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How can I write the beginning and end of a composition?
Last year, it was also a beautiful spring day. I walked past this big ginkgo tree and wandered around Dagong's campus, looking for the warmth of spring. Magnolia quietly blooms. It is always the first flower of all. She can't even wait for the leaves to grow. White petals, such as porcelain jade, stretch incisively and vividly against the near transparent blue sky, and have a kind of beauty of no hiding and no scruples. At that time, I had just started the second semester of college life, and my dreams were accumulating bit by bit. I always feel that there are too many things to achieve, but I am hesitant in my heart. The bloom of magnolia includes the accumulation and expectation of the whole winter, just like a person's accumulation process; I will give anything for the most beautiful moment. When the campus is full of new green and flowers, I also gain full confidence.
When this new green cluster becomes cool in summer, it will also attract the envy of other school students. They said that this naturalness and generosity reflected the profound charm of the university. Under the big ginkgo tree in front of the main building is my favorite place. Such a ginkgo tree seems to appear in a fairy-tale dream. He looks at people enjoying the cool like an old man. I used to sit quietly on the stone bench under the tree for a long time, watching the leisurely pigeons and magpies; Once I chatted aimlessly with my good friends here, I suddenly found a toddler staggering ... Every time I came here, I was happy, and my mouth would rise inadvertently, remembering my comfort.
The impression about last autumn is the dribs and drabs we collected on campus when we were studying photography. The campus in the lens is a bit strange, and we really live in it. During the day, I like riding a folding bike on the path and breathing the breath of the sea breeze blowing in the distance; I like the peace after the strong wind. On the night with the moon, I step on thick ginkgo leaves to cover the whole road. I like to go through the woods where magpies hide, climb Niu Jiao Mountain and stare at the mature autumn campus in the distance.
When it comes to avoiding the cold, the first thing that comes to mind is the big classroom in the octagonal building. Maybe sunshine likes it here, too, otherwise how can it spread a little precious warmth here in winter? Sunlight not only reflects its spaciousness, but also depicts its antiquity. There is no way to know how many people have taken classes here and how many people have enjoyed the sunshine here, but there will certainly be many people who miss the warmth here as much as I do. The polished and shiny desktop records its history, but it can't tell its story. Holding a cup of hot tea, taking out my own books, indulging in my own time, gradually forgetting what season and where.
Campus should never be a simple splicing of buildings or a simple transfer of knowledge. Its trees, flowers and rocks should all have their own stories, different stories. This is not only a place where we study, but also a place where we keep our youth, and it is an eternal memory that stays in our hearts.
2. How to write the beginning and end of the composition. Students who rarely practice writing at ordinary times always feel that they can't write it at first. Every composition has its central meaning, which is often the theme. At the beginning of the composition, the writing method of "straight to the point" is often used, which goes straight to the subject and does not beat around the bush, such as "The Character of Grass". At first, it can be like this:
Every spring, when the branches begin to sprout, the weeds on the roadside also begin to show a faint light green, which is the grass that people often ignore.
This is the way to write directly to the topic. A few words will get to the point relatively simply. As long as you often do composition exercises or keep a diary every day, it is often not difficult to write.
The ending paragraph is generally a summary of the central meaning of the article. Try to be concise and respond to the theme, which is what we often say, "echo from beginning to end", leaving a deep impression on readers and stimulating imagination.
Attached "The Character of Grass"
Characteristics of grass
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Every spring, after several strong winds, the south wind blows slowly. Inadvertently, I found that the branches gradually had new buds and the grass gradually added new green. The weeds by the roadside suddenly caught my attention. How does the grass tenaciously drill out solid land? Where there is soil, there are weeds.
Incredibly, the grass is growing tenaciously all summer, no matter how stormy it is or how hot it is. What difficulties and hardships, in front of them, have become indifferent, they are fearless. Just like the growth of a tree, as long as spring comes, it will take root and sprout. This makes me suddenly feel that the grass is so lovely, so lovable and so tenacious.
Looking at them carefully, it turns out that at first it was just one or two spikes, then a ball, and in a few days, even a piece. It's them, decorating the green of spring. Soon after the grassland turned green, all kinds of wild flowers bloomed. I suddenly realized: without grass, flowers look boring, without flowers, grass looks monotonous. It is the most beautiful only when grass and flowers are everywhere. They set each other off and become interesting, which is really a masterpiece of nature.
