Exam, composition.

Tear off the calendar of life one by one, and pin your hopes on it one by one. -inscription

I don't know how long it has been since I visited her. Just vaguely traces of childhood. Her face has shiny silver and traces of years.

"Ding" woke me up from my sleep with a phone call this morning, and I froze when I hung up. I feel that the world will drown me in an instant-grandma had a car accident. When I arrived at the hospital, she was already lying in the intensive care unit. Tears poured out in an instant. I followed grandpa's advice and went back to my hometown to change clothes.

It's the same old house, full of childhood flavor and memories. Hesitated and walked to the attic. When you walk into the bedroom, the taste of memory comes out. This is her taste. At first glance, I saw several large calendars on the desk, which were torn to pieces. When I walked over, I saw that the front of the calendar was ordinary, an ordinary date, and the words on the back made me dumbfounded: "In February 2003, Nan Nan went home with her parents today." "In May 2003, Nan Nan called me today and asked me to put on more clothes." "In July, 2004, I took the entrance exam today." "In February, 2005, I saw Xiao Nan's photo today." "In March, 2005, Nan Nan didn't come back for three months." "In February, 2006, Nan Nan didn't call me for a long time." I flipped through all the torn calendars like crazy. The above is the detailed date and what happened between me and her. At that time, minutes. I can't believe it, but it hurts me to think of her writing these little by little on the table with reading glasses in front of the dim light. How long has it been since I came back? How long has it been since I called? Is it because you are busy studying, or because you are alienated and indifferent when you grow up? And she, how to pin her hopes on these calendars and expect me to be the charming little darling when I was a child again?

I packed these calendars, which were full of her hopes, and went back to the hospital. Looking at her head wrapped in white gauze before bed, tears welled up again. I held her hand tightly and silently prayed to God not to take her away from me.

The face on the bed is still the one that hurt me and loved me when I was a child, shining with silver, and there was silence between my eyebrows and eyes. I quietly put the last piece of calendar paper filled with my blessings into her hand and muttered, "Grandma, wake up, little darling is coming to see you, little darling won't let you count the calendars any more, wake up." ...

Love and tears of flowers and plants

I am a grass, sucking the milk of my poor mother, walking slowly through my childhood, stepping out of my dreams and looking forward to hope. One day, I put aside the behavior of finding the true meaning of life through labor and went into the network to tell the pain of growing up and the glory of the gap on my forehead in words. Look at that.

Those happy flowers and plants are madly weaving all kinds of joys and sorrows on the internet, while watching them sing heartily and stirring the fuzzy flashing lights on the stage. Look at the dignity and quietness of those pale grasses, the tenacity and tenacity of the strong grasses, and watch them put down the mask of hypocrisy in reality for a kind of gentleness and entanglement and tell their lovesickness and infatuation to the stamens. Look at those charming little flowers that show the sadness and glory in life in different ways.

Until one day, a lily came to me and asked me to stop her stupidity. She said there was a confused light on my head, and she wanted me to share it. I was dizzy by the warm wind, lost my way, and stretched out my roots to touch the perfect confusion of my dream life. I am infatuated with bubble bath, and I am absorbed in the transmission of my mind, wandering gently. One day late, I suddenly found the distance between flowers and grass, and found that the intersection was brilliant and short. I'm scared. My heart is falling in the ice room. I struggled to climb and climb, hoping to get rid of my obsession. But I will always remember the fragrance of the past. I shouted at the sky, but all beings were desolate and white clouds were flowing. Only I am lonely, where I feel sorry for myself. Happy and unrestrained lily finally tired, tired to send out a faint fragrance. But her beautiful heart cares about the gentle flow of the past, fearing that leaving will make the grass sad, and always reluctantly cheer for the petals there. The grass with an empty mind is at a loss, and it is illusory to think about where the other side of the soul is. The withered grass is always in the dream, watching quietly, giving people spiritual blessings and a little light absorbed in the sunshine. However, the difference between flowers and grass in their different attitudes towards life, the regret of time and space distance, the helplessness and sadness of youth no longer afflict grass's resilient thin arm from time to time, and the pain and depression make him painfully wander between the network and reality.

Network, you shorten the distance between time and space and soul, and you also stifle the passionate wandering of those ethnic groups who have carefully dreamed of pursuing a perfect life.

