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The artistic achievements of Water Margin are various. First of all, it created a series of outstanding and vivid heroic images. For example, jy, Lu and Lin Chong. The techniques used in the works are mainly portrayed through the movements of the characters. For example, pulling up weeping willows by Lu and killing tigers by Jingyang Gang all showed their heroism with brave actions. However, the plot of Lu Da saving the father and daughter of the Kim family and killing the town of Kansai with three fists shows his character of "suffering like a dog, drawing a sword to help each other" and being generous. Writing Li Kui jy, not only through many battle scenes, but also through the plot of "offering a humble apology", shows his fearless courage, shows that he is clear from right and wrong, does not talk about private affairs, and does not hesitate to correct me. What is particularly valuable is that Water Margin pays special attention to depicting the development and evolution of characters. For example, Lin Chong's character showed an obvious change process from tolerance to revenge and finally to rebellion. When he was wrongly sent to Cangzhou, he dreamed of returning to China after serving his sentence one day. When someone set fire to the grass to kill him, he got up to take revenge and went to Liangshan after killing. The development of characters is not an abstract process of inner perfection, but develops with the development of the plot. This technique is a traditional artistic technique with national characteristics.

Secondly, the structure of Water Margin is called chain structure, which means it has many independent plots, such as Song Wu's story, Song Jiang's story, Lin Chong's story and so on. , are written in ligatures. And these independent stories, connected in series, naturally form a whole, just like countless iron rings are buckled together to form an iron chain from beginning to end. This structure, on the one hand, reflects the independence of the early spread of the water margin story, on the other hand, it also reflects the ingenuity of the writer as the overall winner.

Thirdly, the detailed description of Water Margin has made great achievements. It is through the detailed description that the characters are full and lifelike, and the story is fascinating. For example, in the third time, Lu Da punched Kansai, and the description of those three punches was the detailed description of success. The first punch was in Zheng Tu's nose, the second in his eyes and the third in his temple. Each punch has a different "effect". After the third punch, Zheng Tu was "just out of breath, but out of breath, unable to move". This description not only shows Luda's bravery, makes the characters vivid, but also makes the plot very realistic, making readers feel immersive. The most praised part of the detailed description in Water Margin is Lin Chong's "Snow Mountain Temple". Write Lin Chong's thatched cottage in the forage field. Because of the cold snow, I wanted to make wine, so I "went to the parcel to get some broken silver, picked out the gourd that set off the fireworks, covered it with charcoal, put on a felt hat, took the key and came out of the door of the lawn hall." Go out to the front of the gate, drag the two grassland doors back and lock them. Take the key and go east. "Every movement here is very delicate, which makes readers seem to see it with their own eyes, thus producing a huge real and touching artistic effect. At the same time, this writing also fully depicts Lin Chong's cautious and meticulous character, which is in contrast to the next step of writing that he took revenge and killed people because he had to.

Fourthly, the language style of Water Margin also has remarkable characteristics: full of colloquialism and concise and vivid artistic effect. Because most of the characters described in the works live in the lower classes of society, the language of the characters is simple and popular, which conforms to the status and personality of the characters. As Mr. Lu Xun said, "The Water Margin and a Dream of Red Mansions are places where readers can see people by talking." For example, when Lu Da hit Kansai Town, he said: "It is fair and decent for Zanjia to start investing in the old-fashioned strategy, and it is not a waste to call Kansai Town. You are a butcher selling meat, a dog-like person, and also called Zhenkansai! " Lu Da came to Zhenkansai, mainly to save the Kim family's father and daughter, but at the same time he was not convinced of the so-called "Zhenkansai". Lu Da made no secret of his psychological state, and spoke it out in detail, showing his magnanimous character. In a word, the colloquialism and individualization of the language of Water Margin have achieved harmony and unity, thus making the whole work present a simple and vivid language style.

Rutitai slammed Kansai Town.

