Composition guidance for the description of small scenes in life

1. Small lens composition in life (how many) Small lenses in life

Life is like a kaleidoscope, colorful; It is also like a wonderful movie, which has been presented to us all the time. Similarly, life movies also show the advantages and disadvantages of people.

On this day, when I got downstairs, I saw a cleaner pushing a garbage truck to sweep the floor in our community. I took out my bike and practiced driving in the community. After a while, I saw the cleaner again. He is trying to sweep the floor. He saw his head sweating and wiped it with a towel from time to time. I wanted to go up and help him, but the scene made me feel very wronged by the cleaner.

In the morning, the door of the library opened and all kinds of people rushed into the library. Keep a shawl

Hair, braid, shave, comb separately, black hair, white hair, ... wear leather shoes.

Wearing sneakers, high heels, low heels, ... The spacious library seems a bit crowded.

As soon as people entered the library, they took a deep breath and smiled with relief, as if they had been shut up all night.

The air in the library is very fresh, and then, eyelids, phoenix eyes and crow's feet eyes all aim at their own goals; Rough hands, delicate hands, broad hands and slender hands all carefully take down the book and touch it very gently, just like touching a child's smooth face. ...

After a commotion in the library for a while, it was calm again, and occasionally the sound of turning pages could be heard, which was also very small and short. People are completely immersed in the sea of books ...

A young man with glasses, while looking at his desk, sometimes stopped to frown and think about something, and sometimes helped the glasses that slipped under his nose; A girl wearing many shawls, at the moment, didn't manage to sort out those messy long hair, but greedily swept with big eyes and casually shook the bunch of Liu Haier hanging from her forehead. Look at that expression, if she had scissors, she would definitely break the bundle of Liu Haier; An old man, with presbyopic glasses on his nose and squinting his eyes, held the book far away. It looked very hard, but he still couldn't bear to put it down. Several children are prone on the table, pointing to words, reading word by word, with great difficulty, but with great concentration. ...

I left the library quietly without disturbing anyone, but I can't forget the little scenes in my life. He seems to have told me something. What is this?

2. How to write small shots in life in the composition "Small shots in life"

Life is like a movie, a colorful life is synthesized by many wonderful lens groups. I love life, especially those little mirrors, because they have educated me and inspired me.

It was a winter night and it snowed heavily. The ground is covered with thick snow, as if wearing new clothes and becoming a world of powder jade. My mother and I were about to go home when we saw a senior brother coming. Obviously, he has just finished his evening self-study. He picked up his mobile phone and called: "Hello, Mom! Why didn't you pick me up? Do you want to freeze me to death? Hurry up! " He hung up before his mother finished explaining. I was surprised to see him put down his cell phone and sit in the opposite public seat, still muttering, "Really, I'm freezing ..."

Not long after, a woman who was nearly sixty years old and had a vicissitudes of life came to her brother anxiously. "You finally came. What about the car? " "I'm sorry ... I'm a little dizzy and can't ride a bike ..." "I'm dizzy and can't ride a bike? Then why did you come? " Say that finish, I left without looking back. Leave the sick mother to wipe her tears while walking.

I stood there quietly, my heart was rough, and I couldn't help feeling a lot. Small lenses in life let us see the beauty and ugliness of this world clearly.

3. Writing instruction: How do primary school students describe the scenery? An article about scenery focuses on describing scenery, such as clouds and lightning, snow and rain, wind and frost, the sun, moon and stars, mountains and rivers, lakes and seas, flowers and trees, etc.

Scenery description uses vivid language to describe the state and characteristics of natural scenery and social environment from the aspects of shape, color, sound, light and shadow, and reappears in front of readers, giving people an immersive feeling. To write this kind of article well, I think we should pay attention to the following aspects: First, go deep into the field, observe carefully and accumulate materials.

As the saying goes, "A clever woman can't cook without rice." To write a good article about scenery description, we must learn to observe at ordinary times and accumulate materials.