Unconsciously, I formed a habit. Every spring, I like to watch the germination of branches and the green of weeds. It is the grass on the ground that tells me this truth: life and the earth are both natural, and life shows its greatness in its struggle with nature. Perseverance through storms is the original meaning of life.
3. How to write the beginning and end of the composition? Say the end first, then the beginning.
If the beginning is compared to "firecrackers", then the end is like "bells". The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and tasting fragrant tea, which makes people memorable."
Like the beginning, the ending is also very important. It would be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was ruined by an ominous ending when it was finished! The ending should not only serve the content and center of the article, but also be restricted by the "beginning", which increases the difficulty of writing the ending.
People call the end of a good article "leopard tail". Judging from the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, although the ending of the article is not necessarily required to be "leopard tail", it is also required to be concise, vivid and just right. Generally speaking, the common mistakes at the end of students' compositions are: ① gild the lily.
That is to say, the full text is over, which should be thought-provoking, but the author is still uneasy and determined to shake a few words, leaving the whereabouts of people who don't need to be explained one by one and piercing the meaning that could have been realized. Empty slogans.
Finally, in order to show his position and attitude, he shouted something irrelevant to the content of the article, which was a big theme. 3 sloppily.
The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is too late to finish, which conflicts with the theme of the article. From this point of view, the ending of the senior high school entrance examination composition is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of exam composition? The following are the commonly used ending techniques for senior high school entrance examination compositions.
1, natural beam. No matter what style of article, after expressing the content, it naturally closes the full text, instead of designing profound philosophical sentences and carving rich symbolic forms. This ending is called "natural ending".
It completely avoids the ending fault of gilding the lily and moaning without illness. It is concise, simple and unpretentious, and is widely used in the composition of senior high school entrance examination. The composition atmosphere in the examination room is tense and the competition is fierce, so we should not pay too much attention to "form" and "law".
As long as you are rich, you can play freely and you can fully express your feelings. However, paying attention to "nature" does not mean being arbitrary and hasty, but ending the overall situation along the natural trend of literary development. There are many such examples in the learned text, so I won't repeat them here.
2. Echo from beginning to end. The end should echo the beginning, write a sentence that echoes the beginning, and don't simply repeat it. This way of ending is a common way of ending all kinds of articles.
This method can arouse readers' psychological aesthetic feeling and produce a feeling of rounded head and tail. For example, A Precious Shirt says, "In my house, there is a white shirt, which is really cool."
Finally, I wrote: "I have carefully collected this precious shirt for four years, and I have never been willing to wear it once." Praise the end of the poplar and the beginning echoed at a distance: "I want to praise the poplar loudly!" " 3, the pawn Zhang Xianzhi style.
This way of ending is to express the theme clearly at the end of the article, relying on the content of the full text and using concise language, or to explain the writing intention clearly at the end of the full text, so this way of ending is also called "making the finishing point". For example, at the end of Jujube Kernel, it reads: "Changing the nation does not mean changing the national feelings. No nation is so attached to its homeland as we are."
At the end of "Remember a Spinning Wheel", I wrote: "It is a pleasure to struggle with difficulties. -Remember a spinning wheel. "
4. Famous sayings and epigrams. Ending with famous aphorisms and poems is intended to extend the article and reveal the true meaning of some kind of life.
It often appears at the end of essays, narratives and essays. In a few words, it expresses profound and thought-provoking philosophical or warning content, which is deeply imprinted in readers' hearts and has the effect of "endless words and endless meanings". At the end of "Pear Blossoms in the Post Road", it reads: "Pears in the Post Road are everywhere."
5. Lyric discussion. Ending an article with lyrical comments can express the author's feelings, arouse readers' emotional waves and arouse readers' resonance, which has strong artistic appeal.
This way of ending is mainly used in narrative, explanatory and argumentative writing. There are various forms of the ending of lyric discussion, so the ending is more free. A good lyric discussion ending will inevitably bring true feelings and give readers a sense of reality and sufficiency.
For example, at the end of Flower Market, it says, "She stands among hundreds of flowers with a smile, like a flower, like a beautiful and elegant orchid." Another example is the two natural paragraphs at the end of Missing Mother, which are typical lyrical endings.
The composition should be done in one go, and the ending should be in the same strain as the previous text, which is indispensable. The end of a composition is the same as the beginning, although it is different, it also has its own rules to follow.
The above ending methods are just some common ending methods, so don't copy them mechanically. The really good ending lies in the students' solid training at ordinary times, in the candidates' improvisation and in the candidates' "extra-poetic merits". Please look at the end of a candidate's composition: If life is no longer green, we are still looking for it. Why can't we take actions to protect green and the environment, so that we can always have green?
