The method of writing a composition according to ancient poems

1. Write a composition about appreciating ancient poems. 450 words and examples 1

China is a country of poetry. Poetry has a long history, famous artists come forth in large numbers, and numerous works by famous artists are spectacular in Chinese civilization. Poetry expresses the author's feelings with its concise language and beautiful words.

Opening the floodgate of memory, I found my favorite poem. That's the work of Du Mu, a poet in the Tang Dynasty-Mountain Walking. The four lines in the poem read: "The stone path in the cold mountain is far away, and there are people in the depths of the white clouds. Stop and sit in the maple forest late, and the frost leaves are red in February. "

This poem describes the beautiful scenery that the poet saw when he walked in the mountains in late autumn. The poet skillfully captured several scenery he saw on his way up the mountain: from a distance, it was a winding mountain road paved with rocks. When he reached the top of the mountain, he looked at the place surrounded by white clouds in the mountain, and several families appeared faintly. The maple leaves around him were like fire, which was even more beautiful, far better than the flowers in early spring and February. Here, there are white clouds, red leaves and bright colors; Mountain roads, maple forests and people's homes are harmonious and warm; Some poets stopped to watch the night view of Fenglin because of their love, which made the picture more affectionate. Writing autumn scenery, the whole poem has no sad and desolate atmosphere. Especially the last sentence, comparing maple leaves with flowers is very novel. The flowers in February are beautiful and charming, but when the spring breeze blows and the spring rain suddenly rises, they fall into the mud and go with the running water. But the maple leaves turned red in the struggle with autumn wind, autumn rain and autumn frost, showing great vitality. This is why the poet especially likes the maple grove. It is also the charm of this poem that has been passed down through the ages and is widely known.

Walking in the garden of ancient poems, we can enjoy all kinds of ancient poems. Farewell, spring, summer, autumn and winter, romantic scenery and scenic spots in ancient poems are all the legacy left by ancient poets to our descendants and the treasures of the Chinese nation.

Example 2

I have read countless poems since I was a child. Many people like to use poetry to express their feelings, wishes, thoughts of their loved ones and parting from their friends. Among the poems I have read, Meng Jiao's Ode to a Wanderer is impressive:

The mother used the needle and thread in her hand to make clothes for her long-distance son.

Before leaving, I had a stitch for fear that my son would come back late and his clothes would be damaged.

But how much love does this inch of grass have? Make three spring scenery.

In the poem, the author embodies the infinite love of a great mother, who thinks she is loving, simple and great.

Now, we take care of our mothers for granted. We can't understand their good intentions and sometimes even yell at them, but as mothers, they still care and love their children silently. They have no regrets about what their children have done.

I remember that in the "Wenchuan Earthquake" in May 12, a mother leaned against the collapsed building in the ruins and protected her 3-4-month-old child under her. Because of the mother's protection, the child fell asleep unharmed and quietly. When the ambulance personnel untied the quilt covering the child, they found a mobile phone with a sentence written on the screen: Dear baby, if you are still alive, you must remember my love for you. Although this mother's great achievements are household names, does anyone who knows them feel anything? Mothers can give up their lives for their children, as mothers all over the world do.

When I was sick, my mother stayed up all night, poured me water and stayed by the bed. Under the care of maternal love, she recovered quickly. When I woke up, I was moved to tears when I saw my mother not sleeping by the bed all night.

In retrospect, when I failed in the exam, my mother didn't scold me, but gave me the correct answer to the wrong question. When I held the written report card in my hand, she smiled, very pleased and happier than me.

Looking back on these years, my mother accompanied me every day. No matter what the weather is like, she always holds my hand; No matter what happens, she always teaches me everything after being frustrated; No matter how deep the night is, how deep the night is, how deep the night is, how deep the night is, how deep the night is, she always spends it with me. ……

Once, I hated my mother. Why is it so cruel? Why don't you hug me in the mud? Why didn't you teach me how to deal with setbacks before? Why are you so persistent that you don't persuade me to give up and not rest in silence? ...

