How to write a narrative composition on the topic of friendliness and teach me.

What do you think of when you look up at the starry sky and marvel at the beauty of the stars? Have you ever thought about the mysteries of the universe? You thought of beautiful fairy tales? Do you think of stars, new stars and outstanding people in a certain field? Do you think of the five stars on the league flag? Venus on the epaulettes of the PLA? Or you want to be a dazzling star in the future, develop association and imagination around a center, and write a composition with various expressions, regardless of style. No less than 600 words. Thinking inspiration: Writing is the best embodiment of creative consciousness and ability. Proposers take "stars" as the topic to examine students' imagination and associative ability. A series of parallelism and rhetorical questions in tips also change students' habit of rigid thinking, guide students to conceive from multiple angles, open the floodgate of students' creation, and let students' creative thinking gallop freely. We can think from the fuzziness and relevance of "star", for example, a star is a celestial body in the universe, a star-shaped thing, an outstanding figure in a certain field and so on. The common stars in astronomy are the sun, the moon (planet), meteors and so on, which are closely related to human beings. We can start thinking from these "stars": the sun (star) is the source of human energy, and human beings cannot survive without the sun; But the sun also has shortcomings, such as sunspots, which is its unstable side. We often compare great men to the sun. The role of great men as role models is endless, but great men also make mistakes, even mistakes. We should treat the "celebrity effect" correctly. It can also be seen from ancient the Goddess Chang'e flying to the moon, the success of Apollo landing on the moon in modern times, and the literati writing and drawing under the moon; Perhaps in the future, the moon will become a resort for human leisure and entertainment. You can also start with the shortcomings of the moon, because it can't shine by itself, so you can only borrow others'. Meteors are also quite controversial. Some people say that its life is as short as epiphyllum, and it died before enjoying life. It is also said that although meteors are fleeting, they have been brilliant after all. I can also talk about my own views on some incorrect understandings of middle school students' thoughts in life. Firstly, the phenomenon of middle school students' blind idolization is put forward, then it is pointed out that simply chasing the charming appearance of singers and movie stars is a one-sided pursuit, and then it is pointed out that correct idolization will benefit life, and finally hope is put forward. In this way, the meaning of idolization can be extended to chasing model heroes and scientific and technological stars, and students can be guided to establish a correct concept of idolization from the front, which will have practical educational significance. You can also write an essay describing the scene of the flag-raising ceremony. The flag-raising ceremony is a solemn activity with the participation of groups and an important way to educate citizens, especially teenagers. In order to highlight the theme, this paper uses two methods to describe the scene. The first is panorama, that is, from the overall point of view, comprehensively and openly show the whole picture of the flag-raising activities of teachers and students in the morning. "The expressions of all teachers and students, everyone's face and eyes." A few words outline the general situation and atmosphere of this scene. The second is close-up, in which the author aims at himself and depicts a panoramic scene. According to the flag-raising process, I wrote down my unique feelings as a flag-raiser in detail. I feel excited and nervous when the national flag is about to be raised. When the national flag rose to the top of the flagpole, I looked up at it and thought about it. I seem to have heard it in the past and now. I have been educated and encouraged, and I have also implemented the problem. A program sequence is similar to explanatory text. Example 1 Premier Zhu Wudan, my star, was asked, "Are you a groupie?" My answer is yes, but the "star" I am chasing is different. 1998, the State Council elected a "cold-faced" prime minister. I didn't care much at first, thinking: I'm afraid it's far worse than Premier Zhou. See if you believe it or not. He is in the State Council, and he has made three chapters to promote a clean government. Normal, the new official has three fires. Facing the Southeast Asian financial crisis, he calmly responded and stabilized the RMB exchange rate. Normal. If he doesn't do it, who will? During 1998, the Yangtze River and Nenjiang River basins were flooded, which affected him. In just two months, in the face of the flood that burst its banks and flooded the city, he denounced the "tofu residue" project. Normal. This is his job. On New Year's Eve, he personally sent money and goods to some laid-off workers. Normal and stable "morale". He shook hands with