A 300-word essay about Hong Kong with a total score and overall structure.

Beautiful Hong Kong

There is a place I really want to go, and that is Hong Kong. It has beautiful scenery and is a beautiful place.

I heard: "Hong Kong is located at the southern end of the coastline of the motherland. It is not large in area, but it is the shipping center, trade center and financial center of the Asia-Pacific region. It is also a good place for shopping, food and tourism." Hong Kong is A port with many people working there. Hong Kong's market is a "market of all nations", with products from two hundred regions and countries.

Hong Kong has many delicacies from all over the world. There are Austrian cuisine and Sichuan cuisine. . . . . . Also known as "Food Paradise".

Hong Kong is still a "tourist destination", and what I want to visit most is the world-famous Ocean Park. The dolphins and sea lions perform the best there. In the water, they drill circles and head balls, which is very attractive to other friends.

Whenever night falls, Hong Kong turns into a sea of ??lights. The lights shining in the harbor are like colorful flames, and the strings of car lights on the road are like a long shining river. The neon lights of high-rise buildings are dazzling, welcoming tourists from all over the world.

Hong Kong is really a shining pearl in the South my country Sea!