Primary school students' language description composition

1. Character language description 200-word composition I have been with Chunchun for four years, and her impression on me is unforgettable. Round face, a pair of bright eyes, always blinking, shining with the light of happiness and gentleness, the small and exquisite nose, slightly upturned, a modest mouth, growing on a small round face, speaks in an orderly way and makes people convinced.

I have a cousin, less than ten years old, dignified and strong, with a chubby round face and two big, round and bright eyes. He can often bite his lower teeth on the outside of his upper teeth, which makes everyone laugh, and then he laughs himself, which is very funny. His head is bigger than that of other children. He often says two folk songs: "I am not afraid of heavy rain, but I have brains when others bring umbrellas."

She doesn't know that her phoenix eyes are beautiful. Those eyes are really small, thin and long, and the tip of their eyes points slightly to the sideburns. Although the eyes are not black, when the eyes look forward, there are sparks in the dark gray pupils from time to time, but the whites of the eyes are pale and faintly glow with blue flashes. Eyelids are not long, but they are dense and dark, which makes eyes look like clouds, hazy, mysterious and attractive. But the real beauty of her eyes is that the beauty is vivid. Whether you smile or laugh, as long as you smile, flowers will bloom in those eyes. The flowers are bright, charming and lovely, which makes her face sweet, handsome and radiant. Even if she is angry and sneers, there are still flowers in her eyes.

At the beginning of the second math class, I quietly noticed that there was something special in Teacher Nie's eyes: bright, especially bright. Those watery pupils turn around, swaying on the green lotus like flashing dew, and slipping on the jade plate like shining pearls. Teacher Nie's eyes met mine, and I quickly lowered my head. Really, my eyes are already in my heart. Teachers' eyes have special functions! I suddenly had some inspiration. I think of searchlights in movies and mirrors in fairy tales.

Dad is tall, with yellow curly hair, a pair of wise eyes embedded in his clean square face, and a pair of nostrils under his high nose are particularly large. When I was a child, I often looked at his nostrils and asked, "Dad, why are your nostrils so big?" He always answers with a smile: "Choose a horse with a big nose, because a horse with a big nose runs fast." . Dad was a sprint champion at school when he was a child. Ask your mother. "At this time, my mother and I will look at his nostrils and laugh.

"I am very happy." Mrs. Cook said that two round eyes were staring at Bazarov, and a lonely little red nose hung between them. To tell the truth, she is not as beautiful as Ben: her nose is too small, her nose is hooked inward, her nose is naturally not wide, and there are some freckles on it. You see, her row of Liu Long Haier hangs down from her forehead like a curtain, covering her eyebrows. The eyes under the eyebrows are small, but lively. The fly in the ointment is that there are many freckles on that little nose, but she never thought about worrying about these gadgets. She is as happy as a fairy all day.

Character language description fragment 1:

The door was broken and a hole the size of a basketball was opened.

The head teacher came and glared: "Who kicked it?"

Dong, who made trouble, narrowed his eyes and sneered, "Who knows, and no one asked me to watch it?

Zhang Xiaoyong next to him made a face at the teacher: "Ha, I opened the window, it's so ventilated."

Who knows this annoyed Gao Fangfang who stood by.

"It's dong. When he came, as soon as a gust of wind closed the door, he raised his foot and kicked hard. " The troublemaker stamped his foot: "I said, you little girl, don't talk in your sleep during the day!" " Be careful.

Point, don't frame good people! "

"I don't talk nonsense, everyone saw it. What made you do bad things, you have to argue it out. "

The teacher said, "Stop arguing. Who else saw it? "

"I, ... didn't see it." Li Xing swallowed a mouthful of water with difficulty and looked in a trance.

Comments: This passage vividly depicts the ideological realm and personality characteristics of several different people. The troublemaker makes much ado about nothing, lest the world be chaotic. Gao Fangfang dares to fight against bad behavior, without mercy and with sharp words. Li Xing is weak and timid.

