20 13 what is the Chinese composition of Xining examination paper?

God knows, the earth knows, and the author knows. You will know the future.

Chinese composition in junior one is generally a propositional composition and a narrative propositional composition. You can refer to the writing skills of narrative. (See Appendix) Good luck!

Appendix:

First, a string of beads

A string of beads is a multi-angle and multi-faceted narrative around a center. This "first line" is the "center" from the connotation of the article. From the external performance, it depends on things, people, things, time, place and the author's thoughts and feelings. This is the clue. Narrative clue is a main thread that runs through the whole text and connects the materials. It connects all parts of the article into a unified and harmonious organism. If the rich and vivid material is pearls, then the clue is the thread that strings pearls together. It should be noted that no matter what clues are taken, they should be determined flexibly and skillfully from the internal relationship between the central idea of the article and the materials.

Let's enjoy Bing Xin's laughter:

The rain died down and the light came in from behind the curtains. Open the window and have a look, ah! The clouds are gone, and the water droplets left on the leaves reflect the moon, flashing and moving like a thousand points of fluorescence. -I didn't expect such a beautiful picture after the bitter rain!

Standing in front of the window for a while, I felt a little cold. When I turned around, I was dazzled, and everything else in the room was hidden in the light cloud; The faint light is only immersed in the angels in the paintings on the wall. -angels in white, holding flowers, holding wings, smiled at me.

"This smile seems to have been seen somewhere. When will I ... "I unconsciously sat under the window and thought quietly.

The closed heart curtain slowly opened, pouring out an impression of five years ago.

A long ancient road. The mud under the donkey's feet is slippery. The water in the ditch gurgled. The green trees near the village are all caged in wet smoke. Bowed crescent moon, hanging in the treetops. Walking, there seems to be a child on the side of the road, holding a pile of white things. The donkey passed by with no intention of turning back. He smiled at me barefoot with flowers in his arms.

"This smile seems to have been seen somewhere!" I still want to-silently.

Another curtain of gravity appeared, which slowly opened and poured out the impression of ten years ago. -the rain under the eaves falls on Mao's clothes drop by drop. The blisters on the edge of the earth steps are turning. The straw and grape trellis in front of the door are all new yellow and light green, which are very bright and beautiful. -After a while, it finally cleared up and went downhill quickly. I saw the moon coming head-on from the sea, and suddenly remembered that I had forgotten something, stopped and turned around. The old woman in this small room-leaning against the door, holding flowers, smiled at me slightly. This equally subtle expression, like a hairspring, flutters and gathers together. At this time, I feel relaxed and happy, such as entering the celestial world and returning to my hometown. San Xiao, who appeared in front of me, suddenly melted and couldn't see clearly in the harmony of love.

This paper uses "laughter" to string together the author's memories and descriptions of three smiling pictures, to express the author's pursuit of the ideal realm of life-"harmony in love" and to express the author's thoughts and feelings about fraternity.

Second, the lens editing

"Lens editing" is originally one of the processes of film production. The so-called "editing" is to select, edit and arrange the shots according to the requirements of the script structure and creative conception, so as to make it a film with complete structure. Shot refers to a series of pictures taken by film and television. Shot editing is used in narrative writing, which means choosing a set of vivid pictures to express the theme. This kind of article is to write down the characters in an orderly way according to stories, pictures or fragments. In the meantime, each part can be written separately and combined into a complete chapter. This structure, also known as the "sugar gourd type", is highly praised for its novel form, originality and exquisite. Attention should be paid to the use of lens editing: (1) The edited lens should not only stay at one level, but also be selected from multiple angles and be representative, so as to reflect the theme in a three-dimensional and comprehensive way. (2) According to the needs of the theme, when expressing it, each segment should focus on the content, that is, express the theme from a certain side. (3) Divide the complete materials well and don't cut them into pieces. The rest of the shots should be internally related. (4) Be good at choosing a large lens. Every shot must be a picture with substantial content, which is typical and representative. (5) There should be gaps between shots, which should not constitute a group of "comic books" but should be jumping. (6) Generally speaking, things with plots can be edited vertically; The plot is not very rich, so it should be edited in horizontal version. (7) The arrangement of stitching lenses is orderly, horizontal, vertical or logical.

Bing Xin's smile mentioned earlier, around the theme of "reconciliation of love", horizontally edited three life scenes for readers to feel and think deeply.

