Write a composition on the cloud

1. The 800-word composition "Reading Shang Yun" is the work of Qin Wenjun. During the holiday, I was lucky enough to read and appreciate the book Shang Yun. It can be said that I was baptized by an excellent soul.

The characters in the book are lifelike, just like our friendly neighbors and our bosom friends. Elegant, elegant, gentle and gentle grandmother, my uncle's naughty and domineering brother Zhou Wenjiao, and my aunt's perfect cousin Mao Mao all came from Shangyun's family in Dujiangyan, but they came into my mind one by one, urging me to meditate, making me excited and unforgettable.

On grandma's ninety-fifth birthday, Zhou Tianjiao broke grandma's favorite flowerpot. She was already disappointed, but my uncle was late. Who would have expected that when he finally came back, he suddenly became a thief. Melancholy clouds hung over everyone's mind, and a sudden catastrophe came, which suffered the worst earthquake in history!

At the critical moment when his life was seriously threatened, Mr. Xie only wanted to save Shang Yun and Xinxin, but ignored his personal safety and left the hope of life to others. When she woke up from a coma, she found herself crushed in the ruins, and Teacher Xie was flattened … ..

This story moved me to tears, with heavy sadness and pain in my heart. I am awed by Mr. Xie's feat of sacrificing himself for others. I gave up the happiness of my family, shed tears for him, and felt more proud of him and his family.

It is not difficult for a person to do something good for others, but it is not easy to choose his own death for others' lives. I can't help but feel bouts of pain when I think of so many selfish people in daily life and the tragedy that innocent victims of passers-by often die tragically in the streets because there is no one to help them. Our society needs more teachers to thank, and each of us should be a grateful teacher, so as not to damage our image and to build a truly harmonious society, right?

Shang Yun took the initiative to help and comfort her heart when she was trapped; Sun can take the initiative to save his partner when he is injured. Mao Mao's left leg was amputated under local anesthesia, and he didn't shed a tear during the operation ... Sincere help in times of trouble and fearless in times of crisis are great spiritual strength for people to overcome nature and disasters.

Compared with them, we should feel deeply guilty. We live in a carefree environment, but we often don't know how to cherish it, but we complain that the conditions are not as good as others, but we can't stand the test of a little difficulty. When we encounter some difficulties in life, we hope to get the care of our parents and help from others, but when others encounter difficulties, they often turn a blind eye. Think of these brave and selfless people in the face of disaster. Aren't we ashamed and ashamed?

The story of "Shang Yun" tells me that no matter what difficulties and hardships I face, I should stand up and face them bravely. It also taught me that to be a useful person to others, we should start from the small things in front of us, have a heart of gold dedicated to others, and not just think about ourselves and comfort ourselves all day. Everyone should exercise themselves hard and become a strong person.

2. After reading Shang Yun, I have a feeling that the 350-word book Shang Yun in Grade Five tells the story of a big family in Sichuan.

Shang Yun is the protagonist of this book. There are many people in their big family: elegant and exquisite grandmother, gentle and considerate mother-in-law, naughty brother Zhou Tianjiao of my uncle's family, and perfect cousin Mao Mao of my aunt's family. On grandma's ninety-fifth birthday, Zhou Tianjiao broke grandma's favorite flowerpot, which was already unpleasant.

It happened that my cousin Mao Mao's father didn't come home. I guess: Is something wrong? Still in a hurry? Or a series of ideas popped out of my mind. Finally, my uncle came back, but no one thought that my uncle, who is usually honest and trustworthy, actually became a thief! When everyone was trying to calm all this down, a more powerful natural disaster suddenly came.

At that time, they were having a Chinese class with Teacher Xie. Suddenly, a big earthquake shook. Teacher Xie tried to rescue He Xinxin, but when she woke up, she found herself crushed in the ruins, and Teacher Xie was flattened. Shang Yun took the initiative to help and comfort her heart when she was trapped; Sun can take the initiative to save his partner when he is injured. Mao Mao's left leg was amputated under the special conditions of local medicine, and there was not a tear during the operation. When I read this, I couldn't help crying.

In life, I feel deeply guilty. When I was a child, I accidentally fell and cried loudly. However, the compatriots crushed by Shi Zhuan insist that their pain is unimaginable and I will be as strong as them in the future! This book impressed me deeply, and I realized that I must become stronger.

