Detail description composition 400 words Daquan junior high school

1. The details of the 400-word composition described in detail are my mother's inquiries after school, my father said that he would go to bed early after finishing his homework, the teacher asked you if you knew, and the detailed notes handed over by my friend after he got sick.

Although the details are small, they are timeless. We are all just ordinary people, sometimes even mediocre.

Life is connected by trivial details, not as sensational as the plot in the soap opera at eight o'clock, but with more real and touching details than the TV series. Meng Jiao wrote down the details of "She sewed carefully, she made up thoroughly, and she was afraid that the delay would make him go home late", which made countless wanderers cry; Wang Wei wrote down the details of "advising you to drink more wine, there is no reason for people to leave Yangguan in the west", which made countless pedestrians sigh; Su Shi wrote down the details of "Xiao Xuan window, dressing", which made fans all over the world lament.

Just details, not just details, it contains the deep feeling behind the details themselves. Often moved by Rembrandt's Jewish bride, the couple wore beautiful clothes and looked gloomy and restrained. In the dark background, two people snuggled up to each other, without looking at each other, without ups and downs, only holding hands, as if in a casual moment, they caught the painter's heart and left it on the canvas. Even after hundreds of years, they still depend on each other silently, and this feeling will never change.

For the viewer, no matter how gorgeous the clothes are, it is their deep affection, the life course that they have walked through each other and will continue to walk, and the promise of "holding your hand and growing old with your son". This is such a cool and affectionate detail.

The same affection is often found in life, including a cup of hot tea and a knitted sweater presented by my mother to my father; There is a hot water bottle filled by my father and a basin of washing water poured by my mother; And they prepared three meals a day for me, and I patted them on the back. We can't expect life to be great, we just want to make the details better.

"In a word, the love of a lifetime", the lyrics sometimes reveal the truth of life so easily. True warmth is only silently transmitted in the details; People who really love you will only show their love in the details.

Just like mother, father, teacher, friend and lover. This is an exam composition, and I got 57 points.

The author firmly grasps the word "ordinary" to write details, so that the details that are often ignored by us in life can enter our field of vision one by one and show the feelings behind the details. And through ancient poetry and Rembrandt's paintings, further highlight the details, so that a drop of water fully reflects the brilliance of the sun.

The full text is fluent, the sentence is beautiful and the meaning is endless. [Example 2] Anatomical details Hu Ceng, Class 4, Grade 3, Pinghu Middle School, Zhejiang Province, flashed across the starry sky like a meteor, and I missed the details of my wish; When the waves beat against the rocks, I missed the details of prayer; I missed the details when you told the story.

But I won't miss it again. I will seize the details and wait for the miracle of life. The detail is the sewing needle in the mother's hand. Needle and thread is full of love, and mother uses it to light the flame of hope. The detail is a small screw on the machine. When it gets to where it is most needed, the machine will run freely with it. Detail is a dazzling little star in the vast starry sky, which guides us to the palace of success.

Details attract countless eyeballs with their charm. Life is full of surprises because of details! Painters draw the details of life into pictures with colored pens, and writers feel and experience the details with their hearts, and use them to create the most attractive chapters; Photographers capture details and make countless unforgettable details exude unparalleled fragrance.

Lu Xun's details are on the road of "there is no road in the world, and more people will become roads". With his enthusiasm and persistence, he climbed up the ladder and opened up the road to success in life. The details of Zhu Ziqing are looming in The Back. "Blood is more and more attractive", but the details are hidden in it. Affection is hidden in "thinking of relatives twice every holiday season" Friendship grows and blooms in details, and love breeds in details ... accumulate small details in study and pay attention to small details in work. Your life will be more full and perfect.

Don't ignore the details, if you put it aside, you give up the beginning of success; You should grasp the details of success. Over time, every detail is in your diary. When you open it, you have your efforts, your ups and downs. It turns out that you have been working hard, trying to find your miracle and trying to ignite your hope.

Gently pick up a maple leaf on the road, just a small maple leaf, but it records the past of life. Grasp the details of life, with the details on the road to success, you will have the motivation to move forward and a beacon of hope.

One day, when you suddenly look back, you will be delighted to find that so many details around you have paved the way for life. Dissect the details and you will learn to nourish life.

