Zhou Bangyan's "Su Mu Zhe" Teaching Plan

Su Muzhe, the first original of Zhou Bangyan's religious plan

Burn agarwood to relieve summer heat. Birds call clear, intrude into the eaves. The leaves of Chuyang withered all night, the water was clear and round, and the wind and lotus rose one by one.

My hometown is far away. Why go? I live in Wumen and have been traveling in Chang 'an for a long time. Do the fishermen in May remember each other? Boat, dream into furongpu.

learning target

1. Feel the imagery and rich artistic conception created by poetry and taste poetry.

2, understand the author, understand the author's feelings between the lines.

3. Cultivate the ability to appreciate poetry.

Teaching time

One class hour

teaching process

I. Introduction to the author

Zhou Bangyan (1056-1121) was born in Qiantang (now Hangzhou, Zhejiang). As a teenager, he was unruly. At the age of twenty-four, he entered the business school. He was promoted to business school for his contribution to Biandu Fu. Later, he worked as a local official, a school bookkeeper and Zong Zheng Shao Qing. After Hui Zong acceded to the throne, he was appointed as Yi Hui (Y? U plan, plan, plan) The cabinet is waiting for the system and Sheng Da Building is promoted. There is also the "Halal Collection", also called "Pian Yu Collection".

The ci style represented by Su Shi in the Northern Song Dynasty, while vigorously developing the field of ci expression, often became? Who in the song can't be tied? , showing the trend that words and music are gradually separated as written works. Zhou Bangyan, on the other hand, attached great importance to the coordination between words and music, and further standardized and refined the melody pattern of words. During his tenure in the government, Zhou Bangyan collected and sorted out more than 80 kinds of ci tunes popular in the previous generation and at that time, and created a variety of new songs such as Six Ugliness.

Although Zhou Bangyan's Ci did not provide more new things in subject matter and emotional connotation, it was another master of Ci in the Northern Song Dynasty in terms of artistic forms and techniques, which provided many experiences for later generations. So after the Southern Song Dynasty, Jiang Kui, Wu Wenying and others all valued Zhou Bangyan very much, and some even called him? For 200 years, you are alone in Yuefu? . Until the Qing Dynasty, Changzhou Ci School still regarded him as a poet? Master? . It can be seen that Zhou Bangyan has made outstanding contributions and far-reaching influence on the artistic form and language skills of Ci.

Zhou Bangyan was an important poet and a great master in the late Northern Song Dynasty. He set the merits of the Northern Song Dynasty and started the Southern Song Dynasty. He developed a new way of working, emphasizing thinking rather than feeling.

? People look like wooden chickens and think they are happy? Zhou Bangyan takes personal gains and losses as his priority, which is different from Su Dongpo's emphasis on national gains and losses.

Second, the appreciation of words.

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Burning agarwood (a precious spice) to eliminate the sultry and humid summer heat. Birds call it sunny (as the old saying goes, birds can occupy rain), and I listen secretly under the eaves at dawn? Words? . The first ray of sunshine on the lotus leaf dried the rain and water all night, and the water surface was clear and round. Lotus leaves are exposed to the morning breeze. The slender lotus leaf seems to be held high by someone and swaying in the morning breeze.

I want to go to my distant hometown. When can I go back? My family was originally from wuyue, and I lived in Chang 'an for a long time. In May, my childhood friends in my hometown were thinking of me and rowing a boat. I came to the lotus pond in my dream. (Senior commented on Zhou Bangyan's writing? He is good at writing landscapes, reciting things, elaborately carving, layout, twists and turns, changes and cycles. ? )-Zhang Yan etymology.

Step 2 enjoy

1.？ Burning agarwood to cool off the heat? .

2.？ Birds chirping, disturbing, peeping at the eaves? . Appreciation? Huh? And then what? Language? .

A. personification:? Huh? This word is very vivid and full of humanity, suggesting that it rained last night and will clear up today. ? Invasion of the eaves? It is more affectionate, peeping under the eaves and telling people that it is vivid and charming.

B. contrast:? The quieter the cicada, the quieter the Tonamiyama? Writing in a noisy and quiet way,

3.？ The leaves of Chuyang have withered all night, and the water is clear and round, and the wind and the lotus are at one stroke? .

