Detailed description of the composition 400

1. The details of the 400-word composition described in detail are my mother's inquiries after school, my father said that he would go to bed early after finishing his homework, the teacher asked you if you knew, and the detailed notes handed over by my friend after he got sick.

Although the details are small, they are timeless. We are all just ordinary people, sometimes even mediocre.

Life is connected by trivial details, not as sensational as the plot in the soap opera at eight o'clock, but with more real and touching details than the TV series. Meng Jiao wrote down the details of "She sewed carefully, she made up thoroughly, and she was afraid that the delay would make him go home late", which made countless wanderers cry; Wang Wei wrote down the details of "advising you to drink more wine, there is no reason for people to leave Yangguan in the west", which made countless pedestrians sigh; Su Shi wrote down the details of "Xiao Xuan window, dressing", which made fans all over the world lament.

Just details, not just details, it contains the deep feeling behind the details themselves. Often moved by Rembrandt's Jewish bride, the couple wore beautiful clothes and looked gloomy and restrained. In the dark background, two people snuggled up to each other, without looking at each other, without ups and downs, only holding hands, as if in a casual moment, they caught the painter's heart and left it on the canvas. Even after hundreds of years, they still depend on each other silently, and this feeling will never change.

For the viewer, no matter how gorgeous the clothes are, it is their deep affection, the life course that they have walked through each other and will continue to walk, and the promise of "holding your hand and growing old with your son". This is such a cool and affectionate detail.

The same affection is often found in life, including a cup of hot tea and a knitted sweater presented by my mother to my father; There is a hot water bottle filled by my father and a basin of washing water poured by my mother; And they prepared three meals a day for me, and I patted them on the back. We can't expect life to be great, we just want to make the details better.

"In a word, the love of a lifetime", the lyrics sometimes reveal the truth of life so easily. True warmth is only silently transmitted in the details; People who really love you will only show their love in the details.

Just like mother, father, teacher, friend and lover. This is an exam composition, and I got 57 points.

The author firmly grasps the word "ordinary" to write details, so that the details that are often ignored by us in life can enter our field of vision one by one and show the feelings behind the details. And through ancient poetry and Rembrandt's paintings, further highlight the details, so that a drop of water fully reflects the brilliance of the sun.

The full text is fluent, the sentence is beautiful and the meaning is endless. [Example 2] Anatomical details Hu Ceng, Class 4, Grade 3, Pinghu Middle School, Zhejiang Province, flashed across the starry sky like a meteor, and I missed the details of my wish; When the waves beat against the rocks, I missed the details of prayer; I missed the details when you told the story.

But I won't miss it again. I will seize the details and wait for the miracle of life. The detail is the sewing needle in the mother's hand. Needle and thread is full of love, and mother uses it to light the flame of hope. The detail is a small screw on the machine. When it gets to the place where it is most needed, the machine will follow it freely. Detail is a dazzling little star in the vast starry sky, which guides us to the palace of success.

Details attract countless eyeballs with their charm. Life is full of surprises because of details! Painters draw the details of life into pictures with colored pens, and writers feel and experience the details with their hearts, and use them to create the most attractive chapters; Photographers capture details and make countless unforgettable details exude unparalleled fragrance.

Lu Xun's details are on the road of "there is no road in the world, and more people will become roads". With his enthusiasm and persistence, he climbed up the ladder and opened up the road to success in life. The details of Zhu Ziqing are looming in The Back. "Blood is more and more attractive", but the details are hidden in it. Affection is hidden in "thinking of relatives twice every holiday season" Friendship grows and blooms in details, and love breeds in details ... accumulate small details in study and pay attention to small details in work. Your life will be more full and perfect.

Don't ignore the details, if you put it aside, you give up the beginning of success; You should grasp the details of success. Over time, every detail is in your diary. When you open it, you have your efforts, your ups and downs. It turns out that you have been working hard, trying to find your miracle and trying to ignite your hope.

Gently pick up a maple leaf on the road, just a small maple leaf, but it records the past of life. Grasp the details of life, with the details on the road to success, you will have the motivation to move forward and a beacon of hope.

One day, when you suddenly look back, you will be delighted to find that so many details around you have paved the way for life. Dissect the details and you will learn to nourish life.