Grasp the details and appreciate the miracle of life! [Brief comment on examples] If you don't elaborate on details, you can't ignore details in life, because details breed success. By expounding the importance of details, the author makes everyone understand that we should firmly grasp the details, dissect the details and ignite the fire of hope in life.

The full text is profound, sentence by sentence, patchwork and full of power. [Example 3] Details-the Source of Beauty and Eternity 3 14200 Lu Minjie, Class 4, Grade 3, Pinghu Middle School, Zhejiang Province People say that it is as short as morning dew, and it will be fleeting when the sun disappears; Eternity is like the sun, rising and setting day after day.

The whole process of all living things is only a moment in the universe for the creator with infinite power. We really feel the flow of time and try to slow it down or even stop it-but who can do it? Poor man, where can I find that tree and fix my short-lived self in the chain of history and become an eternal existence? Actually, it's all around us, the details.

The details are the stones that make up the pyramid, and the sleepers that are peaceful when laying the railway. Only by paying attention to details, grasping details and deducing details can we grasp life and destiny.

Every door-to-door service of Xu Hu is so ordinary and ordinary from an individual point of view, but it is these countless details that have made his glorious image and made him loved by people. There is no denying that Einstein's genius created the theory of relativity.

But when people opened his manuscript, they found that there was no complicated calculus, no subtle syllogism, only tens of thousands of seemingly ordinary times.

2. There are fragments of detailed descriptions in the composition. The 400-word composition "Dangdang Dangdang-"came home from school. I knocked at the door as usual, and then I heard that my grandmother at home should be "coming!" "

The door opened and grandma was sweating profusely. Sweat dripped from the tip of her silver hair. Although she was very hard, she forced a smile: "You came back so early today! The food is not ready yet. " Then I went to cook again.

As usual, I put my schoolbag on the sofa, ready to watch TV, but suddenly I thought of the new text "Back" and the touching father in it, so I had a whim to see if grandma was equally touching. Walking to the door of the kitchen, grandma really turned her back on me and was frying cabbage.

Grandma is very fat and perspires easily. Besides, she was sweating heavily in the thick oil smoke, as if she hadn't wiped her body after taking a shower, but she still tried to control the spatula to turn over the cabbage in the pot with her palm. I approached to observe more clearly and saw grandma's face was covered with sweat and her eyes were almost closed. That's why I didn't pay attention to the iodized rice. The lampblack is too strong for me. If I were you, my face couldn't stand being in such thick oil smoke for a few seconds, what's more, grandma has been stuck in it for so long. My nose hurts when I suddenly think of all this grandma has done for me. I tried to get closer, but a hot oil bead in the pot saw my arm. I was unprepared, so I shouted, "Ah-". Grandma heard this, turned around and saw that I was burned. She looked worried and hurriedly applied cold water. I thought: how many times did a person suffer such pain when she was so close to the pot?

The cabbage at noon today is very delicious. It is the best fried cabbage I have ever eaten. And ate some silver hair. Seeing them, my tears flowed down defenseless, and I remembered grandma's cooking action again. I quietly put those pieces of silver in my pocket, intending to keep them forever, because they contain grandma's deep love for me.

My mother is an ordinary person.

She is not tall, and her gentle eyes look kind. Usually quiet, she is a hardworking and kind housewife.

As long as the floor at home is a little dirty, my mother will pick up the broom and mop until the floor is polished to reflect people's shadows. Mom also has a pair of dexterous hands.

Once, my pants were a little rotten and I didn't want to wear them, so I had to pester my mother to buy me new ones. My mother wouldn't buy it for me, so she took out her sewing basket and patched up the rotten place. She skillfully embroidered a bear, and the rotten place happened to be one of the bear's eyes.

After I put it on, many students asked me where I bought it. I proudly said, "this is a love card, you can't buy it!" " "Some time ago, sandbags were popular in schools.

The students all buy ready-made goods in the shop. I asked my mother for money and bought one.

Mom said, "It's not necessary. Wait a minute, I'll sew one for you. " I saw my mother looking for some rags and flying needles, which dazzled me.

It only takes a few minutes to sew. Mother embroidered a Kobanawa and some green leaves on it.

That's not a sandbag, it's obviously a work of art, and I can't bear to throw it! I love my mother, and I love her industrious and dexterous hands even more.

