Compare and write the composition fragments.

1. At the station, two girls are sitting in the waiting room waiting for the bus.

The girl on the left is wearing a miniskirt, ironing the most fashionable hairstyle, pedaling a pair of high heels studded with rhinestones, and fiddling with an apple 6S in her hand. You can tell at a glance that she is a child of a rich family. The girl on the right, wearing a white shirt, a pair of jeans washed white, only a pair of equally worn cloth shoes on her feet and an old-fashioned mobile phone in her hand. Her family should not be so good. Suddenly, it rained and the waiting room leaked.

The girl in fashionable clothes screamed and kept lifting her feet up-she was afraid that her high heels would get dirty. At this time, the ordinary girl stood up, calmly took off her old shoes and socks, put them in front of the fashionable girl, and quietly walked out barefoot.

The girl in fashionable clothes froze and stared at the distant figure of another girl for a long time.

2. Write a character composition fragment by comparison. Since my brother got married and my sister-in-law called my mother "mom is long and mom is short", I found that my mother has changed. The relationship between the original mother and her grandmother was very tense.

Although she lives in a yard, her mother cooks in the kitchen in the east, and her grandmother temporarily builds a small kitchen by the south wall and cooks in it herself. Sometimes I cook something rare and delicious at home, and my mother won't ask my grandmother to come and eat together. Mother always said, "Your grandmother is eccentric and always favors your uncle's house."

This is the "fuse", mom and grandma quarreled three times! Even in calm days, mom and grandma tend to stay out of it.

Look at my mother now. Before the braised pork is ready, she shouts loudly: "Mom, stop cooking, come and eat together!" "Every time Grandma hears such shouts, the wrinkles on her face stretch out with laughter.

Look, mom has really changed.

We have to find the reason for this change from my sister-in-law. Our family has been beaming ever since my sister-in-law went to the door.

In the morning, when the whole family was still sleeping, my sister-in-law got up, gave her mother face wash water and waited for her to get up and wash her face. Then make breakfast for the whole family and put it on the table, and then urge everyone to get up for breakfast. Grandma's share, sister-in-law always put in a bowl, and then sent to grandma's cabin. When the weather is fine, my sister-in-law either washes her mother's clothes or washes her grandmother's hair, and she is not idle for a moment.

Seeing that her sister-in-law is so filial to her grandmother and considerate to herself, her mother's face is always red and white, and she may also realize her own shortcomings. Slowly, my mother often goes to grandma's cabin and sends her a bag of cakes or cookies. When winter arrived, my mother specially bought new cotton and made new cotton-padded clothes for my grandmother. As for the topic of "eccentricity", my mother never mentioned it again.

I know my mother has changed because of my sister-in-law. Look, you've grown up!

The young Runtu is a boy of eleven or twelve. I met him for the first time. Moisten the soil in the kitchen, with a purple round face, wearing a small felt hat and a bright silver collar around her neck. Twenty years later, when "I" returned to my hometown, I saw moistening the soil again. His "round face, which used to be purple, is now grayish yellow with deep wrinkles", "He wears an old felt hat on his head and only has a thin cotton-padded jacket, and his whole body is shaking", "That hand is not the red and round hand I remember, but a thick, stupid and cracked hand like pine bark.

3. Please compare the descriptions of the three characters in the description clip-Feng Yongjian. First of all, introduce students' memories. What are the common ways to describe characters? (Hint: description of appearance, description of manners, description of language, description of actions, description of psychology) Writing, whether it is a note or a writer, is always inseparable from the description of characters.

Therefore, learning to observe and describe the appearance of characters is a basic skill that can not be ignored in writing narrative. Let's learn about physical description.

Second, what is the character description? Appearance description refers to the description of a character's appearance, figure, clothing, etc. Third, what problems should be paid attention to when describing the appearance of characters? (1) Describe the appearance in a certain order.

(Generally speaking, from the whole to the part, from top to bottom when describing the part) (2) Look at the example: At first glance, she looks quite tall, with a good figure, neither fat nor thin, and is a piece of dancing material. Look carefully, she has ear-length short hair, and always wears two hair clips on her head, one on the left and the other on the right. Her hair is tightly tied behind her ears, revealing a smooth and fair face.

Her eyes are small, long and thin, but full of spirit. When she laughed, she became two cracks. The nose is slightly upturned, giving people a playful feeling and looking cute.

