Descriptive essay about Suining, Sichuan

1. An essay about Suining

Suining is located in the middle of the Sichuan Basin, in the middle reaches of the Fujiang River.

The generous gifts of nature and the splendid culture of thousands of years have given birth to the charming and magical color of this land. Through the vicissitudes of history and through the thick red soil, "Magic Suining, Eight Wonders" has become a fascinating and beautiful scenery in western China.

▲One of the wonders: World Jurassic Park - Longfeng Gorge Longfeng Gorge is located in Mingxing Town, Shehong County, Suining City. Its landforms are unique, with wonderful landscapes such as dissolved caves, stepped waterfalls, and sedimentary ripples. There are also concentrated and well-preserved petrified wood and dinosaur fossil remains. It is the largest number and well-preserved 150 million-year-old fossils found in my country so far. The former native petrified wood forest site has extremely important scientific research, science education and tourism value. It was named "Sichuan Shehong Silicified Wood National Geopark" by the Ministry of Land and Resources, covering an area of ??12 square kilometers.

In 2010, the 8th International Jurassic Congress will be held here. This is the first international Jurassic event held in the Asia-Pacific region. ▲Wonder No. 2: Suining, China’s artificial satellite recycling base. As far as artificial returnable satellites are concerned, selecting a suitable recycling area plays a decisive role in the successful recycling.

Due to its special longitude and latitude, Suining has been identified as the recovery base for my country’s artificial returnable satellites. In November 1979, Suining was designated as the recycling site for my country's first man-made returnable satellite and attracted world attention.

So far, most of the dozens of man-made returnable satellites launched by our country have identified Suining as the recovery site and accurately landed in the predetermined area. Suining has become the harbor for China’s man-made returnable satellites, the “proud son of heaven”.

▲Wonder No. 3: China’s fifth greatest invention—Zhuotong Well During the Qingli Period of the Northern Song Dynasty, Suining people invented the Zhuotong Well drilling technology, which can extract salt brine thousands of meters deep underground, opening up the world for human use. Drilling is the beginning of mining mineral resources deep underground. The invention of the Zhuotsu well enabled the development and utilization of underground brine, oil, natural gas and other minerals, accelerating the history of human civilization.

"The History of Well Salt Science and Technology in China" records that "the invention of Zhuotou well technology is comparable to important inventions such as the compass, gunpowder, papermaking, and printing. It is the father of modern oil drilling." "History of Science and Technology in China" calls Zhuo Tsutsui the "fifth greatest invention" after the four great inventions in ancient China.

In 2006, "Dayingzhuo Tube Well Deep Drilling and Drawing Technique" was listed as a national intangible cultural heritage by the State Council. ▲Wonder No. 4: The mysterious 30 degrees north latitude - the Dead Sea in China. 150 million years ago, violent plate movements formed two surprisingly similar inland lakes at 30 degrees north latitude. One is the Dead Sea in the Middle East on the surface, and the other is One is the underground ancient salt lake hidden deep in Daying County, Suining.

Relying on its rich underground salt brine resources, Suining actively attracted private funds and successfully built the "Chinese Dead Sea", recreating the magical charm of the Dead Sea in the Middle East. The emergence of the "China Dead Sea" scenic spot has led the new fashion of large-scale participatory interactive tourism. It receives more than one million domestic and foreign tourists every year, creating a Sichuan tourism myth.

"China's Dead Sea" is embracing guests from afar with a broad mind. ▲Fifth Wonder: China’s Royal Zen Forest—Guangde Temple. Known as “the first Zen forest in the West”, Guangde Temple was built in the Kaiyuan period of the Tang Dynasty (713-741 AD). The place where Zen Master You became a monk.

Zen Master Keyou is the grandson of Zhongzong of the Tang Dynasty and the nephew of Xuanzong of the Tang Dynasty. Guangde Temple has been deeply favored by emperors of all dynasties because of its royal "bloodline". It has been granted 11 edicts by nine emperors of Tang, Song and Ming Dynasties.

