Figure photography in autumn rain environment

People's education edition Chinese ninth grade first volume

Unit 1 About Rain

I am a happy and quiet rain. I fell from the sky, accompanied by my cheerful footsteps, flowers and plants rippled with intoxicating smiles; With the natural fresh air, I gently pressed my gentle chest against the ground and melted it in the soil. "I am coming, and I will not go back when I come." I tell you with my clever voice, strange body and clear heart. I wonder if you have read my heart song-rain?

Listen to my footsteps.

The sound of rain you hear is actually the sound of my life beating the world. I am dripping water between eaves, flowers and trees, rivers and lakes. Different percussion sounds are mixed together to form a poem with the most sentimental flavor. You are not familiar with this poem, because you may not have developed a pair of ears that are good at listening to nature and are not used to reading natural poems with your heart. So please calm down and close your eyes. In the summer afternoon, in the cool autumn night, in the dense and quiet bamboo forest, in the long and lonely alley, listen to my slender footsteps and my deep breathing ... Then, describe to others the most touching rain you heard or remembered, and tell them what kind of environment and mood you heard me in. You can also use the tape recorder to leave the same unwanted footsteps and describe them while playing.

Second, talk about my advantages and disadvantages.

Since ancient times, people have always talked about me with mixed feelings. When there is little rain, I am an angel that people eagerly look forward to, hoping that I can come as scheduled; When it rained, I became the chief culprit of the flood disaster. People were afraid that I would flood and destroy bridges and farmland, so they built dams and dikes. Please check the information, give me a few "charges" and briefly explain the reasons, so that I can convince myself and correct my shortcomings.

Third, read my charm.

"I am a sigh of the sea, a tear in the sky and a smile in the field." I not only watered the seedlings and cleaned the dust, but also infiltrated the passion of Chinese and foreign scholars and hackers all the time. So my figure appears repeatedly in various literary works. Although the artistic conception of these works is different, the writers all regard me as a powerful help to set off the atmosphere and express their feelings. Please find some good works to write about rain scenes and express rain feelings, hold a poetry reading meeting with music in the class (with poems or TV pictures if possible), and then sum up what feelings writers often pin on me. Which of these feelings resonates with you the most? Only by answering the same question can you really understand me-the heart of rain.

In different seasons, there will be completely different feelings. Please choose me in a season as the description object, seize a prominent feeling that brings you, and write a lyric article.

In a specific article, scenery, images and lyricism are often combined. Because scenery and objects are inseparable from lyricism, and lyricism often needs the help of scenery and objects. This is the so-called "all scenery words are sentimental words" and "lyric by scenery". For example, the Book of Songs sings in a tone of guarding the border and recruiting people: "I have been there, Liu Yiyi. Today I think it's raining. " The scene of a recruiter returning to his hometown in the continuous rain may be realistic, but the "rain and snow" here clearly reflects the gloomy mood of the recruiter returning to his hometown in the next year, and everything is "different".

Of course, in a specific article, scenery, images and lyricism can sometimes be emphasized according to their different tendencies: or scenery is the main content, and lyricism is just a feeling projected on the specific scenery, that is, while describing the scenery, the author not only respects the characteristics of the scenery written, but also takes into account the subjective feelings of "I" here and now. For example, the spring rain picture depicted in Zhu Ziqing's Spring. It not only describes the characteristics of the continuous spring rain in the south of the Yangtze River, but also shows the idyllic mood of Jiang Nanyu, which is the author's subjective feeling between the lines. Or to express some feelings as the main line, the scenery is just an analogy and symbol of sustenance. For example, the rain theory in this unit; Similarly, Qiu Jin wrote in prison that "autumn wind and autumn rain make wicked people". The "autumn wind and autumn rain" here actually symbolizes the stormy social environment at that time, so he is "a person who worries about evil." The following students practice "listening to the sound of rain" to reflect on the characteristics of spring rain. There are also many articles that combine the two very well. For example, in Zong Pu's "Wisteria Falls", before "borrowing scenery to express feelings", a lot of emotional brushstrokes were used to write the scenery, and the description of the scenery was meticulous and vivid, and the last lyric discussion became the finishing touch.