3. Introduction of Shang Yun. Brief introduction of Shang Yun: Qin Wenjun, the author of Shang Yun, was published by Feng Chun Literature and Art Publishing House on May 6, 2009 at 5438+0.

Content introduction: elegant, elegant, sensible, delicate and tender, my uncle's naughty, domineering and manly brother Zhou Tianjiao, my aunt's competitive and perfect cousin Mao Mao ... This is Shang Yun's family in Dujiangyan. On grandma's ninety-fifth birthday, Zhou Tianjiao broke grandma's favorite flowerpot, which made people very uncomfortable. It happened that my uncle didn't come back, but suddenly he became a thief when he finally came back.

When everyone was trying to calm all this down, a bigger natural disaster suddenly happened. At that time, they were having a Chinese class with Teacher Xie, and they all liked Teacher Xie very much.

But in his class, suddenly a big earthquake shook. Teacher Xie tried to rescue He Xinxin, but when she woke up, she found herself crushed in the ruins, and her heart was crushed under the stone.

Earthquake! This story made us burst into tears, of course, because of sadness and pain, but it was also moved by the brilliance of human nature before the disaster. Not only the adults reacted strongly, but also the children showed such courage and fearlessness. In order to deeply remember those relatives and friends who have left, to encourage those who have survived but need to face bravely, to be warm, to be bright, and to keep coming in the new year … Let's work together! About the author: Qin Wenjun, born in Shanghai, 1954, is a children's literature writer. He is currently the vice chairman of Shanghai Writers Association, a member of the National Committee of Chinese Writers Association, and the editor-in-chief of China Children's Literature.

He has published more than 6 million words, including more than 50 works, such as Biography of Gary the Boy, Biography of Jim the Girl, Baby in Charge, Psychological History of a Girl, Naughty Days, Escape, Little Girl Lin Xiaomei, Little Sweet Goo Series and Dancing Sunflowers. His works have won more than 50 awards at home and abroad, 10 has been adapted into film and television dramas, more than 10 works have been included in Chinese textbooks for primary and secondary schools, and more than 10 works have been published in Japanese, English, German, Korean and Dutch.

4. Composition "White Lotus" has a flower representing purity and solemnity in the plant kingdom. It has beautiful and delicate flowers, and its slender body is like a slim woman. The petals curl slightly downward, forming a beautiful lily.

I remember it was a Sunday. I ran in the community in the morning as usual, and I came across a lily with erect plants and leaves like bamboo. I crouched down and carefully observed the flawless "cloud". The fresh leaves are green and the white flowers are tender. This is the first time for me to stare at and appreciate a bunch of lilies so closely.

I forgot to continue running in the morning, so I went online to find information as soon as I got home.

Actually, Lily was born in China. As early as the 4th century A.D., people only regarded lily as a medicine for moistening lung and relieving cough, calming the heart and calming the nerves, preventing beauty beauty and preventing cancer. China's lilies have spread all over the world, and they are also deeply loved by people. By the12nd century, Chile also positioned lily as the national flower, inspiring people to struggle for national independence and economic prosperity.

Pure lily also has a very mythical legend.

Adam and Eve were lured by snakes to eat the forbidden fruit and then expelled from the Garden of Eden. Eve couldn't help leaving sad tears when she regretted it, and the tears turned into white and fragrant lilies after landing.

I came to my senses and ran downstairs to find Lily. .

Look! It is bathed in sunshine and swaying with the wind. Its delicate petals, graceful shape, like a fairy dancing in the closed moon. It is noble, elegant and graceful, but those flowers and bones that are in bud are shyly lowering their heads, as if they were a shy girl, hiding their faces and smiling.

In fact, everyone has a flower seed in his heart, and every flower seed can grow a pure lily. The land of the soul is moist and fertile. As long as you are willing to pay, sweat can always water beautiful lilies. A little too much, 1! !

5. Shang Yun's thoughts on reading. How to write Shang Yun's feeling after reading is not bitter cold, but how to get plum blossom fragrance.

May 2008 12 is a bitter cold day, accompanied by a little sweetness in the bitter cold fragrance, which is the firm belief of children. The novel Shang Yun evokes readers' memories of the past with the experience of a child.