At that time, green would sing: "I come gently, just like you (desert) walk quietly ..." (Anonymous "If life is no longer green") Comments: The author naturally thinks of green from the environment, and then launches a topic around "If life is no longer green". The article starts with the comparison of "past", "today" and "tomorrow", and then skillfully uses Xu Zhimo.
Middle school students' friends, there is no fixed method for writing. Which ending method you use depends on the stylistic requirements and your own preferences, and you can't copy dogma. If some can be discussed, some can be described, some can be suspended, some can be quoted, and so on.
Middle school students' friends also need to exercise more and experience more in practice, and try their best to explore in order to achieve the same effect. In this way, I believe that the students will be able to write the ending of "When the bell rings, the reverberation will be around the beam".
Migration training The ancients said, "A good end is like chewing.
4. How to write the beginning and end of the composition The ancients said that the beginning and end of the composition are "crested and leopard-tailed", that is, the beginning should be graceful and colorful. Just like the head of a phoenix, some people say that "a good beginning is half the battle", which shows the importance of a beginning.
Due to the limitation of time and space, the beginning of the composition in the examination room is concise, vivid and beautiful. The following methods can be considered. 1. Cut to the chase.
The so-called "straight to the point" is a figurative statement, which refers to a straightforward way of writing articles. For example, "Talking about backbone" shows the point at the beginning: "We China people have backbone."
"Praise of Poplar" touched on the theme at the beginning: "Poplar is really extraordinary, I praise Poplar!" This method should be the first choice for writing in the examination room. 2. The background is gradient.
For example, "Kong Ji Ji Ji" begins: "The big square counter on the street ... can warm wine at any time". "Under the scorching sun and heavy rain" begins: "June 15, it's crazy!" These beginnings explain the time, place, festival, climate or the background and environment of the topic.
3. Ask questions. Flashback the result of things first, set suspense, or set questions to break the theme first and cause explanation or discussion.
For example, Colorful Flowers begins with a question: "Why do flowers have all kinds of beautiful and bright colors?" The purpose of this opening method is to set suspense, attract readers' attention, stimulate readers' interest, increase the faltering of the article and show the beauty of the layout of the article. This opening technique appears frequently in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination.
4. Famous sayings and epigrams. Quoting epigrams, famous sayings, poems or proverbs at the beginning can attract readers and help highlight the center.
For example, Cheng Yi's words were quoted at the beginning of Doubt and Learning: "Scholars must doubt first". This opening method is also an easy method for general candidates to master and use.
The well-known epigram opening can often enhance the momentum of the opening, making people feel abrupt, eventful and lofty. Of course, the quotation should be as accurate as possible to avoid intellectual errors.
5. Excellent metaphor. Metaphor is used at the beginning to arouse the reader's interest in the thing or truth to be explained.
For example, "China Stone Arch Bridge" begins: "The bridge opening of the stone arch bridge bends like a rainbow." Ma Shuo begins: "There is Bole in the world, and then there is a swift horse."
Taking the story of Bole and Maxima as a metaphor leads to the central argument. Since it is a metaphor, we should pay attention to the similarity between "other things" and this topic, and we can't force it. Generally speaking, the common mistakes at the end of students' compositions are: ① gild the lily.
That is to say, the full text is over, which should be thought-provoking, but the author is still not at ease, determined to shake a few words, explain the whereabouts of people who don't need to be explained one by one, and pierce the meaning that could have been realized. Empty slogans.
Finally, in order to show his position and attitude, he shouted something irrelevant to the content of the article, which was a big theme. 3 sloppily.
The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is too late to finish, which conflicts with the theme of the article. From this point of view, the ending of the senior high school entrance examination composition is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of exam composition? The following are the commonly used ending techniques for senior high school entrance examination compositions.
1. Natural bunching. No matter what style of article, after expressing the content, it naturally closes the full text, instead of designing profound philosophical sentences and carving rich symbolic forms. This ending is called "natural ending".
For example, at the end of My Uncle Yule, "When we come back, we will take the St. Marlowe boat to avoid meeting him again." And Mr. Fujino's ending all adopt this method.
2. End-to-end echo. The end should echo the beginning, write a sentence that echoes the beginning, and don't simply repeat it. This way of ending is a common way of ending all kinds of articles.