In specific exercises, if you plan to write about a certain scenery, don't rely on imagination, but go deep into the field, observe carefully and accumulate writing materials. When guiding students to observe, we should infiltrate some common observation orders into students: (1) Choose a good angle and observe at a fixed point.

Fixed-point observation is a way to observe things from a fixed position. Using this method, we should first choose the right observation point, choose the right perspective, limit the observed scene to a fixed time and space, aim at the target, and keep a certain order position, and then observe from this point.

This fixed-point observation method of aiming directly at the picture is most suitable for describing the natural scenery or customs in a typical environment, just like the close-up of photography. Using the fixed-point description after fixed-point observation, we can describe the unique and distinctive scenery, giving readers an immersive feeling and leaving a deep impression.

For example, in Bird's Paradise, the author Ba Jin described it like this: "Our boat is getting closer to the banyan tree, so I have a chance to see its true colors. It is really a big banyan tree with countless branches. The branches took root again, and many roots hung down to the ground and plunged into the soil.

Some branches hang down to the water, and from a distance, they look like a big tree lying on the water. ""The banyan tree is in its heyday, and it seems to show us all its vitality.

There are so many green leaves, one on top of the other, leaving no gaps. Green is shining in our eyes, as if there is a new life trembling on every leaf.

Such a beautiful southern tree. Based on the bow, the author focuses on the growth of the big banyan tree when the hull approaches, and observes the shape of the big banyan tree at a fixed point, and sees the true face of this strange big banyan tree, with countless branches, which shows that it is very dense; "The branches have taken root again ... hanging straight on the ground, going deep into the soil ... lying on the water."

Observed the overall image of the big banyan tree; Observing the unique beauty of the big banyan tree, it is found that "so many green leaves" are not clearly distinguishable one by one, but "piled on another". This is the author fixed his observation eyes on the big banyan tree from beginning to end, and carefully observed the shape, color and position of the branches, leaves and roots of the banyan tree.

Then, from the description of modeling, the vitality of banyan tree is vividly displayed. (2) Action for change.

When observing, the observation points are different and the observation angles are different, so the situation you see is different and the feelings you get are very different. As Su Shi, a poet in the Northern Song Dynasty, wrote in the poem Xilin Wall Topic: "Looking from the side of the ridge, it is different from the distance."

Therefore, when guiding students to observe, students should adopt the moving point observation method, that is, constantly moving the observation position and observing the performance of the same scene from different observation angles. Moving point observation has two meanings: first, the observation point should move continuously; The second is to move observation points in order.

This observation method is suitable for observing the changing scenery. Because of the author's in-depth and meticulous observation of the scenery, he clearly understands the different forms and colors of the scenery in all aspects, so he can describe it with ease and have something to say, which can not only describe the shape of the scenery, but also show the appearance of the scenery, so that the scenery can be clearly presented to the readers.

When you come to a scenic spot you like, you'd better look at the panorama first, get a preliminary impression of the whole, and then walk forward with brisk steps, so that the scenery in your eyes will change with your footsteps. This is the "scene change" method. For example, in the lesson of Summer Palace, the author describes the scenery in the garden from different observation points: standing at the gate of the park, at the foot of Wanshou Mountain, on Wanshou Mountain, or by the lake of Kunming, depicting a colorful picture. The Summer Palace has a vast territory, so it is impossible for the author to see the scenery at a glance. Only by moving and changing the observation points can he describe the landscape in detail.

(3) Grasp the characteristics of the described object for observation. Although every scene is inseparable from mountains, water, flowers, trees, insects, fish, birds and animals ... but every scene has its own different characteristics, that is, the same scene, because the seasons are different, the characteristics are different.

If you can't grasp the characteristics when observing, the articles written will be the same and won't infect readers. Therefore, whether you write about the beauty of spring flowers, the quiet beauty of autumn leaves, the grandeur of rivers and seas, or the flowing water of rivers, you should observe them carefully, grasp their characteristics, understand the whole picture of the scenery, and write around a center.