Now, I don't hate my mother, but I am grateful to her. She never holds me forward because she wants me to learn to face ups and downs; Never depressed, money taught me to deal with it, because it wanted me to appreciate life; Never ask me to give up, but teach me to persist in silence.

Mom, thank you! Thank you for teaching me a lot; Thank you/kloc-for walking with me every day for 0/5 years ...

But how much love does this inch of grass have? Reported three spring rays.

2. What are the writing methods of ancient poetry? 1. Appreciation of key words in poetry: What is the most vivid word in this couplet? Why? Proposition variant: one sentence has always been praised. What do you think of it? Solution analysis: the ancients paid attention to refining words in poetry, which is to ask for the beauty of these refining words.

When answering questions, we should not talk about this word in isolation, but put it in a sentence and analyze it with the artistic conception and emotion of the whole poem. Answer steps: (1) Explain the meaning of words in sentences.

(2) Expand the association, put the words into the original sentence and describe the scene. (3) point out what kind of artistic conception the word sets off, or what kind of feelings it expresses.

Second, appreciate the important sentence proposition in the poem: What is the special meaning or deep meaning of this poem? Propositional variation: This poem is the most expressive. Try to analyze it briefly. Solution analysis: first explain the literal meaning of this poem, and then analyze it in detail by deducing language characteristics or thoughts and feelings.

Third, appreciate the writing skills and propositional methods of poetry: What kind of expression is used in this poem? Proposition variant: Please analyze the expressive technique (or artistic technique, or technique) of this poem. Solution analysis: Expression technique is a method used by poets to express their feelings. To answer questions accurately, you must be familiar with some common expression skills.

Means of expression can be divided into three categories: rhetoric (metaphor, exaggeration, personification, synaesthesia, etc. ), expression (lyric, discussion, description, etc. ), as well as artistic skills (expressing meaning with things, blending scenes, combining static and dynamic, etc. ). Answer steps: (1) Point out exactly what technique was used.

(2) Explain why or how to use this technique in combination with poetry. (3) This technique effectively conveys the poet's feelings.

Fourth, the way to appreciate the artistic conception of poetry: what kind of artistic atmosphere has this poem created? Variant of Proposition: What kind of picture does this poem show? What thoughts and feelings did the poet express? Answer step: (1) Describe the picture displayed in the poem. Candidates should grasp the main scenery in the poem and reproduce the picture in their own language.

When describing, one should be faithful to the original poem, the other should be recreated with one's own association and imagination, and the language should be beautiful. (2) Summarize the characteristics of the atmosphere created by the scenery.

Generally, two disyllabic words can be used, such as lonely and cold, quiet and beautiful, vigorous and magnificent, bleak and desolate, etc. , and should pay attention to accurately reflect the characteristics and emotional appeal of the scenery. (3) Analyze the author's thoughts and feelings.

Don't be empty, but give specific answers. 5. Appreciate the way of asking questions about the thoughts and feelings of the poem: What kind of feelings does this poem express? Question variant: please analyze the main idea of this poem or how you understand its connotation.

Solution analysis: this question type should taste the emotion expressed by the whole poem or the meaning of a poem (special meaning, deep meaning, such as contextual meaning and artistic conception meaning). Words that can be used to answer questions generally include: unfulfilled ambition, no way to serve the country, always in my heart, homesickness, loyalty to the monarch and patriotism.

Answer steps: (1) Accurately point out your thoughts and feelings in one or two words. (2) Analyze the author's feelings with the relevant sentences in the poem.

6. Appreciating the linguistic features of poetry: What are the linguistic features of this poem? Question variant: Please analyze the language style (language art) of this poem. Solution analysis: this kind of question type does not need to ponder the clever use of individual words, but to taste the language style or the meaning of a poem (special meaning, deep meaning, such as contextual meaning and artistic conception meaning).