Role language description fragment 2:

Song Jiang consulted with all the brothers of Zhongyitang and established the Lord of water margin. ..... Wu Yong advised: "Brothers are the most important, followed by Mr. Lu, and everyone prostrated. Brother, you give in again and again, for fear that it will chill everyone's heart. " It turns out that Wu Yong made this remark because he regarded everyone as his own eyes. Li Kui, the black whirlwind, shouted, "I am in Jiangzhou, and I am willing to lay down my life to follow you. Everyone will let you go. I'm not afraid of falling from the sky, so let me be a ghost! I will kill the general and break up! " When Song Wu saw Wu show it to others with his eyes, he also burst into tears and shouted, "Many of my brother's officers were ordered by the court, but only for my brother. How can they obey others? " Liu Tang service road: "At first, we went up the mountain seven times because we wanted to honor our brother. Let others today? " Lu shouted, "If you give your brother back to others, the whole family will be separated!" "

2. Find the key language description of a short passage (1). My hometown is in * * *, where there are rich fruits, including apples, grapes, walnuts and big red dates, among which my favorite is apples.

In the spring of March, the drizzle is like silk, and the tall and straight apple trees are full of beautiful and moving flowers. Pink petals and yellow stamens are beautiful.

Flowers are in full bloom, attracting countless beautiful flowers and many passers-by. Some passers-by stopped to admire, some picked flowers to dress themselves up, and some took pictures as a souvenir. Passers-by breathed intoxicating flowers.

The apple orchard is full of laughter. In April, the apple tree soaked by the spring rain stretched out its little green hand.

A gust of wind blew, and my little hand swayed as if to say hello to you. The apple blossoms are gradually fading, and the mother apple tree "gives birth" to small green apples.

Mother Apple clung to the immature "babies" for fear that they would fall. Autumn is coming and all kinds of fruits are beginning to ripen. Apples are like red lanterns hanging on branches, bending the thick branches.

Uncle fruit farmers picked the "red lanterns" one by one, put them in baskets and boxes, and transported them to all parts of the country by big trucks. It's another bumper harvest year, and grandpa's face is full of sweet smiles.

I love my hometown, and I love the apple orchard in my hometown even more! (2) This afternoon, all our students from Grade Two to Grade Six went to weed. Our task is to pull up the grass in the open space in front of the North Building.

There are only a dozen small trees in this clearing, and the rest are all weeds. However, the students were very happy to see this overgrown wasteland.

Because compared with the grassland we were in charge of yesterday, there are not many tasks today. It's time to pull up the grass.

Some students are crazy, like a bad wave, grabbing one in the east and another in the west, which is terrible. Some play while pulling, and pull a piece of grass for a few minutes. Huh? Why do people still take sickles? That must be used to pull weeds.

"Come and invest!" Here comes the forage harvester! I saw the students put all their weeds into the "bag" of the "grass harvester", and some even said, "This is a thousand-year-old ginseng! I will give it to you for free. " The "grass harvester" carries his own "package", pours the "treasure" into the dustbin, and then collects the grass.

This scene is really noisy. After a while, the grass was pulled out.

Looking at the clean ground, although the students' hands are stained with dirt, everyone is very happy. (3) At noon today, there was a "rainstorm" in my house. This "rainstorm" was caused by such a trivial matter as a nap.

I am the protagonist of this "rainstorm". After lunch, I turned on my computer and got ready to surf the Internet with great interest. My mother saw it and urged me to take a nap.

I was impatient when I heard it: "Go to sleep, go to sleep, and you will know that you are asleep!" " ""I want you to sleep, it's all for your own good! " Mom is a little angry, too. But I couldn't listen to a word my mother said, so I talked back to my mother and caused an uproar.

Finally, I couldn't help crying. It's a pity to think about what happened afterwards.

What my mother said is really reasonable. Lack of sleep will not only affect health, but also affect learning. I really shouldn't talk back to my mother unreasonably. (4) On Sunday morning, I got up early and walked on the street of Licheng, enjoying the pleasant scenery of the city in the morning.

Walking in the street, I looked at the east, and saw the bright rays of Xia Guang shining through the thin clouds, sprinkled on the earth, sprinkled on people's faces, and painted everyone's hair with a layer of Hui Jin, as if the morning glow wanted to put a crown on everyone. At the same time, I feel the freshness of the morning. There is no noisy noise in my ears, no beep of the car horn, only the morning wind sings in my ears, which makes my hair a little messy.