For example, in the small garden of the school, the fragrance of flowers is accompanied by the sound of reading, which is characterized by quietness and beauty; There are horizontal bars, parallel bars and basketball courts on the playground. Students are exercising, which is characterized by excitement. In addition, some scenes have to be compared and observed at the same time to find the difference of this thing.

For example, observing leaves, if you only stare at one kind of leaves and don't make a comparison, you will think that green is its biggest feature, but by comparison, you will find that pine leaves are like needles, willow leaves are like eyebrows, and maple leaves are like duck feet, which is their real feature. Second, realize "love in the scenery".

The so-called "feelings in the landscape" is to pin your feelings on the description of the landscape. A landscape without a sense of color is just a pale "shell" and lifeless.

When describing a scene, we should not only write the beauty of the scene, but also write our own true feelings, so that the characteristics of the scene can naturally blend with our feelings. The article written in this way can be full of emotion, scenery and scenes, giving people a strong appeal.

For example, in Shan Yu.

4. The choice of materials for street scene composition, the topic is fine weather, just like yesterday. The sun shines on every corner, along the dirty path.

The uncle who sells breakfast is as busy as ever, but very happy. Whenever he sells a fried dough stick or a bowl of soybean milk, he smiles and twists the change in his pocket. People on the road are busy catching their own way, with a fast pace and full of rhythm.

I wandered aimlessly in this familiar street. The body is already very tired. But I don't know where the real resting place will be. I don't know if that distant place called heaven will open for me.

The girl selling flowers fiddled with pots of fresh and beautiful flowers in front of her. She always comes out early. Because the flowers in the morning will look more gorgeous. When I pass by here, I always like to ask her about the price of some unknown flowers, and then tell her a few jokes to make her squint and say, "You are so interesting ..."

But today I just want to leave and see her. Because it makes her more beautiful. It may also be that there are countless bright flowers facing it, showing the ruddy lips more and more.

The longer you stay in this street, the more comfortable you will feel. Maybe it's because I've been depressed at home for a long time and it's hard to get some air. There were no hawking and shouting, and the street was not crowded because I came early. There are few people here before nine o'clock. But business people must come early, occupy the territory and put the goods in order. Although the smell of spring is approaching, the cold still makes people tremble.

Cars lined up on the side of the road, and I wondered how spectacular it would be if they were pushed down. Someone took out a small cage from a big woven bag, which contained rabbits or cats. Very small and cute. And very weak. I've always liked these things. I just can't raise so many at home. For now, the clown cat at home has spent a lot of energy.

There are many people in this street, accompanied by noise. But to me, this noisy sound is very real. Are you still human without noise?

Slow down. I want to really feel where I am. This is not my little room. I can only look at the sky overhead through the window. When I feel cold, I close the window, then turn aside, take a book and eat the words on it.

I have been walking this long street for more than ten years. But I feel different every time, but I can't describe it. In other words, I have never looked around so carefully as I do today. I think it would be nice if I could keep doing this, because I need excitement. But where is the end?

Shopping malls, supermarkets, stalls, those stall owners look at people coming and going in the past, and their eyes show a very complicated expression. They stared at the pile of goods in front of them for a long time, and the dust fell on it, but no one came to see it and no one asked for the price. Rabbits huddle together to keep out the cold, while the little girl selling rabbits can only stare at the snack bar across the street.

Steaming pancakes, all kinds of barbecues, she must want to try them. But I haven't sold a rabbit for a long time. Not that people don't like it. Maybe they are too busy to look after small animals.

Since I came to this world, can I go back? If you can't be born, how will the small animals choose-if they can choose?

The fortune-teller set out, all talking about their abilities. There are also a few people who are willing to see it. Spending some money is a virtue. Let the great gods point the way. After all, if you want to go down a certain road, you still have to show the way. It's that a person's life is too short, and everyone is afraid of making a mistake.