Zheng Tu has two facades, two meat cabinets and three or five pieces of pork. Zheng Tu quietly sat in front of the cupboard, looking at a dozen swordsmen selling meat. Ruda went to the front and shouted, "Zheng Tu!" When Zheng Tu saw that it was Rutiha, he hurried out of the closet and sang, "Please forgive me." He asked his deputy to push a stool. "Please sit down." Lu Da sat down and said, "Teach me to have ten catties of lean meat and chop it into minced meat. I don't want to see any fat on it. " Zheng Tu way:

"Yes, you choose quickly and lose ten pounds." "Don't let those pickle guys do it," Rudy said. "You cut with me." Zheng Tu said, "That's right. The villain cuts himself. " After removing the meat, I picked ten catties of lean meat and cut it into pieces. The shop assistant wrapped his head in a handkerchief and went to Zheng Tu's house to tell him about Jin Lao, only to find that Lu Dihai was sitting at the door of the meat case, afraid to approach, so he had to stand under the eaves at a distance. Zheng Tu cut it himself for half an hour, wrapped it in lotus leaves and said, "Take it to charge and give it to others." Lu Da said, "What do you want? And live! Ten pounds more, all fat. Don't look at what's fine on them, but cut them into pieces. " Zheng Tu said, "That's all I'm good at. I'm afraid I'll make wonton at home. What's the use of a fat girl? " Lu Da opened his eyes and said, "Who dares to ask him?" Zheng Tu said, "This is a useful thing. I cut it. " He also selected thousands of pieces of fat, cut them into minced meat and wrapped the lotus leaves. I have been working all morning, but I have to eat. The bartender dares to come over, even the customers who are buying meat dare not come over. Zheng Tu said: "Someone and Tiahai have sent it to the general's home." Lu Da said: "If you want another ten catties of golden cartilage, you must chop up the minced meat carefully, and don't see any meat on it." Zheng Tu smiled and said, "But I'm not here to entertain myself!" Hearing this, Lu Da jumped up, holding two bags of shame in his hand, looking at Zheng Tu with open eyes and saying, "Cudgel is specially here to entertain you!" I took two bags of steamed buns, but it seems to have rained for a while. Zheng Tu flew into a rage, and two angry people rushed to the top door from your feet. Ignorance was overwhelming, so he grabbed a boning knife from the meat box and jumped down. Rutihah walked into the street early. Neighbors and a dozen firefighters, who dares to come forward to persuade? Passers-by on both sides stood still, and the bartender was stunned.

Zheng Tu took the knife in his right hand and caught Luda in his left. When he was ruled by Lu, he held his left hand down, hurried in and kicked him in the stomach. Lu da took another step, stepped on his chest and raised his fist the size of a vinegar bowl. Looking at this Zheng Tu, he said, "Cudgel started to invest in the old business, and it was not a waste. It was called Kansai Town. You are a butcher selling meat, a dog-like person, also known as Zhenkansai! How did you cheat Jin Cuilian? " Park only punched his nose, and blood flowed in, and his nose was crooked in half, but he opened a sauce shop, and all the salty, sour and spicy things rolled out. Zheng Tu couldn't earn it, so he threw the sharp knife aside and shouted. "Well played!" Lu Da scolded: "Don't you dare answer, straight thief!" When you raise your fist, you only punch from your brow, your eyes crack and black beads burst out, which seems to be covered with colorful silks, red, black and crimson. Both sides are afraid of Ruti Sea. Who dares to stand up and advise? Zheng Tu, of course, beg for mercy. Lu Da shouted, "Duh! You are a poor man. If you fight me to the end, I will spare your life. How can you ask my forgiveness? Cudgel will not spare you. " Just one punch, the sun is in front of us, but it seems to have made a whole amphibious Dojo, and the cymbals, cymbals and cymbals rang together. When Lu Da looked, he saw Zheng lying on the ground, with breath in his mouth, unable to breathe or move. Lu Dihai pretended: "You are fake, you can fight again." I saw the dough change gradually. Lu da thought, "I just want to give this fellow a good beating, and I don't want to kill him with three punches." Cudgel wants to go to court, and no one delivers food. It is better to spread it out early. " When he left, he pointed back at Zheng Tu's body and said, "You faked your death, and I'll pay attention." A scolding, a striding away. Neighbor, and Zheng Tu's burning house, who dares to stop him? Lu Dihai returned to the lower level, hurriedly rolled up a few clothes, travelling expenses, Softbank; But the old clothes were heavy and discarded. I ran out of the south gate with a Qi Mei short stick and left with a cigarette in my mouth.

