Write an English composition about travel (5 sentences)

5 sentences in English composition about travel:

I go to an interesting place, there are lots of people.I see many beautiful flowers, and there are many animals.I see some tigers, they are very scary. I also see two elephints, they are petty heavy and big.

Translation: I went to an interesting place and there were many people there. I saw many beautiful flowers and there were many animals there. I saw some tigers and they were very scary. I also saw two elephants, they were small, heavy and big.

Notes on writing English compositions

1. To increase the highlights, but please note: even if the candidate sets language highlights in the composition, it does not mean that he will definitely be " Bole" excavation. The marking speed is very fast, and the marking teacher has no time to "deconstruct" overly complex inverted sentences and clauses within clauses. However, too many grammatical and spelling errors will invalidate all language points. No one would believe that someone who makes a lot of mistakes is capable of using difficult sentence patterns. ?

2. Visual evaluation: clean and tidy, with beautiful handwriting. Develop good habits. The writing is too ugly and the writing is messy, which will invalidate all the language highlights. No one would believe that someone who almost never writes English words has the ability to set the language highlights of English. ?

3. Do not apply universal templates directly. Postgraduate entrance examination essay grading is actually an anti-template process. After reading a lot of template compositions that have no personality and are highly similar, the graders will form an anti-template complex in their minds: mechanical template sentences, no matter how gorgeously packaged, they will not take a second look; sentences that are original and to the point , even if it is simple, it can impress the examiner.