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I long to return to innocence.

Is the world really that complicated? Since I was sensible, it seems that everyone and everything are teaching me two words: lies and deception. How I long to return to innocence, so that at least I won't feel so tired when I am alive. Sometimes, I really feel tired living in this world. There is always an impenetrable wall between you and others, an invisible line. How I want to return to innocence. I envy children very much. They can speak freely. The friendship between children is also the most authentic, all feelings are engraved between the brow, and all heartfelt words can be expressed quickly. But why not grow up? That was when my family was moving. One day, my parents were not at home, and my aunt who collected the water fee came. I told her that my parents were not at home. Then, I couldn't restrain my inner excitement and said to her, "My family is moving soon." Unexpectedly, she was furious when she heard it: "What, you don't want to pay the water bill when you move? No way. " Say that finish, slammed the door. I'm so confused and wronged. I didn't mean to. Mom came back and I was in tears. My mother asked me why, and I said so. Mother said, "Son, you are so stupid. Tell her why we are moving. " It's really boring "I don't understand. I just want to express my excitement. What's wrong with it? Once, I borrowed a classmate's car to go home and get a book. She said she didn't ride a bike today, so I thought, forget it, let's walk home. But after school, I saw this classmate galloping past me in her car. I am really angry. If I don't want to borrow it, why don't I just say it and make up a lie? Maybe some people will. They put a set of lies in their pockets. When it was time to use it, they took out one and sent the others away. How many layers of fog have they wrapped themselves in? It must be the same when they associate with others. One night, someone called my father. My father sat on the sofa and looked at my mobile phone and said to me, "Just say I'm not at home." When I said this, the person on the phone asked, "Where did he go?" I said, "I don't know. "The phone hung up, but my father was very angry with me." Why are you so stupid? Just make up a place? "Yes, I'm so stupid, I don't know how to lie and cheat, and I don't know how to deal with the world. Is the world really that complicated? Since I was sensible, it seems that everyone and everything are teaching me two words: lies and deception. How I long to return to innocence, so that at least I won't feel so tired when I am alive.

The test of responsibility

Every year, every month and every day, thousands of things happen to people. In the busy life, people are in a hurry and exhausted. Although it is so hard, I have been insisting. Because there is a heavy chain around us mercilessly-responsibility.

At school, we study hard, which is our responsibility. At home, we help our parents do housework, which is our responsibility. It is the responsibility to go out and do something for the society. In the world, grass has a responsibility, flowers have a responsibility, and trees have a responsibility. No matter what life is, you have your own unshirkable responsibilities.

Be responsible for yourself and others. There are thousands of traffic accidents in this country every year, and there are various reasons. It can be said that this is not irresponsible. If car drivers are responsible for themselves and others and act according to the rules, will so many people die in vain?

Responsibility is a commitment as heavy as Mount Tai. It promotes generations of people to devote themselves diligently in their respective posts. Under the attack of SARS this year, 6 million medical staff bravely rushed to the front line. They are brave. They are fearless. In the fight against SARS, no one is afraid and no one flinches. No matter how terrible SARS is, the strong sense of responsibility of medical staff can't be swallowed. When the patient came, everyone took care of him day and night. Some medical staff fell, and someone came to supplement them immediately. In this battle, which is more dangerous than bullets without smoke, they have lived up to the high hopes placed on them by the country and people. Finally, SARS was achieved, which was exchanged with the dedication and strong sense of responsibility of medical staff day and night. If they don't have a strong sense of responsibility, they don't know how long this storm will last and how many innocent lives will be taken.

The ancient Greeks said that people walked with heavy burdens on their backs. There are family, career, friendship, children in the baggage ... after suffering, I can't throw away any of them. Because it says two words: responsibility. In life, there are tests of responsibility everywhere. Inadvertently picking up a piece of waste paper is the responsibility to protect the environment; Helping the frail old people and children is the responsibility of respecting the old and loving the young; Solving difficulties for others is the responsibility of helping others. Responsibility is the foundation of society. Without it, tall buildings can easily shake in the breeze. Responsible for yourself, the responsibility is strict instructor; Paying responsibility to others, responsibility is the guarantee of life and property safety; Being responsible for the country is a condition for social progress. Abandoned it, I felt the temporary ease of standing, but lost the glory of my life. Responsibility is a mission that cannot be abandoned, and it is shouldered by people. Let each of us have a sense of responsibility to overcome the sudden tests again and again!