Selected from The Water Margin Review, 3rd edition, Peking University Publishing House, 198 1 edition.

This is a famous and wonderful passage in Water Margin-Lu Tiha killed the butcher Zheng with three punches.

This paragraph describes Lu Da's character quite successfully. He learned that Jin Cuilian's father and daughter were cheated by Zheng Tuqiang, and the road was bumpy. He drew a sword to help, let father and daughter go first, and then came to get even with butcher Zheng. He deliberately angered Zheng Tu in order to give him a good beating, and took it out on Jin Cuilian's father and daughter. At first, he asked Zheng Tu to cut 20 Jin of SAO Zi himself, intending to "tease" Zheng Tu; Then, "I knocked off two bags of saozi on my arm, but it seemed to rain for a while"; When the angry Zheng Tu "grabbed a handful of boning knife from the meat box and jumped down from the ground", "Rudihai had already walked in the street", waiting to fight with Zheng Tu. The whole process of angering Zheng Tu shows that although Ruda is reckless, he also has a set of calculations, that is, he "entertains" Zheng Tu slowly, and goes to the streets first when Zheng Tu is angry, so as to prevent Zheng Tu's guy from plotting against him, which is also convenient for him to display his fists. If it's just "beating this fellow up", he can still explain the reason for the fight to the tournament manager, xianggong and others. In particular, Lu Da saw that he had punched three times. "Zheng Tu stood underground with his mouth full of gas, but he couldn't move." While pretending that Zheng Tu faked his death, he thought, "If you kill someone, you have to go to court, and no one will deliver the meal. It is better to shop early." So, he got up and left, but he still lied, "pointing to the back and slaughtering the corpse", saying that Zheng Tu suspended his death and wanted to "pay attention slowly", which showed that he was crude and meticulous, and there were some calculations in recklessness, which was true and credible. Just showing his rudeness is almost stupid, and it is impossible to create the image of a tall thousand-year-old flower and monk Lu.

This narrative of the whole battle process is concise, clear and detailed. In front, Lu Da angrily denounced Zheng Tu. He said slowly: Writing a fight at the back quickens the pace and gives readers a sense of tension.

This narrative is easy to understand and vivid. For example, the description that Zheng Tu's "recreation" was cut down by Lu Da and attacked by two packages of meat rain is "two embarrassing things rushed to the top door from their feet. The fire of ignorance is unstoppable. Another example is to describe that Zheng Tu was punched three times, and the first punch was on the nose. " But it seems to be a sauce shop, salty, sour and spicy, all rolled out "; The second punch was between the eyebrows. "It seems that a colorful silk shop has been opened, and red, black and crimson flowers will come out. "The third punch hits the sun", but it seems to be a whole amphibious Dojo, with chin, cymbals and cymbals ringing together. "Because the language is popular and fluent, it was loved by people from all walks of life in the past. Especially in the past dynasties, the peasants' cultural level was low, and the novels were widely circulated because of their simple language, figurative images and easy understanding.

Lin Chong defeated coach Hong.

..... I saw Zhuangke report: "The teacher is here." Chai Jin said, "It's good to have a place to sit and meet. Get a table quickly. " When Lin Chong got up to look, he saw the teacher come in, wearing a headscarf askew and holding his chest, and came to the back hall. Lin Chong thought to himself, "If the Zhuang guest calls him a teacher, he must be the master of a high official." Hurriedly bowed down and sang, "Lin Chong is willing to come." The man ignored it and didn't reciprocate. Lin dare not look up. Chai Jin pointed to Lin Chong and said to Hong, "This is Lin Chong, the gun and stick coach of the 800,000 imperial army in Tokyo. Please meet him. " Lin Chong listened, looked at Hong and bowed. Coach that spillway: "Hugh, get up." But you won't bow your head. Chai Jin saw, in the heart very happy. Lin Chong made two obeisances and got up to let Hong sit down. To outdo each other, Hong went to the next seat. Chai Jin saw it, but he didn't like it. Lin Chong had to sit under his shoulder, and so did the two workers.