After the rain last night, the fresh green lotus leaves were still dripping. However, the author carefully observed the process of water droplet evaporation, and the image was subtle, and then the lotus leaf trembled, so there must be noise, which led to the effect of music and extraordinary techniques.

One? A compliment? In other words, it is written that the lotus leaves stand on the water after the rain, and the dynamic scenery is like life, which makes the continuous film have a character that does not lose its charm. From the point of view, the author is very particular. First a raindrop, then it swells and falls to the surface of the water, and finally it looks at the whole pond from a distance, as if taking pictures. From different angles and different sides, the colorful and vivid images of lotus flowers were photographed with different lenses.

4. Summarize the last film: Which sensory organs have been mobilized?

? Burning agarwood Sentences, although they can form a smoky picture, are not descriptions of actions, but descriptions of smells.

? Birds are incoherent? It's the second feeling after waking up, written in terms of hearing.

? Invasion of the eaves? , is the third feeling after waking up, written from the visual aspect.

? Language? Here, it's not just singing, but focusing on describing the movements of birds shaking their heads, opening their mouths and wagging their tails when singing. This is a visual image.

? It rains at night on the dead leaves of Chuyang? The third sentence is the second floor. These two sentences are the focus of the poem, which is what the poet saw when he came outdoors.

5.？ Do the fishermen in May remember each other?

? Do the fishermen in May remember each other? I don't miss my friends and my hometown friends, but I will write whether Yu Lang misses me. This is a more profound way of writing from the opposite side, which reflects my strong yearning for my hometown friends.

6.？ Boat, dream into furongpu? .

Furong shop and the description of lotus in the last film complement each other, and the small canoe and Furong shop give people endless beautiful association and imagination space. Talk in your sleep and point out your feelings for your parents.

7. Summarize the next work:

? Who lives in Wumen and travels in Chang 'an for a long time? Two sentences link the past and the future, and put the imagination of space into practice at two points: first, the noon gate? , one is? Changan? . But the two places are still linked by lotus flowers. ? May? Write three sentences about sleepwalking. These three sentences further narrow down and concretize the isolated two points. ? Wumen? Become? Yuro？ ,? Changan? Became the author himself. ? May? The word "two characters" is a long line that connects time together. It carries the past at one end and connects the present at the other. Summer? ), even implicated in the author's dream. ? Dream into furongpu? Finally, the distance between time and space is shortened, which makes the author feel satisfied for an instant.

Three. abstract

Zhou Bangyan's ci is famous for its richness and delicacy, but this fresh and natural poem Sumugai is one of the few exceptions among Muslim ci. The word is centered on writing about the lotus after the wind and rain, introducing the dream of hometown and expressing homesickness, with simple meaning.

The first part is about burning incense indoors to cool off the heat, followed by sunny birds on the eaves, and then the wind and load swaying outdoors. The context of words is vivid, the structure and meaning are coherent and natural, and the viewpoint transformation is very hierarchical. The vivid description of the lotus in the poem was rated as' the one who can really get the truth of the lotus' by Wang Guowei's Legend on Earth, and it is the swan song of writing the lotus.

The next film, from the clear water in May, shows that the scenery in May in Wumen, a similar hometown, is associated with a boat, dreaming of Furong Pu, and the feeling of lovesickness is incisive.

Additional appreciation

This word, the first one is about scenery, the second one is lyrical, and the paragraph is very clear.

The first sentence is to be quiet, burn incense to cool off the heat, and let the mind calm naturally, or suggest taking a pair of coolants in a busy field. The second sentence is also to be quiet. There is noise in three or four sentences Birds are incoherent? , one? Huh? Very vivid, suggesting that it rained last night, Kesaharu. ? Invasion of the eaves? It is more affectionate, peeping under the eaves and telling people that it is vivid and charming. ? Ye Shang? Sentences, fresh and beautiful. ? The water is clear and round, and the wind and load are lifted? , is dynamic. These three sentences are actually interactive syntax, which is very clever in coordination and verb-sound. It is a round lotus leaf, and there are still raindrops on the leaves last night, which gradually dried up in the early morning sun. A gust of wind blowing, lotus leaves flying in groups, just like the lens of a movie, is a time-sensitive landscape. Text refinement? A compliment? Word, the whole word stood up. Moving scenery is like life. So, why don't we go back and have a look? Burning agarwood to cool off the heat? Time is a day, and where does it come from? Birds are incoherent? At dawn, it is the scene of early morning, and then pushed from the side of the house to the outside, the lotus pond is a new and beautiful scenery. Look at the first two sentences again, and the time should be lengthened. Summer is like a year, full of fragrance. Silence is knowable, with rich and implicit meaning, which lays the foundation for the next homesickness.