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The poet Haizi once said, I want a house facing the sea and blooming in spring. I was moved by how quiet and peaceful it would be. & ltAN lang = EN-US & gt； I remember when I was a child, I would raise my face and count the sun in my eyes when I walked through the shade. But now my neck will be sour when I look up, and I feel the sun is dazzling. If there is a villa facing the sea in spring, it is estimated that my vision can only be a test paper in black and white. So Haizi, I can't reach your level for the time being. Some people say that only the realm of all kinds of frosty days is free, and only the mentality of morality can last for a long time. Yes, I don't yearn for freedom. I don't want to endure it for a long time. I still clearly remember the real pain of standing on the threshold of 18 years old. I thought I would always be the one who rampaged and laughed on campus. I thought I would always be the teenager who sweated with a basketball ... but when I faced the empty stadium and let it step out of the same empty pain in my heart, I knew I was wrong. I dare not stay too long, and I dare not borrow anything to grieve, because there is still an exam waiting for me at half past six. Depressed days have run over my thin youth and crushed the sadness that can't stand the wind and rain. Until someone told me about the philosophy of reefs, the sun, the moon, the sky, rivers, rivers and waves. When the tide recedes, I show my true colors. This is a kind of what kind of state, I carefully understand. I see a street lamp. She stubbornly tore a corner of the night and looked around coldly. At night, slip away from the light with low eyes. Thin figure, dim light, high head, disdainful expression, what is she waiting for, waiting for the coming dawn. My heart seems to be torn apart. Look at the street lamp at dawn, thank you for telling me where I should get there. I will watch firmly, watch the bright dawn, and stand quietly.

Pay attention to happiness

As a father, facing the birthday of my daughter 18, I thought of such a day and such a night. ...

In early winter, the warm sunshine boiled the trees that had been green for a year by the West Lake. Whenever this colorful season comes, I feel that the cold wind not only blows off the burnt plane leaves, but also blows up a green leaf in my heart-my daughter's birthday is coming. This year is even more special, because it is her 18 birthday.

As a father, facing the birthday of my daughter 18, I think about one day. ...

April 26th 1975, just completed 18. Alone in Beijing. How to celebrate your birthday? Cakes, wishes and birthday presents were not popular at that time. And I miss this unusual birthday, like a candle, flickering. Ah, after all, it's 18 birthday. There are always some ideas. So, I made a special trip to the photo studio in Wangfujing and took a two-inch photo.

"Hold your head high, open your eyes and smile!" An art photographer, simple mechanical instructions. Facing the expressionless camera, I finished a mechanical smile.

Flat head, a khaki lapel shirt, lined with a deliberately wide face. I studied the photos carefully, and my mind was comparing with another image-me in the mirror above the faucet in the water room-I often looked at the mirror alone and mobilized all the nerves on my face until I was satisfied. Soon, my mother looked at the photo and said, "It looks like Zhuang Zedong."

In this way, the owner in the photo commemorates his 18 spring with a two-inch black-and-white photo. At the same time, he also bid farewell to the turbulent childhood and adolescence and began his adult life with a heroic "Zhuang Zedong" face. ...

As a father, facing my daughter's 18 birthday, I recall such a night. ...

18 years ago today, I accompanied my wife to the delivery room. We looked at each other with deep love in our eyes. She turned and walked forward-she knew there was a fiery blessing behind her, and she wanted to bring a little life and a brand-new world to our home.

After three hours of anxiety, a "angels in white" flashed by with her child in her arms. "It must be him (her), my child!" I am confident at the moment.

Soon, the "angel" came out from the inside. I greeted him and asked timidly, "Is it a man or a woman?" She was busy changing shoes, and without looking up, she only whispered, "It's a girl ..."

Ah! I thought I heard a bell ring at dawn. Thank god! I have a daughter, and I am a father!

Because of this night, every day of the next 18 will be spent in nurturing, pulling, exercising and communicating ... of course, it will be accompanied by happiness, joy and good hope. ...