Grasp the details and appreciate the miracle of life! [Brief comment on examples] If you don't elaborate on details, you can't ignore details in life, because details breed success. By expounding the importance of details, the author makes everyone understand that we should firmly grasp the details, dissect the details and ignite the fire of hope in life.

The full text is profound, sentence by sentence, patchwork and full of power. [Example 3] Details-the Source of Beauty and Eternity 3 14200 Lu Minjie, Class 4, Grade 3, Pinghu Middle School, Zhejiang Province People say that it is as short as morning dew, and it will be fleeting when the sun disappears; Eternity is like the sun, rising and setting day after day.

The whole process of all living things is only a moment in the universe for the creator with infinite power. We really feel the flow of time and try to slow it down or even stop it-but who can do it? Poor man, where can I find that tree and fix my short-lived self in the chain of history and become an eternal existence? Actually, it's all around us, the details.

The details are the stones that make up the pyramid, and the sleepers that are peaceful when laying the railway. Only by paying attention to details, grasping details and deducing details can we grasp life and destiny.

Every door-to-door service of Xu Hu is so ordinary and ordinary from an individual point of view, but it is these countless details that have made his glorious image and made him loved by people. There is no denying that Einstein's genius created the theory of relativity.

But when people opened his manuscript, they found that there was no complicated calculus, no subtle syllogism, only tens of thousands of seemingly ordinary times.

2. A heart that doesn't want to be covered by dust will never be really quiet. As long as it is still jumping, it will draw blood and write the rhythm of life. Either the waves of the Yellow River, the cirrus clouds, the birds singing in the forest, or the wind singing under the moon, intense, leisurely, cheerful, bleak, and more subtle, indescribable awareness, enchanted and unwilling hearts all have the desire to make a sound. The whole meaning of human existence is supported by this precious thing. Without it, there would be no Tang poetry and Song poetry, no Thunderstorm, no green willows in the south of the Yangtze River, and no cold trees in the north. Because of this, people are not satisfied with Beethoven's ninth movement, which gathers the clear water of the Rhine River, irrigates thirsty hearts and makes great achievements called for by human fraternity. With the pace of the times, jazz rock was shaken. A Bing used a poem "Two Springs Reflecting the Moon" to describe the beauty of the world incisively and vividly, and he can be called a great master. However, his sit-in and blue dress failed to set up procedural obstacles for the 12 women's band. They hung the Hu Qin around their waist, twisted their waist branches in pushing the bow with open arms, and showed off their charming navel from time to time. Although some people accuse dressing up is not in line with civil law, they spread the sound of nature and youth on the streets of new york; Spaceships travel in space with earth music, hoping to seek the same understanding of human rhythm on other planets; The pots and pans in the kitchen, even radish and cabbage, all have a unique rhythm, which is actually a different kind of song.

He is over 50 years old. Wearing a pair of glasses with high myopia. He carefully took off his glasses and wiped them with the hem of his clothes. "Uh-huh ..." He was about to speak when he suddenly remembered something. He fumbled in the plate, then quickly reached into his pocket and took out a box of matches. Only then did he say "uh-huh" again, stood up straight and said in a particularly loud voice, "Now start watching the teacher do the experiment!"

There is an unpleasant smell of smoke in the classroom. Teacher Mao stood at the door panting. His head was steaming, and there were several glistening beads of sweat on the tip of his nose. His eyebrows were raised angrily, but his mouth smiled. Seeing us, he blinked in surprise, and the muscles on his face suddenly froze and did not move, just like the "freeze" in the movie. We were all nailed there like wood.

The old man's hands are dexterous. In just a few minutes, a clay figurine was born in his hands. Watch him pick up another lump of mud, knead it into a circle first, and then rub it gently with his hands to make it soft and slippery. Then, rub on it and gradually separate the head, body and legs. He held a clay figurine in his left hand and fiddled with his right hand on his head. Soon, the clay figurine put on his hat.

3. The best composition with details-400 words (writing) details description-the golden key to make people live.

"Character" is the soul of the article, but the common characters in students' exercises are often one-sided, neither personalized nor vivid, and the whole article appears dry, boring and lacking in appeal. If you read these works carefully, you will find a common problem: you often just pursue writing something completely, ignoring vivid, concrete and nuanced details.