The next article is straightforward, and the words are just like their words, without carving. Are you traveling? Changan? In fact, it was Bianjing (now Kaifeng). Students from Zhou Bangyan presented "Biandu Fu" to the capital, which was appreciated by Zongshen, but they still achieved nothing, so they couldn't help thinking of going to the countryside. ? My hometown is far away. When will I go? Who lives in Wumen and travels in Chang 'an for a long time? Might as well go home. Immediately? Do the fishermen in May remember each other? Don't say you miss your friends in your hometown, but write whether Yu Lang misses yourself. This is a deeper way of writing from the opposite side. One or two knots? Boat, dream into furongpu? Is rowing a boat into the lotus pond in my dream. It is unpredictable to end up with a fictional dream, although it is virtual and real.

The realm of this word is exactly what Zhou Ji said: movies, if intentional, if unintentional, make people dizzy ? (Selected Works of Song Sijia) And Zhou Bangyan's mind should be as Chen Shi said:? It is not necessary to win by words, but by words. The wind is excellent, and I can see that my husband is very calm? Shao Yunji.

The second teaching goal of Zhou Bangyan's "Teaching Plan for Su Mu";

1. Appreciate and understand the artistic features of this poem.

Read and taste the artistic conception of this poem.

Teaching focus:

Appreciate the expression of poetry and understand the author's thoughts and feelings.

Teaching difficulties:

Understanding of the poet's thoughts and feelings.

Teaching methods:

Read aloud and explore questions.

Teaching time:

1 class hour

Teaching process:

First, import

Teachers and students recall Du Fu's life and thoughts.

Second, solve the problem.

This is a sentimental poem at the end of the year, which is about scenery and feelings, full of loneliness and sadness. Judging from the content of the poem, it was written in the winter of the first year of Dali (766). At that time, the poet lived in Xige, the capital of Kuizhou. This poem is about what the poet saw and felt on a sleepless night after the snow, so the title of the poem is Pavilion Night.

A brief analysis of Cui Zhuan and Guo Yingyi killing each other in Shu, and the people are miserable. What is in the poem? Cry a thousand times? It is a portrayal of this war disaster. Du Fu often thought of Zhuge Liang, a wise minister whom he admired from the heart, and left his own shadow.

Third, read poetry.

Normal schools study and students study at the same time.

Fourth, appreciate

1、? At the end of the year, yin and yang urge short shadows, and the world is frosty and snowy. What elements does this couplet illustrate?

Precautions:

Pavilion: refers to Xiting in Kuizhou, Sichuan.

Year end: year end.

Yin and yang: refers to the sun and the moon.

Short view: refers to the short day in winter. Scene: daylight.

Ji: It can be described as "Ji" when the rain clears up at first, or when the fog clears and the snow stops.

Cold night: Cold night.

? The end of the year? Time is gone in the blink of an eye, and I feel that life is short and fleeting, revealing a little bitterness. ? Tianya? Where Zizhou is located, there is a guest who lives in the end of the world, hurting himself, wandering in the cold, at night? Before dawn, it means that the poet stayed up all night, indicating that he was worried, paving the way for writing and hearing the drums and trumpets of the local garrison below.

2、? Stark sounded the drum and horn of the fifth challenge, and the Three Gorges Galaxy was moving? How much emotion is written in this couplet? What kind of feelings did the poet express?

Precautions:

Five shifts: refers to the period from three to five in the morning.

Three Gorges: Qutang Gorge, Wuxia Gorge and Xiling Gorge. Qutangxia is in the east of Kuizhou.

