Film expansion composition

1. Please continue to write the composition of the film and the composition "Climbing" on the topic of climbing.

"Red raincoat" has changed from the language and psychology of "let everyone get some light" to the practical action of clearing the way for others, which is a leap. At the same time, "I" also joined the ranks of clearing the way for people as a bystander, which is a psychological leap and a climb.

In our great nation, when it comes to climbing, people immediately think of climbing upwards, and few people think of climbing at the same level. The "red raincoat" and "I" in the materials are examples of this special climbing form. They didn't climb high, nor did they climb mountains, but they were also climbing, climbing to the peak in the field of spiritual civilization, which was rarely walked or even despised by people. They succeeded, at least they could feel it.

Nowadays, in our ancient civilization, especially when the reform and opening up are in full swing, we need this leap-forward climb, from language psychology to practical action. This kind of climbing is not only the responsibility of "Red Raincoat" and Qian Qian's Qian Qian. If our nation wants to be greater and our motherland wants to be more prosperous, it is also inseparable from this kind of climbing.

2. Continue to write the film "Lonely Composition" I went to see the film "Loneliness" this afternoon. I thought it was a bitter drama, but it turned out to be a masterpiece. There are not too many emotional tears in the whole drama, and the sublimation of feelings is completed in restraint.

Especially at the end, Lei Zekuan's motorcycle continues his journey of finding children on the green land, full of uncompromising life, which makes the play enter the field of religion and philosophy. As a film about child abduction, there are two protagonists: the father of the abducted child, Lei Zekuan, and the abducted child, Ceng Shuai.

Lei Zekuan, played by Andy Lau, rode a motorcycle for 0/5 years, kept walking, kept asking questions, kept visiting, and went through hardships to find news of his son. Ceng Shuai, played by Jing Boran, has no identity card because of special circumstances, and must find his own biological parents to complete the construction of social identity.

Among their peers, they gradually developed a kind of attachment that is not father and son, but superior to father and son. Finally, Ceng Shuai found his biological parents, while Lei Zekuan continued to look for his son.

In China culture, due to the lack of religion, the relationship between parents and children is of great significance. Therefore, once the child is lost, the meaning of parents' life will be greatly reduced, and the child will have roots only if he has parents.

At the same time, it is not difficult to see from the film that many families in China want to have boys, so there is a big market for abducting and selling children, especially baby boys. As a former quasi-literary youth, my mind has always been very delicate, and of course it is related to my recent mood, so when I watch this film, I will over-interpret it according to my own mood.

When watching this movie, it suddenly occurred to me that in fact, an accident in our life often doomed our own life trajectory. Some people think that ordinary happiness is a luxury for another person.

However, can this be real life? Just like Lei Zekuan's insistence, it is not a matter of necessity, but the completion of his own redemption. When he is free and willing, his practice is completed. Just like me, I have been pursuing a "dream" that I can't even say clearly. People in their thirties are still reluctant to do a lot of things, but in the eyes of most people, I may be a little stupid. Just like Lei Zekuan in the film, what if you find your own son? 15 is gone forever, and I can no longer enjoy growing up with my children.

However, if you give up, he will not be willing. However, from another perspective, this 15 year has been accompanied by the search for hope, but it is also a part of life.

Without this 15 year, he would not have helped Ceng Shuai find his parents so actively. In fact, study, love and life are mostly like this.

Of course, Lei Zekuan's epiphany at the end of the film comes from the "fatalism" of Buddhism. However, I still think that the attitude of Christianity towards the suffering of life is more in line with my preference.

Willing to accept suffering and disability and move forward bravely.

3. How to write a continuation composition When it comes to "continuation", we must first clarify what is "continuation".

Continuing to write is to continue to make up stories according to the original content. Sometimes, with the origin of the story, follow the train of thought of the story and continue to write its process and results through imagination.

Sometimes, I will tell you the ending of the story and flashback the cause and process of the story. Sometimes, I give you a story, and the article I want to continue writing has a turning point with the original text. This is called reverse continuation.

