How to write a good beginning of a composition

The beginning of the exam-oriented composition is always nonsense. Let's start without nonsense.

"This summer vacation, I went to Xi 'an. "To put it bluntly, it's no use. The exam-oriented composition can be quoted next. ... once said "..." to poets (in fact, it's better not to write)

Write your own imagination (I have never been to Xi 'an, which may be completely different from your idea).

This summer vacation, I went to Xi, by train. The train stops at one stop, and I don't know how long it will take to arrive. A little excited, a little unknown, in the rush about various scenic spots, but not as comfortable as this time. Close your eyes slightly, listen to dvorak's Ninth Symphony, and feel a little bit of travel sadness; If you want to read a book you haven't read on weekdays, you can read it at this time ...

Life is too hasty. I have been struggling in this world for so long, repairing my own career and running around. Life is not a stagnant pool, maybe people should wander more. During the journey, you should chew a little melancholy and appreciate a little life.

The following are famous sentences for your reference.

Most participles of Xu Zhimo and Liu Yong (such as Klang Ganzhou) and Du Fu's One Night in a Foreign Country.

You'd better tell me what you intend to write in the article, otherwise I really can't answer, and my writing is not off topic.

There was really nothing I could do at first. The stereotype begins with "the brightest star in memory", which makes me sick. Just cut into the first 450 words of the text. If you don't think it's enough, quote it appropriately, or briefly introduce Xi 'an.

1. At the end, I wrote Terracotta Warriors to express my pride. If you have spare time, you won't worry about the ending at all.

take for example

Strong wind and strong spring tide. Flood totem dragon, fire nirvana phoenix. The flame of civilization, eternal flame, is unique to me; Coexist with heaven and earth and shine with the sun and the moon. (This is the preface to the Millennium Monument)

or

Looking back at the ancient times, the national fortune lives forever, and the ancestors live forever; There are many ups and downs of honor and disgrace. From a distance, in modern times, 36,000 days in a hundred years experienced national suffering and changes. After a thousand years of shame, the snow finally fell; China Xingye, look at the present. Today, I am a teenager, and I will be brilliant in the East!

Or another is that Qin Shihuang's great achievements have now become a wasteland. Is there any value in the efforts of people in history? In other words, the ancient literati in China were confused about whether they were born in the Millennium or entered the WTO (that is, Confucianism or Taoism). Don't end this. Write a clear and lofty article, highlight the massiness of history, and write a little about Liu Bang and Xiang Yu.

You can refer to the judgment of A Dream of Red Mansions.

Qin Shihuang was cruel and ruthless, and was finally destroyed by Liu Bang. Only this Terracotta Warriors and Horses stayed, which shows that the people are the main body of history. This is a matter of different opinions. It is good to write well, and it is red tape to write badly.

Qin Shihuang disappeared in the torrent of history, and later generations have been commenting. Only art has been passed down through the ages. This is difficult to write. Think for yourself.

5. Ignore the last Terracotta Warriors (words can be written), just like I gave the initial ending, talking about travel and life in general.

The above five points are all themes. I don't need to give the ending to 2, 3, 4. I can write it naturally, which is better than this ending. As for the topic of "happiness", I am really not good at it. I deducted it myself in the article. Anyway, it feels awkward to deduct the topic at the end (the last sentence "I really enjoyed this summer vacation" is really disgusting)

By the way, where did you study, primary school, junior high school, senior high school, and university (it should not be that universities don't have such boring composition questions). If the third and fourth grades of primary school finally write a long parallel essay, it will be very problematic.

I suddenly find it difficult. I haven't written a primary school composition for many years. You should at least decide on a theme. Since you stated on the internet that you don't want the same beginning and end, it can only be changed because of the theme. Don't tell me your theme is happiness. I have never heard of such a theme. Travel composition is easy to write, and the theme can be big or small.

Simple narration in primary school should be ok, but it always feels too thin.

The following is to express pride (there is something wrong with the parallel prose portrait of primary school students above)

Napoleon said, "China is a sleeping lion." Today, this lion finally stands in the east of the world. The Terracotta Warriors, who had been sleeping for thousands of years, finally woke up-it was the revival of China's splendid civilization!

The following is a panacea (that is, nothing is said, the topic is deducted)

On the way home, it began to rain lightly, and the trees that flashed outside the window became greener and greener, giving them some summer vitality. It is really beautiful to think of Liu Changqing's poem "A pine tree becomes greener with the rain". In the drizzle, I bid farewell to Xi 'an with a little nostalgia. (If you want to deduct the topic, add "Recalling all kinds of things in Xi 'an, I feel really happy this summer vacation. " )

Nine days is enough for a composition, and 450 words can be written in less than an hour. Believe in yourself, you can.