Xinghe: the stars and the Milky Way.

The shadow of the Milky Way is shaking: the shaking of the stars is a sign of war in the territory.

Auditory vision. Through hearing, I wrote the tragic atmosphere of war and chaos, the war situation was tense and the style was sonorous; The next sentence visually writes the beauty of mountains and rivers, and the tone turns soft. A kind of sadness that cherishes my China and hurts my China haunts the poet's heart.

3、? I heard a woman crying after the battle in the distance, and I saw a savage fisherman and woodcutter at dawn? What did you read about this couplet?

Precautions:

Yelling sentence: refers to hearing the sound of war from several yells. How many families: a job? Thousands? .

Yi nationality: refers to the local ethnic minorities.

Fisherman and woodcutter.

A song sentence: it means that both fishermen and firewood sing a song and see Kuizhou far away.

Hear wars and cut thousands of wild cries.

Write? Crying crazy? How many? Thousands? This is caused by the war. How come? Thousands? Is everyone crying? Reflected the people's deep disaster; ? Brother yi? , show the local customs. In contrast, some people are worried and others are worried.

4、? Wolong and Pegasus, aren't they generals now? Are they dust, and are audio books full of silence? How does this couplet express the poet's sadness?

Precautions:

Wolong: Zhuge Liang. Shu Shu? Zhuge Liang Chuan:? Uncle Xu? Call the late Lord: Zhu Gekongming, Wolong also. ?

Prancing horse: Gongsun Shu. When Wang Mang usurped the Han Dynasty, he became the King of Shu. At the end of the Western Han Dynasty, Shu took advantage of the chaos and called himself the White Emperor. Do you use gold Shu Du Fu here? Gongsun Tengyue proclaimed himself emperor? Meaning. Zhuge Liang and Gongsun Shu both have temples in Kuizhou, so they are mentioned in the poem. This sentence has both virtuous and stupid meanings.

The poet looked at Wuhou Temple and Bai Di Temple in the western suburbs of Kuizhou, which caused infinite emotion. Mr. Wolong is famous for his skillful calculation, and Gongsun Shu, as the emperor, is all-powerful and brave. The bells of these people who made great achievements in the future were buried in the loess and turned into historical dust. Today, people from all walks of life will eventually fade out of the historical stage and express the poet's sorrow for the eternity of the universe and the impermanence of life. The poet's close friends are scattered (good friends Li Bai, Gao Shi, Yanwu, etc.). Died one after another), and there is no news of survivors (relatives and friends have no sons).

Only with Gongsun Shu and Zhuge Liang? Loess? At the same time, I comforted myself, but also showed my inner bitterness, expressing the loneliness and helplessness of the poet's old illness and the severance of relatives and friends.

V. Rhyme Translation

In winter, the days are getting shorter and shorter;

Wandering around the world, in this cold night when the frost and snow are gone.

When I heard the horn of the war drum in the fifth watch, it was tragic and ups and downs;

The canyon reflects the Milky Way stars and rocks with the waves.

Several shouts in the wild brought the news of war;

Fishermen and loggers in several places sang songs of the Yi people.

Zhuge Liang and Gongsun Shu will eventually become loess;

Personnel changes, audio books were cut, and I was lonely and bored.

Comments on intransitive verbs

The whole poem is about the scenery on a winter night, which means to be homesick. The first link points to the cold winter night; Zhuan Xu wrote down what he saw and heard at night; Necklace writing at dawn; At the end of the couplet, I wrote about Mimu Wuhou and the temples in Bai Di. Taking Zhuge Liang and Gongsun Shu as examples, it shows that both the virtuous, the foolish and the loyal ministers are mutually assured destruction, and personal loneliness is even less important. The whole poem is full of weather, vertical and horizontal, pitching ancient and modern.

Seven. abstract

1. Cleverly combine eyes, ancient events and emotional prospects.

2. Three allusions (① I heard a woman in the distance, wailing after the war, ② Wolong, ③ prancing horse) profoundly conveyed the poet's inner pain in the cold night like water, facing the broken mountains and rivers, and his intimate friends scattered.

Eight, homework

1. Finish the exercises after class.

Step 2 enumerate