The sun began to shine. But the wind is cold. Sunlight can penetrate the glass and shine into the house, but it can't penetrate the heavy mood. Spring has come, but it can't take away the winter in my heart.

Maybe just tired. I think. When is the carefree day?

In this chaotic and not so clean street, maybe you can meet one or two beautiful little things. That's what I thought. Paper-cutting, New Year pictures and clay figurines are all interesting, but I don't want to take them home. I think I'm the only one who can take it home.

When I turned around, I saw the peddler pushing a tricycle and running far away-there was no place to put it in the future. I slipped onto the sidewalk and walked straight home. Go home. At least it can be warmer. Small traders will think so, too. A warm place is home, but you can't make money by staying at home.

The busy figure in the street gradually disappeared from my sight. But I can still see someone shaking hands and someone patting the dust on the goods. It's so hard for people to live. It's easier to be born than to survive.

Learning is far from being so lively, and some are just depressed. It's easy to get out. But looking around, I really want to find a place to hide. The outside world may not be beautiful, but it is real. But this truth is also painful.

5. An essay "Small Shots in Life" should be described in detail, such as language, movements and expressions. You must bend down once, salute once and greet once.

I don't know how many small shots there are in life, good and bad, happy and sad, colorful. Many small shots enrich our life, just like a drama, which is composed of wonderful small shots. I love life, especially the small lens in life. Here's a small shot.

In life, everyone is inseparable from reading. As the saying goes, "reading makes people progress"! The library that wants to study is a good place to go. In the morning, the door of the library opened and people rushed in. They all want to gain the power of knowledge quickly.

The spacious library will soon be crowded with people. I saw rows of big bookshelves filled with different kinds of books.

Some people stand in front of the bookshelf and choose the books they need, while others sit quietly at their desks, reading carefully and taking notes. People go to the front of the book, take a deep breath, stretch out their wide hands, and then keep their bright eyes on the target.

The library, which had been in turmoil for some time, gradually calmed down and people absorbed knowledge to their heart's content. You see, that old woman is wearing reading glasses, staring at the book in her hand, with a smile on her mouth; A girl picked up a book, pushed Liu Haier away blindfolded and read it with relish; A few children who don't seem to know much, lying on the table, slowly looking at the books in their hands, look very tired but very happy ... People are completely immersed in the sea of books, and I also picked up a book, held it in my hand and read it with relish.

This is a trivial little shot, I will be educated and inspired ... I will work harder at school now, learn knowledge well and be a useful person in the future.

6. How to write a composition of small lens in life? The air in the museum is very fresh. Then, eyelids, phoenix eyes and eyes with crow's feet all set their sights on their own goals. Rough hands, delicate hands, broad hands and slender hands all carefully take down the book and touch it very gently, just like touching a child's smooth face. ...

After the commotion in the library for a while, it was calm again, and occasionally the sound of turning pages was heard, which was also very small and short. People are completely immersed in the sea of books ...

A young man with glasses, while looking at his desk, sometimes stopped to frown and think about something, and sometimes helped the glasses that slipped under his nose; A girl with many shawls doesn't care about sorting out those messy long hair at the moment, but greedily sweeps with big eyes and shakes the bunch of Liu Haier hanging to her forehead. Look at that look, if there are scissors,

7. Write the composition "Small Lens in Life" 1. Youth is the nectar made from the blood drops of will and the sweat of hard work; Youth is a rainbow woven with eternal hope and eternal yearning-gorgeous and brilliant; Youth is an iron wall built with eternal persistence and tenacious toughness.

2. Faith is the pillar of high-rise buildings. Without it, it's just a pile of scattered bricks. Faith is the bed of a surging river. Without it, there is only a tidal wave. Faith is the beacon of blazing fire. Without it, there is only a cold firewood. Faith is the main engine of ocean-going ships. Without it, there is only a paralyzed giant frame. 3. Standing on the coast of history, I trace back to the ditch of history: Dr. Chu thought about Zepan and did not regret his death; Wei Wudi pointed the whip to the east with great courage; Tao Yuanming carefree Nanshan, drinking and picking chrysanthemums ... they chose eternity, even if they flatter and slander, they don't follow, which is a persistent choice; Even if the horse dies, it is only a hero's choice; Even if you are poor and have no food all day, you are willing to take pleasure in it and devote yourself to farming. This is an elegant choice.