Zhu Ying's father in mourning for the martyrs who died in the NATO bombing of our embassy in Yugoslavia, and could not help but shed tears, as if he had lost his daughter. Normal, he ... but all this happened to us and the Prime Minister. Through the "normality" of all this, I saw his ardent heart and love for the people from his cold image. I learned from news reports that he often quoted an old saying: "Officials are not afraid of being strict with me, but they are afraid of being cheap; People refuse to accept our ability to serve our public; People dare not slow down, and honest officials dare not bully. Gong Mingsheng, winning streak. " As early as when he was in charge of Shanghai, he was famous for his "three noes" of "no ceremony, no ribbon-cutting and no inscription". This time I am in charge of the State Council, with five requirements, three chapters, and a brand-new administrative style, which makes me full of hope for the future of my motherland. Comments: This is a rare good article, full of bright colors. Its greatest characteristics are: First, its thoughts follow the society, and its content is closely related to current politics. This is precisely a "blind spot" in junior high school students' composition today. As the ancients said, every household cares about everything in the world. We advocate writing trivial things around us, and oppose falsehood, bigness and emptiness, but we are by no means nerds who turn a deaf ear to what is going on outside the window and are involved in celebrity events in avoidance relationship's national economy and people's livelihood. The key is how to write; Second, although the star in the author's mind is Premier the State Council, he doesn't write articles about leaders as usual. As soon as he put pen to paper, it was a general eulogy, and as soon as he put pen to paper, it was a blind worship. Instead, I use the brushwork of "seeing" before "doubting" and "restraining" before "praising" to list the extraordinary deeds of Premier Zhu after taking office. "I" is also the identification of "idols" from the beginning. I believe that readers feel thoughtful and will feel thoughtful. It can be said that "tell the truth, hit the floor." . This undoubtedly provides beneficial enlightenment for "telling love stories and writing innovative articles" In the fruitful autumn season, the third international photography art exhibition opened in Shanghai. In the spacious and bright exhibition hall, there are nearly 400 excellent photographs from more than 30 countries and regions. I don't want to introduce those winning works here. I want to introduce an unremarkable photo. It has neither bright colors nor any special treatment in photography technology, but in my eyes, it is one of the best works, and it has left a deep impression on my mind, especially those winning prizes. The name of this picture is "Star", which is a collective portrait of more than a dozen miners. They are evenly arranged in two rows on the screen. When you walk towards the photo, they will smile at you. Everyone was wearing thick overalls covered with coal ash, and their faces were dyed black with sweat. Because they were taken in the mine, the scene was dark. However, what breaks the black atmosphere of the whole picture is the miner's lamp with bright white light overhead, which forms a gorgeous halo around everyone ... The miners smile flatly and naturally, which must be the case when taking pictures at ordinary times. However, because of the different occasions and contents of laughter, they have a deeper meaning. Their gentle smiles reveal their strong character, their love for ordinary work and their firm confidence in the socialist cause. Although the working environment is dark, the working conditions are terrible and life-threatening at any time, with a sincere heart and tenacious will, they finally make their ordinary life shine in generate. Each of them can illuminate the rich coal deposits in the motherland, not only a bright star, but also the gorgeous light they emit. This is the true meaning of "star". Isn't it? Comments: The idea is novel: the little author did not describe the beauty of the stars in the sky, nor did he pass by those famous stars, but focused on ordinary workers and revealed their excellent qualities and profound thoughts. Unique selection of materials: this article talks about an exhibition, avoiding talking about award-winning works, but being attracted by a pair of unremarkable works, which shows that the author is a caring person with unique vision and strong insight. Reminiscent of nature: "The miner's lamp on each of them can illuminate the rich coal mines in the motherland, not just a bright star." Coal wells and miners form a black background, just like a black canopy, and miner's lamps become the only bright spot in this black background, which naturally reminds people of the stars in the night sky. At the end of the article, the meaning of "star" is self-evident. Moved for three nights-Xingqing Ma Tiantian now, Xingqing at this moment. I walk home at night. Suddenly, I looked up and found the stars on the horizon giving me friendly eyes. "I didn't