4. The detailed description of the 400-word composition details is mom's inquiry after school. The details are that dad said he would go to bed early after finishing his homework. The details are the teacher's eyes when he finished his homework. The details are the detailed notes handed over by his friend after he got sick.

Although the details are small, they are timeless. We are all just ordinary people, sometimes even mediocre.

Life is connected by trivial details, not as sensational as the plot in the soap opera at eight o'clock, but with more real and touching details than the TV series. Meng Jiao wrote down the details of "She sewed carefully, she made up thoroughly, and she was afraid that the delay would make him go home late", which made countless wanderers cry; Wang Wei wrote down the details of "advising you to drink more wine, there is no reason for people to leave Yangguan in the west", which made countless pedestrians sigh; Su Shi wrote down the details of "Xiao Xuan window, dressing", which made fans all over the world lament.

Just details, not just details, it contains the deep feeling behind the details themselves. Often moved by Rembrandt's Jewish bride, the couple wore beautiful clothes and looked gloomy and restrained. In the dark background, two people snuggled up to each other, without looking at each other, without ups and downs, only holding hands, as if in a casual moment, they caught the painter's heart and left it on the canvas. Even after hundreds of years, they still depend on each other silently, and this feeling will never change.

For the viewer, no matter how gorgeous the clothes are, it is their deep affection, the life course that they have walked through each other and will continue to walk, and the promise of "holding your hand and growing old with your son". This is such a cool and affectionate detail.

The same affection is often found in life, including a cup of hot tea and a knitted sweater presented by my mother to my father; There is a hot water bottle filled by my father and a basin of washing water poured by my mother; And they prepared three meals a day for me, and I patted them on the back. We can't expect life to be great, we just want to make the details better.

"In a word, the love of a lifetime", the lyrics sometimes reveal the truth of life so easily. True warmth is only silently transmitted in the details; People who really love you will only show their love in the details.

Just like mother, father, teacher, friend and lover. This is an exam composition, and I got 57 points.

The author firmly grasps the word "ordinary" to write details, so that the details that are often ignored by us in life can enter our field of vision one by one and show the feelings behind the details. And through ancient poetry and Rembrandt's paintings, further highlight the details, so that a drop of water fully reflects the brilliance of the sun.

The full text is fluent, the sentence is beautiful and the meaning is endless. [Example 2] Anatomical details Hu Ceng, Class 4, Grade 3, Pinghu Middle School, Zhejiang Province, flashed across the starry sky like a meteor, and I missed the details of my wish; When the waves beat against the rocks, I missed the details of prayer; I missed the details when you told the story.

But I won't miss it again. I will seize the details and wait for the miracle of life. The detail is the sewing needle in the mother's hand. Needle and thread is full of love, and mother uses it to light the flame of hope. The detail is a small screw on the machine. When it gets to where it is most needed, the machine will run freely with it. Detail is a dazzling little star in the vast starry sky, which guides us to the palace of success.

Details attract countless eyeballs with their charm. Life is full of surprises because of details! Painters draw the details of life into pictures with colored pens, and writers feel and experience the details with their hearts, and use them to create the most attractive chapters; Photographers capture details and make countless unforgettable details exude unparalleled fragrance.

Lu Xun's details are on the road of "there is no road in the world, and more people will become roads". With his enthusiasm and persistence, he climbed up the ladder and opened up the road to success in life. The details of Zhu Ziqing are looming in The Back. "Blood is more and more attractive", but the details are hidden in it. Affection is hidden in "thinking of relatives twice every holiday season" Friendship grows and blooms in details, and love breeds in details ... accumulate small details in study and pay attention to small details in work. Your life will be more full and perfect.

Don't ignore the details, if you put it aside, you give up the beginning of success; You should grasp the details of success. Over time, every detail is in your diary. When you open it, you have your efforts, your ups and downs. It turns out that you have been working hard, trying to find your miracle and trying to ignite your hope.

Gently pick up a maple leaf on the road, just a small maple leaf, but it records the past of life. Grasp the details of life, with the details on the road to success, you will have the motivation to move forward and a beacon of hope.

One day, when you suddenly look back, you will be delighted to find that so many details around you have paved the way for life. Dissect the details and you will learn to nourish life.