There is also a continuation, which only tells us a scene, gives the time, place and people, and then continues to write, with a wider range of imagination. In short, the continuation should be based on the clues, scope, characters and the author's ideas provided by the raw materials, and continue to write the development of the story plot and the activities, psychology, language and expressions of the characters, so that the plot of the original text can develop reasonably and form a complete story.

It is important to grasp the center and avoid rambling. So, what should you pay attention to when you continue writing? 1. Read the materials provided to you carefully, think about what is the center of the whole article after the sequel, and expand the wings of imagination according to this center to supplement the development of things and the ending of the story.

When developing imagination, we should pay attention to the following points: ① Imagination should conform to the development of the original text, and people and things should maintain continuity and consistency with the original text. ② Imagination should conform to the reality of life.

Even if it is fictional, its content should be possible in real life, and it is hard to believe that it can't be made up in pursuit of the bizarre twists and turns of the story. The imaginary composition should be integrated with the materials provided, with a clear center, highlighting the key points and writing things clearly in detail.

2. The sequel is connected with the previous article, which is consistent with the plot development and character of the original text. It is reasonable for the story to continue backwards.

3. The language of the sequel should be as consistent as possible with the original in style. After reading a story, continue to write a composition, that is, around the center of the article, add an appropriate paragraph or reasonable plot to the text to connect with real life, extracurricular reading or movie stories.

Continuation can also be combined with our real life, according to the article provided by the teacher at the beginning, with a written continuation; You can also write the continuation and possible ending of the story according to the end of the article. Attention should be paid when continuing to write an article: first, make clear the direction and way of continuing to write according to the beginning, end or other clues provided.

Second, when continuing, the plot development should be logical, the characters' thoughts should be consistent, and the narrative tone should be consistent. Let's take Pig Bajie eating watermelon as an example to talk about how to continue writing.

Synopsis: "Pig Eight Rings Eating Watermelon" is a skimming text, which tells the story of four Tang apprentices on their way to the Western Heaven to learn from the scriptures. Pig is lazy, greedy and steals watermelons. It shows his ridiculous, cute, clumsy and honest character, and also criticizes this selfish, greedy and lazy behavior.

(For the original text, please refer to Lesson 35, Volume 6 of Five-year Primary School Chinese published by People's Education Publishing House. After reading the story of Pig Bajie eating watermelon, the students will definitely think that Pig Bajie is ridiculous. After being teased, do you want to say something to Bajie, or speculate on the story that will happen after Bajie eats watermelon?

Pay attention to the following points when writing this composition: 1. Inherit the above and make a natural transition. In order to make the next story or what we want to say to Bajie lively and interesting, and to maintain the integrity of the article structure, we should briefly describe the process of Pig Bajie eating watermelon and his ambivalence at that time, but in order to highlight the key points, this part should be written briefly and naturally transition to the next paragraph. 2, reasonable imagination, lively and interesting, what will happen after Bajie enjoys the sweetness and delicacy of watermelon? Or see this scene, what would you say to Bajie? Students can boldly expand their imagination by combining their own life experiences, and be as reasonable and thorough as possible.

Perhaps it was because Pig Pig wolfed down watermelons, only cared about himself, and forgot Master and Brother, which annoyed Wukong and was teased. On the way back to visit Master, Bajie suddenly had a stomachache, which made him roll all over the floor, hating himself for being greedy. You may say that Bajie deserved it, which makes no sense. Perhaps thinking that Bajie took on all the tasks of going to the Western Heaven to learn Buddhist scriptures in order to punish himself, and then showed his true skills, you might say that this is what disciples should do to honor master; Maybe he thought that Bajie told a story in front of the master and offered a humble apology. After that, he became kind, kind and not greedy. You may say, if you really get rid of the bad habits of laziness and greed, that's great ... students may still have a lot of golden ideas. Let's have a try and see who writes more novel, reasonable and interesting.