The imperial edict, the Kowloon Monument, the Sian Chai Pagoda, the Burmese Jade Buddha, and the Guanyin jewel seal given by the emperors of the Song and Ming dynasties all testify to the dignity of the Royal Zen Forest. Guangde Temple is large in scale and exquisite in architecture. The well-preserved temple complex in the Tang Dynasty style of more than 20,000 square meters further demonstrates the kingly demeanor here.

Guangde Temple is listed as a national key cultural relic protection unit by the State Council. ▲Wonder No. 6: Lingquan Temple, the holy place for Guanyin pilgrimage. Lingquan Temple was built during the Kaihuang period of the Sui Dynasty (581-600 AD) and became a Buddhist holy place more than a thousand years ago.

Folk song: "The three sisters of Guanyin Bodhisattva eat from the same pot and practice each other. The eldest sister practices in Lingquan Temple, the second sister practices in Guangde Temple, and only the third sister practices far away, practicing in Mount Putuo in the South China Sea." Lingquan Temple has a long history as a Guanyin Dojo. There is a spring in the Guanyin Hall of Lingquan Temple, which is called "Guanyin Holy Water". Although it is at the top, it has never overflowed or dried up for thousands of years. It is green in color and sweet in taste.

Folks believe that this water can cure diseases and prolong life, and there is an endless stream of people who come to drink it. Su Dongpo once gave a poem for it: "Quanquanquanquan Quanquan, in ancient times, no year.

The jade ax splits the heaven and earth marrow, and the golden hook fish for veteran." Lin Zexu once gave it " The plaque "Xianglin Deshui" hangs in Guanyin Hall, which is famous all over the world.

▲Seven Wonders: World Cultural Treasures—National Treasure Song Porcelain. In 1991, the largest collection of Song porcelain in China was unearthed in Jinyu Village in the south of Suining City. Its large quantity and high value make The cultural relics and history circles were shocked.

Among the 985 pieces of exquisite porcelain unearthed, 29 are national first-class cultural relics, and the rest are national second- and third-class cultural relics. Among them, lotus leaf covered jars, carved plum vases, and dragon-eared Gui-style furnaces are even more precious.

The orphan jar with lotus leaf lid is known as one of China's "three national treasures" and is famous both at home and abroad. In 2003, Suining built the country's only professional Song Porcelain Museum, attracting an endless stream of cultural relic experts, collection enthusiasts, and Chinese and foreign tourists.

Suining Song porcelain has been exhibited in Singapore, Japan, Hong Kong, Macau, Beijing, Shanghai and other places, causing great sensation. ▲Wonder No. 8: Ancient Oriental Immortal Painting - Bao Fan Mural. Bao Fan Mural is now located in Bao Fan Temple in Pengxi County, with a total of 87 paintings covering an area of ??nearly 200 square meters.

These murals are all based on Buddhist stories, and there are 103 Dharma images painted, each with its own mood and lifelike appearance. The heaven and earth are integrated into one, with a strong flavor of life and extraordinary artistic charm. More than ten dictionaries, including "History of Chinese Painting" and "Dictionary of Chinese Scenic Spots", have written records of Bao Fan's murals, saying they are comparable to Dunhuang murals.

The religious circle respects this painting as a masterpiece of Zen Buddhism, the painting circle praises it as having the brushwork of the painting saint Wu Daozi, the cultural and museum circles praise it as a representative work of Ming Dynasty murals in Sichuan, and the people respect it as a fairy painting. Baofan murals are listed as national key cultural relics protection units by the State Council. My beautiful and lovely hometown Shehong is also the heart of Chinese liquor "Tuopai" and "Shede", and the hometown of Chen Zi'ang, the great poet who created the poetic style of the Tang Dynasty. It can be called a famous place. . 2. An essay about Suining

After dinner yesterday, my younger siblings and I went to see Guanyin Lake in Suining. Because my brother told me that in addition to the eight wonders in Suining that are worth watching, Guanyin Lake is also worth admiring. My brother also told me that because Suining is the hometown of Guanyin, the Fujiang River is called Guanyin Lake. The volume of Guanyin Lake is twice larger than that of West Lake.