Some choices, emperors will become their great achievements, and sages will touch guests and become their eternal articles. Only when you set out will you reach your ideal and destination. Only by working hard can we achieve brilliant success. Only when you sow will you reap.

Only by pursuing can we taste honest people. 5. How much laughter friendship aroused and how many tears friendship wiped away.

The harbor of friendship is warm and affectionate, and the breeze of friendship sails. Friendship is not an emotional investment, and there is no need for dividends and dividends.

6. In the moonlight in Ying Ying, I picked up the clearest cup; After sunset, I hold a wisp of the warmest; Burning red leaves, I picked up the hottest one; I picked a bunch of the most colorful herbs; In the long life, I want to pick out the most important thing in the world-perseverance. 7. If life is a solemn castle, if life is a lush tree, if life is a flying seabird.

Then, faith is the pillar of the dome, the deeply rooted root and the fluttering wings. Without faith, there is no motivation for life; Without faith, the beauty of life will disappear.

8. Perseverance is a levee of thousands of miles. Only by the condensation of one sand and one stone and the accumulation of bit by bit can there be grandeur without seeing the head before and the tail after; Perseverance is that spring silkworms spin silk one by one, and only by persisting one by one can they break out of the cocoon and see the brilliance again; Perseverance is the sail of a long-distance ship. With sails, the ship can reach the other side of success. 9. Love is a piece of sunshine that shines in winter, which makes people who are poor and sick feel the warmth of the world; Love is the spring in the desert, which makes people on the verge of despair see the hope of life again; Love is a ballad floating in the night sky, which gives spiritual comfort to lonely and helpless people.

10, the true nature of the heart should be like this. Success, like the moonlight shining on flowers, the deep pool is slightly blue, regardless of good or bad, regardless of the detachment of success or failure, is a post station that raises its whip and rides a horse to climb high; Defeated, still dripping water wears away the stone and merges into the sea. There is a kind of pride that is poor and strong and does not fall into the blue sky. There is a kind of stubbornness of "being a self-taught person and constantly striving for self-improvement".

Rong, Jiangshan is still the same, the painting style is still the same, just like the sea and mountains, familiar with the years, flashy and arrogant; Bear the burden of humiliation, Han Xin, snow pine, like a fairy with feathers, know how to take a step back and broaden the horizon, and refuse to give up eating because of choking. The ending is 0 1, without the depth of blue sky, there can be the elegance of white clouds; Without the magnificence of the sea, there can be the elegance of the stream; Without the fragrance of Yuan Ye, there can be green grass.

There is no place for a bystander in life. We can always find our own place, our own light source and our own voice. 02. Standing on the coast of history, I trace back to the ditch of history: Dr. Chu meditated on Zehe and died without regret; Wei Wudi pointed the whip to the east with great courage; Tao Yuanming carefree Nanshan, drinking and picking chrysanthemums ... they chose eternity, even if they flatter and slander, they don't follow, which is a persistent choice; Even if the horse dies, it is only a hero's choice; Even if you are poor and have no food all day, you are willing to take pleasure in it and devote yourself to farming. This is an elegant choice.

Some choices, emperors will become their great achievements, and sages will touch guests and become their eternal articles. Only when we set out will we reach our ideal and destination. Only by working hard can we achieve brilliant success. Only when you sow will you reap.

Only by pursuing can we taste honest people. Although you are still a seedling.

