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1, went to plant trees last week. [Missing theme]

I went to plant trees last week.

Today, all the students in Class 3, Grade 5 took part in the painting and calligraphy competition. [backwards]

[Revision] Today, all the students in Class 3, Grade 5 participated in the painting and calligraphy contest.

His view is correct. [word repetition]

[Revision] His view is correct.

Students are sitting in the wide reading room reading books. [Misuse of words]

The students are sitting in the wide reading room reading books.

Unfinished topic

1. Through this study, my level has been greatly improved.

This study greatly improved my level.

From the above obvious facts, it is proved that the party's principles and policies come from the masses.

The above obvious facts prove that the party's principles and policies come from the masses.

Incomplete predicate

1, recently launched a comprehensive quality inspection action, established and strengthened the technical management system and a series of work in this action.

Recently, a comprehensive quality inspection operation has been launched, in which a series of work such as establishing and strengthening the technical management system will be completed.

In the old society, the working people didn't have enough to eat and wear.

In the old society, working people lived a life of not having enough to eat and not wearing warm clothes.

3. Inspired by Lei Feng's spirit, teachers and students all over the school are doing good things like mushrooms after rain.

Inspired by Lei Feng's spirit, teachers and students of the whole school strive for the upper reaches, and good deeds have mushroomed.

Incomplete object

1, the school party Committee discussed and mobilized all teachers and students to carry out patriotic health campaign.

The Party Committee of the school discussed the mobilization of all teachers and students to carry out patriotic health campaign.

We should try our best to mechanize and collectivize our agriculture.

We should make every effort to make China agriculture on the road of mechanization and collectivization.

Incomplete necessary modifier

1. If you want to get excellent grades, you must work hard.

If you want to get excellent grades, you must work hard and effectively.

In this school table tennis singles competition, Zhang Qiang and Li Li won the men's and women's championships respectively.

In this school-wide table tennis singles competition, Zhang Qiang and Li Li won the men's and women's championships respectively.

Incomplete related words

1. The stick insect in Singapore is not only almost the same color as bamboo, but also completely looks like a branch when it is quiet.

The stick insect in Singapore is not only almost the same color as bamboo, but also completely looks like a branch when it is quiet.

2. This academic conference was short and gained a lot.

Although the academic conference is not long, it has gained a lot.

No matter how good you say, we won't listen.

No matter how good you say, we won't listen.

4, the family is big, but also saves unnecessary expenses and waste.

No matter how big the business is at home, we should save unnecessary expenses and waste.

Component redundancy

Subject redundancy

1, Lao She's writing style has always shared weal and woe with the people.

Lao She's writing has always shared weal and woe with the people.

Predicate redundancy

1. The lecture notes borrowed from your college last time are being printed and can be distributed to students before class.

The lecture notes borrowed from your college last time are being printed and can be distributed to students before class.

Ten players on the basketball court are playing fiercely.

Ten players on the basketball court are playing fiercely.

Object redundancy

1. Sima Qian is a famous historian in China. He has been compiling Historical Records all his life.

Sima Qian is a famous historian in China. He spent his whole life completing Historical Records.

2. Today, I went to the Slender West Lake in Yangzhou and visited the Baita, Diaoyutai and Wu Ting Bridge.

Today, I went to the Slender West Lake in Yangzhou and visited the White Pagoda, Diaoyutai and Wu Ting Bridge.

Attribute redundancy

1. Implementing quality education in an all-round way is the urgent task of current education.

Implementing quality education in an all-round way is an urgent task of education.

Adverbial redundancy

1, Xuelian brand shirts are first-class in China in terms of style, quality and packaging.

Xuelian brand shirts, whether in style, quality or packaging, can be called first-class in the country.

I sincerely thank these people in my heart.

I sincerely thank these people.

There are fruits everywhere: pears, apples and persimmons. ...

There are fruits everywhere: pears, apples and persimmons. ...

Complement redundancy

1, in order to simplify the number of words, we have to make some minor changes.

In order to simplify the number of words, it has to be revised slightly.

Not indispensable

1, unconsciously walked a distance of about ten miles.

I walked about ten miles unconsciously.

It has been nine years since my father died.

It has been nine years since my father died.

Misuse the word "de"

Surprisingly, in March this year, the price fell, and then slowly stabilized.

Surprisingly, in March this year, the price fell, and then slowly stabilized.

2. Due to the turmoil and humid climate in the past dynasties, almost all the paintings at that time were destroyed.

Due to the turmoil and humid climate of the past dynasties, almost all the paintings at that time were destroyed.

Improper collocation:

Improper collocation of subject and predicate

1, its annual power generation is not only supplied to Hangzhou, but also transported to Shanghai, Nanjing and other places.

The electricity it generates every year is not only supplied to Hangzhou, but also delivered to Shanghai, Nanjing and other places.

What a beautiful picture the rustling waves and the silvery sea make up.

What a beautiful picture the silver sea makes up.

3. Young students are the key period for their physical growth, knowledge acquisition and the formation of their outlook on life and world. We must fully care about them and strictly demand them.

The period of young students is a crucial period for them to grow physically and acquire knowledge, and to form their outlook on life and world, so we must fully care about them and strictly demand them.

4. The task before the translator is how to improve the translation quality.

The task before the translator is how to improve the translation quality.

