What can be compared with writing a composition?

1. What is comparison? Contrast is a figure of speech that compares contradictory things together.

Contrast can intercept two different things or two different aspects of the same thing. Through the comparison between the two, the beauty and ugliness of the image are more distinct, the characteristics of both sides are more obvious, the advantages and disadvantages are more profound, and the contradictions are more acute. Contrast, from the content, there are two kinds of contrast, one-on-one comparison and two-on-one comparison.

The contrast between two bodies is to compare and compare two opposing figures and two things together. Some people are alive and he is dead; Some people died, and he is still alive.

(Cang Kejia, Some People) A fighter with shortcomings is a fighter after all, and a perfect fly is just a fly. (Lu Xun's Soldiers and Flies) These two cases are the contrast of two characters.

Through comparison and comparison, it is more obvious that Mr. Lu Xun is great and the reactionary ruler is small, which can arouse our feelings of love and hate. Through comparison and comparison, we affirmed and praised the revolutionary fighters who adhered to the truth, and denied and rebuked the reactionary slaves who slandered the revolution.

Another example is: 3 Zhumen wine stinks, and the road has frozen bones. (Du Fu's "From Beijing to Fengxian to recite 500 words") 4 A cart of charcoal, more than a thousand Jin, will be cherished by the palace envoys.

Half horse red and full of silk, full of charcoal straight to the cow's head (Bai Juyi's The Charcoal Man) These two cases are the contrast of two things.

Example 3 expresses the poet's anger at the ruler's extravagant demands and sympathy for the people's tragic experiences through comparison; It shows us the sharp class contradiction and opposition in feudal society. For example (4), "a car full of charcoal, more than a thousand Jin" shows that there are many materials, and "half a horse is a foot of silk" shows that it is of little value. The comparison between them reveals the predatory nature of the court market and shows the poet's sympathy for the sufferings of the people.

Double-sided comparison is to compare and contrast the opposite or opposite sides of a thing together. For example, these people have Marxism and liberalism: they talk about Marxism and practice liberalism; Marxism for the people; Be tolerant of yourself.

He rubbed his hand on Bao Xiao's "monk's head", and his old heart, numb by poverty, became furious and gave birth to new hope. (Mao Dun's "Spring Silkworm") 3 Our soldiers are so cruel to the enemy, but they love the people of Hanxian so much, and they are full of deep internationalist feelings.

(Wei Wei, "Who is the cutest person") (4) From the perspective of assuming the main leadership responsibility, if there are 100 to 200 people in our party who systematically study Comrade Marxism–Leninism, it will greatly improve our party's combat effectiveness ... (* * * China's position in the national war) These examples, example ① very specifically criticize the dual nature of liberals; (2) highlighting "new hope" with an "old" mentality; Example (3) Raise two diametrically opposite attitudes of volunteer soldiers and praise our soldiers for their clear love and hate; Compared with the two opposing concepts of "system" and "piecemeal" and "reality" and "emptiness", the negative and positive aspects make the viewpoint more distinct and more prominent. According to the structural standard and referring to the traditional classification, comparison can be divided into two categories: average ratio and difference ratio.

Pingbi refers to the equal and parallel comparison of two things, and often uses the coordinate sentence. For example, modesty makes people progress and pride makes people fall behind.

(* * * "Opening Speech of the Eighth National Congress of China") Today, we are as tame to the people as our mothers; Tomorrow, the invading enemy will be burned to ashes by harsh artillery fire! (Li Ying's Snowy Night) Example ① Comparing the different results of "modesty" and "pride" with compound sentence, the advantages and disadvantages are prominent. Example 2 The sentence pattern is the same. Through comparison, it is revealed that soldiers can only be harsh on the enemy if they are docile to the people. Let the two aspects of the warrior's personality be more distinct.

Contrast ratio: refers to the comparison of two things with different weights. In contrast, the party often adopts transitional sentences or progressive sentences.

For example: 3 bees are small; How noble bees are! (Yang Shuo's "Litchi Honey") 4 Peach Blossom Pond is deeper than thousands of feet's, but not as good as Wang Lun's (Li Bai's "For Wang Lun") 3 The comparison of "Zhuan Sentence" reveals the universal truth that honey's work and life seems to be "small" but actually "noble". Example 4 uses the relative word "less than" to express the difference ratio, emphasizing that the latter is deeper than the former.