So how can we make good use of these two methods in specific writing? The key of the former is to convey feelings with things. When describing a scene, we should grasp the characteristics of the scene, write with emotion and eyes. How to do this? You should add your own feelings between the lines, use rhetorical devices and expression verbs, and write these feelings properly in language, so as to be vivid. Rather than saying that "the spring rain is abundant, thin and dense", it is better to say that "it is as needle, as silk, as cow hair" as Mr. Zhu Ziqing did. Rather than saying "the spring rain soaked me", it is better to write in the following article by Roland: "Jump in the soft and cool rain and let it wash and soothe your head and neck, as well as your naked back." The key of the latter is to look at things and think rationally. How to do this? Learn to speculate and associate this speculation. For example, Zhang Xiaofeng's observation of "standing on a dusty reed street tree in the city" is associated with dedication; Zong Pu realized before the wisteria fall that "flowers and people will encounter all kinds of misfortunes, but the long river of life is endless". Through the observation of flowers, he expressed his thoughts on life; Another example is the following little author, who thinks about the tenacity of the spring rain and thinks that don't be discouraged in the face of small setbacks, and the article has a deeper center.

How to describe the scenery

First, we should grasp the characteristics of scenery when writing about it. It is also a mountain, Huangshan is different from Lushan, and Taishan is different from Huashan; It is also water, and rivers, lakes and seas are different. Therefore, to write about the characteristics of the landscape, we must not be stereotyped.

Second, when writing a scene, we should grasp the color of the scene. Color plays an important role in the characteristics of scenery. Different scenery has different colors, and the same scenery has different colors at different times. The same maple tree is light green in spring, dark green in summer, fiery red in autumn and crystal clear in winter.

Third, write the dynamic and static characteristics of the scene. Flowing clouds, sunrise, sunset and high tide are ever-changing. Even the mountains and buildings change with the change of our observation position and angle. Everything is dynamic and static, static and dynamic, and dynamic and static are inseparable. When writing a composition, we should also pay attention to the combination of static and dynamic, so that the article written can be infectious.

Fourth, write scenes and feelings, and the scenes blend. Landscape description and emotional description are the two pillars of writing landscape articles. To describe a scene, we should inject emotional color, project subjective feelings on the scene, and write what we see in a specific mood. Any good scene description is the feeling of the soul and the sublimation of the thought.

[Theme Collection]

1, listening to the rain

2. In the rain (in the rain)

Rainy days remind me of. ...

4. Write an explanatory article on the topic "The formation of rain (there is a cloud made of rain in the air)".

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Question 3:

If you write a narrative in this essay, you can dilute the narrative part, and rain should appear as the main carrier. It is best to describe the scenery with rain as the main part throughout the whole text, and organically integrate it with stories and characterization: to contrast the emotions of characters or promote the development of plots. Don't treat "rain" as a mechanical scene and stick it on the story like a label. The story written has no organic connection with the rain, giving people the feeling of wearing boots and hats. Let the rain scene become an indispensable part of the story. Only in this way can we dilute the writer's narrative and make the article beautiful in artistic conception and deep in feelings. Therefore, in language expression, the scenery should be fresh and elegant; If there is a dialogue, it should be concise, meaningful and lyrical.

Question 5:

In Zhu Ziqing's prose "Spring", there is a passage about spring rain, which you may remember. The scenery in the rain is written delicately and vividly, giving people the feeling that it is an elegant ink landscape, and it is a very distinctive "Spring Rain Map in the South of the Yangtze River". The key to this topic is here: we should grasp the "outstanding feeling" of "one season", grasp the characteristics of the scenery, and write a real and unique sensory experience. We should learn to discover and perceive the characteristics of the scene from many angles and sides in observation. When observing and perceiving, we can make some association and imagination from one place to another. Then use rhetoric and expression verbs to express your feelings about the scenery. The content should also write about people's activities, the rainy scene in front of them, and the scenes before and after the rain. Conceptually, you can use things to express your feelings.