The novel "Shang Yun" tells the story of a little girl's family named Shang Yun, which is revived after a series of setbacks and unfortunate natural disasters. After reading this book, I can't help but be moved by the heroic performance of children in the face of major disasters. Two plots in the book are still fresh in my memory.

One is the story of Mao Mao, Shang Yun's elder sister. After the earthquake, her limbs were buried in the ruins, but she had to undergo amputation. As we all know, amputation is unacceptable to a normal person, not to mention that Mao Mao is a very strong girl.

In my opinion, when Mao Mao resolutely chose to amputate her leg, she relentlessly declared the disillusionment of her dream to herself. However, at that moment, she stubbornly said "no!" With her immature voice till death do us part. She knows that her life belongs not only to herself, but also to all those who care about her. While she is responsible for her own life, she is also responsible for all those who have paid for her. Although she is only a child, she already knows her responsibility. The second is the experience of Shang Yun, who refused to receive treatment for some time after the earthquake.

This coincides with the adult world's view of children, but adults only know one thing and don't know another. They didn't realize the child's strong will. Children are like springs. The greater the repressed power, the greater their rising energy. Shang Yun's final choice lived up to expectations, but it also surprised some stubborn adults. Although the pain is still very strong, in order to eliminate the pain and get a new life, Shang Yun finally decided to be reborn like a phoenix nirvana and receive treatment.

Her choice gave a satisfactory answer to all walks of life, and also gave a blow to stubborn adults, making them re-examine whether what they did to their children was right or wrong, and mistakes were indeed a huge whirlpool, which destroyed the youth of generations. Shang Yun used her story to explain to readers what is will and what is children's will.

Both plots let us see the children's iron belief that our teenagers are not as fragile as some parents think. Faith is the flame in every teenager's heart. It can dispel darkness and bring light, it can dispel cold and bring warmth, and it can dispel loss and bring hope.

Sometimes parents' doting will make children lose the opportunity to exercise, but it doesn't help much once or twice. Children spend too much time with their parents, and thousands of opportunities are lost, which makes the ability of such children different from that of sports children. However, 2 1 century is the most special era in China society, and we young people have to bear the responsibility of turning a developing country into a developed country. Facts have proved that our young people are conscientious in the face of responsibilities, while children without practical ability always want to do well before major construction tasks, but they are unable to do so. They can only hold back the society and live no better than children who have exercise. As parents, most of them don't want to see such a result, but how to avoid the tragedy? Qin Wenjun has clearly told parents the answer in Shang Yun, that is, children in China are fully capable of facing difficulties and overcoming setbacks. What parents can do is to provide their children with more exercise opportunities and clever tips when they need themselves most, so as not to make them dependent, and to ensure that their children will not become victorious generals in the fierce battlefield of 2 1 century because of their parents' factors.

Every child is good steel that can be cast. Whether a good sword can be cast depends on the sword maker, and parents are the sword makers. Roman Roland said: "The most terrible enemy is that there is no firm belief."

And this strong belief is born to everyone, just waiting for the right time to wake up. When faith is awakened, it will become an infinite source of strength. The children's performance before the disaster is the best embodiment.

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6.400-word composition describes clouds looking up at the sky. Beautiful clouds flying in the air will make my mood as relaxed as clouds.

Clouds in the sky are varied and varied; If you are not careful, it will become another cloud that you can't find. It moves slowly, sometimes like a dragon, sometimes like a crocodile with a big mouth, and sometimes like a luxury car you have never seen before. ...

Look! The nearest cloud seems to be a beautiful angel. She looked at me as if inviting me to be a guest. Look again, the clouds on the distant horizon have different shapes and unusual characteristics. The color of the clouds on the horizon is very light, just like all the clouds are gathered there and paved. There is a cloud that looks like a white palace. There are many small islands around the palace. It seems to have laid a carpet for me, and it seems to want me to pass.

Sunset clouds are beautiful, different from daytime clouds. But people expect it to appear at night. Because there is a folk proverb, "burn yin early, and burn sunny later." It means there is a flaming cloud in the morning, which means it is cloudy. If there is a fiery red cloud at night, it means it will be sunny tomorrow, so people expect it to appear at night.