Grasp the details and appreciate the miracle of life! [Brief comment on examples] If you don't elaborate on details, you can't ignore details in life, because details breed success. By expounding the importance of details, the author makes everyone understand that we should firmly grasp the details, dissect the details and ignite the fire of hope in life.

The full text is profound, sentence by sentence, patchwork and full of power. [Example 3] Details-the Source of Beauty and Eternity 3 14200 Lu Minjie, Class 4, Grade 3, Pinghu Middle School, Zhejiang Province People say that it is as short as morning dew, and it will be fleeting when the sun disappears; Eternity is like the sun, rising and setting day after day.

The whole process of all living things is only a moment in the universe for the creator with infinite power. We really feel the flow of time and try to slow it down or even stop it-but who can do it? Poor man, where can I find that tree and fix my short-lived self in the chain of history and become an eternal existence? Actually, it's all around us, the details.

The details are the stones that make up the pyramid, and the sleepers that are peaceful when laying the railway. Only by paying attention to details, grasping details and deducing details can we grasp life and destiny.

Every door-to-door service of Xu Hu is so ordinary and ordinary from an individual point of view, but it is these countless details that have made his glorious image and made him loved by people. There is no denying that Einstein's genius created the theory of relativity.

But when people opened his manuscript, they found that there was no complicated calculus, no subtle syllogism, only tens of thousands of seemingly ordinary times.

I feel a little bored this afternoon.

Just as I was about to pack my schoolbag, it was getting dark. I think, when I go to school, how can I get to the night? At this time, dark clouds are gathering, and they cover our whole community like a black cloth. Suddenly, a strong wind blew the flowers on the balcony. I thought: It must be raining.

After two or three seconds, a flash of lightning flashed across the sky, and I quickly closed the window. Before I could catch my breath, another rumble of thunder startled me, followed by a downpour. Water drops are really like transparent pearls. At this time, I smelled a fragrance and felt very cool.

But it's almost time for class, but even with an umbrella in such a heavy rain, my umbrella will "drip through the stone"! I have to wait at home. I turned on the light because it was too dark. I was ready by this time, but the light was destroyed by lightning, so I had to lie in bed and wait.

After 30 minutes, these 30 minutes are long and boring! I hope the rain will stop. Suddenly, the rain seems to understand what I mean. In less than five minutes, the rain stopped and the earth returned to its original vitality. However, after the rain, I feel very cool in summer. I think: nature is so magical that even the rainstorm has its own peculiarities. It seems that we should observe nature more in the future.

6. Detailed Description Composition 400 My classmate (character description fragment)

Look at her dark face, revealing an indomitable character, with a pair of glass ball-like eyes shining under her thick black eyebrows, carefully observing her opponent's every move, alert and flexible. The uneven outline outlines her unremitting pursuit of table tennis. Although she is short and not strong, she is still crazy about sports. Just like her shocking name-Thunderstorm Point, the thunder keeps coming!

Her opponent is now classmate Q. She lifts the table tennis board without weakness, shrugs habitually, twists her neck, squats professionally, raises her head slightly, reveals daunting eyes, and smiles and says softly, "Serve!" The yellow ball shot at her quickly, and she bent down without hesitation, waved her arm and hit it back with a bang. Who knows, the opponent is not to be outdone, and it is a direct shot. She frowned warily, stepped back with her left foot and gave the ball a hard push with her right hand, never leaving the ball for a moment. The opponent directly "killed the ball", which made her hard to prevent and lost a goal!

"Damn it!" She gritted her teeth, reached for the towel, wiped her sweat and threw it back.

"Boy, not bad!" She clenched the board, gently threw the ball into the air and lifted it at lightning speed, leaving two crunches. The opponent is a capable person and difficult to deal with. Time has passed for a long time, and there is no winner. She is a little worried that the yellow ball is like a small flame, which makes people panic. Although she flashed left and right, her opponent did not move.

She was annoyed and the sweat on her forehead was burning. She roared, her eyebrows sweated together, and the ball "brushed" and hit the opponent's key, and the opponent staggered back. Suddenly lost a goal!

7. The "characters" in the detailed description composition of the first grade are the soul of the article, but the common characters in students' exercises are often one-sided, neither personalized nor vivid, and the whole article looks dry, boring and lacking in appeal.