Words that can be used to answer questions generally include: fresh and natural, unpretentious, gloomy and frustrated, gorgeous, easy to understand, colloquial, euphemistic and implicit, uninhibited, graceful and restrained in style, concise and vivid ... Answer steps: (1) Accurately point out the language features with one or two words. (2) Analyze this feature with relevant sentences in the poem.

(3) Point out how the author's feelings are expressed. Or (1) combine the whole poem to analyze the expressive skills and expressive effects of a poem.

In short, if you can be familiar with these propositional methods, understand various answering skills, read the meaning of the questions carefully, buckle the original poems according to the requirements of the test questions, and grasp the main points to organize the language, you can greatly avoid losing points.

3. How to use ancient poetry flexibly to write a composition? In fact, I always divide poems into several words, such as Wen's complaint that "the sky is blue as water and the clouds are as light as night".

It can be written as:

"The blue sky is like water, and the sky is clear in Wan Li. Is this a dream or an illusion? Jathyapple has floated into my eyes and integrated into my heart. "

Simply put, it is expanding sentences, expanding sentences.

But if you want to quote, you can change the sentence pattern on the basis of parallelism and repetition.

For example:

Is that the sound of a pipa? Even before she played, we could feel her feelings. (From Pipa)

Or the helpless voice of "saying yes"? (From a Song Yuan, I can't remember it clearly)

Or is my horse braying again and again? (Excerpted from Li Bai's Farewell to Friends)

Another silence of "no need to sing a song"? I don't remember where it came from. It's a poem anyway. )

There can be more changes, but it must be something similar, which is a bit hard to think about.

I am a junior high school student. If you are a high school student or even a college student, you should know more. Just bring it in yourself (* _ *).

In addition,

If the article wants to be archaic, you just need to reflect the archaism between the lines as much as possible, and you don't have to quote it.

The higher realm we are pursuing is just like the nocturne of E-Dasheng Tang Dynasty. Not one sentence is completely quoted, but every sentence is quoted from the classics, with allusions! If you can take advantage of this, you will be strong ~

I hope I can help you ~

4. The method of rewriting ancient poems This is a poem of Su Shi's visit to the West Lake, which can be roughly rewritten as follows:

One sunny day, Su Dongpo and his friends were boating and drinking on the West Lake. Suddenly, dark clouds billowed, heavy rain suddenly came, and thick dark clouds surged. Clouds and rain are more urgent. Dark clouds have not covered the mountain by the lake, and showers have fallen from the sky. Shiny raindrops beat on the lake, splashing like sparkling pearls and jumping into the cabin. Forced by the heavy rain, the poet hurried to shelter from the rain.

As the saying goes: "In summer, children's faces change three times a day." No, the atmosphere was so tense just now. Suddenly a gust of wind swept in and dispersed the dark clouds, and the shower stopped immediately. The poet stood on the railing of Wang Hu Building and looked at it. Downstairs, there is no rain at all, and it is calm. The sky reflects water, and the water reflects the sky. The sky is so clear and blue.

Most of the beautiful West Lake is surrounded by mountains. Overlapping green hills hold the West Lake in their arms, and there are countless pavilions carved with beams and painted buildings. The West Lake cruise ship sings and dances day and night. Visiting the West Lake all day, drinking and having fun, the warm spring breeze blew these ancient poems "titled Lin 'an House" into a composition.

Sleepy, how can you remember the lost northern territory and the reduced old capital! In their eyes, Hangzhou is Bianzhou, no different. Lin 'an Mansion is a political satire poem by Lin Sheng, a poet in the Southern Song Dynasty, and it is also the author's only representative work. This poem is written for the dark reality of the Southern Song Dynasty. It poured out people's indignation and expressed the poet's deep concern for the fate of the country and the nation.