As a father, facing the birthday of my daughter 18, I thought of such a day and such a night. I gave them to her as a gift, and I hope she can accept them and cherish them.

/kloc-when I was 0/8 years old, I said to myself: when I was a child, I often thought, when can I grow up? I was 18 years old before I knew it. It feels incredible and unreal.

(I don't know if it's what you need)

Skills: Reporting and examining questions are the first steps in the composition process. The quality of this step will determine whether the whole content meets the requirements and whether the thinking can develop in the right direction. It is not uncommon for a thousand miles to make a mistake, and it is not common for a composition to be irrelevant because of unclear questions. In the case of good basic skills in composition, as long as the article conforms to the meaning of the question, the performance of second-class articles can generally be guaranteed.

So how to judge the meaning of the problem? In general, the following points should be noted:

1. Identify styles.

Few questions can be written in multiple styles. Generally speaking, there is only one style suitable for a topic. The first step in the examination is to judge the style. When judging style, we should pay attention to the following rules:

(1) The literariness of narrative title generally involves six elements of narrative. For example, the night of National Day involves time, the way to school involves place, the guests from my home involve place, people and things, and the change of hometown involves the development and ending of things. The words "person", "thing" and "record" that appear directly in the title are the symbols of narrative.

(2) Words such as "Yi", "Lun", "Tan" and "Debate" often appear in argumentative essays, and some of them are composed of phrases such as "Wu Cong", "Si Cong" and "Say Cong". Some argumentative topics are sentences expressing opinions, such as "Don't be afraid of difficulties" and "Don't be afraid of difficulties", which are easier to judge.

(3) There are few cases of reading explanatory texts, and even if there are, there are usually stylistic hints. Practical writing questions clearly require writing notices, notices, letters, etc.

2. See the requirements of the topic clearly. Generally speaking, the style, the number of words and the way of expression are clearly defined in the "requirements". The content of "requirements" must be clearly understood and strictly implemented.

3. Pay attention to the hidden content in the topic

The requirements clearly put forward in the examination questions are obvious and must be followed correctly, but some requirements are hidden behind the superficial words and need to be realized by the candidates themselves. For example, the sunshine in Growing up in the Sun, of course, does not refer to the sunshine in nature, but should be understood as the care of the party, the warmth of the collective, the affection between family and friends and so on. My footprint is not to describe the real footprint, but to write meaningful events on the road of growth and progress. For some materials provided in the composition topic, we should pay more attention to the careful analysis by means of generalization, extension and analogy to understand the metaphorical or symbolic meaning of the topic.

Composition skill 2: Proper conception

After the exam, you should make appropriate ideas according to the requirements of the topic. The so-called conception is the center and theme of the article. In the narrative, "conception" is the central idea to be expressed in the notes; In argumentative writing, "conception" refers to establishing the central argument of the article.

There are three main requirements for conception:

The first is to be distinct. What the article praises, criticizes, advocates and opposes should be clear-cut, and should not be vague or ambiguous.

The second is to be correct. The requirements for conception in the composition scoring standard of senior high school entrance examination are: narrative "healthy thoughts and feelings" and argumentative "correct views", which are the most basic requirements and should be seriously implemented.

Third, we should strive to be novel, profound and creative. This is a higher requirement on the basis of the first two. The article should be written with originality and depth. Don't repeat the topic that others have said many times, and don't talk about the matter. Give it a try. We should also pay attention to the times and pertinence of our thoughts.

Writing Skill 3: Writing an Outline

After the center of the article is determined, we should consider which materials to choose, how to organize the materials and how to structure the full text. An important thing to do in this thinking process is to write an outline. Just like drawing a picture before building a house, before writing, you should set up a shelf for the article and list in words what has been implemented in the examination, conception and conception. Therefore, the process of writing an outline is actually a process of sorting out ideas, sorting out materials and organizing structure.

The outline should truly reflect your own ideas, with clear thinking, clear hierarchy, conciseness and to the point, and highlight the main points of each part of the article. As for the detailed arrangement of the article, it can be further implemented in the writing process. In the process of writing, it is found that the outline is inappropriate and can be further revised.