Third, the interweaving of time and space.

When describing a more complicated thing, in the same time period, first describe the situation in place A, then describe the situation in place B, and then write about the people in place A. This is the article construction method of "time and space interweaving". Conducive to compact structure and concise text.

It turns out that there is such a famous communication in high school textbooks, entitled "For the Brothers of Class 61", which is about the sudden food poisoning accident of 61 migrant workers in Pinglu County. The author first wrote the scene of poisoning of migrant workers, then wrote that the Ministry of Health received an emergency telegram for help, then wrote the rescue process of Pinglu Hospital, and then wrote the situation of dispatching emergency drugs in Beijing pharmaceutical stores. This kind of repeated narration constitutes a touching song of triumph. Of course, it is difficult to adopt this method.

Sometimes, in the process of telling a story, the author can also use narrative insertion, supplementary narrative and other methods to form the feeling of "time and space interweaving", and we also incorporate this writing into "time and space interweaving".

Fourth, twists and turns

"The text seems to look at the mountains and don't like peace", and the narrative should not be straightforward, leaving a running account. If it can make waves, it will be fascinating.

Let's enjoy such a story:

Spinning Boris

The Weiming Lake

Near the end of the term, to select outstanding cadres, on Wednesday afternoon, the whole class voted democratically to elect four places in the class. It was a very simple thing, but Nan, the fourth place, voted the same as Wang Yun, the fifth place, and Wang Yun happened to be the nephew of Teacher Li, the head teacher. Now, what used to be simple has become complicated. We speculate that it is up to the teacher's vote to decide Gan Kun.

Everyone talked about it, and who was elected suddenly became the focus of the class.

"I think we should, because he is better than Wang Qiang in every respect."

"Yes, I think the last quota must belong to him."

"That's not necessarily. You know, Wang Yunke has one of the biggest advantages. He is ... "

The students looked at Wang Yun triumphantly and felt a little wronged. I don't know who actually organized several students to write an "exhortation book" to the teacher, which made the classroom that was not calm suddenly boil. Some students were surprised and praised the writing. Some students were frightened and shouted at the top of their lungs: "Stop writing, isn't this waiting for criticism?" Everyone else is whispering, I don't know what they are saying.

The next morning, I walked into the classroom and saw the students talking in twos and threes. I don't know who is still fanning the flames: "This is a good show, see how the teacher ends." Looking at the letter on the platform, I can't help shivering.

The bell rang, and the first class was the class teacher's class. Miss Li stepped on the bell and walked into the classroom. The students' hearts suddenly came to their throats, and the classroom was a little quiet. Everyone wants the teacher to see this letter, but they are afraid of it. Fortunately, Miss Li went to the podium, put down her schoolbag and textbook, and just pressed the letters. I'm relieved. Start class. One by one, the students shrink their heads and cover their faces with books. It looks as if they are reading, but their attention is completely focused on the teacher's actions. As soon as the teacher faced the blackboard, the students secretly looked at the teacher through the cracks in the books. When reading the text, the teacher paced to the back of the classroom and the students' eyes followed. As soon as the teacher looked up, the students suddenly turned around and read loudly. The teacher turned and walked to the front of the classroom. The students listened to the sound of the teacher's shoes approaching little by little, but they dared not turn their heads to take a look, for fear that the teacher would notice something from the ups and downs of reading. I have a cold sweat in my palm. There was a ring at the bell The students breathed a sigh of relief, and the stones in their hearts seemed to fall to the ground. However, Mr. Li did not leave immediately, breaking the silence: "After repeated comparison and careful thinking, I think my work performance is outstanding, and I vote." The students were immediately shocked. Another round of applause.

"Not good!" Who gave a cry. Everyone, look at me, I look at you, and suddenly focus on the podium. I prayed silently in my heart: "Don't let the teacher find that letter." But things seem to be bad for everyone. Just as the teacher picked up the schoolbag and got up to leave, the letter floated to the ground with the wind brought by the schoolbag, and the string that everyone had just loosened suddenly tightened again. Miss Li picked up the letter, opened it and said with a smile, "I'm glad to have so many close friends to support my point of view." My heart churned up and down, not knowing whether it was relief, surprise, chagrin, trust or admiration. ...