To sum up, contrast and contrast are both related and different. Party A and Party B contrast and contrast at the same time, with Party A lining Party B and Party B lining Party A; The comparison between Party A and Party B also includes some comparison. Because they are related, some rhetorical works combine them as "contrast" or "contrast".

But the difference between contrast and contrast is obvious. ① As far as the status of Party A and Party B is concerned, generally speaking, there is no obvious distinction between primary and secondary. By comparison, the two complement each other and are more prominent.

The contrast between Party A and Party B is not half-to-half, but primary and secondary, with Party B lining Party A as the main body and Party B lining Party B, which makes the main body more prominent. This is the main difference between contrast and contrast.

(2) From the looming of A and B, both of them must appear when compared with B, otherwise the expression effect of black and white will not be achieved; On the other hand, when Party A and Party B set out, the lining must appear, while the main body is allowed to be hidden, so you can write this clearly, implying another, especially when the lining is quiet and the lining is dark, the main body often does not appear. (3) From the category of Party A and Party B, whenever Party A and Party B compare, they are either the same object or the same aspect, otherwise they are incomparable; As for Party A and Party B, they may belong to the same genus or different genera. For example, setting the landscape as the background means saying one thing, which means another.

Contrast and contrast are not only rhetorical methods, but also expressive methods of many arts, which are often used in drama, film, painting, photography, sculpture and music. If used properly, you can get good artistic effect.

2. Ask to write a short essay in a comparative way. There are several tall palm trees in our campus.

Seen from a distance, it looks like an open umbrella. Standing at its feet and looking up, it is straight up, up to four or five floors.

Its trunk is thick, straight and slender. The thickness of the trunk varies from top to bottom, and the middle part of the trunk is the thickest.

The upper and lower parts are thinner than the middle part. The most beautiful is the leaves of palm trees, which spread out like peacocks.

The leaves are very big, separated by small leaves, like Guanyin with a Thousand Hands, which is really interesting. Palm trees are full of vitality all year round.

Whether it is spring, summer, autumn and winter, it is so green and so high, as if soldiers are guarding our campus and accompanying us to learn and grow. In summer, the hot sun shines on the earth like a fireball. With the shelter of palm trees, we won't feel so hot when we play games under the trees and go to physical education class.

Sometimes children drag palm leaves and ride them to play. Really like a magician in a comic book. It was fun. When it rains, the leaves of palm trees become greener after being washed by rain, which adds a bit of greenery to the campus and makes our campus more beautiful.

Autumn wind is blowing, and the leaves of palm trees are swaying, like a little girl with green hair dancing happily. Also issued a "rustling, rustling ..." sound, like a little singer singing.

What a complete song and dance! Palm trees, you not only add a lot of beauty to the campus, but also bring laughter to the students. I like you-the tall palm tree.

In the political class, the teacher suddenly asked me, "What is your ideal?" I'm at a loss. I don't know how to answer this question at the moment. I once had my own ideals, starting from childhood.

I didn't know anything when I was a child. My mother asked me, "What is your ideal?" I opened my eyes wide and asked curiously, "What is an ideal?" My mother told me: "the ideal is what you want to be when you grow up."

For example, be an engineer who can draw design drawings, a worker who can produce parts, and an uncle who sells things ... "I thought for a while and said," I want to be a teacher because teachers can already take care of their students. "My mother was shocked by my answer. She told me, "Being a teacher is very hard. "

I said, "As long as I can be a teacher, being a teacher is the hardest. I am not afraid!" " "How time flies! In an instant, I grew up two years old. I went to school, but my grandmother got a cerebral hemorrhage. Since then, my ideal has become to be a doctor.

In the third grade, the teacher asked us to write our own ideals, so I wrote down my new ideal: to be a glorious people's teacher in the future. I often dream of becoming a doctor to relieve the pain of patients.

Dad told me, "It's not easy to be a doctor. You have to know a lot of knowledge to ... "But I stubbornly shouted: I want to be a doctor, I must be a doctor! "Suddenly, I grew taller, grew up, and became more sensible.

Entering middle school, I don't know how many times, the teacher talked about ideals and asked us to correctly understand ideals, fantasies and fantasies. I don't know when, I read a passage from Grandma Bing Xin: "The flower of success is often admired for its brilliance. However, at the beginning, its buds were soaked with tears of struggle and full of blood and rain of sacrifice. " Yes, the ideal is beautiful, but it needs to be realized from now on.