If you read these works carefully, you will find a common problem: you often just pursue writing something completely, ignoring vivid, concrete and nuanced details. Detail description has a wide range and various functions, but it mainly depicts characters and shapes their images.

Vivid details are like human cells. Without them, people will lose their lives. Without details, the characters lose their flesh and blood. Writer Lee Joon said: "In revealing a character's personality characteristics, a detail sometimes plays the same role as a plot or a scene."

As the saying goes, "the spirit is seen in the nuances." The creation of literary masters attaches great importance to the description of details.

In Lu Xun's The True Story of Ah Q, the first sentence of Ah Q was described in detail: "When it was time to draw a circle, the hand just shook with a pen, and the man spread the paper on the ground, and Ah Q fell down and tried to draw a circle. Afraid of being laughed at, he decided to draw a circle, but the damn pen was not only heavy, but also disobedient. It just shook and almost closed, but shrugged its shoulders and turned into a melon seed. "

The details of this behavior concretely, vividly and vividly reflect Ah Q's personality characteristics ―― he stuck to the "spiritual victory law" of self-deception until his death. When people read this detailed description, who can not think that Ah Q is ridiculous, pathetic and pitiful? How can we not "mourn its misfortune and anger its indisputable", and then think deeply about the national inferiority? Not only China writers, but also foreign writers.

For example, Balzac's Eugenie Grandet wrote that before Grandet died, when the priest sent the gilded cross to his lips to kiss the icon of Christ, "he made a terrible gesture and tried to hold the cross in his hand, which cost him his life." Only this detail vividly depicts the ugly image of the insatiable and untiring miser. It is the description of details that makes the characters vivid and vivid. The characters are vivid, the whole article is full of vitality and strong appeal.

Of course, not all the details of life are valuable, and it is not just to write "fine". A good detail description must be useful, true and typical.

It must express the mental outlook of the characters and deepen the theme of the article. It must conform to the personality characteristics of the characters and the reality of real life, and should best highlight the personality characteristics of the characters. Where do the details come from? Literature comes from life, and details are in colorful life.

Be a conscientious person in life and always pay attention to the people and things around you, especially the objects you describe. On the streets of Shaoxing, Xianheng Hotel, Lu Xun concentrated on observing short-sleeved gangs and long-sleeved guests before "painting the soul of the silent".

In the dark coffee room in Dublin, Joyce coldly looked at the wandering * * *, liars, mental patients, beggars and rich people, brewing Ulysses that shocked the world. Throughout the ages, great writers have always devoted their lives to catching people and things that make the soul tremble and casting them into chapters that will last forever.

Grasp the details, use the details, make this golden key work for you, and make your article shine.

8. 400 words of character details. He is seven years old. He is neither tall nor thin, but he looks very energetic.

He has short hair, a handsome face with bright black eyes and a high nose like a carrot. People who have been to his house say that he has good features and is a good-looking boy.

My sister is very cute. She has been three months. A few days ago, it was my sister's centenary birthday. My mother drove her little sister to "Love You Baby" and took some photos.

My sister has a pair of sparkling eyes, a bulging face and a very small mouth. She has a pair of lovely ears, and a pair of small hands clenched their fists and swayed from time to time.

Look! That meaty little foot looks like a steamed bun, so cute! I love my sister. My favorite classmate is Geng Hao, a handsome boy. Look! He is not tall, but he looks strong. His arms and legs are like ripe corn cobs.

He likes to wear a coat without buttons, and he says, "That will be more imposing." Geng Hao's head is round, his red face is round, and coincidentally, his shiny black eyes are round.

I like his smile best. When he laughed, his black eyes turned into two crescent moons. His little red mouth likes telling jokes. His jokes always make us laugh until the end, and then the curved crescent moon appears again.

My father is the first mate of the merchant ship of ocean shipping company. He is very tall, his yellowish hair is naturally curly, his white square face is embedded with a pair of smart eyes, and his nose is particularly big under his high nose.

When I was a child, I often looked at his nostrils and asked, "Dad, why are your nostrils so big?" He always answers with a smile; "Choose a horse with a big nose, because a horse with a big nose runs fast. Dad was a sprint champion at school when he was a child. Do not believe you ask your mother. "

At this time, my mother and I will look at his big nostrils and laugh. There is such a little boy in our class. He is not tall, his body is like a small tree, and his limbs are like fresh shoots.