The contradiction in the selection at the beginning of this article is who Mr. Li voted for, and there is suspense. The students' indignant comments, Wang Yun's triumphant appearance, wave after wave, indicate what will happen. The students' "urging books" caused a stir, but the teacher didn't find a well-designed "urging books" in class, and everyone's tight hearts relaxed immediately. It was almost calm, but the "urging book" floated to the ground again. The full text is not flat, and there is another wave.

With twists and turns, we can use clever bedding, design coincidence, misunderstanding, sudden change of focus, forward and backward methods and so on.

Full of twists and turns, "full of twists and turns" should be reasonable and make readers feel reasonable and unexpected, so as to be fascinating. Without life, the mysterious "twists and turns" can not only attract readers, but also backfire.

Five, want to prosper first.

"If you want to promote, you should suppress first" and "If you want to suppress, you should promote first" are two opposite layout methods. The first suppression is for the later "promotion", and the "suppression" is for the contrast "promotion". This writing technique should be natural and reasonable, and must not be forced to be blunt. Let's enjoy this article:

I tore off the title page.

Hai Chen Chuan

Within months of knowing each other, we broke up in a hurry. What's her name? I never asked, and I don't want to know. Because the memories in the depths of memory are unbearable—

I met her in a physics competition. She is wearing a red and black plaid coat and a pair of glasses. To be honest, I don't like her. But among all the students who took part in the competition, only she and I are from the same school, and they are all girls. I can't stand loneliness, so I chat with her. Although this way of speaking is not brilliant, we have become "friends" after all. This time, I forgot to ask her name A few months later, I saw her again at the group meeting. It was a night in early summer, and she stood shyly in the middle of the brightly lit hall in a milky white dress, reciting a poem she wrote: "... I praise the whiteness of snow, which has a pure and refined beauty ..." This poem can't help but make me moved by the long-standing boredom of rock songs. For the first time and the last time, I felt her beauty, which was more than silence.

I secretly wrote down this little poem and copied it on the title page of my diary.

The two months before graduation are the most stressful. The third time I met her was in an advanced physics class. It was difficult to practice exam questions at that time. Many students in our class have failed, both she and I have failed.

There are no exceptions. The physics teacher handed out another exercise paper. I've finished the exam before it's over. I'm impatient. Look around. Suddenly, I saw a book on her lap, and she was turning it nervously.

I was completely dumbfounded, followed by resentment and contempt. I was estranged from her at this meeting. I don't want to look her in the eye. I try to avoid her because I know the more I see her, the more embarrassed I am.

I met her again at the school debate. She is a contestant. Incredibly, the topic of her speech was "On the Harmfulness of Cheating in Examinations". She is still wearing that white dress and still a little shy, but this time she is more excited. I feel dizzy when I watch her talk endlessly.

"I'm ashamed of cheating in the exam. It's not just ... "These barbed words, like mocking eyes, winked at me mercilessly. I sat feebly and looked at her indifferently, but my mind was firm-"I despise you!" " "She won the second prize in this speech.

The audience burst into warm applause. I just didn't applaud. The first thing I did when I got home was to tear off the title page of my diary with this poem on it. ...

In this paper, the description of "she" adopts the method of "restraining first and then promoting" There is a distinct "contrast" relationship between "I" and "she" in "restraining law". The first time I saw her was at a test center. Later, I saw her dressed as white as snow, and then I heard her recite a poem praising snow. "I" have a good impression on her; But in another physics exam, she cheated, which made me feel contempt for her. What makes me more disgusted is that she actually talked about the shame of cheating in her speech. What she said is not true. Her appearance doesn't match her heart. I look down on her. The author pinned his emotional changes on a detail: he wrote the poem on the title page of his diary and then tore it up angrily. The author's emotional changes are stable, natural and reasonable.

Six, interspersed with flow

In the process of narration, insert some content related to the plot to enrich the content of the article. This technique used in writing is called interspersed flow. Scattered flow technique is a special usage of interpolation. For example, in Wang Anyi's Rain, sasha vujacic describes a girl walking home on a rainy night, missing the bus and thinking along the way. The article repeatedly inserted into the conscious activities of girls' hearts, reflecting girls' yearning and pursuit for a better future. The use of episodes should not be too much, too many episodes will affect the coherence of the article itself.