As soon as we arrived at Guanyin Lake. Wow! So many people! Some of them were walking, and some were eating at a night beer restaurant called Tingtao Harbor on Guanyin Lake. There were quite a few people coming to eat, and almost all the tables in the corridor were full of people. I saw the waiters delivering food non-stop, coming in and out, and the customers at this table who had not yet delivered the food to that table were shouting again, making the waiters sweat profusely.

My brothers and sisters and I came to the doorway and looked down, wow! What a big Guanyin Lake, how blue and clear the water is! When the evening breeze blows, you can see many small waves. Under the illumination of city lights, they appear bluer, clearer and more beautiful, and they also reflect dazzling light.

There are also many fish on the lakeside. They swim freely and carefree in the water. A few fish are scurrying from here to there and back, as if they are playing hide and seek. Playing happily.

Look, there are many children having a water fight on the shore of the lake. They all bent down and took the water out of the lake with their hands, and then poured it on other children. Don’t look at them. He was small, but he didn't show any weakness at all. He kept pouring water on others, and as a result, everyone's clothes were soaked. There's nothing I can do about it. Children, who isn't playful?

Looking across the lake, there is a tall and beautiful house, which is the Suining People's Court. I heard from my brother that the People's Court was not here before, but was moved here not long ago. But I think it’s not bad to move it here, because it will add another scenic line next to Guanyin Lake, and it will also become a beautiful scenic spot.

On the shore of the lake, there are various flowers, plants and trees planted in the flower beds. The green leaves make people feel refreshed. When the breeze blows by at night, the branches also sway. Dancing in the air, it seems to be saying "Welcome" to people, and it seems to be showing off its light figure to people. It can bring us a bit of coolness at night, and it can also provide us with a cool feeling during the day. Resist the ruthless strong sunlight.

This is the Guanyin Lake I saw. Now that I think about it, my brother is right. In addition to the eight wonders in Suining that are worth watching, Guanyin Lake is also worth appreciating. 3. An essay about my hometown Suining

Suining in the world

I once had this feeling. At some point, when I was walking by the street wearing a short-sleeved shirt, I suddenly felt There was a gust of wind. This wind was not the kind in some fairy tale that can attract a large group of monsters and monsters to eat Tang Monk's meat. It was just a very ordinary and random gust of wind. When it blew on my body, I felt a little chill and turned around. Looking around, I found that most of the pedestrians on the street had their heads lowered, holding the leader in hand, and hurried past. If you still have some sweat on your body, you will feel that the sweat is suddenly cool and close to the skin, like a shadow, but you feel uncomfortable, so you look at the sky and murmur "Autumn." like an old man sighing.

This voice is far less friendly than other brothers of the same kind. Instead, it brings a bit of depression and neglect, and things done in this season are far less natural and indulgent than other times, as if they are about to be infected at any time. Of course, this kind of Thoughts exist in some people, just like the occasional sad mood.

At this moment, staying in Suining seems to be in another world.

The same wide streets, sparse crowds, but the trees beside the road are not withered, only a few withered yellow leaves are occasionally dotted under the trees, as exquisite and elegant as the menu of a high-end restaurant .

The sky always seems to be gray, as if it has been covered with a layer of cover. Occasionally, there will be a little drizzle, or a thin layer of fog. Walking in the rain, it seems that the streets are empty, without any excitement, let alone life. I just feel the dullness all over my body, and I feel trapped in the misty white smoke.

And when noon came, the scene was still the same, as if for several days in a row, the sun disappeared, the sky was as vast as a wild field, the light rain continued, and a few cars fell across the deserted street. In the taxi, the driver occasionally spoke a few words in Sichuan accent lazily, which made Yiyi listen to it. There are also scenery. In the autumn city, from time to time, a beautiful girl will pass by, holding a small colorful umbrella, burying her head, passing quietly, like a lily in the wind, leaving a faint fragrance.