Most of the beautiful West Lake is surrounded by mountains. Overlapping green hills hold the West Lake in their arms, and there are countless pavilions carved with beams and painted buildings. The West Lake cruise ship sings and dances day and night. Traveling around the West Lake all day, drinking and having fun, the warm spring breeze makes these tourists sleepy, how can they remember the lost northern territory and the degraded old capital! In their eyes, Hangzhou is Bianzhou, no different.

This is a poem written on the wall of a hotel in Lin 'an. This is a political satire. The appellation of Lin 'an House shows the society at that time. In AD 1 126, the Jin people captured Bianliang, the capital of the Northern Song Dynasty, and captured two emperors, Huizong and Qinzong. The territory of the Central Plains was completely occupied by the Jin people. Zhao Gou fled to the south of the Yangtze River and ascended the throne in Lin 'an, which is known as the Southern Song Dynasty. Instead of accepting the painful lesson of national subjugation in the Northern Song Dynasty, the small court in the Southern Song Dynasty became angry from embarrassment and tried to strengthen itself. The rulers did not want to recover the lost land in the Central Plains, but begged for peace, surrendered to the outside world, and brutally persecuted Yue Fei and other patriots at home. Politically corrupt and incompetent, dignitaries indulge in debauchery and pleasure. This poem is written for this dark reality. It pours out the indignation pent up in the hearts of the broad masses of people, and also expresses the poet's deep concern for the fate of the country and the nation.

6. Write a composition according to ancient poems [write a composition according to ancient poems]

Look at the time first and write a composition according to ancient poems. In the Book of Songs, a gentleman is in service and returns home in a few days. This poem means that my husband has been called up by the monarch and will be away for a long time. I don't know when he will be reunited with him. In this case, it means that you can't use the sun and the moon to calculate time. Similarly, there is a saying in Tao Qian's "Return to the Pastoral" that morning is good, and hoes take the bright moon home. Take the moon and fly over Daiyue. It's night here. Second, the moon has the function of setting off the atmosphere. In Li Yu's "Hui Huan", the moon is like a hook, and two sentences describe the scenery you see when you climb the stairs. The crescent moon is like a hook, and the shadow is locked, which is vivid and sad. Du Mu's "Bo Qinhuai" smoke cage cold water moon cage sand, night parking near Qinhuai restaurant, the first writer saw the scenery when staying at Qinhuai River overnight. It is the cold Qinhuai River filled with hazy mist, and the cold moonlight enveloped the beach, making the scenery look sad. The poet first brings people to a specific environment and atmosphere, giving people a strong attraction and appeal. At the same time, the description of the scenery in the twilight also reflects the author's sad mood. Third, the moon also has the function of expressing feelings and expressing emotions. Lyricizing by the bright moon is a common artistic means in poetry, but what I appreciate most throughout the ages is Li Bai's description of the moon. The moon is heartless and can't express any feelings, but Li Bai gives it life, personifies it, and regards it as a sympathetic, understanding and friendly messenger who can convey friendship. For example, when Li Bai heard that Wang Changling had moved to Longbiao Kiln, he wrote that I was worried about the bright moon and accompanied you to Yelangxi. Junior high school composition "Writing according to Ancient Poetry". Look at the bright moon hanging high in the sky and shining on the earth. You and I live in different parts of the world. We can't meet each other, but we can all see the bright moon in the sky. Then I will give this sad heart about you to the bright moon, and let it always accompany you and follow you to a distant foreign land. Li Bai, who wandered here, did not forget his friends on the way to relegation. He used the bright moon to express his sincere heart and greetings to his friends. In this poem, Li Bai's conception of the moon is novel and his image description of the moon is wonderful. No wonder Shen Deqian commented on these two poems in Qing Dynasty, saying that "the moon is projected into the cup", which was unique with a wave of his pen. This romantic writing embodies the fresh and elegant style of Li Bai's poems. It's a summer evening, the fiery red sun has been hidden behind the mountain, the rosy clouds have dyed the sky red, and the fishermen are rocking their boats and calling it a day. At this time, a clear and crisp song came from the depths of the forest. How loud it is! I saw a shepherd boy riding an old cow. You see, he is wearing a golden hat, with big black eyes flashing, and his round little face is full of bright smiles. He sat on the cow's back, his little feet were shaking happily, and he looked so lively and lovely. Cleisthenes, an old cow, cried loudly, as if praising the wonderful singing of the shepherd boy! When a crisp cicada came from a nearby willow, the shepherd boy was singing happily. Cicada interrupted the beautiful and loud singing of the shepherd boy. He stopped singing and listened carefully. The shepherd boy's desire to catch cicadas arises spontaneously. He patted the cow and pointed to the cicada in the tree. The bull got the message and approached the cicada carefully and slowly. Near, near, only one step away from cicada. However, the cicada did not feel the danger coming, and still showed her beautiful voice. The shepherd boy stood up slowly from the cow's back and approached the cicada gently with his hand. At that moment, the shepherd boy's hands folded forward, and the cicada creaked and became the shepherd boy's bag. The shepherd boy jumped down from the cow's back with a swish, showed his hand and smiled: Haha, who asked you to compete with me in singing? Now is a disaster! At this time, cicada, how can you just give up? It kept screaming and struggling in the hands of the shepherd boy, but even so, it didn't help. The shepherd boy smiled. He jumped on the cow's back and set foot on his way home. This scene was seen by Yuan Mei, a great poet who went out for a walk. Looking at the scene in front of him, he couldn't help but sing casually: the shepherd boy is riding an ox and singing loudly. Suddenly want to catch the song of the tree, immediately stop singing and stand by the tree silently.