Seven, cleverly set suspense

Give a hint in front of the content to be displayed at the back of the article, but don't answer immediately, so as to arouse readers' curiosity and create a feeling of eager reading. At the beginning of such an article, we call it clever suspense. Its advantage is that it can avoid structural monotony and make the plot of the article ups and downs and fascinating. Let's enjoy this article:

pomegranate flowers

Ni ling

Pomegranate flowers, layers of branches ...

In the twilight, I came to the grave of Yunyun with a few pomegranate flowers in full bloom. ...

In my memory, I met Yun in the library. Everything seems to be a coincidence. She and I picked up the book Jude the Obscure at the same time. Almost at the same time, we both made funny moves and then smiled at each other. I said "ladies first" and she said "thank you" and sat at the table opposite me. In the next few days, we met in the library almost every day. We just smiled politely without words. Suddenly one day, she asked me whether I sympathized with Jude or Hardy, and I said I sympathized with both. She seemed to agree with my answer and nodded slightly. She then asked me if I had read Jane Eyre, and I said I had only heard of it, but I hadn't read it. She said that she liked the sentence of Jane Eyre in Manor and improvised for me. The next day, she brought me the book Jane Eyre, with a pomegranate flower in the middle. She said that she likes pomegranate flowers. At that time, I always wondered how a tearful girl like her could like pomegranate flowers. I thought she should be as white and elegant as gardenia and jasmine.

It can be said that books have established a profound friendship between us, and I have begun to get to know her, at least I think so. One afternoon, she invited me to watch the meteor shower in Leo, and I readily agreed, perhaps because I am also a Leo. That night, she asked me if I like meteors. I said it was beautiful, but it was too short. She said that as long as she once had it, she wanted nothing more. While speaking, a meteor broke through the night sky, and she immediately made a wish. I asked if we could talk, but she didn't answer. She just asked me if I would cry if she died like a meteor one day. I laughed at her for being too sentimental. Then I gave her a line: there is no tomb on the mountain, heaven and earth are in harmony, but I dare to break with you. That time, she smiled, with a bright smile, like that meteor, perhaps more like a pomegranate flower.

I haven't been to the library since we watched the meteor together, because I was busy with the exam. One day, I suddenly received a letter from Yun asking me to go to the hospital to see her. I hurried to the hospital and found her in the blood ward. She was lying in a white hospital bed, looking very haggard and pale, and seemed to want to struggle when she saw me. In fact, however, she was dying. Seeing this situation, I quickly helped her up. I don't talk much because I don't want to make her too tired. For a long time, she asked me to help her take care of her pomegranate tree. She said it's a pity that she can't be friends with me for life, and she hopes to be the first pomegranate after next year. I prayed silently for her with tears in my eyes, hoping that she would be all right. ...

I took good care of the pomegranate tree in the clouds, watching it blossom its first and second flowers … watching the humble little flowers bear red pomegranate. I think I have fully understood the cloud. If it were alive, it would at least think so.

At the beginning of the article, it is written about pomegranate flowers with fiery branches and a girl's sad grave. The two colors are different, resulting in the contrast in the scene. This is the suspense of comparison. Then recall the process of communicating with the cloud, which is a flashback suspense. It is strange that a tearful girl likes pomegranate flowers, which is an object suspense. This article is full of suspense, but I don't know the author's intention. Finally, after reading the whole article, we suddenly realized that Yun likes the hot life like pomegranate, and she just left us like a meteor with a pomegranate dream. Her ardent love for life, her composure in dying, and her pomegranate smile will remain in our memory forever. The significance here is far-reaching. The suspense caused by pomegranate flowers runs through the whole text, which turns with events, layers of bedding, fresh and lively, but vaguely reveals a trace of sadness, making people realize the true meaning of life in sadness and joy. The use of suspense makes the article have a thrilling artistic effect.

Eight, winding path leading to a secluded place

Yang Shuo's essay "Litchi Honey" is intended to praise the noble quality of working people by bees and express his willingness to learn from them. However, the article does not express this theme directly, but expresses the theme in a tortuous way by showing the changes of the author's thoughts and feelings about bees. At first, the author wrote about the "bumps" of bees. Later, he wrote about "wanting to see bees" because he ate litchi honey. Later, he wrote about the hardships of bees and the introduction of beekeepers. At the end of the article, the author dreams of "becoming a little bee". It can be seen that "a winding path leads to a secluded place" refers to a writing technique that does not come straight to the point and expresses one's mind directly, but gradually reveals the theme through twists and turns.