Excellent composition of the 2008 senior high school entrance examination: Yu Xia.

Nanjing No.29 Junior High School No.1 (5) Ban Dingrong

The dog days in Nanjing really make people feel the heat of the stove, but the summer rain these days also makes people feel hearty and happy. During the day, the sun is shining, the sky is clear and the sun is scorching in Wan Li. At night, it began to rain cats and dogs, and the thunder rumbled, which made people feel creepy. However, whether it rains or not, it washes away the dirt of nature, people's inner irritability and the hot weather, bringing purity, freshness and refreshment.

I stood at the window, watching the rain. The rain hit the windows, the awning and the ground. You can't see the green hills and trees not far from the other side through the window. Open the window, take a breath, and waves of fresh and cool air come to the nose, which is refreshing.

The rain is getting smaller and smaller. Looking at the people holding umbrellas outside the window, I can't help but gently push open the door, hold up a small umbrella and stroll in this quiet and beautiful campus of Agricultural University. Mom says there are many negative ions in rainy days, so you just have a fever. Just go out for a walk. Looking at the roadside, flowers and plants seem to have not drunk water for a long time, sucking the nectar brought to them by nature. The originally dirty window was cleaned by this sudden heavy rain, and the person who was going to wash the car also saved himself a sum of money. "Ha ha ha ....." Suddenly there was an old man's hearty laughter behind him-everyone was in a good mood when the heat disappeared!

It will clear up naturally after the rain. The sun, which just "failed" once, probably won't give up again. It bounced back and gave off a golden light, which passed through the clouds and appeared in the sky. At this time, the clear water, green mountains and blue sky, including me, are all integrated.

It's sunny again ...

In 2008, Xiamen City, Fujian Province, got full marks in the composition "Reading Rain is Really Interesting".

Whether it is drizzly spring rain, magnificent summer rain, chilly autumn rain, freezing winter rain. I just want to spend time reading Rain. ...

Reading rain is very interesting. Throughout the ages, rain has moistened the hearts of many literati. From the poems about rain, I realized the beauty of rain. In Han Yu's "The rain in the sky is as slippery as crisp, and the grass nearby is nothing", the rain is as slippery as cream; In Du Fu's "sneaking into the night with the wind, moistening things silently", the rain is faint and beautiful; I lamented that Su Shi's Fighting Rain in the Mountains was beautiful in the rain. I also lamented the gentle and natural spring rain in Mr. Zhu Ziqing's Spring, like ox hair and flower needles.

Holding a book, holding a cup of tea and reading a book, you will find reading rain interesting. The light rain in early spring with a little chill is continuous. The soil at the foot is moist as cream, and the white apricot flowers tremble in the wind, stained with dew, and exude a refreshing fragrance. "If you want to wet apricot flowers and rain, you don't feel the dark flowers." Yes, reading rain is very interesting. I read the beauty of scenery and Zhinan's love and appreciation of nature in the rain in early spring.

Watch the rain and taste the beautiful scenery. Candle lights up, and the air is filled with fresh and moist breath. "Sneak into the night with the wind and moisten things silently." So the spirit of nature came to the world silently, washed away all the turbidity and nourished everything. Reading rain is interesting, because you can read the light posture of rain.

I took my eyes off the book and looked at the rain outside the window. Whenever I watch the rain, I always think of my hometown. Whenever the rain sounds, I always miss the sight of green hills looming in the rain. Ah, rain is elegant. At first glance, the whole town became particularly beautiful, as if covered with a layer of gauze, and people fell asleep peacefully in the rhythmic rhythm of the rain. Every time I think about it, my heart always trembles slightly. Perhaps this is the beautiful rain that touches my heartstrings! Watch it again. My hometown was wet with rain, and those ancient and faint alleys and buildings that were silent in the rain made me feel kind, homesick and slightly happy. Unconsciously, the rain melted into my life. Reading rain, let me taste life, let me feel life with a delicate heart full of sincere feelings, and look for fun.

