Ask for an English composition about traveling to Hainan in summer vacation (past tense)

In the summer vacation, I went to the beautiful Hainan Island, where there are delicious coconuts and beautiful sea. At the seaside, I took off my shoes and stepped on the waves. Surfing the beach covered a series of footprints left behind it. The beach at the foot, the sea in front, the white clouds in the sky and every coconut tree are wonderful.

In the summer vacation, I went to the beautiful Hainan Island, where there are delicious coconuts and beautiful sea. At the seaside, I took off my shoes and went surfing. The waves flooded the beach, leaving a trail of footprints. The beach at the foot, the sea in front of us, the white clouds in the sky and coconut trees are so beautiful.