It can’t be said to be gloomy, there was sunshine once, and that feeling was like taking a bath. The sunshine that came out was warm on the body, and there were more lively sounds on the streets, on the long bridges, and in the gardens. The adults held the children's tender little hands and counted the stamens in the flowers, while the old man Supporting each other, enjoying the warmth of the spring breeze like a prayer, and all this, it seems that the gloom has never come, and autumn is pregnant with infinite power.

Lao Du stayed in Shu for so many years. Unfortunately, his house was blown down by the autumn wind, and he complained a lot. A saint is a saint, and his complaints will be recorded in the annals of history for future generations. People worship him, but the autumn wind in Chengdu seems to be far less powerful than blowing down a house. At least I haven't seen it. Maybe it's because Lao Du's house is not strong enough, or maybe the climate is getting warmer day by day, so future generations won't complain. opportunity, Zongzhi, let these things go one by one. 4. Beautiful Suining, my hometown composition

Suining has beautiful customs and scenery, and is famous at home and abroad.

Walking into Suining and tasting this ancient city with a modern urban atmosphere will make you feel physically and mentally happy and never want to leave. There is a beautiful place in Suining, which is the "Wonderland on Earth" - Lingquan Temple.

When we entered Lingquan Temple, we were greeted by the spacious gathering square. Here, there are beautiful cuckoos, red, white, pink, red and white... it's dizzying to see, so beautiful! Going further in, you enter Lingquan Lake.

The lake water is clear, so quiet that you can see the sand and stones at the bottom of the water. It is as green as if it has been dyed by the surrounding green trees and green grass, and is as quiet as a big mirror. The blue sky is reflected on the water, as if you have arrived in a fairyland.

At night, the lights shine on the water, a breeze blows, and the water surface sparkles. It is so pleasant! Legend has it that as long as you drink the water from Guanyin Lake, you can fulfill one of your wishes. There are also the well-known "Three Sisters of Guanyin" here.

Going further in, you will reach the Guanyin Pavilion, which has six floors. Walking into the first floor, there is a very tall Guanyin Bodhisattva. Everyone makes their best wishes in front of Guanyin.

At the top of Guanyin Pavilion, you can have a panoramic view of the beautiful scenery of Lingquan Temple. There are many famous and ancient trees, fountains, and tadpoles swimming freely in the river... The most eye-catching thing about Suining is of course the beautiful central business district, which is a good place for leisure and entertainment. place.

Spring is here, and Miss Chun came with light steps, leaving her footprints here. There are many varieties of flowers in the flower bed, including chrysanthemums, rhododendrons, violets, and many unknown small wild flowers.

Red like fire, pink like clouds, and white like snow, it’s really dizzying. As you approach it gently, a faint fragrance is refreshing, and it attracts little bees from time to time.

In the morning, pearly dew rolls on the petals, as if each petal has a new life trembling. Walking further inside, I saw a few yellow fruit trees, which are "old residents" of the Central Business District.

At night, the central business district becomes a sea of ??lights and a world of light. The most eye-catching thing is the meteor lantern. The "meteors" fall from the sky one after another, passing through the branches, as if they are playing hide and seek; and it seems that they are blinking their little eyes, twinkling and twinkling, so cute! Not only meteor lights, but also fountain lights are no exception.

It goes from top to bottom, one level lower than the other. The colors of the lights are colorful, including white, blue, yellow, green... so beautiful! Looking around again, the old man is sitting on the sofa for leisure and entertainment, and the young man is taking a leisurely walk.

This place will make you forget all your fatigue... The Song Porcelain Museum is well-deserved, with a total area of ??5,000 square meters. There are many exquisite items inside, such as the lotus leaf lid jar, which looks like a child wearing a lotus leaf hat on its round head, so cute! There are also blue dragon glaze three-legged toad Shui Meng and green dragon glaze through vase...all of which have amazed the world! In Suining, there are far more than these beautiful scenery, there are also the Royal Zen Forest Guangde Temple, Shehong Longfeng Gorge, Baofan Temple, Dayingzhuo Tsutsui, satellite recovery base, etc. which are famous both at home and abroad.