What she likes best at ordinary times is a dress with blue background and white flowers. This skirt is wide and big. As soon as she ran away, the skirt flew like a flower.

Summarize from examples: when describing the appearance of characters, the description order should be arranged reasonably. Generally, write the whole first and then the parts, and describe the parts from top to bottom. (2) describe the appearance characteristics of the characters.

Guess who they are: (3) Play games: Guess who they are: 1. I saw him with a dark face and short hair, a long mouth and big ears, a chubby body, a chubby belly, wearing a blue shuttle cloth dress and carrying a nine-toothed rake. (Pig Eight Rings) 2. He has three heads and eight arms, a circle of Kun hung around his neck, and his foot stepped on hot wheels, commanding and imposing.

(Nezha) 3. He wore a glittering shirt, a golden crown, and a golden cudgel snatched from the Dragon Palace in the East China Sea, showing a powerful and domineering appearance. A pair of fiery red eyes are bright, revealing the determination to eradicate all demons.

The whole body is full of a fearless spirit. (Monkey King) Game summary: We usually distinguish different people by appearance first, because different people are different from others in appearance, that is, everyone's appearance has its own characteristics.

Students can quickly guess who the above three people are because they all have their own characteristics in appearance. And the author also describes their appearance characteristics.

Therefore, when we describe a character's appearance, we must describe the characteristics of the character's appearance, so that people who know him or her can guess who he or she is when they see what you have written, and people who don't know him or her can also imagine what he or she looks like. (3) (3) When describing the appearance, we should pay attention to reflecting the personality characteristics of the characters.

Guess their personalities: 1, Jindou is only seven years old, and her hair hangs down to her neck. She hangs her head in shame when she sees people, or runs away to look at people quietly, or suddenly screams to scare you when you are unconscious. (shy but naive) 2. Her name is probably Lang Lang. She has soft curly hair, a prominent forehead and a flat nose. She is wearing a small blouse with a red background and white spots. She is always silent, like a silent little philosopher.

(Quiet) 3. My daughter looks like her mother, especially her eyes. White-eyed ducks and eggs are clear, and black-eyed chess pieces are black. It is like clear water when it is calm, and like a star when it is shining.

Summary: How do students guess their own personality? (their appearance). All three little girls have their own personality characteristics, which determines that they are different from others in dressing (that is, appearance).

Personality affects appearance. On the other hand, you can guess a person's personality according to his appearance. Therefore, when we describe the appearance, we should pay attention to the personality characteristics of the characters.

(4) When describing the appearance, we should pay attention to reflecting the inner feelings of the characters. Guess their psychological activities: 1. On New Year's Eve, her son and grandson came to her side, and her wrinkles spread out, just like chrysanthemum petals in full bloom, and every wrinkle was filled with a smile.

(in a good mood) 2. One day, her wife was ill, and the beaded wrinkles on her face deepened, and the acne twisted into two locked eyebrows. (worried) 3. She looked at his wife's portrait, her lips trembled slightly, and a string of tears flowed in the knife-like wrinkles.

Summary: Three examples describe the appearance of three old people and reflect three different inner feelings: Example 1 expresses the happiness that the old people enjoy "family happiness"; Example 2 reflects the anxiety of the elderly about his wife's illness; Example 3 wrote the sad thoughts and feelings of the old man. This shows that when describing the appearance of a character, we must pay attention to reflecting the inner feelings of the character.

4. Write a composition in contrast [Thinking Analysis]

Let's talk about the contrast in Lu Xun's Kong Yiji first.

[Problem solving process]

Contrast, as an artistic technique commonly used by Lu Xun, can also be seen everywhere in Kong Yiji. Now let's talk briefly about the artistic effect of each group contrast in the novel:

1. Comparison between "short clothes gang" and "wearing long clothes"

A. the "short coat gang" is standing outside the cabinet drinking.

B. "The man in the gown" wandered into the house next to the shop, ordered wine and vegetables, and "sat and drank slowly".

Xianheng Hotel is the epitome of the dark old society at that time, with distinctive characteristics of the times. The novel introduces two kinds of drinkers: one is the "short coat gang"-the working "poor workers"; The other is the "long gown wearer"-a leisurely and rich exploiter. In the sentence, "short" and "long", "outside" and "inside", "standing" and "sitting" are in sharp contrast, paving the way for Kong Yiji's appearance. The contrast between the two reveals the disparity between the rich and the poor and the difference in the social status of customers.

