Found two articles

"Little Stone Pond" and "Night Tour in Chengtian Temple" can all be regarded as travel notes. Su Shi's Night Tour in Chengtian Temple was written in the sixth year of Yuanfeng, and was demoted as an assistant of Huangzhou Tuan Yong Lian. This article is a lyric sketch he made when he visited Chengtian Temple at night. Xiao Shi Tang Ji was written by Liu Zongyuan when he was relegated to Yongzhou. The original title of this article is "The Story of Xiaoshitang to Xiaoqiu", which is the fourth of the eight famous works in Yongzhou. The article is poetic and fascinating. It is not only a travel note, but also a beautiful article.

Third, the writing skills are basically the same: they are all good at using figurative rhetoric, comparison and profile description to express the characteristics of scenery, and they are all blending scenes and organizing materials according to the author's past.

The metaphor of "Night Tour in Chengtian Temple" is: "The courtyard is as empty as water, and the algae and grass are interlaced in the water, and the bamboo and cypress are hidden." "Water is empty and bright" describes the clarity and transparency of moonlight, and "algae and water intersect" describes the beauty and elegance of bamboo and cypress reflection. The article gets rid of the general method of describing moonlight, which is fresh, meaningful and poetic. Writing moonlight by outline description. "Without saying a word, it's all romantic." There is no place to write about the moon, but there is no place where the moon is bright, thus depicting a fresh and beautiful picture of bamboo and cypress under the moon and creating a clear moonlight world. Su Wen wrote about the scenery, but there was affection in the scenery: "On the evening of October 12, Yuanfeng six years, I took off my clothes and wanted to sleep. I went into the house in the moonlight and set off happily. ..... Huaimin didn't sleep and walked in the atrium. " This shows that the author was happy at that time, but also revealed a sense of loneliness. Doesn't the beauty of moonlight also reflect the author's bleak situation? Finally, "Where is the moon? Where is there no bamboo and cypress? But there are few idle people like my ears! " The vastness of time and space sets "the two of us" against the big one. They don't express their feelings, but their feelings are self-evident and deeply hidden in the words. This kind of feeling has its particularity, which is manifested in broad-mindedness. The author is not indulging in the abyss of feelings, but seeking liberation. This broad-minded state of mind reflects Su Shi's ideological situation in this period, and also makes this essay look chic and elegant.

Liu Zongyuan is very good at observing the forms of various landscapes and grasping the characteristics of different landscapes. If the landscape also has personality, he can grasp the personality of the landscape and portray it vividly. For example, the third paragraph "southwest of Wangchi" can be zigzag. Its shore is full of fangs and its source is unknown. " The author used three metaphors in succession: the stream is as tortuous and motionless as the Big Dipper; As far as a stream is concerned, it is like a snake swimming, it is moving. The author uses two metaphors, a static one and a dynamic one, to describe this stream. The jagged creek bank vividly depicts the image of things. To write about the scenery of Xiaoshitang, it is necessary to describe the water in the pool, but the author only wrote the words "like a ring" and "the water is quiet and happy" in the first paragraph. In the second paragraph, I simply put aside the pool and wrote about a hundred fish, just like in the air, without any support. At this time, if the fish is a virgin, the water is clear. Sunlight can shine directly on the bottom of the water, and fish shadows are distributed on the stones, motionless. Because the water is clear. Water is the life of fish, and the fish suddenly swam over, graceful as if playing with tourists, because water has aura. There is no water in this paragraph, but there is no water. The author skillfully uses the method of profile description to describe the water in the pond with the fish in the pond. The characteristics of the water in the pond are clear, quiet and spiritual.

Liu Zongyuan's landscape travel notes are outstanding because he is not as superficial as ordinary people and only gets a little vague impression. He wrote his own character and experience in the mountains and rivers, and he did have a deep observation and experience of mountains and rivers. Only in this way can we create a new realm and write travel notes with scenes. Writing "like enjoying tourists" when watching fish also reflects the author's happy mood at the beginning of enjoying the beautiful scenery. Sitting by the pool after watching the fish, I feel that the scenery is "sad, cold and quiet", which is also a reflection of the author's depressed and sad mood.

Four, the same is to write "music", the expression is different:

Night Tour of Chengtian Temple: "On the night of October 12, Yuanfeng six years, I took off my clothes and wanted to sleep. I entered the house in the moonlight and set off happily. ..... Huaimin didn't sleep and walked in the atrium. " I took off my clothes and wanted to sleep, and the moonlight quietly entered the house, so the author "set off happily", and the happiness and joy were beyond words. The Happy Man with Nothing invited Zhang Huaimin on his own initiative, showing the urgency of his mood, and the author wrote the process of psychological change. "I don't sleep when I am pregnant with the people", which shows that everyone is a soul mate. The author writes "music" directly from his own psychological feelings: "The courtyard is as empty as water, and the algae and grass are interlaced in the water, and the bamboo and cypress are hidden." Seeing the beautiful world of clarity, clarity and illusion, the author's sentimental feeling arises spontaneously. Fortunately, the author is a relatively open-minded and free-spirited person, who can also enjoy the wonderful scenery of nature as a "leisure" in adversity and pretend to be a "idle person". This may be the author's free and easy, or it may be the author's own tide.

The author of "The Story of Xiaoshitang" "Smells the sound of water, it seems to ring, and the heart is happy." (1), the author "likes listening to the sound of running water", and compares the sound of running water to the sound made by the collision of Yuhuan in Yu Pei. This is what I heard and wrote. (2) I am happy to see fish. In the second paragraph of the text, it says "I like to enjoy tourists". We associate it with the author's joy from swimming in fish, and the author writes it here in an anthropomorphic way. (3) Wang Le Yuan Tan. (4) Travelers have fun. The author mobilized various senses to come to Syaraku.

Fifth, the author can grasp the characteristics to write, but the characteristics of the scenery are different at different times.

Night Tour in Chengtian Temple is about "night tour", so the word "night" is deducted from the pen and gets to the point. "Take off your clothes and want to sleep, and moonlight enters the house", thus concretizing the "night" mentioned earlier. More importantly, it is pointed out that the characteristic of "night" is the harmony of moonlight, not the high black wind. The bright moon is in the sky, the courtyard is as empty as water, and you can see the moonlight; "The algae and grass in the water cross each other", which shows the clarity of moonlight. Moonlight passes through the branches of bamboo and cypress and projects on the ground, which will form such a wonderful scene. And the empty water and algae cross each other, which makes each other interesting, adding three points of beauty to the moonlit night tour. In this article, Su Shi uses the word "moon" everywhere to write night trips, which is one of the characteristics. He writes the month, unlike Zhang's "Moonlit Night on the Spring River" in the early Tang Dynasty, but only a few strokes, which is the second characteristic. Su Shi wrote the night view of the moon, not explicitly, but implicitly. Su Shi starts with the shadow of bamboo and cypress, and clearly says that the moonlight is empty, which is the third feature.

Xiaoshitang Ji records the scenery during the day, highlighting "clear water". In the first paragraph, the author highlighted "the water is quiet and the bottle is clear", so that "the whole stone" can be seen clearly. The second paragraph is about scenery: there are swimming fish, sunshine and images, which are the harmonious integration of fish, light and shadow in clear water. The author uses the method of "fixed-point close-up" to focus on the pond, and the fish are active, just like "swimming in the air", highlighting the clarity of the water; The sun shines to the end, the image falls on the rock, and the water is clear.