How to make the composition language literary?

The ancients said, "Words without words cannot spread far." The article here is literary, and wonderful language can make the article appealing and attractive, thus expressing the ideological content more effectively. If you want to make your composition outstanding, you must deliberately carve the flowers of literary talent and make the language beautiful.

First, temper the text

In order to make the composition language novel, concise and vivid, we must pay attention to tempering words, especially verbs and adjectives. For example, "the low sky is pressing on my chest, and gloom and depression are tearing my heart." "The image of our great motherland first appeared in the movie in my mind." The word "tears" in the previous sentence shows depression, helplessness, loss and pain. The latter sentence uses the photographic term "photosensitivity", which makes people feel novel and unique. "A cold wind blows, and thick clouds seem to emerge from the ground." The word "Mao" indicates a sudden change in weather. "My mother already greeted me, and then she flew out of the eight-year-old Honger." The "flying" here is from the intimacy of relatives and the liveliness and loveliness of nephews. "I stepped into the classroom on the bell", and the word "step" vividly wrote the tension of time.

Second, describe the color.

That is to say, the color of the main object is described in detail from different aspects, so that it has a beautiful picture and a three-dimensional sense, giving people a rich and intuitive perspective. A classmate wrote honeysuckle like this:

Every early spring, the graceful flowers and vines of honeysuckle quickly climb the flower stand and spread around very symmetrically. At first glance, the flower stand turned into a green wall. In April and May, the green leaves are covered with silver flowers. The petals are white, and the stamens are trumpet-shaped with a little yellow. They look like lilies, but they are smaller than them. The flowers are blooming, and the charming fragrance is sent far and far by the spring breeze. As time goes on, the blooming flowers gradually change from white to gold. The green wall at this time is yellow and white, which is very beautiful. It's really a veritable honeysuckle.

White petals, yellow stamens and green leaves set off the flowers. The author grasps the color of honeysuckle, carefully writes, vividly displays its color state and color change in the reader's field of vision, and makes people really feel the charming charm of honeysuckle.

Third, make good use of rhetoric

Various figures of speech have their own clever uses. Proper use can turn abstraction into concreteness, boredom into vitality, decadence into magic, and increase literary talent. For example, this fragment in the composition "Rainy Nightingale", a perfect score in the senior high school entrance examination:

Spring rain is small and warm. She is fresh and not seductive, slim and youthful, and she always talks about the remoteness and warmth of spring in detail. Yu Xia's generosity makes people happy. She is like a stunning work, mountains and rivers, rushing thousands of miles, worshiping mountains and taking soil, swallowing the sea, making people feel relaxed and dripping. The bitter autumn rain makes people feel pity. She sings suddenly, and sometimes she just wants to talk about it. Winter rain is no longer reserved, but she is dignified and elegant. Listening to the rain of four seasons, I don't feel sad.

Fourth, create humor.

Mr. Ye Shengtao has said more than once that "the highest level of stylistic writing is to write as well as speak", which requires the language to be lively, free and humorous. My classmate, a masterpiece in the senior high school entrance examination, has such an interesting remark: "Fish II in our dormitory has a precocious face and a thick beard. When the teacher saw him, he thought it was a parent and nodded at once. When my parents met, they thought it was a teacher and bowed. Based on this, we all call him "Mr. Fish". At that time, Mr. Yu was also the main force of our class football team. Affected by rheumatoid arthritis, Yu Minhong walks with a limp, so he has the style of a Brazilian star on the court. When his opponents saw him wriggling, they always thought he would make a fake move, so he followed a series of twists and turns. As a result, gnome male-". ...

You can also use idioms skillfully, put on airs, collocate inappropriately, derogate compliments, and use old words newly to make sentences full of emotion and increase the humorous interest of the article. For example, "he fouled again and again, and finally he was honored to be met by the principal." "This says that my acne (beans) is in the prime of life, and that my acne (sinus) is also in its infancy. I was so angry that I almost cried. " "Why do I have such a bold guest on my face? Although it's not big ... look in the mirror again, it seems that there is another place ready to move. " The deliberate creation of various humorous words has increased literary talent and produced artistic charm.

Clever quotation of verb (abbreviation of verb)

Most famous sentences are beautiful in writing, rich in connotation, harmonious in sound and rhyme, and have strong vitality and penetration in time and space. If properly and skillfully quoted or used, the article can be enhanced and the language will have literary talent. For example, Poetic Life, one of the outstanding works of the senior high school entrance examination:

Reading poetry, I appreciate the magnificence of mountains and rivers. Climbing Mount Tai with Du Fu, I have the heroic spirit of "reaching the top, the other mountains all appear dwarfs under the sky.". ; Walking into the frontier fortress with Wang Wei, I felt the grandeur of "the desert is lonely and straight, and the long river sets the yen"; Tour the famous mountains with Li Bai and appreciate the magic of "the sun is halfway through the ocean, and the cock crows in space"; Looking down at Dongting side by side with Meng Haoran, I realized the vastness of "steaming Yun Ze dream and besieged Yueyang City"; Watch the Yangtze River with Su Shi and appreciate the magnificence of "surging waves push forward waves and roll up thousands of piles of snow" ...

In addition, the use of exquisite lyrics, proverbs, terms and two-part allegorical sayings can also make the language lively and charming.

Sixth, Lenovo shaping.

With the help of association and imagination, turning boring content or abstract concepts into concrete image content can also increase literary talent. In the article "Charm", a masterpiece of senior high school entrance examination, the author made such an interesting association: "Charm is a powerful throw when the flag bearer raises the flag; It is the bright smile on the face of the Olympic champion standing on the podium; That's batistuta's flying shot; It's Michael Jordan's clever dunk; It is a flowing note on the lyre; It is the light footsteps of fashion models; It is the natural and unrestrained gesture of the speaker; It is a tolerant smile of a broad-minded person; This is Bailey's foot, Tai Sen's fist; Chaplin's shoes, Mei Lanfang's sleeves; It is the shrimp of the old man Baishi and Xu Beihong's horse; It is the shadow reflected on the window paper when sewing clothes for children under the lamp of loving mother; It's grandma's white hair that flutters with the wind when she watches her grandchildren go away ... "The vivid picture depicted by metaphysical association can make people move with emotion, delight in form and give people a beautiful feeling.

Seven, parody adaptation

Imitating poetry and songs, taking its form and changing its content can also add luster to the article. For example, in the excellent segment of the senior high school entrance examination: "I am the one who has the most homework, the heaviest schoolbag, the least rest and the most criticism ... I am the one who has no personal freedom, and I am the one who is confined on vacation, me or me ..." The examinee adapted the lyrics in a self-deprecating tone, vividly describing the current situation of students' heavy academic burden, which is thought-provoking. "One day, I will ride the waves and hang JiXueHai in Yun Fan. I will study harder and sail to the other side of the ocean of knowledge. " This passage changed the word "Cang" in Li Bai's poems to "Xue", expressing the author's desire to study hard, adapt the theme and increase his literary talent.

"Ask where the canal is so clear, because there is a source of living water." Making your work fly is not an overnight success. Only when students collect honey extensively, persistently accumulate and store it, and use it carefully when writing, can they paint a new life and eulogize a new era with crayons in their hands.