2. Contrast of internal contradictions:

Kong Yiji was the only one standing drinking and wearing a gown. "Standing and drinking" shows that Confucius has been living in poverty, and his economic status and social status are the same as those of the "short coat gang"; "Wearing a gown" shows that he puts on airs, envies those who are leisurely and rich ideologically, despises the working people and is unwilling to associate with the "short clothes gang". The contrast between the way he drinks and the clothes he wears reflects the contradiction between his economic status and ideology, thus revealing Kong Yiji's special social status.

3. Comparison between "beating" and "being beaten":

A. Ding defeated Kong Yiji.

B. Kong Yiji's leg is broken.

This comparison reveals how the imperial examination system divided scholars into two opposite poles: some climbed the imperial examination ladder, such as Ding, and beat Kong Yiji at will, becoming arrogant "cannibals"; More people fell down, such as Kong Yiji, who was poor and became the object of being beaten and eaten. This fact profoundly exposed the evil of the imperial examination system.

4. The contrast between "laughter" and "fate":

A. Kong Yiji's face is black and thin, and it is no longer like it; Wearing a shabby jacket and crossing his legs ... his eyes seemed to beg the shopkeeper not to mention it again.

B. At this time, several people have gathered around, and they all laughed with the shopkeeper.

The novel describes in detail the tragic scene of Kong Yiji's leg being broken by Ding during his last appearance. Kong Yiji died in the laughter of drinkers and shopkeepers, and "laughter" runs through the whole novel. This burst of laughter was in sharp contrast with Kong Yiji's unfortunate fate, which profoundly exposed the darkness and cruelty of feudal society and criticized the numbness of the masses.

5. Comparison between "clap" and "touch":

A. Without answering, he said to the cabinet, "Heat two bowls of wine and ask for a plate of fennel beans." I will pay a lot of money.

B.he took four pence out of his tattered pocket and put it in my hand. He found his hands covered with mud. ...

The word "Pai" shows that Kong Yiji wants to show his generosity to the "short coat gang" who only spends a lot of money, writes his proud expression, and also shows his pedantic character; The word "touch" shows that Kong Yiji is slow to move, and the "four pence" is well hidden, which shows that this money is hard to come by, and Kong Yiji is further down and out. The contrast between the first "row" and the second "touch" reflects the deteriorating economic status of Kong Yiji.

6. Contrast between "disdain" and "decadence":

A. Someone asked, "Kong Yiji, can you really read?" Kong Yiji looked at the person who asked him and showed disdain.

B. They went on to say, "Why can't you even get half a scholar?" Kong Yiji immediately a face of depression, face was full of gray.

Kong Yiji is proud to be a scholar. He always pretends to be a scholar in front of everyone and disdains the jacket gang. Even when others made fun of him, he repeatedly showed pretentious and narcissistic arrogance. Only when people ask, "Why can't you get half a scholar?" Does he feel very painful, because he is bent on learning from middle school, but he never gets what he wants, which has become his greatest pain and humiliation. This is enough to show that feudal culture and imperial examination system have seriously poisoned the lower intellectuals.

5. What is contrast? Contrast is a figure of speech that compares contradictory things together.

Contrast can intercept two different things or two different aspects of the same thing. Through the comparison between the two, the beauty and ugliness of the image are more distinct, the characteristics of both sides are more obvious, the advantages and disadvantages are more profound, and the contradictions are more acute. Contrast, from the content, there are two kinds of contrast, one-on-one comparison and two-on-one comparison.

The contrast between two bodies is to compare and compare two opposing figures and two things together. Some people are alive and he is dead; Some people died, and he is still alive.

(Cang Kejia, Some People) A fighter with shortcomings is a fighter after all, and a perfect fly is just a fly. (Lu Xun's Soldiers and Flies) These two cases are the contrast of two characters.

Through comparison and comparison, it is more obvious that Mr. Lu Xun is great and the reactionary ruler is small, which can arouse our feelings of love and hate. Through comparison and comparison, we affirmed and praised the revolutionary fighters who adhered to the truth, and denied and rebuked the reactionary slaves who slandered the revolution.