3. Set suspense to evoke memories. After all this, is Bajie still selfish, greedy and lazy, or always thinking of others? What kind of image do you want the Eight Rings in your heart to be? I hope the students can imagine boldly, create a brand-new image of Bajie for readers and win their favor. Student Example 1 "Pig Eight Rings Eat Watermelon" The Tang Priest and his disciples passed by a temple, ready to order something to eat, but there was no one inside.

Master had to send the Monkey King to find some wild fruits to fill the machine. Bajie, who is standing by, can't wait, and will follow.

But on the way, Bajie pretended to have a stomachache. Wukong had already seen through Bajie's trick, but he didn't say it, and left despondently. At this time, Pig, who was lying under the tree, was greedy and ate all the watermelons, and found four sufficient reasons to deal with Master, Wukong and Friar Sand.

What I never expected was that Wukong, who came back from picking wild fruits, had seen it clearly. Wukong suddenly let out a cry, and while Pig was in a daze, he turned into a small flying insect and got into Pig's stomach.

After eating the last watermelon, the pig threw away the watermelon skin for fear that the monkey would find out. Then Wukong came to Pig and dragged him to see the master.

On the way back, Bajie fell four times in a row. Wukong thought: this is called self-inflicted.

When he came to the master, Bajie had to tell him the truth with a red face, and everyone laughed. The Monkey King shared the wild fruit with everyone and went on his way after eating.

On the way to the west, Bajie shouted that he had a stomachache. Wukong said humorously, "Stop playing tricks and want to eat watermelon again?" "No, my old pig didn't lie to you."

Bajie said helplessly.

4. Three Little Bears There lived a mother bear in the big forest by the sea.

Her mother has three children. The boss told me to be obedient and honest; The second child is smart and loves to think; The third child is a girl named Meimei, and she is very beautiful.

One day, mother bear called her three children to her side and gave them 100 yuan each to leave home and live independently to see who could live a rich life. A year later, mother bear saw her three children again and learned that they lived different lives.

Obedience is honest, so you listen to others. Although others helped him, he didn't listen to others.

Because he listened to others' words, his 100 yuan was quickly cheated and he has been living a wandering life, but he also regrets why he listened to others' words. Brilliant, he rented a house with 100 yuan from the beginning, then borrowed money from others, and finally borrowed it from 500 yuan.

I bought some food with the money and opened a restaurant in the house. It didn't take long to make a lot of money. It returned the 500 yuan to others and bought some fruit to visit her mother.

Meimei loves beauty and bought cosmetics with 50 yuan's money, and the rest of 50 yuan bought some food. Before long, Mei Mei went out and began to wander around. When she went to see her mother, she didn't even have money for clothes.

Mother knew their life, gave obedient and beautiful 100 yuan, and said to them, "save some flowers, you should study hard!" " "Obedient meimei out of the house again. But cleverness became the heir to the house.

Clever said to his mother, "I will do it well, don't worry!" " "Mom also smiled with relief.

5. Continue to write story composition. The crow has been in high spirits all day since the fox cheated him of a piece of meat. Forget the beauty in his heart! No, it lingers in the rain every day, hoping that the crow will "send" it another piece of meat.

One day, the fox wandered under the big tree again. Suddenly, he found a black thing flying in the sky. Then he looked intently and saw that it was a crow cheated by a fox. The fox closed his eyes and thought, "Did this stupid crow bring me meat?" Thought it was hidden in the grass.

After a while, the crow flew to the tree with a piece of meat in its mouth. The fox in the grass was drooling when suddenly his eyes lit up. "Look at me, hum!" A faint smirk appeared on his lips.

He jumped out of the grass and said with a big smile, "Brother Crow, I heard you got promoted! You have become the health manager of the animal market. Your black management suit is really imposing! "

The crow didn't say a word, just looked at the fox under the tree.

The fox felt an opportunity and then said, "The last time I cheated you with a piece of meat, it was because my children didn't eat for days and nights." Even so, I still feel very sorry. " He even shed crocodile tears.

At this time, the crow's mouth seems a little loose.