In order to realize his ideal, Zhang Guanghou studied hard with the spirit of "stupid birds fly first", devoted himself to mathematics with double time and energy, and finally became a famous young mathematician. This gave me a profound enlightenment.

I don't know when I started to correct the mistakes my mother told me. I began to understand the great significance of the ideal and stopped treating it as a joke.

Tolstoy, a famous Russian writer, said: "Ideal is the guiding light. Without ideals, there is no firm direction; Without direction, there is no life. "

I see: how much the ideal can promote a person's life. I began to think and seriously consider my ideal.

I think: if I want to be a painter when I grow up, then I will practice painting and calligraphy every day from now on, and I will be able to draw a beautiful picture of the reunification of the motherland in the future, and then write a beautiful couplet; If I want to be an engineer when I grow up, from now on, I will concentrate on learning knowledge and apply it to my work in the future; If I want to be a doctor when I grow up, then, from now on, I should know how to care and love others, so that I can take up the bounden duty of a doctor and save lives in the future. If I grow up ... well, I think: I want to choose the ideal I can achieve, and benefit the society, the motherland and the people in the future, and strive for the ideal from now on. Yes, when I grow up, I will consider my ideal from another new angle.

It's next to the house in my hometown in the country. There is a very large space for others to grow mahogany seedlings.

Mahogany is a special kind of tree. It is beautiful and straight. It was planted in the old forest farm and has grown into a forest several feet high. So when I saw that the saplings of mahogany only reached my knees, it was a little hard to believe my eyes.

The man who grows mahogany seedlings is a very tall man. When he bent down to plant trees, he felt like transplanting rice seedlings. He often comes to water the saplings after they are planted. Strangely, he comes here irregularly, once every three days, once every five days, and sometimes once every ten days. The amount of water is not certain, sometimes more water, sometimes less water.

When I lived in the country, I walked on the path next to mahogany saplings every day, and people who planted saplings occasionally went home for tea. Sometimes he comes in the morning, sometimes in the afternoon, and the time is not necessarily.

I'm getting more and more strange. Stranger still, redwood seedlings sometimes wither inexplicably.

So when he comes, he always brings a few seedlings to replant. At first, I thought he was too lazy to water the trees after such a long time.

But how do lazy people know how many trees will wither? Later, I thought he was too busy and everything was irregular. However, how can busy people do things so leisurely? I can't help asking him when he should come. How often do you water it? Why does redwood wither for no reason? If you water it every day, the redwood seedlings will not wither, will they? Tree planting machine.

3. Pupils had better start writing in grade one, usually in grade three. In the first grade, you can use that little English book to keep a diary of one sentence in Pinyin every day. That's what my teacher asked at that time. You can ask your parents to help you write Chinese characters. If your child can read, you can write Chinese characters yourself. Anything you want, it's better to be interesting and observed in life. It can mainly cultivate children's observation ability and sentence-making ability. You can also practice pinyin. When I was a sophomore, I could write a short diary in a few words every day, and I could use pictures. In order to cultivate your interest in writing, you can write a relatively complete composition in grade three, 200 words is the best. Remember the bits and pieces of life, pay attention to observation, and don't tie the child's unique imagination. You can try all kinds of styles. There are 300 words in grade four, 400 words in grade five and 500 words in grade six.

4. What are some beautiful words (for writing)? Midsummer night. Waves of gentle little north wind floated from Wanda Valley and swept Mudanjiang, blowing the fragrance in the orchard, the coolness on the river and the slightest waves into Longquan Town, Jiang Nanan. Gradually, the heat and noise in the town subsided. Poplars and weeping willows on the roadside, lilacs and begonia in the yard, all woke up from the drowsiness in the hot summer. The breeze rustled among the green leaves and the flowers floated quietly under the eaves. Everything is pleasant and quiet. The whole town lined up along the river, like a giant lying on his back, is using all its body and mind to feel the elegance of the evening breeze and enjoy the faint fragrance and moist coolness in the wind.

The May breeze, with the fragrance of Sophora japonica floating from the roadside, gently blows the cheeks and temples of passers-by, blows people's hearts and gently comforts them, just like the hands of a loving mother.