There is no fixed format for writing an outline. Because of different styles, the outline should be written in different ways. For example, narratives can be written in the order of time and space or the process of event development; General argumentative essays can be arranged in three parts: introduction, theory and conclusion, reflecting the relationship between arguments and arguments; The explanatory text should grasp the characteristics of the explanatory object and be written in space, time or logical order.

Writing Skill 4: Write calmly.

After writing the outline, it's time to start writing. Pay attention to the following points when writing:

1. Pay attention to language expression

After an article has a clear center and reasonable thinking, the ultimate success or failure depends on the ability to use language and characters. The basic requirement for the language in the composition scoring standard of senior high school entrance examination is "fluency, no ill sentences". It is clearly stipulated in the language of the composition grading standard that 1 to 3 ill sentences can be rated as Class II, and 4 to 6 ill sentences belong to Class III. Therefore, language fluency is extremely important. The language requirements of different styles have been explained in detail in the previous guide to the volume, so I won't repeat them here. No matter what style, the language should be accurate and concise.

2. Use punctuation accurately.

Punctuation marks are an indispensable part of an article. Inaccurate punctuation may lead to ambiguity of words; The irregular use of punctuation marks will affect the expression effect of the whole article. Therefore, we should pay enough attention to writing. Pay attention to the rules when using punctuation marks, such as: period, question mark, exclamation mark, pause, comma, semicolon and colon should not be placed at the beginning of a line; Quotes, brackets, and the first half of the title cannot be placed at the end of the line, and the second half cannot be placed at the beginning of the line; Both dashes and ellipses should occupy two spaces, and dashes or ellipses cannot be divided into two lines. The omission point is six o'clock and so on.

3. The handwriting should be clear and neat, and don't write typos.

The writing situation of the composition directly affects the overall impression of the marking teacher and also affects the composition score. Candidates must have enough knowledge about this. According to the composition scoring standard, 0.5 points will be deducted for every 2 words of typo, and 3 points will be deducted at most; If the full text is extremely scribbled and illegible, 2 points will be deducted, and 1 point will be deducted if the text is scribbled or the format is incorrect. Don't underestimate this 1 point and 2 points. Sometimes, this small difference in scores may directly affect the final result of your further study. The neatness and standardization of writing is not a day's work, so we should be strict and consciously trained at ordinary times.

4. Pay attention to time and limit the number of words.

Generally speaking, we should pay attention to the time three times in the whole composition process. Once, before you start writing, look at the available writing time and decide the writing speed according to the total time; Once, the initial idea is completed, depending on how long it takes to formally write; In the middle of the third time, see how much time there is, so as to decide whether to expand the full text as planned, whether to compress, adjust and simplify the content.

The number of words in a composition is generally clearly defined, and there are generally three situations: first, set an upper limit, such as "no more than how many words" and "no more than how many words"; The second is to set a lower limit, such as "not less than how many words". In both cases, the word limit must be strictly enforced. Third, the upper and lower limits are defined, such as "left and right" and "between", and the left and right range depends on the intermediate number itself: generally speaking, the word 100 to 200 should not be greater than the word 10; 300 to 500 words, each article should not be more than 20 words; 600 to 800 words, each article should be no more than 30 words (punctuation should be counted).

The number of words in the composition should be familiar with the overall layout. Generally speaking, the main part of the propositional composition should account for 70% of the full text, and the beginning and end should account for15% respectively; For writing materials, if you want to quote materials at the beginning, the beginning can be increased to 25% ~ 30%, the main part should be at least 65%, and the end can be appropriately reduced.

Writing Skill 5: Checking and Revising

After writing the article, you must check and revise it. In principle, the revision of the article should be carried out from three aspects: ideological content, structure and language. However, it is impossible to have time to make major adjustments and changes after writing the exam composition. Therefore, the focus of revision should be the problems in the article. Errors such as missing words, typos, typos, and sick sentences should be corrected in time and minimized to avoid undue losses. A simple and feasible modification method is "silent reading". Read it word for word, and modify it at any time if you find any problems.

The on-site answer sheet of composition is conducted in a limited time, but the quality of the answer sheet depends on the long-term efforts before the exam, which reflects the examinee's usual language learning ability. Therefore, if you want to achieve satisfactory results on the spot, you must do it in peacetime. If there is a "secret" in composition, it is what Mr. Lu Xun said: "Read more, think more, read more and write more."