Suining has also been rated as a national outstanding tourist city, a national sanitary city, a national environmental protection city, a national garden city and other honorary titles. Sincerely welcome you to travel to this beautiful place in Suining.

5. An essay describing the environment of Suizhong, Suining

Author of the article: Scared to death, Baobaoyanle | Second grade of junior high school 2015-08-14 17:43:46

Suining is a bright star in Sichuan It is a pearl with beautiful scenery and rich products. It is a lovely place.

There are many places of interest in Suining, look! There is the joyful Dead Sea of ??China; there is the ancient

Longfeng Ancient Town, there is the scenic Wetland Park, and... there are too many to mention

to name a few. But the most beautiful thing is the pleasant Guanyin Lake!

In the early morning, fog gradually rose over Guanyin Lake, and the entire Shenglian Island was immersed in thick milky fog.

The fog blocked people's sight and covered the blue sky. The little lights on the shore are faintly reflected on the water, which looks particularly quiet and beautiful. After a while, the lights went out

and the sun came out. Thousands of golden rays of light, like sharp swords, passed through the fog layer and shone on the lake as flat as

a mirror. After the fog cleared, I saw groups of fish swimming in the lake, which was very beautiful

At night, the lights on the shore of Guanyin Lake were colorful and strange, and some looked like blooming flowers

< p> Flowers; some are like outstretched palms; some are like green lotus leaves... They are really diverse and lifelike

. Antique cruise ships floated on the sparkling Guanyin Lake; white speedboats

speeded across the lake; at this time, bats also came to join in the fun, adding a stripe to the lake

< p> Beautiful scenery. From time to time, the erhu sound of "Spring River Flowers and Moonlight Night" came from the pier. I was intoxicated, and so was Suining! This is really a colorful picture!

Suining not only has beautiful scenery, but also is rich in natural products. There are sweet and delicious grapefruit;

mouth-watering dried tofu; there is Tuopai wine that makes adults happy; and there is also the greedy golden pear for children

...

This is Suining, a lovely place. In the future, I will build it more beautiful

and richer. 6. An article introducing Suining is urgently needed

Suining Fu (Wei Minglun) The long roar of Youzhou Terrace, the four-line short song becomes the swan song.

Where did the poet come from? Chen Zi'ang, a hero of Suining, also walked by the Fu River, and the thousand-year-old county has taken on a new look. Where do tourists gather? I also visited Suining City, Zi'ang's hometown, and asked Zi'ang: If I didn't see the ancients in the past, can I see the coming ones in the future? Meng Ziang, returning to Suining: I miss the world with sadness, and I am happy to meet my fellow villagers.

Transform into a civilian travel companion and follow the tour guide in Sangzi. The fertile soil is purple and red, and literary talent sprouts; the canals and rivers are green, nourishing talents.

The female historian Huang'e is as famous as Guihu Lake; the talented scholar Wen Tao is as famous as Chuanshan. The ministers controlled the water and promoted the smooth flow of the canal; they were envoys to go out of the customs and recover the territory and return it.

Confucian legends: three brothers, three sisters-in-law, three pairs of couples with poems and essays; Buddhist legends: three sisters, three princesses, and the flesh-and-blood love of three bodhisattvas. Hand by hand, Guanyin stretches out a thousand hands; there are springs and springs, and there are seven springs stacked in one sentence on the east slope.

New trends are rolling in, and fashion includes China’s Dead Sea; historical sites are long, and antiques include treasures such as Song porcelain. Rare things are valuable, and ancient utensils are precious.

Song porcelain is in groups, which is rare in the whole country. Buried for thousands of years, it is reborn in the contemporary era.

The colors are amazing and the lines are amazing. Looking horizontally is green, and thinking vertically is green.

Green as emeralds, as tender as a girl’s skin. The lotus leaves sparkle, and they feel like dripping water when touched; the toad cocks its head, wanting to answer the call.