The wind is gentle, often because it blows from a forest full of flowers, bringing fragrance from afar, attaching to a moist vapor breath, rubbing your face and gently surrounding your shoulders and waist. This simple breathing is endless pleasure. ...

The mountain wind rolled pine trees, like the tide of the ocean, with a frightening sound, rolling from the lotus land in the distance, blowing cliffs and trees in waves, knocking on the partition wall and knocking on the door, making a terrible sound. Sometimes I give a shrill cry, just like a monster cruising outside the mountain.

The wind in Lushan Mountain naturally has no ash or dust. It caresses the skin of pedestrians, neither too hot nor too cold, a little cold, always like the autumn wind in the north. Especially when people walk in the forest, they can feel its softness, cleanliness, refreshing, refreshing and combing people's souls.

What a strong wind!

Just like a crazy man who lost his mind, he ran around in this wide yard. It sometimes rolls up the broken leaves of firewood on the ground, throws them east and west, flies high in the air and pushes them into the corner.

The old elm tree in front of the window was shaken by the wind, and the branches swept through the eaves, making a swish sound.

The beauty of autumn is mature-it is not as shy as spring, so open in summer and so introverted in winter.

The beauty of autumn is rational-it is not as charming as spring, so hot in summer and so subtle in winter.

Autumn, harvest season, golden season-as lovely as spring, as enthusiastic as summer, as charming as winter.

The autumn sunshine is warm and quiet, the autumn wind in Dongxiang is warm and gentle, and the blue sky and white clouds are elegant and melodious. On the vast sea, the wind gathered dark clouds. Between the dark clouds and the sea, Haiyan flies proudly like black lightning.

One moment its wings beat the waves, and the other moment it went straight into the dark clouds like an arrow. It cried-in the brave cry of birds, the dark clouds heard the joy.

In this cry-full of longing for the storm! In this cry, the dark clouds heard the power of anger, the flame of enthusiasm and the confidence of victory.

1 spring is really comfortable, and the scenery in spring is really beautiful!

This spring has given people new life and new hope. I like this beautiful spring.

Near, near, I heard the footsteps of spring, and everyone was reporting the arrival of spring. My whole heart floated out, floating on bright flowers and oily green grass.

The spring rain continued, sprinkled on the buttonwood tree in the yard. sasha vujacic gently plucked the strings like a musician, and quietly swallowed mulberry leaves like a silkworm baby. ...

5 oh! Spring rain, it turned out that you came to the earth with the spring girl, which filled the earth with vitality and fresh breath. Your dexterous hands touch people's heartstrings and draw people's beautiful hopes.

The defects of spring morning

In the morning, open the curtains and open the window. The breeze blew, and a fresh, fragrant and elegant earthy breath came to my face.

Spring comes so fast, quietly and unconsciously, the grass is green, the branches are sprouting, the wild flowers and rape flowers are blooming everywhere, and everything is bathed in the early morning light of spring, swaying and swaying in the spring breeze, just like a girl's light song and dance, which is very lovely.

Creatures wake up in the spring morning, showing the preciousness and temptation of life.

The spring morning touched the hope in my heart and inspired the enthusiasm of life.

At the moment, the natural world is so beautiful: bright sunshine shines everywhere, colorful colors are shown everywhere, sweet birds are singing everywhere, and intoxicating fragrance is floating everywhere. This is a green world, an ocean of flowers.

Everywhere there are people who go for an outing, the kindness and satisfaction of the elderly, the laughter of lovers and the innocent smile of children.

Suddenly understand: the beautiful spring is so beautiful because it makes people's mood bloom at this moment.

Continuous spring rain

Spring rain and spring thunder, with the spring breeze, came in one by one.

Spring rain is like silk, fog, smoke and tide. Through this thread, everything in the world is like a faint, foggy freehand painting, flickering.

I like spring rain, not only spring rain, but also the rainless world you created for me in this rainy season.

Spring is in the air

Spring is lively, spring is fanatical, spring is an attitude of growth, spring is young and energetic.

Spring is full of people's hard work. People sow their firm faith and eternal hope with their own hands, as well as their true love and selfless love.

1) Spring is coming! Look, the melting ice water woke up the stream. "Ding Dong Ding Dong", like a magical singer of nature, is singing crisp and sweet songs and rushing forward. ...