Another example is: 3 Zhumen wine stinks, and the road has frozen bones. (Du Fu's "From Beijing to Fengxian to recite 500 words") 4 A cart of charcoal, more than a thousand Jin, will be cherished by the envoys in the palace.

Half horse red and full of silk, full of charcoal straight to the cow's head (Bai Juyi's The Charcoal Man) These two cases are the contrast of two things.

Example 3 expresses the poet's anger at the ruler's extravagant demands and sympathy for the people's tragic experiences through comparison; It shows us the sharp class contradiction and opposition in feudal society. For example (4), "a car full of charcoal, more than a thousand Jin" shows that there are many materials, and "half a horse is a foot of silk" shows that it is of little value. The comparison between them reveals the predatory nature of the court market and shows the poet's sympathy for the sufferings of the people.

Double-sided comparison is to compare and contrast the opposite or opposite sides of a thing together. For example, these people have Marxism and liberalism: they talk about Marxism and practice liberalism; Marxism for the people; Be tolerant of yourself.

He rubbed his hand on Bao Xiao's "monk's head", and his old heart, numb by poverty, became furious and gave birth to new hope. (Mao Dun's "Spring Silkworm") 3 Our soldiers are so cruel to the enemy, but they love the people of Hanxian so much, and they are full of deep internationalist feelings.

(Wei Wei, "Who is the cutest person") (4) From the perspective of assuming the main leadership responsibility, if there are 100 to 200 people in our party who systematically study Comrade Marxism–Leninism, it will greatly improve our party's combat effectiveness ... (* * * China's position in the national war) These examples, example ① very specifically criticize the dual nature of liberals; (2) highlighting "new hope" with an "old" mentality; Example (3) Raise two diametrically opposite attitudes of volunteer soldiers and praise our soldiers for their clear love and hate; Compared with the two opposing concepts of "system" and "piecemeal" and "reality" and "emptiness", the negative and positive aspects make the viewpoint more distinct and more prominent. According to the structural standard and referring to the traditional classification, comparison can be divided into two categories: average ratio and difference ratio.

Pingbi refers to the equal and parallel comparison of two things, and often uses the coordinate sentence. For example, modesty makes people progress and pride makes people fall behind.

(* * * "Opening Speech of the Eighth National Congress of China") Today, we are as tame to the people as our mothers; Tomorrow, the invading enemy will be burned to ashes by harsh artillery fire! (Li Ying's Snowy Night) Example ① Comparing the different results of "modesty" and "pride" with compound sentence, the advantages and disadvantages are prominent. Example 2 The sentence pattern is the same. Through comparison, it is revealed that soldiers can only be harsh on the enemy if they are docile to the people. Let the two aspects of the warrior's personality be more distinct.

Contrast ratio: refers to the comparison of two things with different weights. In contrast, the party often adopts transitional sentences or progressive sentences.

For example: 3 bees are small; How noble bees are! (Yang Shuo's "Litchi Honey") 4 Peach Blossom Pond is deeper than thousands of feet's, but not as good as Wang Lun's (Li Bai's "For Wang Lun") 3 The comparison of "Zhuan Sentence" reveals the universal truth that honey's work and life seems to be "small" but actually "noble". Example 4 uses the relative word "less than" to express the difference ratio, emphasizing that the latter is deeper than the former.

To sum up, there are both connections and differences between foil and contrast. Party A and Party B contrast and contrast at the same time, with Party A lining Party B and Party B lining Party A; The comparison between Party A and Party B also includes some comparison. Because they are related, some rhetorical works combine them as "contrast" or "contrast".

But the difference between contrast and contrast is obvious. ① As far as the status of Party A and Party B is concerned, generally speaking, there is no obvious distinction between primary and secondary. By comparison, the two complement each other and are more prominent.

The contrast between Party A and Party B is not half-to-half, but primary and secondary, with Party B lining Party A as the main body and Party B lining Party B, which makes the main body more prominent. This is the main difference between contrast and contrast.

(2) From the looming of A and B, both of them must appear when compared with B, otherwise the expression effect of black and white will not be achieved; On the other hand, when Party A and Party B set out, the inner sub-body must appear, while the main body is allowed to be hidden. You can write this clearly and hint at each other. In particular, there is often no contrast between subjects, such as moving to static and bright to dark. (3) From the category of Party A and Party B, whenever Party A and Party B compare, they are either the same object or the same aspect, otherwise they are incomparable; As for Party A and Party B, they may belong to the same genus or different genera. For example, setting the landscape as the background means saying one thing, which means another.