People who run in the morning are enjoying the natural beauty endowed by nature and running leisurely. Seeing such a scene, I also sincerely yearn for it, and I can't help but join the morning running team.

Running and running, a "beautiful scenery" appeared in front of me. In a square on the side of the road, there are dozens of old aunts dressed in red, holding flower fans, smiling, waving their hands, twisting their waists and dancing in the morning breeze. They seem very happy. Some people who stopped to watch also used force for it. It seems that they also want to enter their territory.

(5) In the early morning, how many people miss the time, the fresh air, the beautiful scenery and the leisurely mood, I was deeply moved by it, and I remembered what the teacher taught me: A day's plan lies in the morning. I want to get up early every Sunday morning, go out for a walk, integrate into the environment and society, and move from morning to a better tomorrow.

I climbed the Great Wall with my parents this morning. There was nothing difficult at first, just climbing the stairs. What's the big deal! We don't climb when we are climbing. It still seems very difficult. I must learn my lesson. I don't know what kind of difficulties I will encounter next.

I looked down, wow, how beautiful the mountains and the distant Woods are! I think the Great Wall is a bit steep. Let's go a little steeper. We walked bit by bit for a long time, and finally reached the end point where my mother said we would climb. I want to climb a little more and climb to the real finish line. .

It's a pity that dad refused. "It's too late to climb up again. Hurry up." We rested on it for a few minutes and then walked down.

Walking from top to bottom feels more difficult just now, and my head is a little dizzy. Every step down, it seems that there is a feeling of falling. Mom said her legs were spinning and shaking.

I was so scared in my heart that I held the railing and walked down step by step. Going down the Great Wall is more difficult than climbing it. Finally, we got off the Great Wall, and I took a long breath.

Today gave me a chance to exercise and made me more courageous. This morning, I helped my mother clean at home. My mother asked me to sweep the floor, so I did.

I am very careful when I sweep the floor. Every detail and every corner is clean. I think if I can do all the work at home, my parents won't suffer. Mother works hard from morning till night.

My father can't take care of people when decorating his new house. My father is a diabetic and needs a good rest. So I want to clean the house thoroughly and create a beautiful family so that my father can have a good rest. I finished cleaning, sweating profusely and sweating all over.

I will eventually.

3. I am a strong person who describes the expression of action language in the fourth grade of primary school students with about 330 words.

I am a very competitive person. If you believe me, please listen to my story.

It was a midsummer night. I went downstairs for a walk and met my former good friend Wu Wenbin. We haven't seen each other for a long time, and we had a good chat as soon as we met. Chatting, he suddenly asked me; "Mao Mao, how many push-ups can you do?" I shook my head and said, "I don't know." Before I finished, E5a48de588B63231333532313431363331363331333965653438+0, he was lying on the ground. Soon after he finished speaking, he stood up and said, "One * * * has made 25, so try it." I have no choice but to bite the bullet and do it. You know, I'm not good at sports because I'm too fat. I was on the ground, and I didn't do five things, so I lost. Wu Wenbin saw it and said, "I didn't expect you to make five. I think you are great. " ! "Hearing this, I blush to the neck. If there are cracks in the ground, I'd like to go in, but it's impossible.

When I got home, I lay in bed, tossing and turning, unable to sleep. I thought to myself, he can do 25, why can't I? Am I dumber than him? No, it's impossible! I am by no means more stupid than him, but I practice less than him. Yes, I must work hard to surpass him. So from that day on, I made up my mind to do five push-ups every day. In a day or two, with the increase of days, gradually, gradually, I can do more than 30 at a time. After a period of hard exercise, I can already do more than 40.

