Requesting a diary describing Peking Opera lanterns

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Selected Comments: Jiangxi Wanzailong Yongzhong

There are currently many research articles on topic compositions, but there are not many that specifically select different sample essays from the same topic for review. Based on this consideration, this article specially selects 13 good essays from about 500 test papers for the second grade of junior high school, and comments on them from as many angles as possible, in the hope that it can serve as a starting point for the conception and writing of topic essays. I also sincerely hope that after reading the following wonderful article, the students will make a qualitative leap in the conception of topic compositions!

1. One day’s experience

Zhong Shihong, Class 4, Grade 2< /p>

Amidst the sound of firecrackers, we ushered in the most grand festival of the Chinese people - the Spring Festival. Every family was full of joy, hanging red lanterns, pasting red Spring Festival couplets, and being busy... < /p>

The first day of the first lunar month is another happy day.

I used to be the last person to get up, but today I fought for the first place because I really wanted to smell the fragrant firecracker smoke. Strings of firecrackers were lit in people's hands. The sound was really loud and splashed everywhere, as if they were sending every blessing to thousands of households. The sound of firecrackers continued one after another, crackling and making it very lively.

After the firecrackers, there is nothing fun anymore. Let’s have breakfast and go out to play later!

After dinner, I invited a few friends to play together. The firecrackers lit on the street bloomed beautiful flowers on the ground. They were so beautiful. The pocket money given by my parents was in the bag. Titus was happy. The little birds came out to join in the fun today, and they were probably very happy too.

The street is indeed a street, with everything to play and eat. Most of the people I saw were children. I took a look and found that the spicy stalls were the best:

"I want a bunch of rice cakes!" A fat child shouted.

Going to other places to see how it works, I stopped again in front of a stationery store. There are all kinds of fun things there: airplane models, telescopes, electric cars... all kinds of fun things. The most popular ones I find are the ones that are played with.

In other places, I also saw some selling balloons, pistols, and skipping ropes, and some selling snacks, snacks, and fruits.

After playing all morning, I am going to visit relatives and friends in the afternoon to celebrate the New Year. This is undoubtedly a happy thing.

I had so much fun today! It’s a feast for the eyes, a feast for the mouth, and a feast for the hands. The luckiest ones are the sellers, business is booming today!

I sincerely hope that today’s children all over the country will be happy and have no worries in the new year, but they must not “lose their minds by playing with things”!

Brief comment: This article uses one day’s experience as a thread to describe the festive atmosphere of the Spring Festival. Setting off firecrackers, going shopping, writing all the way, in the lively atmosphere, I wrote about people's happy mood during the Spring Festival. It can be said that the "happiness" of this article can be regarded as the highlight of the whole article. Taking a day's activities as a perspective, it reflects the excitement of the traditional Spring Festival and people's infinite happiness, and captures the key characteristics of the topic "Spring Festival".

2. Happy Spring Festival

Tang Yungen, Class 1, Second Grade

Look forward to it! Hope, the Spring Festival is coming soon. Thinking of this, I couldn’t help but laugh. Before the Spring Festival, people are all happy and full of energy. There is an endless stream of people shopping, some are buying New Year pictures, some are buying New Year goods, some are sitting around the fire box watching TV, some are playing mahjong and poker, and so on.

Anyway, the streets are colorful, there are all kinds of people, and all kinds of goods are complete and dazzling. It’s hard for people to choose what they want to buy!

Before the Spring Festival, every house is brightly lit, and every house is decorated in a unique style, each with its own personality. They put the New Year's goods they bought all over the floor. How to paste the New Year pictures you buy depends on your own style and preference. Some are posted upright, some are pasted upside down, and some are pasted crookedly. Each has its own merits. People have prepared all the vegetables they bought, and they are ready to have a feast when the Spring Festival comes. There are firecrackers in every house, and people put on new clothes and prepare to welcome the New Year. Before the Spring Festival, when people go out and meet good friends, they always say: "Go to the streets!"

< p>People are killing pigs and sheep, and are busy preparing for the Spring Festival feast.

The Spring Festival is here, and the children get up early, go to their parents’ rooms, and start the traditional New Year greeting ceremony. The children said some auspicious words to their parents, and the parents took out the New Year's money to make the children happy. Everyone hopes that this year will bring good luck and good fortune.

Some relatives and friends gathered together, tasting fine wine and food, and talking about some happy words.

The happiest thing is that we can save a lot of New Year's money, and then happily run to the street to buy many fun things, such as cars, four-wheel drive vehicles, toy guns, footballs, etc., and we only need to be sweeter , if you say more blessings, you will make a lot of money!

People played until late at night, gnawing delicious fruits in their mouths, setting off firecrackers and fireworks in their hands... adults and children sang and danced, having a great time!