The bulging belly, bottle and chest hide secrets, and the dragon-ear furnace listens to people's words. The lid of the cup with lotus petals is tightly closed, and the mystery is guessed by the guests; the spout of the melon-rimmed pot is half-open, reflecting the exchange between ancient and modern times in the exhibition hall.

Whose cellar? What's the rush? Is it a military disaster? Is it a national crisis? Gold and silver can be carried, but porcelain is difficult to carry. Looking back at the rough cellar, I shed tears and bid farewell to the fine porcelain.

What a pity! Colorful clouds are easy to scatter, and precious porcelain is easy to break. The foreigners skillfully used translation pens, and the porcelain was called China.

In the Southern Song Dynasty, it was the glazed bottle in the paw of the wolf; in the late Qing Dynasty, it was the porcelain in the palm of the great powers! Traveling south for more than a hundred years, the old history is refrigerated; at 30 degrees north latitude, the news is hot. Just one word apart, the Dead Sea in the Middle East is the Dead Sea in China; thousands of miles away, the Salt Lake in West Asia is the Salt Lake in the West.

There are two scenes internationally, but only one in China. Next to Lan's Temple, it is blessed by the myth of the Eight Immortals; next to Zhuo Tuo Well, it inherits the glory of the five great inventions.

Although Daying is a small county, its value lies in unique creation; brave people come up with unique ideas and dare to open alternative tourism. Butterfly swimming, breaststroke, swimming routines; spring water bathing, sea bathing, bathing routine.

Sleep and sleep freely in the Salt Lake, and drift freely in the Dead Sea. Spread out the cross stroke on your back and lift your seven-foot body with light waves.

Landlubbers also swim in deep water, and tide-drifters hit the current even more. Mud cures diseases and soaking helps lose weight.

Teams of foreign guests are arriving, and new and new human beings are arriving. Handsome guys are like golden carps in the water, and pretty girls are like white stripes in the waves.

Half asleep with pillow arms, snow lotus roots are floating in the air; false sleep with arms folded, blooming water lilies. In the past, educated youths turned their backs to the sky and their faces to the loess; today's angry youths have their faces to the sky and their backs to the blue waves.

Lying down to read Tang poetry, Huaqing Pool is far worse than this; laughingly asked about the Korean Wave, did Dae Jang Geum enjoy this? There are risks in the official world, but there are risks in this sea; there are ups and downs in the world, but there are only floats and no sinks in this sea.

Helplessly, the world of mortals is not a tranquil sea, but peace of mind is like a kind voyage! Lingquan scenic spot, Cihang’s hometown; Guangde ancient temple, Guanyin Taoist temple.

The imperial edict sealed it eleven times, and there were nine dragons on the stele in the Song Dynasty. Dynasties change, jade washes over the sand.

The common people forget about the emperor, but hundreds of millions of people remember Guanyin. The royal seal is stained with the luster of Buddhism, and the emperor relies on his great masters to leave his name.

The Baique Temple was burned down, and the clouds bloomed in the purple bamboo forest. Anecdotes have become folklore, and tragedy has been brought to the stage.

In the heart of a believing woman, Guanyin is a woman; in the eyes of a mortal, Miaoshan is a human being. Virgin Mary in the West, Bodhisattva Avalokitesvara in the East.

A model of goodness and the embodiment of beauty. A cloud broom whisks away the dust, rescuing people in distress; a lotus platform delivers a child, showing great mercy.

The poplar branches sprinkle water to purify the flowery world; the precious raft sets sail to bring salvation to all living beings. When this person's heart is impetuous, it is also the time when material desires are flowing.

With the right prescription, Guanyin’s good deeds can be continued; by learning from each other’s strengths, Cihang’s virtues can be commended. The rain is beneficial, Buddhism is beneficial to the masses; the sea can accommodate it, and the culture may be diverse.

Returning to simplicity, new pilgrims are added to the ancient temple; old men follow young people one after another. In and out of the Buddhist hall, wooden fish and mobile phones symphony; inside and outside the mountain gate, Buddhist drums and mice are beating.