Then the fox said, "can you forgive me?" If I can't, I will hit this big tree! " As he spoke, he rushed to the tree.

"No, no!" The crow gave a loud cry and the meat fell.

The fox took the meat, swallowed it in one breath and said, "You stupid crow, I'm lying to you, haha!" "

"Don't eat, this meat is the sick meat I found in the black bear shop in the animal market. Do not believe, the ticket I opened is still there! "

"ah!" At this time, the fox's face turned red, white, purple and black. The fox rushed into the grass, vomiting and diarrhea.

6. How to turn an article into a movie? You must have written many travel notes and interview reports since childhood, right? Do you find writing difficult? You may find it difficult, even more difficult than general composition.

The reason is that you left too many memories after visiting a scenic spot and attending a museum or factory. So your heart is confused and you don't know where to start with that complicated situation.

If that's the case, I'll teach you a method, which will be much simpler. To write this kind of article, we must first decide the perspective.

You can assume that you are a god and look down on all beings from the sky. Because you know everything, you can introduce it as a whole. For example, if you write about the Metropolitan Museum of Art in New York, you can say, "The world-famous Metropolitan Museum of Art in New York is located next to Manhattan's Central Park, on Fifth Avenue and 82nd Street.

This museum, which was built in 1870 and now has a total area of130,000 square meters, has collected more than three million works of art from ancient times to modern times, including paintings, sculptures, photography, costumes, furniture and musical instruments from Egypt, Babylon, Greece, Rome, the Far East, the Near East, Asia, Europe, Africa and America. Today, I will introduce you to another way of writing-you are not an omniscient god, but you have become an ordinary person, from "looking down from the air" to "going underground". Isn't that what you did when you visited? Now that I've just visited, think about it now and visit the flowers again! So you can write like this: "After a dense forest and grassland in Central Park, you can see the Metropolitan Museum of Art in the distance. You thought it was a white palace.

Walking up dozens of broad stone steps and entering the tall main hall, I saw tourists from all over the world, stone carvings on all sides and a large bottle of flowers. We followed the guide into the Egyptian Ministry and saw mysterious mummies, sarcophagus and strange words on them.

It also entered a hall with a transparent roof. Surrounded by a pool, there is a tall ancient Egyptian temple in the middle. My classmates and I both threw coins into the pool and made a wish, hoping to come here again in the future ... "How relaxed! You don't have to have any information, you can write a vivid travel note. And because you are writing according to "true memories", you are eloquent and methodical, so how can you not know how to write? Please don't say that the writing like "running account" is not clever.

You know, since ancient times, many great writers have completed immortal works in this way. Do not believe you give two examples-Tao Yuanming's "Going Home", you have read it! Let's look at the second paragraph (translated into vernacular): "The boat rocked forward gently, and the wind blew its skirt.

I asked the pedestrians for directions. I really hate that the morning light is not bright enough. Finally I saw the door and corner of my house, and I ran forward excitedly.

The boy servant came out to meet him, and the child was waiting at the door. The path in the yard is covered with weeds, but fortunately, pine trees and chrysanthemums are still flourishing.

I carried the child into the house, and there was already a bottle of wine in it. When I drink wine, I am glad to see the old trees in the garden.

I feel very happy at the south window. Even if the place is small, I am safe and self-sufficient. It is very interesting to watch the shadows of trees move in the sun in the garden; The door is closed, although there are not many tourists, there is a kind of leisure.

Then I walked into the garden on crutches and looked up from time to time. I saw the clouds floating freely out of the valley, and the birds were tired of flying and went home one by one.

As the sun sets, I still caress the solitary pine and don't want to go into the house ... "Think about it later, can you draw a serial picture and string those pictures together?" It's so simple! Because everything develops in a straight line-first take a boat, then dawn, ask for directions, look at the house, enter the door, drink, sit down and rest, and look around. Then I walked into the yard and looked at the sky, white clouds and birds, and then it was dark ... didn't this article just write about the day when Tao Yuanming came home? He didn't describe how far the road is, where his home is, how big it is and how many people there are. He even wrote about a boy servant and a child, but he didn't write about his wife. But how vivid it is to read! Today, you brought back a large stack of books from the library, slammed them on the ground and said sadly, "It's only been two weeks, how can you finish reading them?" "He also said that the English teacher had told you that she would give you tons of books to read, and that she would assign homework every day, even if only one of the ten questions was not done, half the score would be deducted.