Hong asked again, "Why are the great officials being polite today?" Chai Jin said, "This is the coach of 800,000 imperial guards. How can we treat him lightly?" Hong said, "Big officials are good at guns and sticks, and often send troops to lean on grass and attach trees. They all said that I was a gun teacher and came to the village to lure some wine, food and rice. How serious is the big official? " Lin Chong was silent. Chai Jin said: "mortals can't look at each other and don't underestimate their enemies." Hong blamed Chai Jin for saying "Don't underestimate him", so he jumped up and said, "I don't believe him. He dared to show me a stick. I think he is a real coach. " Chai Jin smiled and said, "All right! All right! Master Lin, how is your heart? " Lin Chong said, "I dare not." Hong thought, "that man will never know, and his heart will be afraid first." Therefore, the more I want to provoke Lin Chong to hit a stick. Chai Jin saw Lin Chong's skill, and wanted Lin Chong to beat him and shut that fellow up. Chai Jin said, "Let's eat wine on the moon."

Now I have eaten five or seven glasses of wine, and when I came up at the beginning of the month, I saw the hall as day. Chai Jin got up and said, "Let's have a big competition." Lin Chong thought to himself, "This Hong must be an official of Chai. If I knock him over with a stick, Chief Chai will be ugly. " Seeing that Lin Chong was hesitant, Chai Jin said, "This Hong has only been here for a short time, and he has no rivals. Wu had to refuse, but Xiao Ke wanted to see the skills of the two coaches. " Chai Jin said this, the original is Lin Chong hinder Chai Jin dough, refused to use skill. Lin Chong was relieved to see Chai Jin speak straight. Hong first stood up and said, "Come, come, come! Make a stick with you. " They were all coaxed out of the backyard. Zhuangke brought a bunch of sticks and put them underground. Hong Jiaotou first took off his clothes, pulled up his skirt, pulled a stick and shouted, "Come, come, come!" " Chai Jin said, "Master Lin, please fight." Lin Chong said, "Don't joke, big officer." He also picked up a stick on the spot and said, "Master, you ask." When Hong saw it, he wanted to swallow him a mouthful of water. ……

As soon as Hong saw him, he was afraid of the stick method and threatened him to do it, but he stayed to do it. Chai Jin shouted, "Stop!" Let Zhuangke take out a silver ingot, weighing 25 taels. Never come to the front. Chai Jin said: "Two coaches have a game, and they are not better than others. This silver ingot is for profit; If you still win, you take the money. " Chai Jin heart as long as Lin take out your skill, deliberately throw money in the ground. Hong deeply blamed Lin Chong's arrival and wanted to win this large sum of money. Afraid of losing his spirit, he put the stick on the flag wholeheartedly and said it out loud, calling it fire. Lin Chong thought to himself, "Chief Chai only begged me to hit him." He also swung a stick sideways, making a portal spit out a potential and told it to pull weeds to find snakes. Hongjiaotou, sing. "Come, come, come!" So that the rod cover can enter. When Lin retired, Hong Fei stepped forward and lifted the stick again. Seeing that his steps were out of order, Lin Chong jumped up with a stick from the ground. Hong was caught off guard. In that jump, he turned around, and the stick swept straight through Hong's bones. The stick left the stick and fell to the ground. Chai Jin exultation, call a person to pour wine. Everyone laughed together. Hong struggled there. The guests smiled and helped Hong, who was ashamed, out of the village.

Selected from the eighth edition of Water Margin Review, Peking University Publishing House, 198 1 edition.