Detail description has a wide range and various functions, but it mainly depicts characters and shapes their images. Vivid details are like human cells. Without them, people will lose their lives. Without details, the characters lose their flesh and blood. Writer Lee Joon said: "In revealing a character's personality characteristics, a detail sometimes plays the same role as a plot or a scene." As the saying goes, "the spirit is seen in the nuances."

The creation of literary masters attaches great importance to the description of details. In Lu Xun's The True Story of Ah Q, the first sentence of Ah Q was described in detail: "When it was time to draw a circle, the hand just shook with a pen, and the man spread the paper on the ground, and Ah Q fell down and tried to draw a circle. Afraid of being laughed at, he decided to draw a circle, but the damn pen was not only heavy, but also disobedient. It just shook and almost closed, but shrugged its shoulders and turned into a melon seed. " The details of this behavior concretely, vividly and vividly reflect Ah Q's personality characteristics ―― he stuck to the "spiritual victory law" of self-deception until his death. When people read this detailed description, who can not think that Ah Q is ridiculous, pathetic and pitiful? How can we not "mourn its misfortune and anger its indisputable", and then think deeply about the national inferiority?

Not only China writers, but also foreign writers. Like Balzac's Eugénie? Grandet wrote that before Grandet died, when the priest sent the gold-plated cross to his lips to kiss the icon of Christ, "he made a terrible gesture to hold the cross in his hand, and this last effort killed him." Only this detail vividly depicts the ugly image of the insatiable and untiring miser. It is the description of details that makes the characters vivid and vivid. The characters are vivid, the whole article is full of vitality and strong appeal.

Of course, not all the details of life are valuable, and it is not just to write "fine". A good detail description must be useful, true and typical. It must express the mental outlook of the characters and deepen the theme of the article. It must conform to the personality characteristics of the characters and the reality of real life, and should best highlight the personality characteristics of the characters. Where do the details come from? Literature comes from life, and details are in colorful life. Be a conscientious person in life and always pay attention to the people and things around you, especially the objects you describe. On the streets of Shaoxing, Xianheng Hotel, Lu Xun concentrated on observing short-sleeved gangs and long-sleeved guests before "painting the soul of the silent". In the dark coffee room in Dublin, Joyce coldly looked at the wandering * * *, liars, mental patients, beggars and rich people, brewing Ulysses that shocked the world. Throughout the ages, great writers have always devoted their lives to catching people and things that make the soul tremble and casting them into chapters that will last forever. Capture the details, use the details, make this golden key work for you, and make your article shine!

4. Take advantage of the scenery to express emotion and describe the golden autumn with more than 400 words of composition details.

Time kept flowing forward, the weather gradually cooled down, and the noisy cicada was blown away by autumn, replaced by the whine of crickets in the cracks in the slate under the steps at night. Ah! That lovely autumn has finally come.

Autumn is more prosperous than spring. The flowery spring is beautiful, but the fruitful autumn colors reveal the joy of harvest. Autumn is more colorful than summer. Although the summer with dense branches and leaves is charming, the autumn colors of golden leaves and green trees are even more refreshing. Autumn is more energetic than winter. Snow-capped winter is lovely, but the golden autumn with fragrant melons and fruits is more colorful. Autumn came to the Woods. From a distance, yellow leaves fall in pairs like golden butterflies. Tired of flying, they landed on my shoulders, head and feet. Brought my thoughts from green summer to golden autumn. As soon as I turned around, another peach leaf fell beside me. I bent down to pick it up and held it in my hand to study it carefully. What a special autumn leaf! It hasn't come yet, it has completely faded, and it still exudes a strong aroma. Autumn came to the orchard, persimmon bent down, bent down, and the branches were about to break. Sister litchi was so fat that she broke her clothes and showed her bulging white belly. Huge apples are covered with branches, showing sweet smiles, or shy or bold. The girl in autumn came to the farmland, and the corn was very happy. It specially changed into a new golden dress, grinning and showing golden teeth. In order to make themselves more beautiful, tomatoes put lipstick on their faces; The potato may have been too excited to break its green mouth and show its yellow tongue. Autumn has come, and the garden has become a paradise for chrysanthemums. They may like this heavy gold, so they choose to bloom their beauty in autumn. Chrysanthemums come in many colors: yellow, pink and white. . Big flowers and curly petals are like a little girl with curly hair. Wandering in the chrysanthemum garden or enjoying a pot of colorful chrysanthemums alone, slowly intoxicated by that fragrance. Autumn brings gold to the earth and cotton-like clouds to the blue sky. Autumn wind, as cool as water, dyed the world yellow with chill.