expect the starry sky in Jinan to be surprisingly beautiful!" I can't help feeling, yes, even if it's not as magnificent as the stars sitting in the open field, it's not as mysterious as the stars on the mountain. However, exposing a few stars in the towering buildings and winking at three or five groups of people also adds a bit of tranquility, purity and nature to the "starry sky" built with neon lights on the ground. I like watching the stars since I was a child, and I like to stand in the yard and count the stars "one, two, three, four …". Because I have always believed my grandmother's words: "If you count a thousand stars, you can go to the moon and see if there is a sister Chang 'e." However, people are getting older and more numb. I forgot there was such a starry sky in the sky. The starry sky didn't care, they have been waiting for me, quietly waiting over the busy crowd. Now, at this moment, I look up, it has no dissatisfaction with the past, nor has it been forgotten by friends. It just smiled and showed me its best side. "Friendly star! "At first glance, there is no endless traffic, no noisy crowd, only the stars are humming a brisk tune, scattering flawless smiles, and their eyes are shining with gorgeous brilliance! My heart flies with the stars, and I am glad to find the mood of counting stars when I was a child. Now, at this moment, Xingqing. Comments: The little author created a poetic word-Xingqing. As we all know, the so-called celebration refers to the mood. Perhaps the fast pace of the information age makes us indifferent to everything and turn a blind eye to the beautiful scenery around us. What's the mood of counting stars? In fact, it is the persistence in the pursuit of good things! The four-view meteor shower is now at 6 pm on June 1 18, and that exciting moment will come in eight hours. Leonid meteor shower, once in 33 years, is the last astronomical wonder in China, which will be witnessed by the world soon. For me, this is an incredible thing. When I was a child, there were only meteors in storybooks and legends, so I really had to cheer for them. This meteor shower, which lasted for 1 hour, appeared at about 2 am on June 9, 1 year. In order not to oversleep, I simply gave up half of my sleep tonight, made five cups of coffee and sat on the windowsill waiting for the meteor to appear. At night 1 point, the whole compound was silent. I sat alone on the balcony, drinking coffee to drive away the sleepy god and looking up at the sky. At this time, the bright moon in the sky has disappeared, and the whole sky is full of stars as bright as jewels, but they are still blinking so quietly and leisurely, with no intention of falling. In fact, I have some doubts, probably because I never thought that meteors would appear. I'm afraid the meteor will change its mind and stop appearing. Suddenly, an arc of light broke the peace of the sky, my heart hung up and my blood solidified. What is that? I'm not sure because it's too fast. " Whoosh ",another sound, I stood up from my seat. Bright, curved, fleeting ... it's a meteor, a meteor, and I'm very excited. Come on, have some more. I thought to myself, I want to see more clearly. After a few minutes, the image of the canopy became vivid. A star that was originally comfortable suddenly fell down, and its tail was slightly blue, and it slipped from side to side. This is unbelievable, sighing and sad. Sigh the beautiful moment, sigh the beauty of this moment, I am fortunate to capture more than 20 beautiful shadows in this constant moment. Although I am a little dissatisfied and eager to see more, I think I am the luckiest person in the world. Although the meteor shower failed, the previous forecast was spectacular enough. In fact, the meteor can be regarded as one of the beautiful scenery in the world, but its beauty is short-lived. I believe everyone doesn't want to be a victim of instant beauty, because it is empty and unreal after all. People like to make beautiful wishes at the moment when meteors pass by, hoping that their dreams will come true one day, but dreams are dreams after all, but they really exist in life. Only by working hard can we last forever. Meteor, I finally saw it. At the moment I saw its beauty, I also saw the future. Comments: This article is an observation diary, describing the whole process of watching the "meteor shower". The structure is complete and clear. Not only did I write the scene of a meteor passing by, but I also wrote my own psychological activities and feelings, which should be said to be more real. However, the shortcomings of this article are also obvious. What are the characteristics of 1 and "meteor shower"? I didn't hear you clearly, I didn't write clearly. It should be "many", "fast" and "urgent", right? 2. What does a "meteor shower" look like? Should we describe it and express it with concrete metaphors? Let people see its shape, just like its appearance. 3. The language expression is not fluent, and some sentences are not fluent. 4. When watching the meteor shower, should we start to associate? Let the beautiful words of the ancients come to mind, so as to enrich the content of the article.