Brief comment: This article first writes about the atmosphere of the Spring Festival in general, and then divides the two scenes before and after the Spring Festival into a detailed description, in order to show the various activities of people before and after the Spring Festival. The structure of the overall score is extremely rigorous. Preparation and enjoyment are like two exquisite pictures, displayed in front of people's eyes, and all of this is based on the "happiness" of the title as the text of the text, and the whole text is connected one by one. In a word, the structure of this article is exquisite.

3. Write couplets

Wang Dunyong, Class 2, Grade 2

The Spring Festival is coming, and I know that everyone must enjoy celebrating the Spring Festival very much. Because everyone can post Spring Festival couplets, watch the Spring Festival Gala, visit relatives and friends...

I remember when the Spring Festival was coming last year, I was learning to write couplets at home. I stood aside and watched the adults write couplets. They took a brush in hand, dipped it in ink, and then wrote a few large characters on the red paper. I can't remember the specific content. That couplet was written very neatly. When I saw it, I said to my uncle, "Can you teach me how to write couplets?" I clearly remember my uncle asking, "Can you use a brush? Do you know how to write couplets?" I He shook his head and said, "No." So he added, "You are one year older this year, and you don't even know how to use a brush. Taking this opportunity, I will teach you a few tricks." After listening to my uncle, If so, I jumped up with joy.

My uncle told me to sit upright when writing and not to lie on the table. Then he told me in detail how to use the brush. After listening to my uncle's words, I finally learned some of the most basic methods of using a brush. Then my uncle asked me to write a few words and show them to him. I wrote five words: "I love China most." The writing is crooked, probably because I just used a brush! My uncle smiled when he saw it: "The writing is pretty good, but the strokes are not straight."

So my uncle taught me: "You don't have to use the same strength when writing every word. When writing words, the force used should be varied, so that the written words will be more varied and look more beautiful. After speaking, my uncle also wrote a few words in a demonstration for me to imitate. It's quite comfortable. I tried to write a few words like my uncle, and I really made progress. It looked much better than what I just wrote. I was very happy.

My uncle also told me that writing is a good idea. I need to practice regularly and imitate name stickers more. The more I write, the more beautiful my writing becomes.

During this Spring Festival, I initially learned some skills in writing calligraphy, which is really more valuable than getting lucky money. Happy, and more affordable.

Brief comment: This article focuses on an incident that happened during the Spring Festival - writing Spring Festival couplets. The whole article uses a detailed description to describe a very small incident. There must be noses and eyes, and the characters are vivid on the paper. If there is a characteristic in this article, it is that the perspective of selecting materials is small. The whole article only uses the small matter of writing Spring Festival couplets to show the life of the Spring Festival, and uses a small way to see the big picture. Good job.

4. Photography

Second grade (1) Class Xin Yuyun

“Hang yourself with a hook and you won’t be able to change it for a hundred years! "The nursery rhyme rang again, and we remembered the promise we made before the Spring Festival: to take pictures during the New Year.

After eating delicious snacks, we strolled to the Lido Photo Studio. Fortunately! It is still open. We took action, all wearing festive red tops, holding bright red flowers, and took many photos. Wow, this is a good pose! Indeed, I am not bragging. Lily's posture is indeed wonderful, she is such a beautiful girl! Look, the second one comes on stage again, with her right hand on the back of her head and her left hand making a boss look! The fourth one seems to be competing against each other. It’s really fun!

Is it more exciting than the others this time?

I saw Hua Minnan. She dressed up as a woman and made the whole house laugh. She kept laughing, walked on the catwalk, and danced the Yangko dance. She even said a sentence in foreign language: "Happy new year!" "It made everyone laugh again. Not to be outdone, I walked out wearing a wedding dress. They were shocked. After a brief silence, they suddenly burst into laughter. They all fell forward and backward with laughter. But I tried not to laugh. , I made a few poses that I thought were cool. Ha! I was really embarrassed when I saw their eyes, and ran into the changing room with a blush. < /p>

Listen, they are still laughing! Hey, what a misstep and eternal regret! "Why should I wear a wedding dress?

Wow, on the way home, we were still immersed in the wonderful memories. As we walked, we talked. The speaker was eloquent, the listener was interested, and the watcher was interested. We were so confused. We really didn’t know what kind of medicine we were selling. Thinking of this, we laughed so brightly and so intoxicatingly that we laughed all the way... …

Brief comment: This article both shows the happiness of the Spring Festival from a small thing, and both uses the technique of seeing the big from the small.

The more prominent feature of this article is its humorous language. For example, the description of hilarious scenes in the article, the combination of earth and foreign language, and the combination of whole sentences, all give the language a dazzling colorful coat. It seems that if you want an article to be readable and captivating, language must be alive.