I carefully observed the shape of the burning cloud. It's orange. This dark color almost renders half the sky. It's very nice. Look carefully again, its color changed from light yellow to orange, blending with the color of the sky, just like watercolor painting in art.

When it was dark that day, the sky was completely dark, and there was no cloud in sight, only countless little stars were flashing. The bright moon is in the sky, illuminating the way for pedestrians.

Clouds, beautiful clouds and white clouds float from one side of the sky to the other with thousands of gestures.

Not long ago, a scholar told me: "If someone looks up at the sky with rapt attention, that person must be very lonely. Only when he looks up at the clouds in the sky will all his troubles disappear without a trace. " I firmly believe this sentence, whenever I am lonely, I will look up at the sky. Really, as the scholar said, all my troubles have disappeared.

Looking up at the sky, the clouds are moving, which will make my mood flutter with the clouds. ...

7. How to write Yun's composition? The problem has been solved. Collect and reprint an essay describing the cloud in QQ space [tag: descriptive essay, descriptive essay] Question supplement 2009-02-1 3: 25 200 ~ 300 words Anonymous answer:1popularity: 1342 Solution time: 2009. So I began to observe the clouds in the sky carefully.

The clouds in the sky are ever-changing, just a kitten, and when the wind blows, it becomes a puppy. After a while, a harmonious family appeared in the sky. Suddenly, a flock of pigeons flew over the sky, and in an instant, the sky was completely new. I watched the changes of the clouds carefully. But the sky just won't let me see all the changes of clouds clearly. I watched this cloud change from a bunch to two or three bunches of flowers, and the clouds over there changed from a kitten to a bird, and they became numerous and fast, which made me dizzying. Look! The clouds have changed again. This time it has become parks, trees, football, mountains, children, schoolbags, pianos, computers, cities, buildings, cars and so on. But in the blink of an eye, it was nothing. It's always changing.

Slowly, the sunset glow reflected from the horizon, wow! Whether the sunset glow can come out or not is another scene. In an instant, the sky turned red and the clouds turned red, as if the ever-changing clouds were burning. Clouds are red, lambs are red, grass is red, and lights, books, lions, apples, athletes and playgrounds are red. The sky seems to be a red world, which is also reflected in it.

After a while, the setting sun gradually receded and the sky gradually darkened. I am still looking forward to the west, looking forward to the ever-changing clouds of tomorrow. When I got home, I wrote this beautiful scene in my diary so that I could write it down. I still remember it vividly until now.

Guanyun

The mountain city of Chongqing is known as the "foggy city". The sky is gray and there are few white clouds against the blue sky, but the clouds we saw when we traveled in Zhongdian, Yunnan Province were not like this.

On that day, our family traveled to Zhongdian. When I was on the plane, I curiously put my head in front of the window. When I saw it, I couldn't help shouting, "Wow! It's so beautiful! " Outside the porthole, the clouds are layered like endless peaks. Some of these mountains are high, some are low, some are steep, some are gentle ... Except for the different colors, these "Yunfeng" are almost the same as real peaks. After a while, the peak disappeared and became a little man, as if waving to us and welcoming us. After a while, the sun came out and shone on the clouds. I suddenly feel shrouded in a wonderful scenery-at this moment, all the clouds seem to be dressed in golden clothes, and they become radiant and emit thousands of golden lights. Clouds seem to have gilded the sun and become extremely beautiful. I feel like I have become a fairy in a smoky heavenly palace. All this, like a dream, appeared before my eyes.

When I got off the plane, I began to observe the clouds in Zhongdian.

At this time, the sky is blue, like a huge sapphire, the cloud seems to be sapphire, and the cloud seems to have been washed. It is white and white without any stains. These clouds change shape from time to time, as if to show you that he is the embodiment of everything. At first, it looked like a good horse eating grass. Later, when the wind blew, the good horse turned into a rabbit. Soon, the rabbit disappeared into the clouds and a hunter appeared. I thought: This hunter is probably looking for the rabbit. Later, the cloud became a deer, a plane and a farmer. Cloud is really like a magician. He can change at will. No wonder the poet came to the ancient lake and said, "Everything is still empty, and Wan Li's hidden mountains are heavy"!

Cloud, this ever-changing elf, I like it!