After visiting Xiangfan Martyrs Tower

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Text: This year’s National Day, our Young Pioneers have a mission. I just wrote a review after visiting a patriotic education base. So, my parents and I went to visit the Xiangfan Martyrs Tower. When we arrived at the tombs of the martyrs, there happened to be a tour group also visiting, and a tour guide was explaining. So I went over to listen.

From the tour guide’s explanation, I learned that the Xiangfan Martyrs Tower was a memorial park built in 1954 after liberation to commemorate the martyrs who died heroically in the Guangzhou Uprising in December 1927. At that time, the Communists and the revolutionary masses resisted the crazy persecution and massacre of the Kuomintang reactionaries. Because the enemy was strong and we were weak, the uprising ultimately failed. I felt how tall those Communists and the revolutionary masses were.

For the future of our motherland, they are not afraid of hard work, difficulties, or death. Although they died, their deaths were glorious. They died fighting for freedom and peace in Guangzhou. They are the martyrs who died heroically in our Guangzhou Uprising! These heroic martyrs sacrificed everything for us, even their only life.