A year passed quickly, and on a midsummer night, I saw Wu Wenbin again in the same place. I offered to compete in push-ups. He said yes everywhere. He did it first, or he did 25. After that, he looked at me triumphantly and said to me as if he were laughing, can you do so much? Now it's my turn. I think of that night a year ago and the price I paid for my efforts. I can't help feeling refreshed. Suddenly, an unknown force broke out and made 50 in one breath. When I finished, I found that Wu Wenbin was tired. It was a long time before he came to his senses and stupidly asked me, "How can you be so great?" I smiled and replied, "Thank you. If you didn't touch my strong heart, how could I train so hard and surpass you? " "Oh, I see ..." He said with a wry smile.

This is something I want to tell you.

In fact, I am also very competitive in other aspects, which is why I always win.

This is me, a strong person.

Give me a remote control of about 4.300 words. ""no, give it to me. "Well, the family storm began again. Every holiday, our family is fighting for the remote control.

"I have a weekend in five days, so it's my turn to watch," I snapped. "I've been watching that TV series for a week, and now it's like giving up halfway. No! " Mother said firmly: "It is natural to care about national affairs, and I should watch it." Dad is not to be outdone. "News is the most boring." I interjected, and my brother helped me say, "Divine drama is the most interesting. I agree to watch my sister's TV series. "

Finally, a war of words finally stopped. Grandma announced: "Everyone watches the TV series they want for half an hour." Dad was unhappy: "half an hour, the news has ended!" " Suddenly, my father seemed to think of something. "By the way, if you look at the 29-inch color TV, I will look at the 25-inch color TV. You can continue to argue, and I don't care. " I patted my head. "By the way, dad, there is a TV at home. You are too cunning. " "This is called' ginger is still spicy'." Dad said with a smile.

Alas, it's a pity that I only watched the remaining half of the TV series. What a pity!

Another time, in order to join an interest group, my father asked me to sign up for the Olympic Games, my mother asked me to sign up for the Ginkgo Flower Literature Society, and my grandmother asked me to sign up for the English group. Everyone quarreled again.

"Good Olympiad, can develop intelligence!"

"It's good to participate in Ginkgo Flower Literature Society, which can improve the level of composition."

"Good English, learning English is beneficial and harmless. I think your uncle knows English. Look at him now ... "

"Well, stop that now. I joined the interest group, not you, which made me dizzy. " I shouted. "We are for your own good!" Grandma said, "I know you are doing me good, but you should also respect my wishes." I announce that I will report to-." Mom, dad and grandma immediately held their breath and listened to me. "I reported to the Ginkgo Flower Literature Society." Dad and grandma sighed, like deflated balls.

Such a family storm should have happened n times in my family. It is these "family disturbances" that make life colorful.