This method can arouse readers' psychological aesthetic feeling and produce a feeling of rounded head and tail. For example, "Back" begins with "I haven't seen my father for more than two years, and what I can't forget most is his back".
At the end, it says, "I don't know when I will see him again." Another example is "Praise of Poplar", which begins with "Poplar is really extraordinary, I praise Poplar."
At the end, it said, "... I want to praise Bai Shu loudly. "3. Zhang Xianzhi's style chess pieces.
This way of ending is to express the theme clearly in concise language at the end of the article. For example, at the end of Jujube Kernel, it reads: "Changing the nation does not mean changing the national feelings. No nation is so attached to its homeland as we are."
At the end of "Remember a Spinning Wheel", I wrote: "It is a pleasure to struggle with difficulties. -Remember a spinning wheel. "
4. Famous sayings and epigrams. It often appears at the end of essays, narratives and essays. In a few words, it expresses profound and thought-provoking philosophical or warning content, which is deeply imprinted in readers' hearts and has the effect of "endless words and endless meanings".
At the end of "Pear Blossoms on the Postal Road", I wrote: "I can't help but think of a sentence' Pears on the Postal Road are everywhere'." 5. Lyric argument.
Ending an article with lyrical comments can express the author's feelings, arouse readers' emotional waves and arouse readers' resonance, which has strong artistic appeal. For example, at the end of "Flower Market", I wrote: "I think: Hope doesn't matter, it doesn't matter, just like the road on the ground; In fact, there is no road on the ground. If there are more people walking, it will become a road. "
Leave a Beautiful Back —— Examples of Writing Ending Skills in Examination Room About the beginning and ending of writing, the ancients have long said that "the limelight is a leopard's tail". The writing time in the examination room is short and the grading requirements are high. It is necessary to impress the marking teacher in a limited time and get an ideal evaluation, especially at the beginning and end.
Some people say that the beginning of the composition in the examination room should be like "Erguotou", and tears will flow out from the entrance, which shows that the beginning of the composition should leave a deep impression on people. In my opinion, the end of the composition should be like "Biluochun", with lingering fragrance and endless aftertaste.
Wonderful oral administration can certainly make people shine at the moment and yearn for it; The wonderful ending can also make people can't help but cover up and amaze. What are the common problems at the end of students' compositions in the examination room? First of all, it has a head and no tail.
Due to the lack of overall conception, the ending is like a "semi-finished" project, which is unclear, ambiguous and inadequate. But anticlimactic.
Some students often have a sense of accomplishment after completing the main part, so.
I'm trying (how to write the beginning and end of the composition). General composition can be divided into total-sub-total (the beginning and end are generally summary, and the middle part is often used to take notes).
The following are the beginning and end I wrote to you for reference only:
Beginning: As the saying goes: "If you work hard, you may still fail; But if you don't work hard, you will fail. "I think I'm trying. For a better life in the future, or for my own value ... at least, I am doing it seriously.
Conclusion: In order to achieve my desired goal, I will unswervingly adhere to my beliefs. I work hard and will stick to it. Only by working hard to live everyone's life now can we regret its youth.
6. Composition How do we write thank you teacher at the beginning and end of the advanced composition? The name teacher is full of respect and makes people feel so kind. Some people compare teachers to "engineers of the human soul" and "the noblest profession under the sun"; Some people compare teachers to "spring silkworms", "candles", "cultivators", "sowers" and "gardeners". But I always feel that teachers' love for students cannot be deeply reflected. Teacher's love is more severe than father's love, more delicate than maternal love and purer than friendship. Your teacher's love is the greatest and cleanest in the world.
In our class, in the fourth grade, Mr. Chen in his fifties took over. At first, because every student in the class has different basic knowledge, study habits and attitude, and their grades are different, the learning atmosphere is worse than other classes. Teacher Chen racked his brains every day to fill the gaps left for us. Even at noon and after school, they make up lessons for us.
In order to improve our writing level, the teacher took pains to describe the writing steps, key contents, good words and sentences in detail in the composition class. In order to deepen our impression of the writing content, we will also invite white rabbits and other objects into the classroom to expand our imagination in the form of sketches. In this way, although writing a composition in the past was only a few words, it was not like appearance, but through the guidance of teachers, it was possible to write a decent article. The teacher will also ask us to send some compositions to her mailbox, have a rest, revise the compositions and give us specific guidance. Two semesters have passed, and the discipline in our class is getting better and better, and the students' grades are getting better and better. Especially me, I am most afraid of writing. Now I can finally write some achievements. He won the certificate of the school composition competition three times, and one contribution was published in the small reporter column of Cixi Daily. This small progress embodies the teacher's hard work.
