard... The time to rewind the paper finally came. Yang Junjun was the first to hand in the paper. When she was about to walk out of the classroom, she glanced at Lan Lan again intentionally or unintentionally. Coincidentally, Lan Lan also raised her head at this time and glanced at Yang Junjun thoughtfully. She smiled bitterly and hurriedly handed in the paper.

Anyway, the exam was over and everyone left the exam room easily. 4. Use contrasting techniques to write essays

[Idea Analysis]

Let’s talk about the contrasting techniques in the article based on Lu Xun’s "Kong Yiji"

[Explanation Question process]

Contrast, as an artistic technique commonly used by Mr. Lu Xun, can also be seen everywhere in "Kong Yiji". Now let’s briefly talk about the artistic effect of each set of comparisons in the novel:

1. The contrast between “short clothes gang” and “wearing long clothes”

A. “short clothes gang” "He stood and drank" outside the counter.

B. "The man in long gown" "walked into the house next to the store", asked for wine and food, and "sit down and drank slowly".

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The Xianheng Hotel is a microcosm of the dark old society at that time, with distinctive characteristics of the times. The novel introduces two types of drinkers: one is the "Jiaoyi Gang" - the "poor laborers" who work; The "short" and "long", "outside" and "inside", "standing" and "sitting" in the sentence form a sharp contrast, which is what Kong Yiji said.

2. A contrast that contains contradictions:

Kong Yiji is. The only person wearing a long gown who drinks standing up.

"Standing and drinking" shows that Confucius lived in poverty, and his economic status and social status were the same as those of the "short-shirt gang"; "wearing a long shirt" shows that he pretended to be a scholar, envied those leisurely and wealthy people, and despised labor. The people do not want to associate with the "Jiaoyi Gang". The contrast between the way he drinks and the way he dresses reflects the contradiction between his economic status and ideology, thus revealing the special social status of Kong Yiji.

3. Comparison between "beating" and "being beaten":

A. Ding Juren beat Kong Yiji viciously

B. Kong Yiji had his leg broken

This set of comparisons reveals how the imperial examination system divided "scholars" into two opposing poles: some climbed up the imperial examination ladder, such as Ding Juren, who beat Kong Yiji at will and became an arrogant " Those who are "cannibals"; more people fell down, such as Kong Yiji, who was impoverished and became the target of being beaten and "eaten". This fact profoundly exposes the evils of the imperial examination system.

4. The contrast between "laughter" and "fate":

A. Kong Yiji's face is dark and thin, and he is already out of shape; he wears a torn jacket and sits cross-legged Legs... The look in his eyes was like begging the shopkeeper not to mention it again.

B. At this time, several people had gathered, and he and the shopkeeper laughed.

The novel describes in detail the tragic situation of Kong Yiji's last appearance, whose leg was broken by Ding Juren. Kong Yiji died amidst the laughter of the drinkers and shopkeepers. "Laughter" runs throughout the novel. This burst of laughter forms a strong contrast with Kong Yiji's unfortunate fate. It profoundly exposes the darkness and coldness of feudal society. , and also criticized the numbness of the masses.

5. Comparison between "plating" and "touching":

A. He did not answer, but said to the cabinet, "Warm two bowls of wine and ask for a plate of fennel beans." Then he discharged nine large sums of money.

B. He took out four coins from his ragged pocket and put it in my hand. I saw that his hands were full of mud...

The word "Pai" indicates that Kong Yiji I wanted to show my generosity to the "Jiaoyi Gang" who only spent four cents, and wrote his proud and showy look, which also showed his pedantic character; the word "touch" showed the slowness of Kong Yiji's movements, " The tight hiding of "four cents and a large amount of money" shows from the side that this money was hard-earned and that Kong Yiji has become further impoverished. The contrast between "arranging" first and "touching" later reflects Kong Yiji's deteriorating economic status.

6. The contrast between "disdain" and "dejection":

A. Others asked again, "Kong Yiji, do you really know how to read?" "Kong Yiji looked at the person who asked him, showing an air of disdain to argue.

B. They went on to say, "How come you can't even get half a scholar? "Kong Yiji immediately looked depressed and uneasy, and his face was covered with a layer of gray.

Kong Yiji was proud of being a scholar, and never forgot to show that he was a scholar in front of everyone. "Yibang" was dismissive, and even when others teased him, he repeatedly showed arrogance of being conceited and self-admiring. Only when people asked "Why can't he even get half a scholar?" did he become distressed and uneasy , because he always wanted to pass the examination, but he never succeeded, which became his greatest pain and humiliation. This is enough to show the serious poison of feudal culture and the imperial examination system to the lower class intellectuals.

Teachers and classmates, at this critical moment, we can no longer hesitate. The natural climate has shown us that it will be too late if we don't act. For the sake of the blue sky above our heads, in order to prevent our tears from becoming... The last drop of water, only if everyone saves and reduces carbon can we win this tough battle! Let's take action! Let our younger generation truly act as a new force in low-carbon and environmental protection and play a sonorous song of victory for tomorrow.