In books and in life, I would like to watch the rain from the west window alone. Reading rain is very interesting. I appreciate the beauty and interest of rain and taste life. ...

chippy

The spring rain kept falling, and the thin rain silk woven into a huge net, hanging from the clouds to the ground. The dark mountain in the distance, the pink peach blossom nearby, the green poplar and the soft willow branches are all shrouded in this boundless net. This net is a gauze skillfully woven by Miss Chun, covering the sky and the sun.

Listen! The rain dripped on the roof, just like percussion. When the pond rains, it sings "Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin ..

Raindrops, like broken beads, drop by drop fall on the puddle formed by rain. The spring rain dyed the mountains green; Dye the water green and the stone road green.

Naughty raindrops in summer rain hit the river like steel balls thrown by someone, splashing high; Thick raindrops hit people's windows hard.

It's raining, and the rain is beating against the window. Countless drops of water, large and small, immediately gathered on the outward window glass.

When raindrops fall into the pool, they draw notes on the water. These notes are circles formed by raindrops on the water.

In summer, it rains cats and dogs. The raindrops in the sky fell straight like sifting beans, breaking the mirror-like lake and scaring away the small fish who wanted to jump on the water to see the rain scene.

It is raining harder and harder. Looking into the distance, there seems to be a gray curtain covering the line of sight. Gray, trees and houses, can't see anything.

The sky washed by autumn rain is as blue as the sea. Clouds of white clouds float slowly on the water like canoes sailing.

The autumn rain is falling and fluttering. As silk, as silk, as fog, as smoke. Cool silk falls on the face and flows into the mouth, sweet, like rice wine and honey, intoxicating, dreamy and infatuated.

The rain in the sky is floating a little, like fine sand flying all over the sky; It brings a hope to the green things on the earth, moistens the leaves, brings a pleasant taste to the ducks in the pond, and looks for the mystery of autumn. Autumn rain swished down. Fine rain threads weave a gray curtain between heaven and earth. Rain, like thousands of silver wires, floated down from the sky. The drizzle is falling quietly, like the silver thread spit out by countless silkworm mothers. Thousands of filaments, rippling in mid-air, are fascinated by long veils, covering black fields. Dark clouds rolled in the sky and it rained cats and dogs in an instant.

Silky light rain fell from the sky, the raindrops were so small and the rain curtain was so dense that the mountains were covered with a layer of white gauze, like cicadas. The rain is fine and cotton, like catkins floating in spring time and space. Rain like fog, fog like rain, lingering. In an instant, raindrops became lines, and with a bang, heavy rain fell from the sky like the sky collapsed. There was a light rain in the morning. Although it has cleared up now, the road is still very slippery. Autumn crops in the fields on both sides were washed away by rain, pearls were crystal clear, and the air was fresh and humid.

Rain is a natural phenomenon in the atmosphere. They are closely related to us humans, and animals and plants cannot do without them. Observing and understanding rain can increase our understanding of nature and learn to describe rain, which is part of the basic training of composition. Rain is unpredictable, how to observe it? How to describe it?

Pay attention to three points:

The first is to grasp the characteristics. Rain varies with time, season and region. Spring rain and autumn rain, rain and rainstorm in Mao Mao have their own merits. So when we observe and describe the rain, we should pay attention to its characteristics.

For example, the following paragraph:

I don't know when it began to rain. Rain is as light and thin as spun silk. I can't hear the sound of drifting away, nor can I feel the sound of rain dripping. I just feel as if this is a kind of wet smoke, which has no shape and noise and gently moistens the earth and people's hearts.