5. How to write a composition combining reading and writing? First, how to write about people and people is one of the basic skills of composition training in primary schools. Narrative writing, people and things are inseparable, the key is to see how the topic requires. For the topic of writing, the people in the article should serve things; It is required to write about people's topics, and the things in the text must serve people. Writing a people-oriented narrative is to express one or more qualities of a character through one or several things. The continuation of writing people does not require the integrity of narrative; The narrative of the notes should be complete and run through the whole article. (1) Write about a person through one thing, usually an aspect of a character or personality. In order to describe a character, it is necessary to describe the written character from the aspects of appearance, language, action and psychology. However, from the perspective of describing people by things, it is best to choose the one that best reflects a certain feature of the characters. And it's well written. Choose typical examples when writing. The so-called typical is something that can reflect the central idea and show the good thoughts, good qualities and good feelings of the characters. For primary school students, choosing a typical example should focus on trivial matters and choose the one that best reflects profound significance. On the surface, such things are ordinary trivial things, but they contain profound significance, that is, two things are used to express a person's various qualities. It should be noted that when writing a person with a few things, these things can be complete, and the author must explain the time, place, people and events (cause, process and result) one by one, or they can be incomplete and only pay attention to some points. More often, in an article, some things are written in detail; Some things are sketched; Some things need to be written completely and some things need to be written simply. To write a person through a few things, you also need to describe the appearance, movements, language and psychology of the character. (3) Learn to portray characters. In the process of narration, you should describe the appearance, language, movements and psychological activities that can best express the thoughts and feelings of the characters, that is, learn to portray the characters. It is a method to reveal the characters' character by describing their appearance, expression, clothing, posture, intonation and appearance characteristics.56665.66666666666 The appearance of a character is closely related to the inner world of the character. Specifically, through the description of the appearance, the character image is fuller and can leave a deep impression on the reader; By describing the appearance of the characters, the identity of the characters is revealed; Through the description of appearance, show the inner world of the characters on specific occasions; Through the description of appearance, the character, mental outlook and ideological quality of the characters are expressed. In a word, the description of appearance should closely cooperate with the expression of characters' personality and highlighting the central idea of the article. The description of appearance should be vivid, avoid facial makeup, and oppose biased writing, from beginning to end, with thousands of people. 2. There are two kinds of language descriptions: dialogue and monologue. Dialogue is a conversation between two or more people; Monologues are monologues of characters. Language is the direct expression of characters' inner world and plays an important role in expressing characters' thoughts and personalities. A language with individual characteristics can play the role of "listening to his words and observing his people". Language description should pay attention to the following two points: first, the language of the characters in the article should be carefully screened, and those languages that can best express the personality characteristics and central ideas of the characters should be written into the article; Second, a good language description must conform to the situation at that time and the characteristics of the characters' personality, identity, gender, age and cultural accomplishment. There are four forms of dialogue description: what is said is written at the back, and quotes are used at the back of the speaker; What is said comes first, and the person who said it is written at the end, with quotation marks and periods; Quote one or more sentences before and after, and explain who said it in the middle, using commas; Write only the language of the characters, not the speaker. These four forms should be flexible according to actual needs, and rigid writing should be avoided. 3. Action description is a way to express people's thoughts and personalities through their actions. A person's actions are often the truest externalization of his thoughts, feelings and personality characteristics. Look at a person, not only by what he says, but also by what he does. As the saying goes, we should first choose key actions to write. When a person does one thing, there will be many actions. But they can't and don't need to write all these actions. This requires choosing the key and most meaningful actions to write. Secondly, write accurately. The same action can be expressed by many verbs, but only those verbs that are distinctive and can best reflect the temperament of the characters can make people "live". Yes The most difficult thing is not to write actions, but to write distinctive actions and write people from actions. 4. Psychologically describing the inner activities of characters is a silent language. The inner world of characters refers to complex feelings such as joy, sadness, hesitation, jealousy and yearning. When writing a character article, properly describing the psychology of the character can describe the character more effectively and highlight the central idea. The psychological changes of characters should be natural and reasonable; Psychological description should serve the central idea of the article; When describing the psychological activities of characters, we should be objective and cautious, and we should not take our own hearts as our own. When primary school students write, they often use the first person ("I" and "we"). If they use this personalized composition, they can't write the psychological activities of the characters in the form of "he wants to", because "I" can't enter other people's hearts to see. At this time, we can change the way-let people feel authentic. In addition to using "I think", psychological description can also adopt the following methods. (1) Ask questions and introduce your ideas. (2) reveal psychological activities with assumptions. (3) between the lines, revealing "thoughts." (4) Express your thoughts directly. Second, how to write.

6. How to write a short composition about language description? You see, she is neither tall nor short, thin and her skin is white. She has a pair of croissants on her round head. Xiu Xiu's angry face, under the light eyebrows, has a pair of sparkling eyes. She has a flat mouth like a duckling and two rows of white and neat teeth. She is wearing colorful children's clothes and a red scarf around her neck. Oh, no! I fell and hurt my leg. I had to sit on the stairs and scream. Just then, my good friend Wen appeared. She ran up to me and said kindly, "Are you all right?" I said sadly, "I fell down the stairs and it really hurt!" " Wen Sunlin asked anxiously, "Are you still in pain?" I cried and said, "Of course it hurts!" After listening to my words, Wen Sun Linli carved his hands and gently said.

7. Composition Encyclopedia (with 200 words of action description, language description and expression description) Quick, quick and quick My mother is very tall, neither fat nor thin, with a few shallow wrinkles on her forehead and a smile on her face.

My mother is kind. She taught me to be honest and generous from an early age and cultivated my good character from an early age.