It's a holiday, and the teacher's concern for students is not a holiday. She set a time to chat with students through QQ. Keep abreast of our life and study, and ask us if there are any questions about our homework ... Teachers care more about us than their parents.
When I was sick, my teacher took care of me and took care of me more like my mother. Once, I had a stomachache, but I don't know why, I thought it was a stomachache. The teacher asked me carefully where it hurts. How painful is it? Then I was given biscuits and hot water, which really eliminated the feeling of pain.
Teacher's love touched a lifetime; The teacher's teaching will benefit you for life. It is the source of vitality and the force of life on our life path. I can only say it again: thank you! Teacher! In the future, whether I become a tree or a low shrub, I will bless you with the green of life! Salute! Our teacher!
7. How to write the beginning and end of a composition to make it more literary? The first trick: the environmental description at the beginning leads to events and lays the emotional tone. The environmental description at the end sublimates emotion and has infinite charm.
Example: A model named "Crossing" in Dongcheng District.
"The cold wind hit me in the face like countless knives, and the trumpets around me came and went. Horses flew by me quickly, and the bows and arrows in the soldiers' hands were pulled like a full moon, making a chilling sound. Then I saw an old man staring at his sword in his tent. Is that you? You An? " (beginning)
"I saw short huts, gurgling streams, green grass, people talking in soft Wu language, and little dolls lying by the stream peeling lotus flowers. There is a thin old man standing next to you, isn't there? You An? " (End)
The second trick: it is especially suitable for imaginative composition, straightforward plot description, straight into the story at the beginning and a new plot at the end, which sets suspense and makes people think deeply.
Example: A model named "Happy Cooperation" in Haidian District.
"Hey, brother, are you ready? The operation is about to begin! " "(at the beginning)
"When I woke up, I saw a short message:" I really want to know why I have so many functions, who is my mother, where is my home, don't come to me, I want to be quiet "-from the robot assistant. I picked up my clothes and ran out ... "(End)
The third measure: use sound to describe sound, which has the same meaning as the previous method, but uses sound at the beginning and end to attract readers.
Example: The title of Xicheng District is Fantastic Night in the Museum.
"'hey! Don't listen to me yet! Line up according to the year of excavation! "Oh, that vase of the Qing Dynasty, you are so obedient!" "(at the beginning)
8. What should students who seldom practice writing write at the beginning and end of the composition? At first, they always thought they couldn't write. Every composition has its central meaning, which is often the theme. The common writing method at the beginning of the composition is "get to the point", go straight to the point and don't beat around the bush, such as "The Character of Grass", which can start like this:
Every spring, when the branches begin to sprout, the weeds on the roadside also begin to show a faint light green, which is the grass that people often ignore.
This is the way to write directly to the topic. A few words will get to the point relatively simply. As long as you often do composition exercises or keep a diary every day, it is often not difficult to write.
The ending paragraph is generally a summary of the central meaning of the article. Try to be concise and respond to the theme, which is what we often say, "echo from beginning to end", leaving a deep impression on readers and stimulating imagination.
Attached "The Character of Grass"
Characteristics of grass
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Every spring, after several strong winds, the south wind blows slowly. Inadvertently, I found that the branches gradually had new buds and the grass gradually added new green. The weeds by the roadside suddenly caught my attention. How does the grass tenaciously drill out solid land? Where there is soil, there are weeds.
Incredibly, the grass is growing tenaciously all summer, no matter how stormy it is or how hot it is. What difficulties and hardships, in front of them, have become indifferent, they are fearless. Just like the growth of a tree, as long as spring comes, it will take root and sprout. This makes me suddenly feel that the grass is so lovely, so lovable and so tenacious.
Looking at them carefully, it turns out that at first it was just one or two spikes, then a ball, and in a few days, even a piece. It's them, decorating the green of spring. Soon after the grassland turned green, all kinds of wild flowers bloomed. I suddenly realized: without grass, flowers look boring, without flowers, grass looks monotonous. It is the most beautiful only when grass and flowers are everywhere. They set each other off and become interesting, which is really a masterpiece of nature.
Unconsciously, I formed a habit. Every spring, I like to watch the germination of branches and the green of weeds. It is the grass on the ground that tells me this truth: life and the earth are both natural, and life shows its greatness in its struggle with nature. Perseverance through storms is the original meaning of life.
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