Write Baoji's composition in the fourth grade, with 400 words. Thank you, and God bless you.

Spring in Baoji Baoji is a very small city. But the scenery here is beautiful. Spring came, the snow melted, the grass sprouted, and Shan Ye put on green clothes. Clusters of winter jasmine bloomed, and Baoji took on a new look. Sister Chun came to the world with a basket full of magic, and when she saw that everything was quiet, she quickly sprinkled some magic. Grass woke up, small animals ran out, crackling firecrackers sounded, children were playing outside, and Baoji seemed to be a sea of joy. In the courtyard of the community, some children are running, some are jumping rubber bands, some are swinging, and some are playing badminton. What a crowd! From a distance, the peaks rise and fall, which really makes people feel open; Look again, the moss in the corner, the butterflies in the garden and the insects on the ground are all busy. A few days later, there was a spring rain, the earth was breathing, the grass was growing, the flowers were blooming, the children were laughing and the motherland was smiling! Spring in Baoji is a beautiful season, a good opportunity for human beings, animals and plants to grow, and also a youthful life! Look! Spring in Baoji is really beautiful, of course I like it! A: Is this ok? )