I remember one thing, which I will never forget. It was a hot afternoon, and the sun scorched the earth like a big fireball. I sat in my room and kept fanning, but my sweat kept rolling down. I said to my mother, "Mom! It's hot, it's hot! I want to eat popsicles. " Mom said, "Come on, I'll take you to buy some popsicles." He picked up his wallet.

When I got to the place where I bought popsicles, I chose popsicles. My mother took out a whole ticket for 50 yuan from her purse and handed it to my uncle who bought popsicles. After my uncle found the money, my mother and I hurried home.

When I got home, my mother counted and said to herself, "Huh? No, a * * * is 7 yuan. How can I get back 45 yuan? " Hearing this, I said happily, "Great! People who buy popsicles are really confused. They are looking for more 3 yuan money. Mom, can I have 2 yuan? " My mother glared at me and said angrily, "send 2 yuan more back, you can't take advantage of small things!" " ! Besides, it is not easy for people to sell popsicles! "Say that finish, my mother braved the hot sun of * * * and sent 3 yuan money to others.

When I sleep at night, I can't sleep in bed. When I think of the things during the day, I suddenly understand that a man should start from bit by bit, and can't do things that are sorry for others because of the small advantages in front of him. This incident gave me a great education. I love my mother and I admire her from the bottom of my heart.

8. Language composition describing characters (about 400 words) My cousin.

I have a naive, lovely, intelligent and lively cousin. He has a pair of big watery eyes, and when he thinks, his black eyes turn straight in his eyes. Cousin can show a pair of white and neat little teeth when she smiles, which is very interesting. I like him very much.

My cousin lives in grandma's house. Once, he told his grandmother that he liked Xiaohua Mall. Grandma loves her cousin and listens to him. He asked me to watch my cousin and buy Xiaohua Mall on the street. Grandma bought a lively and beautiful Xiaohua Mall. My cousin jumped for joy when he saw the lively and lovely Xiaohua Mall, so he ran to grandma's side, played with the lovely Xiaohua Mall, stroked it gently, and sang beautiful Xiaohua Mall songs in his mouth. Then Xiaohua Mall pawed at his cousin's pants. Grandpa saw it, picked up Xiaohua Mall and threw it away. My cousin burst into tears when he saw it. He said, "Grandpa is bad, but Xiaohua Mall is not sensible. If you want to educate him, how can you throw him away If I am not sensible, will you abandon me? You see how pathetic! " Everyone laughed. Grandpa quickly picked up Xiaohua Mall and said to his cousin, "Yes, the kitten is not sensible. My brother will educate it!"

Another time, my cousin was playing in the house. He didn't listen to his grandmother and insisted on playing with his bike. As a result, he accidentally overturned his bike and pinned his finger. He quickly broke his finger and burst into tears. At this moment, grandma heard crying and ran out of the room. Seeing this scene, she was so angry and funny that she ignored him. He stopped crying for a while and peeked through his fingers to see if grandma paid attention to him. He found that grandma ignored him and went to her to laugh.

How interesting and lovely my cousin is! I like him very much.

9. Write a 300-word composition in your classmates' language description. If there is, I will give my classmates extra points. Nothing is more harmonious and tacit to me than Zhong Weimin.

Once, as a representative of Chinese class, he came to collect books and reminded me to hand them in quickly. I shouted at him, "I paid it!" " "He opened his eyes and asked doubtfully," Did you really hand it in? Let me help you find it. "He didn't take my complaint to heart, but helped me find it seriously. I searched my desk carefully first, and searched every corner of my schoolbag, but I couldn't find it. I sat in my seat in frustration and thought, I'm sure I'll be criticized this time. Zhong Weimin comforted me and asked eagerly, hoping to get some clues. Seeing him sweating, I can't help but feel ups and downs. He is really anxious about others and thinks what others think! The next class is English. When I opened English, my notebook slipped out of the book. At this time, Zhong Weimin and I suddenly realized.

He was criticized by the teacher because my notebook was handed in late. I feel very guilty. Suddenly thought of a sentence-when you tell your sadness to a friend, your sadness will be halved. So I ran to Zhong Weimin's seat. ...

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