When using "winding path leading to seclusion" method, we should pay attention to two points: (1) "winding path leading to seclusion" is the means, "winding path leading to seclusion" is the purpose, and the means should serve the purpose; (2) The twists and turns in writing should be appropriate, not for the sake of twists and turns.

Nine, paving the way

Bedding, also known as bedding, is to highlight the main characters or things, while putting other characters or things out as cushions. The purpose of using bedding writing is to accumulate momentum and highlight the main idea of the article.

For example, the first paragraph of Du Mu's "Epang Palace Fu" tries to describe the scale and architectural grandeur of Epang Palace; The second paragraph strongly exaggerates the number of beautiful women and the richness of treasures in Epang Palace. The third syllogism describes the inevitable result that the rulers of the Qin Dynasty were arrogant and extravagant, and the palace was occupied in large quantities, which led to the rapid collapse of the country and the destruction of the palace. Finally, in the fourth paragraph, the author begins with "alas" and makes a profound discussion and lamentation, pointing out that if the rulers of Qin can love the people all over the world, the country will not perish, which shows that the demise of Qin is a profound lesson. The description and rendering of the first two paragraphs of this poem pave the way for the discussion of the latter two paragraphs, which is the basis of the discussion, while the discussion reveals the theme and highlights the theme, which is the intention of paving the way.

There are two points to pay attention to when using the paving technique: (1) Pay attention to the paving position. Only when this part is written completely can we effectively accumulate motivation. (2) Natural use of bedding. If it is paving the way, too many piles will expose human traces and the effect will be counterproductive.

Ten, see the big from the small.

"Seeing the big from the small" means choosing subtle and distinctive things in writing, revealing the profound essence of a certain aspect of social life through concrete narration and vivid description, and giving people cognition, education, enlightenment or interest. Yu Dafu said: "A grain of sand sees the world, and half a petal of flowers talks about human feelings", which can just sum up the characteristics of "seeing the big with the small". Let's enjoy the college entrance examination composition:

Life calendar

A candidate in Zhejiang

Tear them off one by one, and hope them one by one. -inscription

I don't know how long it has been since I visited her. Just vaguely traces of childhood. Her face has shiny silver and traces of years.

"Ding" woke me up from my sleep with a phone call this morning, and I froze when I hung up. I feel that the world will drown me in an instant-grandma had a car accident. When I arrived at the hospital, she was already lying in the intensive care unit. Tears poured out in an instant. I followed grandpa's advice and went back to my hometown to change clothes.

It's the same old house, full of childhood flavor and memories. Hesitated and walked to the attic. When you walk into the bedroom, the taste of memory comes out. This is her taste. At first glance, I saw several large calendars on the desk, which were torn to pieces. When I walked over, I saw that the front of the calendar was ordinary, an ordinary date, and the words on the back made me dumbfounded: "In February 2003, Nan Nan went home with her parents today." "In May 2003, Nan Nan called me today and asked me to put on more clothes." "In July, 2004, I took the entrance exam today." "In February, 2005, I saw Xiao Nan's photo today." "In March, 2005, Nan Nan didn't come back for three months." "In February, 2006, Nan Nan didn't call me for a long time." I flipped through all the torn calendars like crazy. The above is the detailed date and what happened between me and her. Time is up and time is up. I can't believe it, but it hurts me to think of her writing these little by little on the table with reading glasses in front of the dim light. How long has it been since I came back? How long has it been since I called? Is it because you are busy studying, or because you are alienated and indifferent when you grow up? And she, how to pin her hopes on these calendars and expect me to be the charming little darling when I was a child again?

I packed these calendars, which were full of her hopes, and went back to the hospital. Looking at her head wrapped in white gauze before bed, tears welled up again. I held her hand tightly and silently prayed to God not to take her away from me.

The face on the bed is still the one that hurt me and loved me when I was a child, shining with silver, and there was silence between my eyebrows and eyes. I quietly put the last piece of calendar paper filled with my blessings into her hand and muttered, "Grandma, wake up, little darling is coming to see you, little darling won't let you count the calendars any more, wake up." ...

This is an article from small to large, with the help of touching details in life, expressing a grand and profound love theme, giving people profound thinking and enlightenment.