For chatting by tapping the button, Zen Buddhism has set up a website; for chasing stars and worshiping Buddha, Bodhi also has fans. Anti-corruption and violence are the same as King Kong's angry eyes; to save the weak and help the poor, *** imitate Cihang and lower his eyebrows.

Amitabha prays for the common people; Prajna Polo seems to see the great master appearing. Stretch out a thousand hands to shorten the gap between rich and poor! Beautiful! Traveled to Suining, admired Song Dynasty porcelain, floated in the Dead Sea, and worshiped Guanyin.

The reading desk still exists, where is Chen Ziang? I ask for advice in my dreams, I look for him in the crowd, travelers travel in entertainment, and we meditate while traveling. 7. Gains and Losses in Compositions

Gains and Losses in Compositions In the past year, I have written more than a dozen compositions, four of which have been well received by teachers, classmates and parents, and were published in Suining Daily.

I gained a lot from analyzing and criticizing these four articles from the beginning. The first article I published was "Traveling in Shanghai".

This is a travel diary of my trip to Shanghai during the National Day holiday. The article describes the strange mountains, strange waters, and strange scenery I saw in Shanghai, as well as the "Oriental Pearl Tower", the Oceanarium, the Huangpu River and other scenery, and writes about my feelings about visiting Shanghai for the first time.

The biggest "highlights" of this article are: the described landscapes and scenic spots are specific; the sentences are fluent and some good words and sentences are used; and the feelings expressed are more real. Its shortcomings are: the description of the landscape and scenic spots is inappropriate in detail; the sentences describing the landscape are repeated; there is a lot of talk, and it has to be revised several times before it is "somewhat presentable".

In an exam, I wrote an article "The Harmonious Forest World". After reading it, my father thought it was very good and recommended it for publication.

The article reflects that the forest world is harmonious and beautiful by describing the different scenery in spring, summer, autumn and winter, as well as the living habits and characteristics of animals in different seasons. The outstanding features of this article are: first, the theme is clear, people are creating a harmonious society, and animals in the forest world are also advocating harmony; second, the description of the four seasons is specific and vivid, and the animals chosen to describe are representative; third, the sentences are refined , fluent, with many good words and sentences.

The first draft contains descriptions of animals fighting and killing, which dilutes the theme of harmony. In addition, the description of the habits of individual animals is inconsistent with common sense in life. This is the biggest shortcoming of this article. The 5.12 Wenchuan earthquake that shocked the world made us deeply feel the suffering caused by disasters.

After reading the book "Heroic Boys for Earthquake Relief", I wrote a review. By narrating the heroic deeds of Zhang Chunling and Lin Hao, the article expresses its respect and admiration for the heroic young people in the earthquake relief work.

There are two things worthy of recognition in this article. First, I previewed "Earthquake Relief Hero Boys" through the Internet shortly after it was released, and wrote about my inner feelings; second, I really wrote about it. The tribulations and experiences of the heroic teenagers at that time. However, this article uses too many words to retell the story of the heroic boy, which makes the whole article "eclipsed".

The school requires students to write about their experiences and feelings using a famous quote from a famous person. I was deeply inspired by Zhu Xi's emphasis on "reading with the heart, the eyes, and the mouth", so I wrote "The Feelings of the "Three Things" in Reading".

By telling about his own experience and feelings of studying and composing, the article realizes the importance of "three aspects" of heart, eyes and mouth when studying and composing. This article took a lot of effort and has outstanding advantages: first, it uses one's own experience to write about feelings, which is vivid and easy to generate cries of excitement; second, the article summarizes a very practical method of learning and writing; third, I have a deep understanding of this famous saying and can easily draw inferences from one instance.

But this article has a small regret, that is, the summary and refinement of learning and composition experience are not in place. Through the analysis of the gains and losses of these four articles, I deeply felt that a strong interest in writing is the source of motivation for writing good articles; writing should be based on feelings, write the true feelings in the heart, and avoid being delicate. ; Articles can only become "outstanding" after repeated writing and revision.

Instructor Xiao Chunyu.