5. Watching and playing with lanterns

Zhong Lu, Class 2, Grade 2

Looking forward, looking forward! I finally look forward to the day of the Spring Festival. We have some fun! The new year has arrived again, and the past is like the wind, taking away all my previous memories. This year has begun my new life.

"New Year is here, New Year is here, let's all set off firecrackers..." This is what we sang ourselves. Look, what a happy Spring Festival! Every house is brightly red, pasting couplets, hanging lanterns, and making dumplings. The whole family is busy.

After the New Year’s Eve dinner, I held my sister’s hand and ran to the street in one breath. “It’s so beautiful!” I couldn’t help but admire it. The street is very impressive, with huge crowds of people and busy traffic. We wandered around the streets. What? The lion lantern player is here! You see, the lion's head twists left and right, looking very fierce, but when it drilled around, I was a little worried, what if it fell down! Then I thought about it, how could such a smart lion do this! So I continued to calm down and look at the lights. There were so many people that I had to jump up and watch.

"Sister, sister! The lanterns are here again! Look at the lanterns! Let's go over there and watch them!" my sister shouted. "Lanterns? Lanterns! I finally see you." I thought that there were fewer and fewer lanterns now, and maybe there would be no lanterns this year. This makes me so happy! I responded happily: "Let's go!" My sister heard me say something in foreign language, but she seemed to understand it. She was really a monk two feet tall and couldn't figure it out. I pulled her away and went to look at the lanterns.

The colorful lanterns are so beautiful. The lanterns were changing patterns in the hands of men and women. All of a sudden, there were four big characters: "Happy New Year," and then "Blessings for the New Year." I can't remember how many more words were arranged. Anyway, I only remember the sound of gongs and drums. Heaven, the melodious sound of Suona flute is sent to the eardrums. Not to mention the melodious singing voices of those men and women, "It's the first month of the year, it's New Year..." The voices are sweet and beautiful, and the graceful dance dazzles people. We enjoyed it to our heart's content, which was better than the blur of a dream. There were many programs below, and the big painted-faced clown made people laugh from time to time.

There was laughter and laughter everywhere.

It was late at night and there were fewer and fewer people on the street. Despite this, I still couldn’t bear to leave. My sister pulled me and then reluctantly left. My parents had gone to bed long ago, and they were brought into sweet dreams by the joy of the Spring Festival...

My sister and I were talking about the interesting things about watching the lanterns today on the bed, and then we fell asleep in a daze.

Brief comment: This article is still trying to dig out from the perspective of small events. Of course, this article is based on traditional Chinese customs and habits, which is also a unique perspective. There are festivals and customs, and there are also customs from various places in China. Nowadays, although there are fewer people playing with lanterns during the Spring Festival, there are still some people who play with lanterns who are tenaciously continuing the beautiful customs left by the Chinese ancestors.

6. The sad Spring Festival

Longdi, Class 2, Grade 2

Celebrating the Spring Festival is a joyful day, but I still have the Spring Festival It doesn’t taste like the Spring Festival. Our family should have been living happily, but an unexpected incident ruined our good mood.

In the Spring Festival of that year, we happily prepared to welcome my uncle back for the New Year, but after waiting for a long time, we could not see his uncle. I thought he had something to do temporarily and postponed his return home date. But unexpectedly, a phone call back made my grandparents sit there and sigh, and my aunt secretly wiped her tears. I guessed that my uncle must have encountered some accident outside. As I expected, early in the morning on the first day of junior high school, my father came to my grandma with some clothes and was still talking. I happened to get up and go to the toilet. Saw it. I was still in a daze at first, but now I am much more awake.

I quietly hid by the door and put my ear up to eavesdrop on their conversation. It turned out that they were talking about my uncle. When I heard this, my curiosity became even greater, so I kept hiding outside the door and listened to them. After listening for a long time, I finally understood the cause and effect of why my uncle did not come back.

It turned out that the uncle bought the ticket and was about to come back. Suddenly he met gangsters at the station, and they were a group of very fierce gangsters. They took the uncle to a woods. Because the uncle resisted, they took him to the woods. He beat him up severely and took away all the money. This was the hard-earned money that his uncle had earned over many years. Thinking that all the money was gone, I felt heavy.

Originally, something like this might only be seen on TV, but it actually happened in my own home!

Every time when the happy New Year comes, I will think of that sad Spring Festival, and I also hope that such a thing will never happen to any family. After all, it is a sad and sad thing. ah!

Brief comment: This article is quite unique in concept. When I write about the Spring Festival, I think of happiness. However, this article starts from the opposite side and has new ideas. Therefore, reverse thinking can often lead to unexpected success.

In addition, this article is also extremely successful in the use of suspense.

Why did the uncle not come back? What is the reason? The article does not tell the readers all at once, but hides the truth and slowly reveals the results to the readers in the process of writing. Wonderful!