This contest is well written. Taking the arrival of Hong as the breakthrough point, this paper describes the speech acts and psychological activities of three main figures present: one is Hong, the other is Wu Shi, and the other is Master Chai. The three parties are intertwined and develop hand in hand, but they are well-organized and orderly. The article points out that Lin Chong is skilled in martial arts, but as a soldier, he is cautious and polite. Besides being polite to Chai Jin, when he saw Hong, he "bowed down hastily and promised", "dared not look up" and "bowed his head when he looked at Hong". Hong said something humiliating, and he "said nothing"; When Hong took the initiative to ask for a competition, he also said that "little people dare not"; On the eve of the tournament, he still "thinks from his stomach" and "hesitates"; He took the stick and politely said to Hong, "Master, please." . Although Hong's martial arts is not as good as Lin Chong's, he is arrogant and rude. When he came to see the guests, he "came to the backyard wearing a headscarf and breasts"; When Lin Chong greeted and saluted, he "completely ignored and didn't reciprocate" and "didn't bow down and reciprocate"; When Lin Chong got up and gave up his seat, he "sat on the top"; And exports hurt people, take the initiative to ask for a competition; In the game, he shouted "come, come, come!" " Three times. This scene vividly depicts Hong's rude, arrogant and arrogant face. Another character is a generous and charitable person, Chai, the first mate of Corporal Li Xian. He is proud of Hong's arrogant behavior, "I am very happy" and "I don't like it"; When Hong called Chong a "soldier", Chai Jin was busy with "eight hundred thousand imperial coaches"; When Hong repeatedly asked for a competition, he "asked Lin Chong to hit him and kill that fellow in the mouth". Afraid that Lin Chong would hinder his face and refuse to do his best, he said, "Hong hasn't been here long, and there is no opponent here." Eliminate Lin Chong's concerns; And took out a large ingot of silver as a profit, "as long as Lin Chong took out the skill in his heart", Chai Jin concluded that Lin Chong could defeat Hong. The end of the game proved his eye for heroes.

This paper describes the contest, playing hard to get, preparing to open the bow, and setting up suspense appropriately. For example, when Hong wants to hold a baseball tournament, Chief Chai says, "Let's eat wine until the moon comes out", and he shakes it hard, which makes people itch. After four or five rounds with Hong Dou, Lin Chong suddenly jumped out of the circle and stopped, demanding to unload the cangue (this detail is omitted because of limited choice of words); Lin and Hong raised a stick to fight, but Jin suddenly stopped and took out the money to make a reward. These three ups and downs make the story full of twists and turns, ups and downs, firmly grasp the curiosity of the audience and attract people to read it in one breath.

No more flinching

On the sixth day, Guan Ying called Lin Chong to the observation room and said, "You have been here many times and you have never been flattered by Chief Chai. There is an army forage field, which is full of grass and materials every month. Finding some money is common practice. It was once guarded by an ancient army. Now I kiss your ass and let you guard the Heavenly King Hall for that old army. You can find some money there. You can go there with the dispatcher to deliver the goods. " Lin Chong replied, "I'll go." At that time, I left the camp and went to Li Xiaoer's house. I said to his couple, "Guan Ying assigned me to be in charge of the forage field of the army today, but what happened?" Li Xiaoer said, "This messenger is like the Heavenly King Hall again. When collecting forage there, there are some formal bills. You can't do this job without spending money. " Lin Chong said, "You don't hurt me, but you are a good messenger. What do you mean? " Li Xiaoer said, "Don't be suspicious, benefactor, as long as it's all right. It's just that my home is far away, so I will take time to see my benefactor in a few days. " Just arrange a few glasses of wine at home and invite Lin Chong to dinner.

Words are not annoying, and the two are not harmonious. Lin Chong came to Tianwangtang to get the parcel, took a sharp knife and a firework, and left the camp with the messenger. They took the road and threw it into the forage field. It's winter weather, clouds are gathering, and the north wind is rising, but it has already rolled up a heavy snow.