However, as long as you persevere, you will eventually become a towering tree; Although you are only a trickle now, as long as you persevere, you will eventually embrace the sea; Although you are only a young eagle now, as long as you aim high and fall a few times, you will eventually occupy the blue sky. 05, Bing Xin said: "Love is on the left, sympathy is on the right, walk on both sides of life, sow seeds at any time, blossom at any time, decorate this long journey with fragrant flowers, so that pedestrians who wear branches and brush leaves will not feel pain, tears can fall, but they will not feel sad."

06. Pessimists are defeated by themselves first, and then by life; An optimist conquers himself first, then life. Pessimists have limited pain and limited future; An optimistic person has gone through many hardships and has a bright future.

In the eyes of pessimists, what is possible may also become impossible; In the eyes of optimists, the impossible becomes possible. Pessimism can only produce mediocrity, while optimism can create Excellence.

From extraordinary people, it is easy for us to find an optimistic spirit; From mediocre people, we can easily find gloomy shadows. 07. Yesterday's persistence is called foothold, today's persistence is called enterprising, and tomorrow's persistence is called success.

08. If you only see the black spots of the sun, your life will lack warmth; If you only see the shadow of the moon, it is difficult to find light in your life; If you always find the shortcomings of your friends, it will be difficult for you to find a bosom friend in your life journey; Similarly, if you always want to be perfect, assuming that your wish can really come true, then your biggest shortcoming is that you have no shortcomings. 09. The Himalayas reach into the sky, but there are climbers' flags on it. The Sahara desert is endless, but there are footprints of hikers inside; There are thousands of cliffs in the Alps, but there are explorers among them; The Yarlung Zangbo River is swift and mighty, but there are stories of brave people in it.

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8. Composition A small shot in life is like a tortuous movie, and a wonderful lens group becomes a colorful shot.

I love life, and I also love the small scenes in life, which makes me educated and inspired. Once, I went to my grandmother's house by car alone. On the way, an old woman walked slowly in the aisle with crutches and handrails.

She looked around and found that there was no room. She sighed and stood beside me.

I was shocked and began to hesitate again: let or not? There seems to be two little people arguing in their hearts: "Be sure to give up and help others!" "But it's still far from grandma's house! If you give way, can your feet stand it? " "Don't let the red scarf on the chest match?" "Some people give up their seats, and the beneficiaries don't even have a thank you. Don't give up!" "Don't give way just to say' thank you'? Let! " "no!" "Let!" "no!" ..... while I was hesitating. A sincere voice came from behind: "Grandma, you sit here!" " "Looking inside, a boy of about 17 years old stood up from his seat, walked beside his grandmother, helped her to sit in the seat, and stood by himself.

The grandmother boasted, "This child is really sensible!" At this time, I can't wait to find a gap to get in. Several young people in the car also bowed their heads in shame.

This shot gave me great inspiration and education. Helping others is a noble quality.

If everyone can help others like those who give up their seats, why should society worry about disharmony? .

9. What does the lens in life written in the composition "Small Lens in Life" tell us? People's eyes are like a small lens in life, and they can record all kinds of trivial things in life wherever they go.

For example, when I was a child, I saw beggars asking for money on my way to school and people singing in the street. It also happened on my way to school.

One day, I usually go to school by bus I sat on the bus and looked at the people around me. Wow! There are so many people in the car! Then I am enjoying the beautiful scenery around me. What a beautiful scenery! At this time, the first stop arrived. There is an old woman on crutches. Her eyes glanced around and there were no seats left. She sighed.

Then I thought to myself, "Do you want to give your seat to this old lady? No, and it seems disrespectful to grandma. Let it? It's a long way to school, and I'm afraid my legs won't hold up.

Let or not? At this moment, I heard two uncles talking next to me. I listened carefully, and they also talked about giving their seats to grandma. An uncle said, "A few times, I gave my seat to an old man and an old woman, and Dana took my seat without even saying thank you. Really annoying! No! " Another uncle said, "I also give my seat to people older than me, but I never care about others saying thank you." Even if others say thank you, I will say you're welcome. I don't think I gave up my seat to say thank you, so I should give up my seat! " I am also happy to help others. " .