Contrast and contrast are not only rhetorical methods, but also expressive methods of many arts, which are often used in drama, film, painting, photography, sculpture and music. If used properly, you can get good artistic effect.

6. Contrast writing. Tall palm trees

There are several palm trees in our campus. Seen from a distance, it looks like an open umbrella. Standing at its feet and looking up, it is straight up, up to four or five floors. Its trunk is thick, straight and slender. The thickness of the trunk varies from top to bottom, and the middle part of the trunk is the thickest. The upper and lower parts are thinner than the middle part. The most beautiful is the leaves of palm trees, which spread out like peacocks. The leaves are very big, separated by small leaves, like Guanyin with a Thousand Hands, which is really interesting.

Palm trees are full of vitality all year round. Whether it is spring, summer, autumn and winter, it is so green and so high, as if soldiers are guarding our campus and accompanying us to learn and grow.

In summer, the hot sun shines on the earth like a fireball. With the shelter of palm trees, we won't feel so hot when we play games under the trees and go to physical education class. Sometimes children drag palm leaves and ride them to play. Really like a magician in a comic book. It was fun. When it rains, the leaves of palm trees become greener after being washed by rain, which adds a bit of greenery to the campus and makes our campus more beautiful.

Autumn wind is blowing, and the leaves of palm trees are swaying, like a little girl with green hair dancing happily. Also issued a "rustling, rustling ..." sound, like a little singer singing. What a complete song and dance!

Palm trees, you not only add a lot of beauty to the campus, but also bring laughter to the students. I like you-the tall palm tree.

7. Write a 480-word comparative composition. My family has a little white dog. It is covered with snow-white hair and feels soft, like wearing a clean white sweater. A pair of big eyes turn straight, like two black gems; There are small ears on the top of the head, and the nose is flat and often wet. Grandma said that this is a sign of dog health; The pointed tail is very flexible and often swings from side to side, but if you hurt the little white dog, it will bark with its tail between its legs, which is a bit like "running away with its tail between its legs" in the book.

I like watching little white dogs eat best. One day, I took a piece of meat.

The little white dog saw it and ran around me. I spit out the meat, and the little white dog jumped up and bit with his mouth open. Then it presses the meat with its front foot and tears it bit by bit with its teeth. It was really delicious, and it soon fell down.

After eating, it licked its mouth with its tongue, as if remembering the delicious meal just now. You can also contribute a little white dog to sleep, which is also very interesting. When the weather is warm, the little white dog likes to sleep on the ground, with his front legs extended forward and his hind legs extended backward, or lying comfortably with his feet pointing in the same direction.

When winter comes, the little white dog is afraid of the cold. He buried his head tightly between his legs and curled up to sleep. If the little white dog is happy, he will sleep on all fours and his stomach will swell with breathing.

The little white dog woke up and stretched himself. It stretched out its front feet very long, took a deep breath and arched itself. It's very cute.

Mother sometimes sits in the living room knitting a sweater. When she was not careful, the wool ball rolled to the ground. When the little white dog's ears move, it rushes over like lightning, and its flexible big eyes keep looking for it. Then, when he jumped, he held the ball tightly and played happily. It jumps around, rolls the ball to the left, rolls it to the right, and slaps it with its front paws, just like a child playing with a ball. How interesting! The little white dog is not only cute, but also smart.

One night, we took the little white dog for a walk. Walking, I suddenly found that the little white dog behind me was gone.

Where the hell did it go? There are so many roads here, will the little white dog get lost? We hurried to look for it, but we couldn't find it for a long time. I don't know if the little white dog was stolen or went somewhere else. My mother and I are anxious like ants on hot bricks, running around, but we can't see the little white dog.

Finally, we got tired of looking. Dad said, "Let's go home!" Along the way, I was so sad that I kept thinking about the little white dog and didn't want to say a word.

When I walked up the stairs, I heard a puppy barking. "Could it be our little white dog?" I think like this, three steps and two steps, quickly rushed up the stairs, where the little white dog has been waiting for a long time. Seeing us back, the little white dog shook its tail at once. "ah! Little white dog! " I cried happily and picked up the little white dog. I was extremely happy.

I really like this cute and clever little white dog.