Lin Chong and two dispatchers are on their way, and they didn't buy a place to eat, so they came to the forage field early. Looking around, there are some loess walls and two gates; I opened it and saw that there were seven or eight thatched huts as warehouses, horses and straw piles in the air, and two leather halls in the middle. When I arrived at the hall, I saw the old army firing at the fire inside. The messenger said, "Lin Chong, the man in charge of the camp, will come back to the Heavenly King Hall to guard you. It can even be shipped. " The old army took the key and led Lin Chong to order: "There is a lawsuit sealed in the warehouse; These piles of grass count. " People counted a pile and led Lin to the thatched cottage. The veterans packed their bags and said, "I'll lend you a brazier, pot and plate." Lin Chong said, "I'm in the Heavenly King Hall. Take it if you want it. " The old army pointed to a big gourd hanging on the wall and said, "If you buy wine to eat, just go out of the pasture and invest in Dong Xiaozhi for Li San, and there will be a market." Since reconciliation, the old army has been transferred back to the camp.

Only that Lin Chong put a package on the bed and was lying down, so he sat down and put some fireworks. There is a pile of firewood behind the house. Take a few pieces and put them in the ground stove. Look at the thatched cottage on your back. It collapsed all around and was blown to pieces by the north wind. Lin Chong said, "How can this house last a winter? When the snow clears up, go to the city and call a mason to repair it. " After I lost my temper, I felt cold all over and thought, "But the old army said there was a market outside Erli Road. Why not sell some wine to eat? " Go to the bag

Take some broken silver from the bag, choose a wine gourd from the fireworks, cover it with charcoal, put on a felt hat, take out the key and drag the door of the thatched cottage; Go out to the front of the gate, drag out the two grassland doors and lock them, take the key and swim east. I walk with my back to the north wind in the snow.

It's snowing harder. It can't walk half a mile. Seeing an ancient temple, Lin Chong nodded and said, "God, don't die. Come and burn paper money another day." I went again and saw a bunch of people. When Lin stopped to look, he saw a grass broom inserted in the open-air fence. When Lin Chongjing arrived at the store, the host asked, "Where did the guests come from?" Lin Chong said, "Do you recognize this gourd?" The master looked at it and said, "This gourd belongs to the old army in the forage field." Lin Chong said, "I see." The shopkeeper said, "Since it is grass,

Guard the eldest brother in the yard, please sit less; It's cold, so you're welcome to drink three cups. "The shopkeeper cut a plate of cooked beef, scalded a pot of hot wine and invited Lin Chong to dinner. I bought some beef myself and had a few drinks. I bought another bottle of wine, wrapped up the two pieces of beef and left some broken money. Holding fireworks and wine gourd, holding beef in my arms, crying and disturbing, I went out of the gate and still came back against the north wind. Look at the snow. It's getting tighter at night.

Besides, Lin Chong stepped on the snow, faced the north wind, flew to the door of the pasture and opened the lock. When he looked inside, he just screamed in pain. It turns out that heaven is clear, and goodness and righteousness are protected. Because of the heavy snow, Lin Chong's life was saved. Those two thatched cottages have been flooded by snow. Lin Chong thought, "How nice?" Put down fireworks and gourds in the snow. I'm afraid charcoal will burn in the brazier. After tearing down the broken wall and touching the half-body, the fire in the brazier was extinguished by the snow. When Lin Chong touched his hands on the bed, he only pulled a quilt. Lin Chong came out and saw that it was getting dark. He thought, "What can we do without fire?" I remember there is an old temple half a mile away, where I can live. "I'm going to spend the night there until dawn, but I won't pay attention." Roll up your hands, the fireworks picked the gourd, and the door was still locked. I hope to come to the temple. Enter the temple gate, then close the door. There is a big stone next to it, and you will come and lean against the door. Looking inside, there is a glittering statue of a mountain god in the temple, with a judge and a child on both sides and a sheet piled on the side. Tuan Tuan seems to have no neighbors or temple owners. Lin Chong put the gun and gourd on the paper pile, put down the wadding, first took off his felt hat, shook off the snow, took off his white shirt and put it on the altar with the felt hat. I was dragged and covered half of my lower body. However, I brought gourd cold wine to eat slowly and drank the beef in my arms.