Then you complain about the physics teacher, saying that he teaches too fast, and it takes you a lot of time to figure it out bit by bit. Son, you only started school for three weeks. I find that you have lost weight, and you always hear footsteps at two or three in the evening.

I think it is necessary to teach you how to use your time. Remember when we joined a tour group not long ago, and one of them took a sketch book. Every time he visited a scenic spot, even if it was only ten minutes, he used a pencil to sketch? Why does he only use pencils instead of colors? Also, when he handed out sketches to everyone in the car, did he find that many places were simply sketched out?

The reason is simple, because time is limited, he wants to seize the scenery in front of him. After weighing, he had to take a simplified approach.

By the same token, the teacher wrote a bunch of books today. Do you have to recite one word at a time, just like primary school? Of course not! With the growth of age, there are more and more things to learn, and you will find more and more that when you face big problems, the first thing to do is to choose. In primary school, the textbook was so thin that every word could be memorized. By the middle school, the textbooks are much thicker, and there may be "more than one outline". The teacher asked you to refer to different versions of the textbook, so you can't read them all intensively.

One day, when you enter a university and choose a department, you don't have to study science if you study liberal arts. Isn't it natural to give up As for entering the society, you may have greater specialization, and there will be more things that you will never touch again because of your career. Son, I am not a rigid father, forcing you to score 100 in every subject and read every textbook well.

Because I am not a "surreal" person, I know that in your limited time, just like that Harvard medical school student, you have to plan and not give up. The word "willing, willing" is used wonderfully. If you don't give up, how can you "get"? When you can't hold it in your hand, you have to give up some.

7. "David" fragment expanded composition 200 words 1. If the blackboard is a sea of Wang Yang, then the teacher is a sailor on the sea. At the moment when * * * rings, you paddle the textbooks moored in the harbor like a boat. On the desk, problems piled up like a reef. Your posture is vivid like a flying bird, waving beautiful ones on the podium.

2. Hope comes from disappointment, and rise begins with worry. As a poet said, people who feel hungry must digest well, people who feel anxious must be efficient, and people who feel crisis must make rapid progress.

Don't wander under the tree, don't meditate in the rain, and don't cry in the dark. Look forward, don't look back. As long as you dare to face it and look up, you will find that the haze of achievements is just a short rainy season. Looking ahead, there is still a bright day, and people will not feel confused.

4. The soft sunshine hangs obliquely on the branches and leaves of pine and cypress, which looks so quiet and solemn. On the green lawn and the white cement road, the footsteps are so light, but everyone's heart is so excited and full of thoughts.

The ocean of life is not as blue as Xizi Lake. As time goes by, it is sometimes as calm as a mirror, sometimes the waves splash, and sometimes the waves soar into the sky ... People often become stronger after being tested by big winds and waves.

6. When you are immersed in warm air, birds and flowers, green mountains and green waters, fertile fields, you will be intoxicated; When you face the golden autumn as fruitful as gold, you will be ecstatic. Have you ever thought that the abundant spring scenery is heroic after severe cold baptism, but the beautiful autumn scenery is the crystallization after the summer heat melts? ..........

7. If you want to harvest fruits in the golden autumn, you should roll up your trouser legs in the early spring when the chill invades people, and make unremitting efforts to open up wasteland, sow seeds and cultivate until the day of harvest.

8. When we stand at the window and appreciate the falling snow in winter, our friend is a cup of hot tea in our hands. A friend is an umbrella in our hands when we walk in the summer rain; Friends are spring breeze, which blows away the depression of winter in our hearts when spring comes; A friend is a glass of wine, and we are intoxicated by the whispers of autumn harvest season.