I like this crisp autumn season!

I like autumn with flowers and leaves and flat chrysanthemums.

I like this unique and splendid autumn scenery.

Autumn is really a harvest season. The sound of lawn mower, children's laughter and adults' laughter are combined into a symphony in autumn.

5. How can there be a detailed description of the fragment or composition? About 400 words, 10 skipping competition. Today, it is a skipping competition that can improve speed and gain fame. Everyone can resist their feelings and duel with class 5 1.

At first, President Chen shouted from class to class, hoping to come to our class quickly and slowly. Time is racing against my ideas. Soon, President Chen said, "Please gather under the big banyan tree in Class 52."

I feel like I'm playing drums. Bang bang bang.

No amount of relaxation can stop my heart. At first, the boys jumped around, and when the teacher blew the whistle, they twisted their necks like crazy cats, but in the end, they were as tired as a dog sticking out its tongue.

The teacher suddenly said, "There are still ten seconds." People are starting to freak out again.

After the dance, it's the girl's turn. I looked at the sky as if nothing had happened. But I still have to face it, so I have to walk slowly to the place where I jump rope. I looked at my cousin. She looked relaxed.

I looked at the teacher again, and he was all smiles. I thought: I must win glory for my class. I won class 5. 1.

The teacher added, "Let's try first." Just jumped a few times and then stopped.

The teacher said he was ready first, and then blew the whistle. We will show rabbits jumping around.

Jump faster and faster. Within a few minutes, my whole hand was stiff, and the rope in my hand was like a sledgehammer, pressing me hard. I really didn't have the strength to shake it.

No matter how fast I jump, I can only show the tortoise jumping method, and the more I jump, the slower I jump. The teacher suddenly blew his whistle.

This is the end. I am like a deflated balloon, and my whole body is soft.

I sighed and said, "It's finally over." The two sisters who helped me count also reported the results to Teacher Fan.

Then the teacher asked us to go to class. Be reasonable.

I finally understand a sentence now: where there is a will, there is a way.

6. There are fragments of detailed descriptions in the composition. The 400-word composition "Dangdang Dangdang-"came home from school. I knocked at the door as usual, and then I heard that my grandmother at home should be "coming!" "

The door opened and grandma was sweating profusely. Sweat dripped from the tip of her silver hair. Although she was very hard, she forced a smile: "You came back so early today! The food is not ready yet. " Then I went to cook again.

As usual, I put my schoolbag on the sofa, ready to watch TV, but suddenly I thought of a new text back and a touching father in it. I had a whim to see if grandma was equally touching. Walking to the door of the kitchen, grandma really turned her back on me and was frying cabbage.

Grandma is very fat and perspires easily. Besides, she was sweating heavily in the thick oil smoke, as if she hadn't wiped her body after taking a shower, but she still tried to control the spatula to turn over the cabbage in the pot with her palm. I approached to observe more clearly and saw grandma's face was covered with sweat and her eyes were almost closed. That's why I didn't pay attention to the iodized rice. The lampblack is too strong for me. If I were you, my face couldn't stand being in such thick oil smoke for a few seconds, what's more, grandma has been stuck in it for so long. My nose hurts when I suddenly think of all this grandma has done for me. I tried to get closer, but a hot oil bead in the pot saw my arm. I was unprepared, so I shouted, "Ah-". Grandma heard this, turned around and saw that I was burned. She looked worried and hurriedly applied cold water. I thought: how many times did a person suffer such pain when she was so close to the pot?

The cabbage at noon today is very delicious. It is the best fried cabbage I have ever eaten. And ate some silver hair. Seeing them, my tears flowed down defenseless, and I remembered grandma's cooking action again. I quietly put those pieces of silver in my pocket, intending to keep them forever, because they contain grandma's deep love for me.

7. A vivid composition with a detailed description of my little Embryo Cat in 400 words. My family has a little Embryo Cat, whose name is "Zaizai".