The sky was clear and the sun was shining in Wan Li just now. Suddenly, a strong wind blew on the ground, and dark clouds immediately filled the sky. The rain began to tick. A few drops at first. Soon, raindrops fell in strings, and the whole world was white. The mountains in the distance, even the trees and houses not too far away are out of sight. Raindrops as big as beans fell into the river, splashing countless ripples. Rain rushed into the window screen, knocked on the glass, splashed into the windowsill from the window gap, and flowed to the floor in the house. The heat and boredom just now were washed away by the wind and heavy rain.

The above two examples are all about rain. The first paragraph is about spring rain, and the author grasps the characteristics of spring rain, giving people a gentle and cordial feeling. The second paragraph describes a sudden rain, in the order of "before rain", "during rain" and "after rain", and describes the characteristics of a sudden storm.

The second is to grasp change. Rain is unpredictable. When observing and describing them, we should pay attention to capturing their dynamics and changes. Make the description dynamic, true and vivid. Please look at the following example:

It rained for a while, then weakened and became a faint and silent rain in Mao Mao, but it never stopped. Gray clouds are floating behind the roof, so dense that you can't see a blue sky.

Rain falls from eaves, walls and tree tops, spreads out in the yard, bubbles like boiling, and rolls out along the crack of the door and the ditch; The water from thousands of courtyards gathered together and became a torrent in the street, passing through corners, roots and dung piles and heading for Jinquan River in the west of the village.

The first example describes the change of rain when it rains: one minute, big drops hit the ground, and the next minute, it becomes a silent drizzle. The second example describes the dynamics of rain: falling from the eaves → spreading in the yard → bubbling → rolling out → merging together → becoming a torrent → rushing to Jinquan River. According to the flow direction of rainwater, it is described in order and written in detail.

The dew on the lotus leaf has been rippling there by the vibration of the breeze, and sometimes Sophora japonica falls on the lotus leaf, and the dew inside jumps vigorously.

In this article, two verbs "ripple" and "jump" are used to describe the dewdrop's dynamic, vivid and lifelike, which makes dewdrop's life.

The third is to grasp the background. Rain does not exist in isolation. They are closely related and interdependent with other natural phenomena. When observing and describing the rain, we must pay attention to observing and describing the surrounding scenery as a foil to the rain. Only in this way can the content be vivid and colorful. Please look at the following example:

Rain falls gently on campus, like a beautiful girl, covered with a faint white gauze, floating and floating. That little flower, after being moistened by rain, its petals float lightly in the water like fragments of boating.

Random thoughts of rain

Author: Wang Guozhen

Sometimes, it is raining outside, but the sun is shining in my heart; Sometimes, it is sunny outside, but it is raining. There are many things in the world for you to taste in comparison. The heart is clear, and the rain is clear; When the heart is raining, sunny is also rain.

However, no matter what kind of story, it will be unforgettable when it rains. Rain has a magic power; It can diffuse into a mood, penetrate into an atmosphere and be engraved into a memory. Of course, sometimes it can be a disaster.

Sandstorms in spring, boredom in summer and dryness in autumn all make people pray for rain. A rain can also make the air fresher and the streets brighter. "Spring rain is as expensive as oil", and it is not just farmers who are eager for rain.

When it rains, there is neither sun nor moon, but people don't think so. Maybe it's because the rainy season is not too cold, so it's good to let the sun cool for a while. Rainy nights have another charm that moonlit nights don't have. Sometimes people can't help but think of Li Shangyin's famous sentence: "Why not cut the candle at the west window together and just talk about the evening rain?"

Walking in the light rain is more pleasant. Listening to the rustling sound when the rain gently hits the broad leaves of Populus davidiana or Platanus acerifolia, the beauty that moistens the bottom of my heart is incomparable even to the elegant melody of "autumn whisper" flowing under Richard Clyde's piano. Nature's uncanny workmanship is really unparalleled.

A couple walking in an alley, the scene is very ordinary. But on rainy days, holding a light blue umbrella in your hand and wearing a beige trench coat, the effect is completely different. At first glance, Youth in the Rain is an enduring picture.

In the north, there are not many rainy days 365 days a year. So if there is rain like poetry or poetry like rain every day, it will be wonderful.