5. Write a composition by contrast, even if the score is the smallest, but … the other one is Yang Junjun, the best student in the class. By this time, she had answered all the questions on the test paper. This test paper seems a little too easy for her. She glanced at her watch and knew that there were still twenty minutes before winding time. So she looked bored at this classmate and then at that classmate. Suddenly, Yang Junjun's triumphant eyes fell on light light blue. She looked at light light blue with envy. She always thinks that light light blue is an underachiever in the class and her brain is not smart. This feeling reminds Jun Jun. ...

A few days ago, the math teacher copied a lot of difficult problems on the blackboard in order to make the students get an ideal score with greater confidence. When the teacher reached out his hands covered with chalk dust and sweat to wash, he found that there was no water in the washbasin and the towel was thrown aside. The old teacher couldn't help asking, "Who is on duty today?" Why not draw water? "On duty? Draw water? Oh! For this review, exam, review, exam, students have no time to spare, and they don't want to mind their own business. But Yang Junjun knows very well that today is her duty. She looked at the many exercises on the blackboard and glanced at the washbasin. She really hesitated for a moment: copying exercises or wasting time fetching water?

When Yang Junjun made up his mind, light light blue had put down his pen and left silently, with a washbasin in his hand, and walked to the door ... Yang Junjun, looking at the poor student silently, suddenly jumped in his heart.

6. What composition is easier to write? First of all, the narrative should be complete and clear.

The narrative of chronicle must clearly describe the time, place, people and the cause, process and result of the event. The beginning and end of the article should be taken care of.

Second, elaborate narrative structure.

The events in the article should be organized and arranged, how to start, how to change in the middle, how to divide into several paragraphs, and the sequence of events should be detailed and appropriate. In terms of structural arrangement, it is necessary to reflect the central idea of the article, reflect the development law and internal relations of events in a concentrated way, and have a rigorous, complete and symmetrical structure.

Third, pay attention to narrative methods.

Narrative writing should arrange narrative order to make the article clear, and three methods can be used: sequence, reverse order and interpolation. Consider which to write first and which to write later. In this way, the article will appear patchwork.

Fourth, describe the things in memory.

In composition practice, we can often see many students recalling their childhood and childhood. Remembering refers to rewriting what you have experienced before and showing it in an intuitive form.

When writing, you should choose what impresses you the most. They are usually educational, interesting and enlightening stories. Recall the whole process of what you wrote and form a complete story.

Think about the background, development process and result. What details are related to the characters? Describe them as specifically as possible. Generally, flashback can be used as the beginning of writing memories, but it is not necessarily the same, and various writing methods can be used flexibly according to the needs of writing.

First of all, we should get into the habit of summarizing quickly.

Second, argumentative essays must strengthen their own views.

Third, we should pay more attention to social hotspots.

Fourth, practice writing consciously.

Fifth, don't write typos. After writing a composition, you should first check the typos and then correct them.

Pay attention to the goods, you can't have nothing to say. I won't say anything else, because it involves aesthetics and writing psychology, rhetoric and so on. If you have something to say, you should speak it well, look comfortable and read it fluently. This is the basic level. If you have something to write, I think you should have something in your stomach. From the book, or from your experience, knowledge and thinking, you can say something different, or novel and touching, or can expand others' thinking and knowledge, or can bring others a good feeling. If you want to express something, you have to express it clearly. Express yourself well and get high marks even if you don't have any goods. If you can't even do this, as long as you write long enough (but not smelly), you can get a hard score. What are you most afraid of? I dare not write. Being unable to write is only technical, and being afraid to write and read clearly is psychological, so perfunctory is a matter of attitude. In fact, as long as you manage your own ideas seriously and take them seriously, you can write something. Besides, if it is your personal thing, it will definitely have your own characteristics. Don't say hometown, after the reform, you must be poor first and then rich. Speaking of hometown, there must be an old pagoda tree in your hometown. Not necessarily a teacher, the window is still open at night, and all the good deeds are to help grandma cross the road. You can change things or discover new things. This is vision. You must get high marks. In addition, I have seen, heard and seen a lot in society. As long as it is not closed, I should have my own feelings and understanding. If you don't, you will suffer from writing a composition, because you don't care about life at all. Also pay attention, don't be like me, the wording is not standardized and a bit inappropriate. At least not as serious as me. At least the teacher doesn't like it. Many old people don't like Wang Xiaobo's things!