A photographic work, the bird is not necessarily very good, but kneel for comment! ! ! !

1, the composition is not reasonable enough and the theme is not prominent enough.

In order to highlight the theme of "Farewell", the protagonist of "Farewell" should occupy more than 2/3 of the picture; The four stone carvings of Farewell to Huaihe River can be preserved, but the picture area cannot exceed 1/3.

2. improper focus.

Because the stone carving area is too large, it affects the camera's focus on the main part and the effect of the whole picture.

3. Arrangement of color effects.

The main object should be placed in a clear and bright place, and other parts can be placed in a dim picture or in a vague state, with the ultimate goal of serving the "prominent theme".