The quickest and most reliable way to overcome fear and build self-confidence is to do what you are afraid of until you have a successful experience.

7. Write an article according to the following ancient poems.

Spring is silent, cherish the trickle,

The shade of trees shines on the water, loving sunshine and tenderness.

Xiao He just showed his sharp corners,

Dragonflies have long stood on it.

This poem is a fresh sketch. Everything is so beautiful, so soft and so affectionate. Every sentence is poetic, showing beautiful early summer scenery, natural and simple, touching. This poem describes a spring, a trickle, a pool of trees, a few small lotus leaves and a small dragonfly, which constitutes a vivid landscape of a small pool and shows the intimate and harmonious relationship between all things in nature. At the beginning, the words "spring is silent and precious for a trickle, and the shade shines on the water and loves softness" bring readers into a small, delicate, soft and pleasant realm, and a trickle slowly flows out of the spring silently; In the sunset, Chi Pan's green trees throw the shade into the water, and the light and shadow are mottled and clearly visible. A word "pity" turns ruthlessness into sentience, as if spring is letting it flow silently and slowly because of the pity of love; A word "love" gives life to the green tree. It seems to like the soft sunshine and shows its charm with water as a mirror. In three or four sentences, the poet, like a clever photographer, took an interesting shot with a quick mirror: "Xiao He just showed his sharp corner, and a dragonfly stood on it a long time ago." The time sequence has not yet reached midsummer, and the lotus leaf has just exposed a sharp corner from the water, and a small dragonfly is standing on it. A "talent show" and an "early stand" are taken care of, vividly depicting the scene of dragonflies and lotus leaves leaning against each other. Yang Wanli advocates learning from nature when writing poems. He has a keen interest in natural scenery. He often uses fresh and lively style and plain language to describe the ordinary scenery he sees every day. He is especially good at capturing the characteristics and fleeting changes of scenery and forming interesting pictures, so his poems are full of rich life breath. The silence of spring eyes is to cherish the long flowing water, and the shade of trees reflects the water because it likes the gentleness of sunny days. Just as the little tender lotus leaves its tightly wrapped tip, the lovely dragonfly comes to stand on it early. [Appreciation] The whole poem "Xiaochi" is dedicated to the word "Xiao". Poetry needs to have a different theme from that just now, and some major themes should be written with magnificent realm and momentum; Some subjects are very small, just a detail in life, but they can write about love and fun. Therefore, Wang Guowei said: "There are big and small realms, and the pros and cons are not based on what is right" ("Words on Earth")