While he was eating, he heard that the ground outside was going to explode. Lin Chong jumped up and looked through the crack in the wall. He saw a fire burning in the forage field. At that time, Lin Chong took the fireworks and waited to open the door to put out the fire, only to hear someone talking outside. When Lin Chong leaned over the door to listen, the three men went straight to the temple and pushed the door with their hands, but they were caught in the stone and could not push it away. Three people were standing under the eaves of the temple watching the fire. One of them said, "Is this a good plan?" one

One replied, "The final loss was managed by the camp, but the difference was two intentions. I'll go back to Beijing to tell Qiu Bingming that you two will be big officials. This coach can't avoid custom. " "Lin Chong just ate us this time and disposed of it," said one. "Gao Yanei will definitely become better." "added:" Zhang repeatedly told me; Your son-in-law has left. The more coach Zhang refuses to promise, the more serious the official's son patient is. Special envoy Qiu, Anyang said two thousand things, and now he doesn't want to be complete.

Yes "Another way:" I climbed into the wall directly, looked around the haystack, lit a dozen torches and waited to go there! " The other said, "It will burn for eight minutes sooner or later." I heard another story: "If you run away, you will die if you burn down the forage field of the army." Another way: "Let's go back to the city. ""Take another look, "said one." I will pick up one or two of his bones and go back to Beijing. When I met Qiu Heliu's official's son in the mansion, I also said that we could cooperate. "

Lin Chong heard that one was poor, the other was Fuan. He thought to himself, "God pity Lin Chong! If I hadn't knocked down the thatched cottage, I would have been burned to death by these people. " Gently push away the stone, hold a spear, open the temple gate with your left hand, and shout loudly: "Throw it at the thief!" " "When all three were in a hurry to leave, they were too surprised to walk any further. Lin Chong raised his hand, shot, and dialed the wrong number first. Hou Yu shouted, "forgive me! "I'm too scared to walk.

Fu 'an didn't walk more than ten steps, but Lin Chong caught up with him, only got one shot, and his heart fell again. Over behind him, Hou Yu only took three or four steps. Lin Chong shouted, "Traitor, where are you going!" I split my chest, threw it in the snow, put my gun on the ground, put my foot on my chest, took out my knife from my side, walked up to Lu Qian and shouted, "Thief, I have nothing against you for coming here. Why are you doing this to me? It is an excusable murder and it is unreasonable. " Liu told:

"I won't come unless I do something small. I was sent by Qiu." Lin Chong scolded, "Traitor, I have been your friend since I was a child, and now you are hurting me. Why not do it? " Eat my knife! "Tear off Lu Qian's upper body clothes, gouge out his heart with a sharp knife, and then put his heart in his hand. Looking back, the dial is climbing and getting up to go. Lin Chong held back and shouted, "You are really a good man! Eat my knife! "I had my head cut off and picked it on the gun. Come back and chop off Fuan and Lu Qian's heads. Insert a sharp knife, tie the hair of three people together, carry it to the temple, put it on the table in front of the mountain god, put on a white cloth shirt, put on your arm, take a felt hat, eat all the cold wine in the gourd and throw it away. Then, armed with guns, they left the temple and threw them to the east.

Selected from the ninth edition of Water Margin Review, Peking University Publishing House, 198 1 edition.

This section of "Windson Snow Mountain Temple" is vividly written, with ups and downs and swaying.