"Zaizai" is gray all over, with a small nose and mouth, watery eyes, sharp ears and a thin tail. How cute! Zaizai woke up early in the morning. When I went to have breakfast, he had jumped into the chair. Zaizai didn't eat in the morning, but made him dinner at lunch. He eats a small bowl of rice and a little fish every meal, and jumps into the chair when cooking dinner at night. The chair was under the table, which made him look safe, but as soon as he pulled out the chair, he fell to the ground at once. In the sun, it always squints and stretches from time to time.

It has the best relationship with me, and sometimes it follows me everywhere. Last time, I put a toy train on the ground and drove it. I was scared away at once. Gradually, it became bolder and bolder, overturning a carriage of the toy train.

Once, when it was playing at the gate, a big dog found it and the big dog came running at once. "Zaizai" ran to its nest, which was really thrilling! Boy, it would be great if you could understand people. I have a lot to say to you, but unfortunately you don't understand.

8. A composition that describes the details of the characters in 400 words. My father is a truck driver. He is 40 years old. He has three wrinkles on his forehead. After getting up in the morning, his hair always stands upright. People will laugh at him if he doesn't put on some hair gel. Dad has one characteristic. He has a big belly. According to my mother, when I was one or two years old, I always liked to lie on my father's stomach. When my father's stomach was put away, I was like lying on a spring bed and laughing. I thought: I'm going to lie on my father's stomach again this time.

Dad fell asleep in the bedroom, snoring and sleeping soundly. I ran softly to the bedroom and took advantage of my mother's bath to come to the bed. I saw my father lying on his back, so I turned over and slept against the wall. This time, I have no chance. Just as I left in frustration, my father turned over again, his stomach facing the ceiling. This time, I started much faster. As soon as I lay down, my father shouted. I glanced at the bed and saw my father clutching his stomach, his body bent, his eyes narrowed and his mouth opened. Three wrinkles on his forehead are clearly visible, and his mouth is still chanting: "Ouch! Oh! " So he struggled and said, "What are you doing?" Now that my father found me, I sneaked back to my room carefully, thinking: My father will definitely scold me tomorrow.

The next day, my father said to me, "My child! What happened yesterday has passed, but you should remember that you were less than 20 kilograms at that time, and now you are 90 kilograms. At that time, my stomach could bear it, but now I can't bear it! " I made such a move, but my father is very kind. It seems that people with big bellies are also generous!

9. A composition with the best details, written in 400 words, is moved everywhere.

We are moved by the new buds of grass in spring and its tenacious vitality; We are moved by the blooming of lotus in summer and its pure heart; Our parents' white hair and what they did to us moved us. A rainy morning will also make me feel as boring as outside the window.

Maybe it's adolescence. My temper is getting worse and worse, and people are getting more and more rebellious. These days, I often quarrel with my parents, sometimes just for a little thing.

I was pressured by studying for five days last night, and I couldn't wait to come to the computer to relax myself. Not long after playing, my mother came in: "Go and do your homework."

"I'll write it later, and I'll play it first." "You don't listen to me now? I know you have your freedom when you grow up, but you should study hard first! Are you going or not? No, I turned off the computer. "

So, I had to turn off the computer, come to my desk and start doing my homework slowly. "You see, here and there, how is everything wrong?" "Careless."

I answered lightly. "Not careful? Redo! Add more points. "

Unable to contain his emotions, he finally broke out: "homework! Homework? Why only homework? ! "Then, it is a" war ". At night, late at night, I gently pushed open the door and walked to my parents' bedside. I can't bear to disturb their sleep. I looked intently and saw only a few strands of old white hair.

Although my parents have mentioned my white hair for a long time, what touches me most is now. Careful care when I am sick, sincere encouragement when I fail, and earnest teaching when I am proud ... There are many, many scenes flashing in front of my eyes, condensed on wisps of white hair.

At this time, I regret, regret my rebellion, regret my incomprehension, and regret quarreling with my parents. Back to my room, I sat at my desk, thinking about what moved me and feeling that I suddenly grew up.

A word suddenly popped up in my mind-home! It is home, a place full of deep love, which moves me, makes me feel, makes me grow up and makes me feel happy.