8. Key points of writing ancient poems: Key points of writing seven-character rhythmic poems (1) 1. Rhyme is the most important kind of poetry (including verse). Let's review the flat structure of the seven-character quatrain 1, flat (the first sentence enters rhyme): (flat) flat (missing). (Ping) Ping (Ping) Ping. 2, the beginning of the flat (the first sentence rhymes): (flat) flat "flat", (flat) flat (flat) (flat) 4, flat (the first sentence does not rhyme): (flat) flat "flat", (flat) flat (flat) 2, brackets (), the words inside should be flat: (flat); 3. The bracket ""is flat when the case changes: "flat"; 4. The brackets are even: even. Beginners don't need to learn sentence patterns in different forms, but they should respect the words in brackets. The quatrains (referring to rhymes) 1, 2, and 4 rhymes (generally flat, the first sentence should conform to the blank format of 3 and 4). The first sentence of "five absolutely" and "five laws" usually doesn't rhyme. Sentences 2, 4, 6, and 8 of the Seven Rhymes all rhyme, so we must use flat rhyme. The third, fifth and seventh sentences do not rhyme. However, the last word must rhyme. Otherwise, it is not a metrical poem (not all seven words and eight sentences are "X rhythm". If the meter is inconsistent, it can only be classified as ancient prose according to the meter of the poem. Like seven sections, seven sections have four formats. It can be seen that they are the sum of two seven-section even lines: 1, even (. Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping. The intersection of Daduqiao is cold. I prefer the snow-capped mountains in Minshan. After the three armies, I will get a full face. 2. Qi Qi (the first sentence rhymes): equal to the sum of the seven wonders ② and ④. (4) It is flat and flat. Even number Even number Even number. For example, * * * seven methods to Shaoshan don't dream vaguely curse Sichuan, 32 years ago. The red flag rolled up the serf halberd, and the black hand hung the overlord whip high. In order to sacrifice more ambitions, I dare to teach the sun and the moon to change the sky. I like watching thousands of waves of rice everywhere. Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping. Read zhanghua when the flowers fall. If you complain too much, you should pay attention to the scenery. It's better to watch Fuchun River than fish. * The word "ten" is transferred to tone 4. Qi Qi (the first sentence doesn't need rhyme): It is equal to the four wonders (4) the form of two prime ministers. (Xun) (Ping) Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping Pingping. Come back from this mountain, pass another mountain, go up from the south and then go north-to my own town! . Rhyme couplets (3, 4 sentences) and necklaces (5, 6 sentences) can also be used only on necklaces. Thirdly, the flexibility of individual sentences of rhymes and the difficulty of keeping the flat format of rhymes are strict, but they are also flexible, which can be flexible in some places under certain conditions. In the works of ancient poets, in the plain, on the contrary, it is not easy to find. Elasticity is not random, but regular. In ancient poets' poems, there is often a word that does not conform to the flat and flat sentence pattern, which is called "difficult" or "difficult sentence". Now that it is "difficult", we can take appropriate measures to remedy it. This is called "difficult to save". The words "one, three, five regardless" 246 must be "clear", and "clear" means strictly following the format. As for the seventh word, the rhyming word is flat, the rhyming word is blank and fixed, so it should be mentioned. There are only five words in each sentence of the Five Laws, so this employment will naturally become "133 regardless, 244 is clear". This employment can sum up some phenomena, but it cannot be generalized. In other words, flexibility has certain conditions. As for the first word, the first word of each sentence in the seven laws can be completely flexible, and the flat word can be used. But there is one exception, that is, the first word of every sentence in the Five Laws and the third word of every sentence in the Seven Laws are flat.