His thin body bears a big head, which really worries people whether his weak body can hold on. His face is very white, and the most striking thing is his big watery eyes, which are wide and round. Sometimes it really reminds people of the Monkey King's critical eyes in The Journey to the West. People say, "The eyes are the windows to the soul."

His big head is full of rich knowledge, which is enviable. He also has a clever little mouth, red, and sings a beautiful song! Do you know him? Want to know who he is? He is Wang Yuxi from our class.

My cousin is five years old this year. Although she is only five years old, sometimes I can't even tell, so I have to give her three points. Cousin is very cute, with two dimples on her chubby face.

Sometimes when we smile at her, she will say, "I know what you are laughing at. You are laughing at my dimples. " With that, he poked her dimples with chubby fingers, looking very proud.

The most attractive thing about my cousin is her eyes. Her black eyes are so big that they almost occupy the whole eyeball. They are dark and seem to have no end in sight. When she asks you for something, she looks at you with pleading eyes, and your heart suddenly softens. She will give you whatever she wants.

My father is a humorous person. My father is short, thin and thin, with white skin and black hair. Anyone who sees him will think that he has permed his hair in the barber shop.

His colleagues say that he is a fallen Christian, and I think so. Artist, a famous binding artist in five provinces of Central and South China. His solo exhibition was well received by many celebrities.

He is also a funny man, especially fond of joking. I don't know if all artists are humorous, but I think my father is full of humorous cells. No matter how busy and tired he was at work, as soon as he entered the house, to be exact, he said that as soon as he saw me, he immediately smiled and I danced with him.

A pair of small palms splashed water on each other, and everyone's face was covered with crystal beads. The water blurred our eyes, so we all stepped aside, wiped them off with our hands, and then "attacked" violently.

The whole river suddenly became noisy, shouting and laughing, and merged into a cheerful symphony. Tired of playing with water fights, I chased after them in the river.

One chased, the other ran, and crossed the water. A small body is as slippery as a loach and can't be caught. The songs and laughter on the river are now far away from the two sides.

We naughty boys will come to Xiaoshiwan in small groups, take off our pants and go into the water naked, regardless of their parents' repeated advice. Diving, vertical dragonflies, water fights, tumbling over the river, chasing around in the water like a little loach, shouting and beating, I really can't say it.

A wonderful article of about 9.400 words with a detailed description. On the campus in the morning, the sunshine is as pure as water.

The students' laughter is permeated with the warm gold on campus. At that time, we were still young, and every morning seemed to be the same, bright and relaxed. But for the mother and son in memory, it is different.

My son's legs are a little disabled, but he insists on walking on his own legs without crutches. It is undoubtedly difficult for him to climb the stairs. His mother, a very gentle and short woman, holds her son every day and pulls him up the stairs step by step. I only remember their backs, so slow but indifferent. I never look back at them because I think curious eyes will hurt them. At first, the students were curious and looked at them unconsciously, but they didn't show anything strange, as if there were only their mother and son, stairs and sunshine in the world.

The mother and son persisted day after day, and soon the students got used to it. That was in junior high school. I should have forgotten a long time ago. On that day, at the moment they turned the stairs, the sun stung my eyes, and their hesitation and gaze made me unforgettable.

On that day, the students were still walking briskly on the stairs, and the sun was still rising, flowing down the first step through the big window at the corner of the stairs. It's the same pair of backs-the son is hunched, his left hand is holding the handrail tightly, the mother's right shoulder is carrying her son's schoolbag that doesn't match her, and her hands are holding her son's right arm, which seems to be very tight and gently held. My son climbed a step with some difficulty in his left leg, then pulled the handrail with his left hand, supported his mother with his right arm, twisted his upper body and lifted the weight-bearing right leg to a step. Then his left hand reached up and grabbed the handrail. His mother climbed a step and looked at him sideways, but he kept his head down and tried to repeat this action over and over again. The bright morning light outlined the mother's side face, not as bright as the sun. Years have left marks on her face, but her gentle expression has never changed. I always feel that she is smiling gently, but she is not smiling. That hidden smile may be well-meaning.