English composition about traveling to Mount Emei, urgent!

The weather is very good today. I went to Mount Emei with my parents. It took us about two hours to go there by car.

The weather is very good today. I went to Mount Emei with my parents. It took us about two hours to drive there.

When we got there, there were thousands of people here. We climbed the mountain and saw many monkeys. They are cute and friendly to people.

When we got there, there were thousands of people here. We climbed the mountain and saw many monkeys. They are cute and friendly to people.

Some people are climbing trees, others are eating bananas. We brought a lot of potatoes. Time flies so quickly that we have to go home at 4 pm. We felt tired, but we really had a good time.

Some of them are climbing trees, others are eating bananas. We ate a lot of potatoes. Time flies so quickly that we have to go home at 4 pm. We felt very tired, but we did have a good time.