Autumn in Beijing is the most beautiful season.

Autumn in Beijing is the most beautiful season.

6. The Japanese Film Week held in Harbin and Shenyang and five Japanese films shown in other provinces and cities in China are works with unique style and national characteristics among Japanese films in recent years.

The five Japanese films released in the Japan Film Week held in Harbin, Shenyang and other provinces and cities in China are works with unique style and national characteristics among Japanese films in recent years.

Improper collocation of verbs and objects

1. If we don't pay attention to the network moral construction, some moral corruption and negative and backward ideas may affect people's physical and mental health through the network, violate the normal social order and damage the overall situation of reform and development.

If we don't pay attention to the network moral construction, some moral corruption and negative backward ideas may affect people's physical and mental health, interfere with the normal social order and damage the overall situation of reform and development through the network.

2. The Soviet novel How Steel was Tempered shaped party member Paul? Kochakin's heroic deeds.

Party member Paul was shaped by the Soviet novel How Steel was Tempered? Kochakin's heroic image.

The students watched and listened to this brave hero's report with reverence.

The students listened to the brave hero's report with reverence.

Recently, Jinan promoted civilized service terms and service taboos, which were welcomed by the general public.

Recently, Jinan promoted civilized service language, which was welcomed by the general public.

You can read precious documents, books, audio and video materials that you have never seen before on the Internet.

You can read precious documents, books and videos on the Internet that you have never seen before.

6. The People's Liberation Army has rescued and provided disaster relief for many times, protecting people's lives and property.

The People's Liberation Army (PLA) has repeatedly rescued and provided disaster relief to protect people's lives and property.

Improper collocation of modifiers and headwords

Improper collocation of attributive and headword

1, I have a pair of smart and capable hands and can do anything.

I have a pair of capable hands. I can do anything.

Improper collocation of adverbial and head word

1. We carefully studied the staff's suggestions and humbly sought the opinions of experts.

We have carefully studied the suggestions of employees and humbly sought the opinions of experts.

2. A factory is constantly committed to the research and development of new products, new technologies, new processes and new materials driven by technological progress.

Driven by technological progress, the factory is constantly committed to the research and development of new products and materials.

Improper collocation of complement and head

1. The students cleaned the classroom neatly.

The students cleaned the classroom.

One side and two sides are not properly matched.

1. The key to doing a good job in production and disaster relief depends on whether the style of cadres is in-depth.

Whether we can do a good job in disaster relief depends on whether the style of cadres is in-depth.

Artists used to be looked down upon by people, but now they are eagerly favored by people. Between this supercilious look and love, they realized the warmth of the world.

Artists used to be looked down upon by people, but now they are eagerly favored by people. Between this supercilious look and love, they realized the warmth and coldness of the world.

Improper collocation of related words

1. Only by listening to lectures and finishing homework well can the academic performance be greatly improved.

Only by attending classes well and finishing homework well can the academic performance be greatly improved.

2. Imagination is necessary not only for the poet's creation, but also for the reader's appreciation.

Imagination is necessary not only for the creation of poets, but also for the appreciation of readers.

Now that you are here, I should go.

Now that you're here, I should go.

The attribute location is incorrect.

The positions of the attributive and the head are reversed.

1, cotton production in China cannot be self-sufficient for a long time.

Cotton produced in China cannot be self-sufficient for a long time.

Put the attribute in the position of adverbial

1, the vast number of young people have shown great enthusiasm for reform.

The vast number of young people have shown great enthusiasm for reform.

These two attributes are not in the right word order.

1. This exhibition shows cultural relics just unearthed thousands of years ago.

This exhibition shows cultural relics just unearthed thousands of years ago.

Improper position of adverbial

Put adverbial in the position of attribute

1, the teacher said that students should give full play in class.

The teacher said that students should give full play to their roles in class.

These two adverbials are reversed.

1, according to the sketch of Lao Gao's cartoon, we successfully found the legendary god hunter.

According to the sketch of Lao Gao's cartoon, we successfully found the legendary god hunter.

2. Li Qiang ignored Zhang Zhuo.

Li Qiang doesn't take Zhang Zhuo seriously.

Many adverbials are out of order.

1, the next day, the world's major newspapers reported this event that shocked the international sports world in detail.

About this event that shocked the international sports world, all the major newspapers in the world reported it in detail.

Improper position of function words

The adverb "bu" is in the wrong position.

1. If we don't do our domestic affairs well, it will be difficult for us to have a say in the world.

If we don't do our domestic affairs well, it will be difficult for us to have a say in the world.

2. If we don't check the contract farming now, we can't hoe the land ahead.

If we don't check the contract farming now, we won't be able to hoe the land ahead.

Improper placement of related words

She not only studies hard, but also helps other students.

She not only studies hard, but also helps other students.

If he can't be realistic, his career will be damaged.

If he cannot be realistic, his career will be affected.

The weight of things is reversed.

At that time, there were few opportunities for newspapers to contact me.

I had little contact with newspapers at that time.

I am not interested in mathematics.

I'm not interested in math.

Improper order in complex sentences

1, the spring breeze blows in waves, the trees sway, the moonlight shakes with the shadows, making a rustling sound.

Spring breeze blows waves, trees sway and rustle, and moonlight and shadows shake together.