How to write the diary of spring outing in grade three?

The spring outing diary mode is as follows:

Fan Wenyi:

One day, there is no cloud in Wan Li! Teachers and parents took us to the spring outing of Yalin Modern Agricultural Park in Longwan. Yalin Agricultural Park is really beautiful! The green lawn is covered with colorful tulips, red like fire, pink like chardonnay, yellow like gold, white like snow, so beautiful! The green trees stood there like soldiers on guard. Yalin Agricultural Park is really fun! There are Rainbow Slide, Natural History Museum, Wax Museum and VR Experience Museum. Rainbow slide is the most fun!

Fan Wener:

Spring outing! Travel! The news spread all over our class. I was so happy that I bought vegetables early and prepared to go for a spring outing. There are so many kinds of snacks! There are sweets, biscuits, bread and potato chips. I'm going to buy cookies first. They are shaped like asteroids, wrapped in sweet strawberry jam, sweet and crisp to bite. I came to the candy section again. Candies are packed in different shapes, some in small "high heels".

Fan Wensan:

Today, we go for a spring outing. On the way, I felt uneasy, because it was my first time to go out for a spring outing. However, when I saw the beautiful spring scenery on the roadside, my mood relaxed. I saw the tiny willow buds, slender willow branches. I can't help thinking of He's Singing Willow! Jasper trees are tall, and thousands of strands of green silk tapestries hang down. I don't know who is wearing thin leaves. The spring breeze in February is like scissors.