First of all, this kind of plot arrangement is intensive and alternating, neither blindly nervous nor panting; This is not to say that you are procrastinating and you can't catch the reader. Before this period, Lu Qian and Fu 'an came to Cangzhou, went to Li Xiaoer Hotel, and asked them to take charge of the camp and negotiate. From the eyes and ears of Li Xiaoer and his wife, I heard the word "Gao Taiwei" and told Lin Chong that Lin Chong was furious. First, they went to the street to buy a wrist-relieving knife, took it with them, and went to the front street and back alley to find it. "I looked for SanWuTian, didn't find it. After being so nervous, from this paragraph on, I eased down and narrated the management of the camp. Lin Chong guarded the forage field and sent Lin Chong to forage instead of the old army. Lin Chong took the gourd and fireworks to buy wine. When he came back, the snow overwhelmed the thatched cottage, and Lin Chong stayed at the mountain god for the night. It was not until the forage field caught fire that it was anxious again. Lin Chong was about to leave the temple and ask someone to put out the fire, when he heard this, he was blessed and sent out to gloat. When he understood, although he escaped the bad luck of being burned to death, he could not escape the trap set by the traitor because he "burned the forage field of the army" and knew that he had no way out. So he took risks and rushed out to kill three people. This not only eased the suspense in front, but also eased the tension of the plot.

Secondly, this plot arrangement and suspense arrangement are quite successful. What Li Xiaoer and his wife heard in their ears and saw in their eyes, Lin Chong heard Li Xiaoer's description as "short, white face and little beard." "About thirty years old, I decided that I was chasing after myself, and immediately went to the streets to buy a knife and find an enemy. I didn't find it for five days," Lin also slowed down from my heart. However, there is a crisis behind this. When Lin Chong was sent to the forage field, Li Xiaoer said it was a beautiful job. "Exchanges often don't cost money, so I can't do this job." Lin Chong was full of doubts: "This doesn't hurt me, but it is a good job for me. What do you mean? " After reading this, readers will be confused. Instead of quickly releasing suspense, the book describes how Lin Chong went to the forage field to replace the old army and how to buy wine and drink. , as if nothing had happened, until the forage field caught fire, and after listening to the self-report of Lu Qian and others, the truth came out. This suspense is easy to attract readers and capture people's hearts. "

Third, this passage is not only full of psychological description, but also plays a role in setting off the scenery. There are three transgressions of "Lin Chong's Meditation" in this paper, which reveals the psychological activities of the characters at this moment, makes people go deep into the hearts of the characters, not only makes people see the basis of their activities, but also makes the narrative detailed and orderly. In particular, the use of "snow" and "fire" in the text has played a lot of roles. This "snow" not only points out the time and environment, but also promotes the development of the plot. For example, because of the heavy snow and cold weather, Lin chong went to buy wine late at night; Because of the heavy snow, which accumulated on the roof, the thatched cottage collapsed, and Lin Chong was spared from being burned to death. As for Fire, Jin Shengtan commented: "This article is full of fire characters, but many fire characters were written before the fire, and many fire characters were written after the fire." Two of them looked after the brazier, which showed that the fire in the forage field was not caused by Lin Chong's carelessness. Even if readers haven't read the dialogue between Lin Chong and Lu Qian, they know that there is another reason for the fire. Writing "fire" like this really kills three birds with one stone.

Fourth, this passage is quite action, which makes people seem to see the characters' every move after reading it. For example, write that Lin rushed into the mountain god to have a rest, and first "put the gun and wine gourd on the paper pile"; "Let go of that wadding" for the second time; And "first take off the felt hat and shake off all the snow" and then "take off the white cloth shirt, which is already wet, and put it on the altar with the felt hat"; Then, sit down and "pull the quilt to cover half of the lower body"; Finally, Lin Chong "took the gourd cold wine to eat slowly, and then drank the beef in his arms." This series of six movements, like the decomposition of characters' movements in today's film and television storyboards, clearly shows the whole process of a certain segment of the characters' activities. Another example is Lin Chong's account of rushing out of the temple gate. "One killed three people, four people. There are knots, gaps, laws, twists and turns, no hurry, no tightness, no shortage, no leakage, no piece, no hassle. " Jin Shengtan's analysis is quite pertinent.

In a word, as a fragment of Zhang Hui's novels, the description of this paragraph is very successful, which shows the uniqueness of China's ancient novel art in terms of the characterization of characters, the development of plots, the grasp of rhythm, the contrast of scenery, the description of scenes and the use of language.