In my mind, I remember such a friend-XX, whose image I will never forget. At that time, he 12 years old, the same age as me.

A pair of big eyes, intense, round face, small nose and modest mouth, very cute. This lovely friend often comes to my mind clearly.

Whenever I have a holiday, he always comes to me first. I remember that summer vacation. One day, I was very hungry, but my parents were not at home. I am too young to cook at all. Just as he walked into my house, he looked at me in surprise and said, "Why are you alone at home?" Haven't you had lunch yet? "I touched my hungry stomach, shook my head feebly and said," I haven't eaten yet. "

He said quickly, "It's so late, you must be hungry. You are not a person who can cook and stir fry! Tell you what, you wash the dishes and I'll help you cook. " Then he turned and quickly began to work.

I watched him cook, envious and envious. Although this meal is not as delicious as mom and dad or the chef's, it not only fills my stomach, but also fills my heart.

After eating, he sincerely said to me, "You! You must learn to cook, or you will be hungry if you are alone at home and I am not here. " I smiled and nodded.

In this way, with his help, I really learned to cook slowly. Although it is a small matter, it is deeply engraved in my memory.

In this world, one cannot live without parents or friends. Life without friends is like a cup of coffee without sugar, bitter and bitter, and a little sad.

Because of loneliness, because it is unbearable, life will become uninteresting and no longer a real style. People who have no friends are dead if they live. So we need friends, and we need people who can accompany us through the wind, frost, rain and snow and accompany us to feel love and hate.

People who hate each other have been with us for thousands of years, a legend about human love ... I wonder how old the landlord is this year, is it enough? I hope the landlord can use ~.

It is urgent to expand the 9.800-word composition. Sorry, your photo is incomplete, so I can't see it clearly. I'll give you another similar article for your reference.

In the journey of life, even if the road ahead is full of thorns and wind and rain; Even if you are as small as a star, you can't move; Even if you wade through mountains and rivers, it is still endless. But we still have the warmth of our peers in the dark, which supports us to forge ahead and makes us learn to be grateful and unforgettable.

An accidental witness, unforgettable details, unforgettable moment, my heart beats. Mom sews clothes and dad holds scissors, which is a very low-key picture in daily life. Just like the slow-motion lens used in the movie, the blooming background, simple movements and clear hands holding scissors. What kind of hand is it? Familiar hands, knuckled hands with cocoons, and hands engraved with the texture of the years. It is such a pair of hands that leads to the promise of "growing old with children"; It is such a pair of hands that contain the coldness and sharpness of scissors and leave the handle of safety to each other. The transmission of love is magnified in an instant, and the warmth of home overflows our hearts.

Looking back on my vague childhood memories, I can't forget that blue school uniform. It was raining heavily in summer, and I rushed into the rain curtain with anxiety about going home. "I'll go with you!" The sentence pattern is inquiry and the tone is smile. So, in this city of heavy rain, there are such a pair of strangers, who don't know each other. But the two hearts under the umbrella are very close, very close There is no strangeness and distance at first sight. When I got up the courage to look up, all I saw was her back turned away and the blue school uniform I was wearing now. I haven't seen her until now, but I can imagine what kind of smile she was at that time. Yes, I am also used to holding an umbrella to pay attention to those figures running in the rain. She said with an imaginary smile, "I'll go with you!" " I think, at this time, she may be holding an umbrella and saying the same thing in a corner of the city. I am convinced that love can be passed on and warmth can be passed on. Therefore, in the process of warming others, everyone will leave an indelible memory in their hearts.

A greeting of youth in the morning, this is your warmth; Give me a gentle reminder before you go, that's my warmth. After the evening review, hand over a bottle of hot coffee as a friend's support; Waking up from a nightmare in the middle of the night and drinking a glass of warm milk is my mother's concern ... There are more warm and beautiful things in life, but how unforgettable this place is. It is these unforgettable warmth that runs through the veins of our lives, accompanying us to witness the golden years and letting us learn to be grateful.